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1、China Daily NewsThe main impact point where the China Eastern Airlines jet crashed on Monday in the Guangxi Zhuang autonomous region was identified and the search area was further enlarged amid heavy rain and landslides on Thursday.中国东方航空公司中国东方航空公司(China Eastern Airlines)客机周一在广西壮族自治区坠毁的主要撞击客机周一在广西壮族

2、自治区坠毁的主要撞击点已经确定，周四，由于暴雨和山体滑坡，点已经确定，周四，由于暴雨和山体滑坡，搜索范围进一步扩大。搜索范围进一步扩大。where 引导地点状从引导地点状从debris 残骸crew items 机组人员物品remains 遗体，遗骸读后续写分层训练P78 Its quite impressive to see Canada geese flying into the clouds.They live to be around 25 years old and are very loyal.They never forget their first home.No one kn

3、ows this more than my family.看到加拿大鹅飞进云端真是令人印象深刻。他们能活到25岁左右，而且非常忠诚。他们永远不会忘记他们的第一个家。没有人比我的家人更知道这一点了。In 2000,when I was seven,my parents and I came back from a T-ball game one late spring afternoon.To our surprise，two adult geese and a baby goose were in our driveway.The adults were shocked by us and f

4、lew away,but their baby was too young to fly and couldnt follow.We are no strangers to the ways of wildlife,so we knew to avoid contact with the baby,hoping he could join his parents.2000年，当我七岁的时候，我和父母在春末的一个下午从一场儿童棒球比赛中回来。令我们惊讶的是，两只成年大雁和一只小雁停在我们的车道上。大雁被我们吓了，飞走了，但他们的孩子太小，不能飞，不能跟着。我们对野生动物的生活并不陌生，所以我们知

5、道要避免接触小雁，希望他能加入他的父母。Hours passed,and night fell.The tiny little thing was wandering around our yard,unaware of what could happen.It was clear that the baby needed protection,warmth,and food to make it to the morning，so we brought him onto our back porch and set up a wire fence to enclose and protect

6、 him.几个小时过去了，夜幕降临了。这个小东西在我们的院子里游荡，不知道会发生什么。很明显，宝宝需要保护、温暖和食物才能活到早晨，所以我们把它带到我们的后门廊上，用铁丝围起来保护它。We all pretty much slept with one eye open till morning.And then another morning.And another.Each day,we tried eagerly to get the baby back to his parents,who kept coming to our yard.He wouldnt go to them,tho

7、ugh,and they wouldnt come close enough to claim him.The baby goose had clearly decided we were his new family and we gave him a namePeeper，because he would follow us around the yard making a peeping(唧唧叫)noise，nonstop.我们几乎都是睁着一只眼睡到天亮。然后是另一个早晨。和另一个。每天，我们都急切地想把小雁送回他的父母身边，他们不断地来到我们的院子里。不过，他不愿去找他们，他们也不愿靠

8、近去认领它。这只小雁显然已经决定把我们当作它的新家庭，我们给它起了个名字叫peeper，因为它会在院子里跟着我们，不停地发出唧唧的声音。Days turned into weeks，and weeks turned into months，until almost a year passed.Peeper slept on our back porch in typical goose fashion.Every day,my dad would clear his droppings with water and throw him up into the air,so he could f

9、ly a loop around the house，coming back again once the porch was clean.几天变成了几周，几周变成了几个月，几乎一年过去了。Peeper以典型的雁式方式睡在我们的后门廊上。每天，我爸爸都会用水清理它的粪便，然后把它扔到空中，这样它就可以绕着房子飞一圈，等门廊打扫干净后再回来。一、读懂大意，理清脉络一、读懂大意，理清脉络1.Read for characters2.Read for plot3.Read for thememy parents and I,two adult geese and a baby goose,my un

10、cle,an aging adult goose1.Two adult geese were shocked and left their baby behind.2.The baby goose wandering around our yard and we brought him onto our back porch.3.The baby goose had decided we were his new family.4.A year passed.Every day,he would fly a loop and came back.simple past tense 一般过去式一

