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1、英语专业四级考试考前讲座写作(1)一、专四写作简介1、形式与要求作文:议论文,说明文,记叙文.根据所给的作文题目,提纲或图表等,在35分钟之内,完成200字左右的作文要求:切题,完整,条理清楚,结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺,表达得体.便条:简单的应用文.根据所给提示,在10分钟内,完成50-60字的便条,通知,请贴等.要求:格式正确,语言得体.2、命题特点与写作题型（1）历年大作文命题方式与特点年份主题题目题材题型体裁1995大学生打工利弊学生业余生活利弊比较议论文1996大学与中学生活的不同学生生活对比说明说明文1997专业学习压力利弊学生学习观点议论议论文1998一种解决城市空气污染的办法

2、环境提出建议说明文1999电视广告的利弊社会现象利弊讨论议论文2000课外活动的重要性学生生活观点说明说明文2001旅游开阔人的视野大众生活观点说明说明文2002保持健康的最好方法大众生活提出建议说明文2003保持好心情的重要性大众生活观点说明说明文2004电话是否会代替写信社会现象观点讨论议论文2005为艺术节提建议校园文化生活提出建议说明文2006有人认为存钱是好习惯,有人认为今天要花明天的钱,你的观点?社会现象观点讨论议论文2007网上交友明智吗社会现象观点讨论议论文2008志愿者在工作中的好处大众生活观点说明议论文2009旅游业是否对环境有害社会现象观点讨论议论文（2）便条写作命题方式

3、与特点年份主题题目体裁题材1995自行车出售告示学生日常生活中发生的事情1996祝贺同学演讲获奖祝贺1997为没邀请人而道歉道歉1998入场券转让留言1999安慰病人安慰2000留言劝说应聘劝说2001爽约道歉道歉2002询问所转让随身听的情况留言2003婉拒晚会邀请婉拒2004对同学考试失利安慰安慰2005邀请参加音乐会邀请2006请求加入索要信息请求2007婉拒加入游泳俱乐部婉拒2008跟同学订阅英语报纸提建议建议2009向同学推荐家教劝说3.评分标准作文：三个原则三个原则整体评分法,给出归档分,可以适当奖励或扣分兼顾语言和内容两方面确定作文档次分数要能正确反映学生实际写作水平,避免分数趋

4、中现象.应该有满分与零分.四个方面四个方面内容(content):要求相关性好.第一主题思想明确,切题.第二,观点发展一致,充分.前者确保就论题有一明确的态度,不跑题.后者保证是全文能充分围绕一个主题展开,无不相关信息.组织要求(organization):要求全文有合理的结构,能够使用衔接手段使行文连贯,尤其注意对结构的规定.语言要求(grammar):要求文字通顺,语法正确.低级的语言错误是行文的致命伤.文体要求(appropriateness):要求兼顾论题,情景和读者因素,选择正式的,非正式的,亲昵的或者是文学性的用词,句式,时态,语态,指示方法来写作.五个档次档次标准总体描述分项解读

5、内容组织语言文体15-13Effective communication with accuracies观点明确，切题，论证充分结构非常符合逻辑基本无语言错误非常得当12-10Good communication with a few inaccuracies有观点，切题，有论证结构合理，信息连贯少量、不严重的语言错误尚可9-7Passable communication with some inaccuracies基本切题，内容偶有不相关，或缺乏论证结构尚可，有些地方思路不清语言错误较多，且有些影响了意义表达大部分地方尚可6-4Problemic communication with fre

6、quent inaccuracies有很多地方相关性差，前后不一致，缺乏论据有结构，很多地方思路不清比较多的较严重的语言错误几乎无文体性可言3-0Almost no communications看不出观点，不切题无组织结构和连贯可言几乎所有的句子都有错误，且多为严重错误无文体性可言便条：（1）格式3分：包括日期，称呼和结尾三部分，各占一分。其中每一部分由“正确写法“与“正确位置”组成，各占0.5分.March 13,2010Dear Mike,!Yours(Sincerely),Tom（2）内容与语言6分，应包括：情景描述邀请，道歉等具体的行为语言，如建议I strongly recommen

