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1、 中中 考考 专专 题题 复复 习习 课课DiscussionLets share some pictures!Lets share some pictures!The houses are different in style but they have the same steps of building.How?Put them in orderPut them in order_ designing the house_ designing the house_ decorating(_ decorating(装饰，装修装饰，装修)_ collecting material_ coll

2、ecting material_ building_ buildingBuilding a house:1423_ read topic carefully and _ read topic carefully and outline-drawing outline-drawing (认真审题认真审题 罗列提纲罗列提纲)_ beautifying _ beautifying（美化）（美化）_ _ collecting collecting materialmaterial _ writing _ writing1234Writing an article:Writing articles is

3、 just like building houses.抄抄改改连连美美列列审审书面书面表达表达How to Write English CompositionsHow to Write English Compositions？书书面面表表达达六六步步法法u Style(体裁体裁）u Person（人称人称）u Tense（时态时态）u Content（内容）（内容）认真审题，分析背景认真审题，分析背景,找出文章要表达的中心。找出文章要表达的中心。具体做法：具体做法：用笔勾画用笔勾画/圈要点圈要点（各个要点逐条划出各个要点逐条划出）How to Write English Compositio

4、nsHow to Write English Compositions？审审健康很重要。在学习和工作的健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。并提倡大家进行假日休闲。Cross-question(审题审题)visit fri

5、ends or parentstravelstay at homeworkStyle(体裁体裁）：）：_Person（人称人称）：）：_Tense（时态时态）:_调查报告，记叙文调查报告，记叙文第一人称第一人称一般现在时一般现在时1.Cross-question(审题审题)Content（内容）（内容）：据实描写：据实描写：适当发挥：适当发挥：调查报告结果：各种度假方式调查报告结果：各种度假方式细节及提倡假日休闲细节及提倡假日休闲_u List key points(列要点列要点)u Arrange and Add (布局加首尾布局加首尾)How to Write English Compos

6、itionsHow to Write English Compositions？具体做法：具体做法：用核心词汇或短语列出文章用核心词汇或短语列出文章要点要点。列列提纲提纲（文章（文章结构框架结构框架）：分几段，）：分几段，及每段大体内容及每段大体内容列列HeadBeginning Body TailEnding BeginningBody Ending 开门见山，开门见山，紧扣主题紧扣主题总总分分总总 综述：综述：概括性强，尽量概括性强，尽量2句话引入句话引入主题；主题；正文正文主要内容：展开描述，层主要内容：展开描述，层次性强，要有过渡型连接词。次性强，要有过渡型连接词。结尾：结尾：总结观点

7、，发表己见，首尾总结观点，发表己见，首尾呼应呼应作文一般框架：作文一般框架：作文一般框架：作文一般框架：文章分文章分3段：段：List key points1.A lot of people travel.2.Some people stay at home.3.Some other people visit friends or parents.4.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.visit friends or parentstravelstay at homework不要遗漏要点！不要遗漏要点！扣分最多扣分最多！根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列出

8、文章的要点。根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。调查报告：如何度假调查报告：如何度假倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning）A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.(the body）Come and enjoy your vacation.Peop

9、le who relax well work well.（the ending）uArrange and Add(布局加首尾布局加首尾)BeautifyingHow to Write English CompositionsHow to Write English Compositions？在有把握的情况下遣词造句，改变句式或添加语句，展示自己的语言功底。可适当可适当多使用定语从句、宾语从句、疑问句、祈多使用定语从句、宾语从句、疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。使句和感叹句。美美具体做法：具体做法：方法一方法一:善用意义相近的善用意义相近的 高级词汇，避免行文单调高级词汇，避免行文单调Which is

10、better?1.1.我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。A I hope you can help me.B Im looking forward to your help.2.2.我不吃垃圾食品。我不吃垃圾食品。A I dont eat junk food.B I stay away from junk food.3.3.我们应该努力取得好成绩。我们应该努力取得好成绩。A We should work hard to get good grades.B Were supposed to try our best to get good grades.方法二方法二 :活用多种句型活用多种句型

11、,避避免重复和呆板免重复和呆板,增加文采增加文采尽量使用自己熟悉的句型尽量使用自己熟悉的句型,以正确、通顺为最基本要求以正确、通顺为最基本要求Which is better?1 1 雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。A It rained heavily.So he didnt catch the school bus.B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.missedbecause of 2 我们应该保护环境。我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.

