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1、关于写态度的雅思作文及解析 看法确定成败，关于看法的雅思作文你会写吗？下面我给大家带来关于写看法的雅思作文及解析。 关于学生的看法的雅思作文范文 Topic: Many problems in schools are aroused by the attitudes of students. How do theseproblems form? What should we do to change the situation? Sample Answer School violence becomes very protrusive in many countries, most of wh

2、ich are caused by the attitudes of students. Some governments and the authorities show great concerns about the problems. From my point of view, these problems are aroused by three factors, the development of society, the influence of family and media and the weakness of school education. The rapid

3、development of the society offers young students more opportunities to contact the outside world. Due to the lack of social experience, some you ngstersarenot capable of distinguishing right from wrong. Curiosity drives them into imitating what they have seen on TV or from the people around them. Th

4、erefore, it is easy forthem to be addicted to alcohol, smoking and drugs. Some students even smoke ortake drugs at school. Family violence is another major factor causing problems in schools. Family violence hurts children both physically and psychologically. Physically, family violence will hurt th

5、eir tender body because children are still in the stage of development. Psychologically, physical punish ment will hurt children's self-confidence and make them have a tendency of violence. Recently, school gunshot shit the headlines frequently, which should be partly attributed to family violen

6、ce. Finally, the weakness of school education is an important factor causing school problems. Some schools only stress students' achievements in their study, while neglecting their moral education. Therefore, even some top students are apt to stride on the criminal road. To solve these problems,

7、 I think we should take the following measures. Firstly, schools should strengthen students' moral education, giving them correct directions and cultivating their ability to tell right from wrong. Secondly, parents should spare some time to communicate with their children, resolving difficulties

8、 and troubles for them timely. If the school and family can join hands in solving these problems, I think the students will develop healthily and the environment in schools will become much clearer. 考官评分：8 题目: 许多的校内问题都是由学生看法引起的，这些问题是怎样形成的呢?如何变更这种状况呢? 深圳老师译文: 校内暴力已成为很多国家日渐突出的问题，其中大部分是由学生的看法所引起。一些政府和专

9、家都对此极为关注。以我个人而言，这些问题是由三方面因素导致的:社会的发展、家庭和媒体的影响及学校教化的缺陷。 快速发展的社会为年轻学生供应了更多接触外面世界的机会。由于缺少社会阅历，一些年轻人没有明辨是非的实力。新奇心驱使他们去仿照电视节目中的内容及四周人们的所作所为。 结果，他们很简单就会对酗酒、吸烟和吸毒成瘾。有些学生甚至在学校里吸烟，吸毒。 家庭暴力也是引起学校暴力的另一主要因素。家庭暴力造成了孩子们生理和心理上的损害。 生理方面，因为孩子们正处在成长阶段，家庭暴力将会损害他们脆弱的身体。心理方面，体罚会损害孩子们的自信念并使他们产生暴力倾向。近，校内枪击事务频繁出现在报纸的头版头条，而

10、部分缘由应当归咎于家庭暴力。 后，学校教化的缺陷也是诱发这些校内问题的重要因素。一些学校只重视学生的学习成果，而忽视了对他们的道德教化。结果，即使是成果优异的学生也有走向犯罪道路的倾向。 为了解决这些问题，我认为我们应实行以下措施:首先，学校应加强学生的道德教化，赐予他们正确地指导并培育他们辨别是非的实力。其次，家长应当花些时间与孩子沟通沟通，刚好帮助他们解决困难，摆脱逆境。假如学校和家庭能够携起手来解决这些问题，那么学生将会健康成长而校内的环境也将得到更大程度的净化。 雅思大作文范文：论处事看法,乐观或悲观? 雅思大作文范文： Success is achieved by those who

11、 try and keep trying with a positive mental attitude becausenothing on earth can help those with a negative mental attitude. In general, successfulpersons are opportunity-minded rather than difficulty-minded. That is to say, the pessimistsees difficulty in every opportunity; the optimist sees opport

12、unity in every difficulty. Any fact facing us is often not as important as our attitude toward it, for that can determineour success or failure. The pessimist would visualize penalties of failure whereas the optimistwould visualize the rewards of success. It might be true sometimes that people tried

13、 hard half-way and failed miserably, from which a lesson is learned that they should not have tried at all inthe first place. Thus, after one failure, they are disappointed and discouraged, refusing tobelieve that the road to success is under construction. Since pessimists are afraid to fail, theyar

14、e not likely to experience the joys of success. More often than not, this wrong mentalattitude, or rather the fear of striking out, may hold them back. It is certainly not the optimist's attitude toward success-always being ready as anopportunity comes. People with the right mental attitude are

15、never scared by going too far,and they are convinced that success lies just beyond. True enough, it is not that optimistsbecome winners without encountering real problems, but that they are willing to do do whatlosers are not willing to do. In other words, optimists choose to step forward, as if it

16、wereimpossible to fail; but pessimists are always in the same place. Therefore, both attitudes tell asuccess and a failure apart. In all likelihood, success is like the child of optimism. It pays to assume that opportunity may be in the middle of difficulty, or at least this is whatthe optimist is i