7、d that首句需要用自己正确的语言表达，照抄提示扣1分语言表达较差（包括拼写和语法错误），扣1-3分（3）语言得体性1分：语言风格与情景不一致，扣1分（4）评分总体要求语言没有严重错误，格式对，内容完整，语言得体，字数符合要求（40）,给9-10分要求50-60字(含格式三部分),80或40扣1分评分：格式是否正确3字数是否符合 1有言语行为吗 1-2按要求解释原因了吗1-2句首照抄提示了吗1语言得体吗，措辞是否符合两人的关系？1有无严重的语言错误1-2 Directions:You have received an invitation from your friend,but you h

8、ave already had some guests in your house.Please express the reason you cant go clearly.Please write in about 60 words.April.6Dear LucyI do apology for have to send this letter about Saturday night.it is difficulty for me to make choice.I hope you know How sorry am I not to be with you this saturday

9、.Should I make a visit to you in my other spare time?Yours Respectfully Jane二 写前准备1 审清指令（1）三大部分：（指示部分）情景提示论题介绍组织安排（2）八项要求：（分析部分）情景要求体裁要求话题要求内容要求组织要求语言要求文体要求字数要求（3）具体过程SECTION A COMPOSITION 35 MINTourism is a booming business in China.However,some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to

10、 the environment,while others dont think so.What is your opinion?Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?You are to write in three parts.In the first part,state specifically what your opinion is.In the second part

11、,provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.In the last part,bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.Marks will be awarded for content,organization,grammar and appropriateness.Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.准确把握论题：旅游业会给环境带来危害，旅游

12、业不会给环境带来危害正确判断体裁：议论文：确定论点后，提出1到2点加以论证，为什么会带来或者不会带来决定合理的发展结构：第一部分：明确的论点第二部分：一到两个理由第三部分：结论误区1：旅游业会给环境带来危害因此我们应该采取以下措施：1。2。只有做到以上，才能减少危害误区2：旅游业不会给环境带来危害因此我们应该大力发展旅游业，很多好处1。2。这些好处都是建立在不危害环境的基础之上的。How to improve mental health？2 确定体裁：以说明为主或者议论为主（1）说明文特征及题眼题眼：对明确的观点进行阐述或者提出建议。实体说明文与事理说明文，前者介绍事物的特征，性状，成因或做事

13、的程序，后者阐明事理。回答的常常是“是什么“，怎么样，为什么等问题，重点是告诉读者事情是如何发生的，以及事情发生的原因。1996The main difference between my college life and my middle school life 比较说明：为新生介绍学校生活1998One way to solve the pollution方法介绍，好处说明2000The importanceof extracurricular activities说明重要性2001Travel broadens the mind观点明确，回答how2002The best way to

14、 stay healthy建议一个方法2003The importance of keeping a good mood说明重要性2005My idea of a university arts festival建议what或how2008The bebefits of volunteering活动对本人的益处，回答what（2）议论文特征及题眼题眼说明文往往观点非常明确，要求进一步阐述，而议论文要求考生提出是与非的观点。1997More pressure from academic studies does(or does not)good to us是或者不是为题眼2004Will pho

15、nes kill letter writing?2007Is it wise to make friends online?2009Will tourism bring harm to environment?3确定题目（1）三个注意事项命题作文必须有题目题目书写一定要正确除冠词，并列连词，介词以及助动词之外所有首字母大写，第一个单词，冒号后的单词不分词性一律首字母大写所有字母大写可以避免上面因词性规定而可能出现的错误题目和论题不一定相同如果出现entitled这样的字眼（96，00年），照抄；on the following topic 时，需认真审题，必要时进行改造。（2）题目的确定原则

16、对写作内容概括适当，不可过宽或过窄要具体，不可模糊，少用疑问句语言简洁，能用词不用短语，能用短语不用句子The best way to stay healthyHappy？The best way to stay healthy is to have a good attitude？The more exercise,the more healthy！The best way to stay healthy:A balanced diet or physical exercise？The best way to stay healthy！Doing physical exercise:The

17、best way to stay healthy！注意：论题已经是非常明确的观点，可以直接作为题目。Travel broadens our mind 论题已有，但缺乏关键词时，可加上关键词The best way to stay healthy 题目要求我们做出选择时，要旗帜鲜明的用观点做题目Will phones kill letter writing?4.安排结构明确的指令，分为三部分。第一段（部分）明确观点看法，第二段（部分）为发展段或提供理由或者具体事例，第三段（部分）为结尾结论。三、段落写作TEM-4的段落要求1.段落的一致性：整个段落有且只有一个主题。误区一：论述介入不相关的材料t