12、B Its our duty to protect the environment.方法三方法三:妙用引文和例子，旁征博妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。I often help my parents do housework,washing dishes,folding the clothes,taking out the trash and so on.such asAdd an example(日常生活话题日常生活话题)我们应该集中注意力学习。我们应该集中注意力学习。We

13、should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”We should concentrate on our studies.Add a saying(学习与生活学习与生活)Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do.4.Do as the Romans do.7.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.8.All roads lead to Rome.三思而后行。三思

14、而后行。熟能生巧。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。5.The early bird catches the worm.一天一个苹果，一天一个苹果，医生远离我。医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。条条大路通罗马。3.Where there is a will,there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.(th

15、e beginning)A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.(the ending)Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.美美(beautify)Most people c

16、hoose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing t

17、he Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work.It makes people relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work.Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Some people like to stay at home,

18、watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work.(the key points)Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.（the ending）As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy

19、your vacation.People who relax well work well.（the ending）只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻Proverb（谚语）（谚语）sentencespassageLinking words（连接词）（连接词）How to Write English CompositionsHow to Write English Compositions？连连恰当运用关联词和过渡句是英语写作的制胜法宝，使得文章结构紧凑，层次清晰，衔接自然。具体做法：具体做法：方法四方法四:妙用关联词，使行文连妙用关联词，使行文连贯流畅，使文章富有层次

20、感。贯流畅，使文章富有层次感。1.表示并列表示并列:and,as well as,not onlybut also bothand,neithernor，2.表示递进表示递进:besides,whats more，in addition,last but not the least(最后但同样重要的是最后但同样重要的是)3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway4.表示因果表示因果:because,since,for,so,therefore,as a result5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless关联词关联词(conne

21、ction words)6.表示对比表示对比:instead,notbut,while,on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words,to tell the truth8.表示顺序表示顺序:first,next，then,finally，to begin with,first(of all),firstly,second(ly),finally,in the end；next,from then on9.表示强调表示强调:also

22、,besides,especially,actually,in fact10.表示结论表示结论:all in all,in a word,generally speaking,inshort11.表陈述事实：表陈述事实：In fact11.表达自己观点：表达自己观点：As far as I know，In my opinion 关联词关联词(connection words)Lets try_ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies,he went to the concert _.We like doi

23、ng kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking._,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.ThoughAlthoughinstead such asFirstNextFinallyAt last连连(connect)How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning）As the saying goes,“All work and no play

24、makes Jack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.People whorelax well work well.（the ending）Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit frie

25、nds or parents.A few people have to work.(the body)连连(connect)How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the I

26、nternet to have a good rest.And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.However,a few people have to work.As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.People Who relax well work well.a nice head(总总)a nicebody（分）（分）a nice tail（总）（总）uSpell

27、ing(拼写拼写)uTense(时态时态)uGrammar(语法语法)uHandwriting(书写书写)uPunctuation marks(标点符号标点符号)How to Write English CompositionsHow to Write English Compositions？u书写规范，卷面整洁书写规范，卷面整洁How to Write English CompositionsHow to Write English Compositions？将草稿认真将草稿认真抄写抄写到答题纸上到答题纸上。草稿纸草稿纸答题纸答题纸审审 列列 美美 连连 改改抄抄How to Write

28、English CompositionsHow to Write English Compositions？Its your turn now!节约资源节约资源,保护环境保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起。从我们身边的小事做起。李明李明 是一个注重是一个注重“低碳低碳”生活的中学生，生活的中学生，假假设你是他设你是他,请以请以“My Low-carbon Life”为题，为题，写一篇写一篇80词左右的短文，简单描述自己的词左右的短文，简单描述自己的“低低碳生活碳生活”。内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，要点：（要点：（1）每天步行上学；）每天步行上学；

29、幻灯片幻灯片 57 （2）离开教室时，关灯、电视；）离开教室时，关灯、电视；（3）不用水时，记得关水龙头）不用水时，记得关水龙头(tap);循环使用水；循环使用水；（4）充分使用纸张；）充分使用纸张；（5）不使用塑料袋。）不使用塑料袋。用书面表达六步法用书面表达六步法写这篇短文。写这篇短文。Style(体裁体裁）：）：_Person（人称人称）：）：_Tense（时态时态）:_记叙文记叙文第一人称第一人称一般现在时一般现在时1.Cross-question(审题审题)Content（内容）（内容）：据实描写：据实描写：适当发挥：适当发挥：细节及提倡细节及提倡低碳生活低碳生活_描述自己的描述自己

30、的“低碳生活低碳生活”列：列：用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点.1.I go to school on foot every day./I walk to school every day.2.remember to turn off the lights,the TV and the fans 3.turn off the tap.reuse water.4.I make full use of paper.5.Dont use plastic bags.加：加首尾，使文章结构完整。可以采用总分总，分总结加：加首尾，使文章结构完整。可以采用总分总，分总结构。开