11、般过去式 注意：续写词数应为150左右。One evening，my uncle was over，and my dad wanted to show him Peepers loop.It came as a shock 20 years later when an aging adult goose made his way back to my yard.两段首句定一框两段首句定一框。由下一段首句可知此段小雁飞走了。由下一段首句可知此段小雁飞走了。结合第一段讲到结合第一段讲到 they are very loyal.They never forget their first home.可

12、知是以前收养的小雁回来了。小雁可知是以前收养的小雁回来了。小雁已经变成了年老的大雁，由正能量结尾可以写我们已经变成了年老的大雁，由正能量结尾可以写我们照顾年老的大雁。照顾年老的大雁。二框二首正能量二框二首正能量。二、细读首句，构思框架二、细读首句，构思框架三、三、增加细节，开始写作增加细节，开始写作 在已定在已定框架框架范围内范围内，依据依据情情节发展和生活常识，节发展和生活常识，推断故事中推断故事中人物所见、人物所见、所闻、所闻、所思、所思、所说、所说、所做所做等等给给每段增加每段增加5 5至至8 8个具体细个具体细节节，我们称之为叫，我们称之为叫“58“58细节添加细节添加法法”。One

13、evening，my uncle was over，and my dad wanted to show him Peepers loop.But this time,Peeper just flew off.Everyone was very,very sad.It was dark,and we were worried.We looked for him for days calling his name,but he didnt come back.We hoped he went off on his natural way.Again,days turned into weeks a

14、nd weeks turned into months,then years.I missed Peeper.I would call for him every time I saw a group of geese flying by in V-formation.Twenty years passed,and Peeper became a happy memory for family.一天晚上，我叔叔来了，我爸爸想给他看Peeper飞一圈。但这次，Peeper飞走了。每个人都非常非常难过。天很黑，我们很担心。我们找了它好几天，叫着它的名字，但它没有回来。我们希望它走它的自然之路。日复

15、一日，周复一周，月复一月，年复一年。我想念Peeper。每当我看到一群大雁排成v字队形飞过时，我就会叫它。二十年过去了，Peeper成了家庭的美好回忆。情绪描写情绪描写动作描写动作描写时间描写时间描写 It came as a shock 20 years later when an aging adult goose made his way back to my yard.At first,I thought it was just another goose.And yet，something about him seemed strangely familiar to me.The g

16、oose came back repeatedly.He did all of the same things Peeper used to,like trying to come in through the front door and sleeping in our back porch.Besides this goose responded to the name Peeper.Much to my surprise，my old friend returned,20 years later.20年后，一只上了年纪的成年大雁回到了我的院子里，这让我感到震惊。一开始，我以为那只是另一只

17、大雁。然而，它身上有种莫名的熟悉感。大雁一次又一次地回来。它做的事情和Peeper以前做的一样，比如试图从前门进来，睡在我们的后门廊里。此外，这只大雁对Peeper这个名字有反应。令我吃惊的是，我的老朋友在20年后回来了。心理描写心理描写动作描写动作描写情绪描写情绪描写四个步骤四个步骤2.2.2.2.细读首句，构思框架细读首句，构思框架仔仔细细阅阅读读所所给给两两段段的的首首句句，结结合合正正能能量量结结尾尾，思考思考大致框架大致框架。1.1.1.1.读懂大意，理清脉络读懂大意，理清脉络读所给的读所给的不完整不完整故事，弄故事，弄清清大意和主题大意和主题，理清故事，理清故事的的主要人物和事件主要人物和事件。4.4.4.4.修改润色，整洁誊写修改润色，整洁誊写思考再三，把修正润色后思考再三，把修正润色后的续写整洁地的续写整洁地写入答卷写入答卷。3.3.3.3.增加细节，开始写作增加细节，开始写作根据根据“所见所见/遇所想，遇所想，所为所感所为所感”等构思具体等构思具体细节。细节。