18、he first way to improve mental health is to develop some hobbies.Reading novels is a good choice.For example,Oliver Twist,written by Mark Twain,a great writer in U.S.This novel tells us the story about误区二：转移话题the second reason for keeping a good mood is that it can make us live a happy life.Why are

19、people busy with working or study?Because they want to earn more money and get better position to live a happy life.However,why not forget the pressure of that and just live a happy life?.In addition,recreation as reading and movie watching can also benefit the mentality with new knowledge,new focus

20、es,and lessons from others stories,especially for the introverted ones2.段落的发展性：段落的主题一定要有具体内容的支撑，如事理的论证，事实，细节或例子等。误区一：主题中的关键词在段落中没有充分发展The first way to improve mental health is to develop some hobbies such as reading novels and watching movies.Reading novels helps broaden our mind and acquire new kno

21、wledge,which will consequently improve our mentality.The second way is to travel in you spare time.误区二：观点后只有例子，缺少中间发展环节Firstly,being optimistic is much important for us to keep healthy.There is a piece of news in China Daily about an old man who is 100 in Anhui.Some people asked her why she could li

22、ve so long and so healthy.Her answer is very simple:to be optimistic.Second,emotion is very important for our health.3.段落的层次性：主题句+支撑句(1)The first way to improve mental health is to develop some hobbies such as reading novels and watching movies(A)Reading novels helps broaden our mind and acquire new

23、 knowledge,which will consequently improve our mentality.(B)Watching movies may produce a sense of beauty and release ourselves from great pressure.Topic sentence (1)Supporting sentences (A)(B)Details to the supporting sentences A1 A2 B1 B2误区：见上例4.段落的连贯性：指论点发展中的逻辑性，是文章可读性的重要标准。方法一：反复提及主题，但切忌简单重复The

24、most important reason for keeping a balanced diet lies in thatthe second reason for keeping a balanced diet is but with a balanced diet.finally,it is wise for you to choose a balanced diet because.but keeping a balanced diet can.方法二：发展观点时，使用正确的衔接手段A:说明先后顺序First,second,third;To begin with,moreover,fi

25、nallyFirst of all,next,then,eventuallyMeanwhile;in the mean timeB:因果Because of,due to,thanks to,owing toAs a result,for this reason,consequently,accordingly,thus,therefore,in this wayC.比较,对比Unlike,in contrast,on the contrary,on the other hand,while,but,yetLikewise,in like manner,similarly,in the sam

26、e way,just asD.附加,递进Again,in addition,and,also,furthermore,moreover,whats more,not onlybut also,apart from,besidesIn other words,equally important,for one thingfor another thing(专门引出理由),on the one handon the other hand（描述相反或矛盾的观点）,as well,last but not leastE 举例For example,for instance,a case in poin

27、t,to illustrate,as an illustration,just as,take for example,as follows.F 让步，转折Though,although,even though,whereas,but,yet,however,in contrast,on the other handDespite,in spite of,regardless ofF.同位解释That is(to say),roughly means,in other words,by definition,namely,as a matter of fact,assuggests,as re

28、gards,with regards to,concerning,as for,in terms ofG.选择Or,or rather,alternatively,instead(of),rather than,whetheror,eitheror,neithernor,notbutH.总结All in all,in brief,in conclusion,in one/a word,in short,in summary,to sum up,to conclude,on the whole,to summarize,in sumBriefly,altogetherPersonally,IFo

29、r these reasons,.I,personally,suggest that虚拟According to the above analysis,we can arrive at the conclusion that误区一：混淆词性In addition that we can talk to friendsIn addition to,we can talk to friendsWe can however talk to friendsHence,thus,thereforeSpoken English is important,thus we should practice ev

30、eryday.Spoken English is important.Thus,we should practice everydaySpoken English is important;thus we should practice everydaySpoken English is important,and thus we should practice everyday误区二：衔接手段不一致Firstly.besidesFirstlysecondlythirdlyFirst of all secondlyFirst of allthenbesidesmoreover误区三：关联词受汉

31、语思维影响But,而。英语中but表示转折，汉语中的“而”还可以表示因果与顺承我认为英语很难学，而我就没学好。I think English is difficult,but I dont learn it well.For one thing,for anther thing,一方面，另一方面引出事情的理由On the one hand,on the other hand一方面，另一方面相反或者对立的观点误区四：代词使用不妥With the development of technology,cell phone has become popular.It is convenient tool for communication.Others can inform you of something at any time if you have one.That enables you to chat with your friends when you are bored.