31、头和结尾应注意简洁，漂亮，最好采用开门见山的构。开头和结尾应注意简洁，漂亮，最好采用开门见山的形式，结尾应注意与题目或开头相呼应，并且要扣题有力。形式，结尾应注意与题目或开头相呼应，并且要扣题有力。My name is Li Ming.I am a middle school student.I try my best to have a low-carbon life to save energy and ptotect our envioronment.Its important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environ

32、ment.Lets take action now!/I wish more people to join me.开头：开头：结尾：结尾：1.I go to school on foot every day./I walk to school every day.2.I always remember to turn off the lights,the TV and the fans when I leave the classroom.3.When I am not using water,I always turn off the tap.I often reuse water，for

33、example,when I finish washing the clothes,I use the water to clean the floor and water flowers.4.I think saving paper is necessary,so I make full use of paper.5.I use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when I go shopping.可以在适当的地方添加事例或紧密相连的话可以在适当的地方添加事例或紧密相连的话,然后连成句。然后连成句。写好词句，美化文章。写好词句，美化文章。但要注意：一般的

34、同学一定要以写正确但要注意：一般的同学一定要以写正确/通顺的简单句为最基本要求，通顺的简单句为最基本要求，切勿一味地追求高水平，反而弄巧成拙。切勿一味地追求高水平，反而弄巧成拙。连：恰当运用连接词，使文章层次清晰，各部分衔接自然。连：恰当运用连接词，使文章层次清晰，各部分衔接自然。1.When I am not using water,I always turn off the tap.I often reuse water.for example,when I finish washing the clothes,I use the water to clean the floor and

35、water flowers。2.I think saving paper is necessary,so I make full use of paperOne possible version:My Low-carbon Life My name is Li Ming.I am a middle school student.I try my best to have a ow-carbon life to save energy and ptotect our envioronment.In order to live a low-carbon life,I go to school on

36、 foot every day.When I leave,I always remember to turn off the lights,the TV and the fans.When I am not using water,I always turn off the tap.I often reuse water,for example,when I finish washing the clothes,I use the water to clean the floor.I think saving paper is necessary,so so I often make full

37、 use of paper.And I never use plastic bags.Its important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment and save energy.I wish more people to join me.红色为红色为“连连”蓝色为蓝色为“美美”a nice head(总总)a nicebody（分）（分）a nice tail（总）（总）Exchange your article with your partner,then underline the beautiful

38、sentences and circle the mistakes.评价评价:请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。1.fluency流畅流畅 consecution条理条理:(Yes or No)beginning()key sentences()linking words()ending ()2.Choice of words and sentences:The number of spelling mistakes ()The number of grammar mistakes()Does he write good words or sentences?

39、()3.Others:_ A(13-15 分分):包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚B(11-12 分分):基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚本清楚C(8-10分分 ):内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意D(6-7分分 ):要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达E(3-5 ):只抄了提只抄了提示词，错误百出，不知所云示词，错误百出，不知所云F(0-2分分):白卷或文不对题

40、白卷或文不对题作者：作者：_得分：得分：_ 评价人评价人:_认真审题，勾画出要点并认真审题，勾画出要点并适当分析适当分析.据据文章要点及中心思想文章要点及中心思想，列出主要句型、关键词，列出主要句型、关键词，加上加上首尾，首尾，形成提纲。形成提纲。根据写作提纲和要点，根据写作提纲和要点，按步骤按步骤写出写出每一部分每一部分的具体内容，美化的具体内容，美化文章，并用文章，并用关联词关联词把文章各部分把文章各部分连连起来成文。起来成文。How can we write a good composition？巧巧用用关关联联词词美美善善用用高高级级词词汇汇活活用用多多种种句句型型妙妙用用引引文文和和

41、例例子子抄抄改改连连美美列列审审书面书面表达表达认真抄写，认真抄写，书写规范书写规范，注意，注意卷面整洁卷面整洁Summary Writing skillssix steps一、掌握基本句型二、灵活运用初中阶段所要求掌握的各种时态Some advice for you!三、多读、多背好文章“读书破万卷,下笔如有神”四、强化单词、短语的记忆五、强化书写训练，卷面美观六、多写文章，自改，同学间互相批改，适当找老师面批。Homework：继续完成继续完成“My Low-carbon LifeMy Low-carbon Life”的书面的书面表达。表达。完成南方新中考完成南方新中考P221P221以以“远离电脑游戏远离电脑游戏”为主题的为主题的书面表达。书面表达。用书面表达六步法用书面表达六步法用书面表达六步法用书面表达六步法祝同学们在中考中取得好成绩！祝同学们在中考中取得好成绩！