17、nclined to believe. Indeed, success of life depends upon keeping one's mindopen to opportunity and seizing it when it comes. After all, optimists are right in believing whatthey can do and succeed; so are pessimists who think they would fail anyway. 2022年1月5日雅思大作文真题范文 心态和体格哪个对于体育更重要 2022年1月5日的雅思

18、写作考试已经结束，为大家带来本场雅思大作文写作真题：心态和体格，哪个对于体育更重要Some people think the fittest and strongest individual help achieve success in sport. Some people believe success is much related to mental attitude. Discuss both of the view and your own opinion. 类型 体育类 题目 Some people think the fittest and strongest individu

19、al help achieve success in sport. Some people believe success is much related to mental attitude. Discuss both of the view and your own opinion. 范文解析 该题目属于体育类双边探讨。 有些人认为体能强壮的运动员更简单在体育中取得胜利，而另一些人认为心态更重要。要求探讨两种观点并且给出自己的观点。双边探讨类的题目建议在开头段交代背景，陈述两种观点，自己的立场可以先不表明。中间主题段须要充分探讨两种观点的缘由，就像法官判案须要原告被告各方陈述自己的理由，最

20、终给出自己的推断。 文章结构 P1： 交代背景，引出话题，段落间过渡句; P2：主体段，体能强壮的人更简单取得胜利的缘由; P3：主体段，心态更重要的缘由; P4：表明自己的观点 身体素养是前提，心理素养更关键。 高分话题表达 waned 消逝的 perseverance 坚持不懈 physical attribute 身体素养 in terms of 在.方面 abundant and adequate 足够大量的 earnest and hard 仔细艰苦的 emotional intelligence 情商 top tier teams 顶级球队 distinguished from 表

21、现突出 determinant 确定性的 高分结构 opinions differ over whether 宾语从句 which is generally known as 说明论证 based on the fact that 同位语从句 what really sets apart the top winners is 主语从句 This can be exemplified 举例论证 Only through 主句需倒装 范文 Humans enthusiasm to sports and races has never waned, which demonstrates people

22、s perseverance, struggle, unity and cooperation. However, opinions differ over whether physical strength or mental attitude is of more significance in sports accomplishment. In this essay, both factors will be analyzed and my personal perspective will be presented. 人类对体育和种族的热忱从未减退，这体现了人们的坚韧不拔、奋斗不息、团

23、结合作。然而，对于体力和精神看法在体育成就中哪个更重要，人们的看法是不同的。在这篇文章中，我们将分析这两个因素，并提出我个人的观点。 On the one hand, some people opine that success primarily hinges on powerful physical attribute. In fact, in many countries, professional athletes are selected by particular criteria in terms of power, flexibility, strength and so on

24、. In addition to that, they need abundant and adequate power to finish the competition successfully. All champions win the golden medals through earnest and hard physical training, based on the fact that persistent training can promote athletes skills such as diving, resilience or else to achieve ex

25、cellent performance. 一方面，一些人认为胜利主要取决于强大的身体素养。事实上，在很多国家，职业运动员都是根据权力、敏捷性、力气等方面的特定标准选拔的。除此之外，他们须要足够的力气来胜利地完成竞赛。全部的冠军都是通过仔细刻苦的体育训练获得金牌的，因为坚持训练可以提高运动员的跳水、弹力等技能，从而取得优异的成果。 On the other hand, others argue that it is easy and appropriate to attribute achievement to the talent factor and physical fitness, ye

26、t many of the sportsmen have these, so what really sets apart the top winners is their ability to manage their emotions. Emotional intelligence, which is generally known as the ability to identify, assess, and control the emotions of oneself, of others, and of groups. This can be exemplified by 2022

27、 FIFA World Cup Russia which attracted the top tier teams with the best players from around the world. The champion France National Men's football team distinguished from the rest by mental status of its members who could motivate each other to unite and work towards a single objective. 另一方面，另一些

28、人认为把成就归因于天赋因素和身体健康是简单和适当的，然而很多运动员都有这些，所以真正区分顶级运动员的是他们管理自己心情的实力。情商，通常被认为是一种识别、评估和限制自己、他人和群体心情的实力。2022年的俄罗斯世界杯就是一个很好的例子，它吸引了来自世界各地的顶级球队和最好的球员。获得冠军的法国国家男子足球队的不同之处在于队员的精神状态，他们能够相互激励，团结一样，朝着一个目标努力。 I personally believe that physical strength is a premise to become successful sportsmen, which ensures a go

29、od performance but psychological quality, always plays a more determinant role especially in some international games like the Olympic Games where one represents a nation and shoulders tremendous pressure. Only through the intelligent use of balanced emotions combined with the physical talent, can s

30、uccess be attained. 我个人认为，体能是成为一名胜利的运动员的前提，它保证了良好的表现，但心理素养，总是发挥着更确定性的作用，特殊是在一些国际竞赛，如奥运会，一个人代表一个国家，担当着巨大的压力。只有通过理智地运用平衡的情感和身体才能达到胜利。 关于写看法的雅思作文及解析本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第14页 共14页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页