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1、写作题写作题目目:How to learn English well？Learning aim Giving advice on learning English.Watch a videoWhatWhat s it about?s it about?Free talk&word chain（词组接龙）（词组接龙）WordWord chain like this:chain like this:A A listen to the tape listen to the tapeAB-listen to the tape AB-listen to the tape+do some readingd

2、o some readingABC ABC ABCDABCD listening speaking reading writinglisten to English songswatch English movies lets classify:learn English wellgrammarvocabularySentence StructuresSentence Structures：You/weYou/we cancanYou/we should You/we should Youd betterYoud betterYou/we are supposed to You/we are

3、supposed to Its best to.Its best to.Why dont you?Why dont you?Why not?Why not?How to learn English well?As we all know,its necessary for us to learn English well.However,some students say that it is very hard to learn it well.There are many ways in fact.Interest is the first step to learn English we

4、ll.And practice makes perfect.So,youd better practise English every day.Youcan often listen to real English songs or watch English movies.Whats more,why not find an English pen pal?Thats also a good way.I hope these suggestions can help you a lot.beginningending主要人称：主要人称：_ 主要时态：主要时态：_主要句型：主要句型：_一般现在

5、时一般现在时一、一、Beginning：点出学习英语的重要性点出学习英语的重要性具体谈学习英语的方法具体谈学习英语的方法提出希望或鼓励提出希望或鼓励第一或第二人称第一或第二人称二、二、Main part：三、三、Ending：表表“提建议提建议”的各种句式的各种句式 英英语语是是一一门门很很重重要要的的学学科科。然然而而，很很多多同同学学都都会会在在学学习习英英语语的的过过程程中中遇遇到到不不少少困困难难。请请结结合合你你和和身身边边朋朋友友、同同学学的的学学习习经经验验，以以“How to learn English well？”为为题题写写一一篇篇文文章章，给给出出你的建议。你的建议。要求

6、：要求：1.给出至少给出至少3点建议点建议;2.语句通顺、连贯语句通顺、连贯;3.词数约词数约80左右。左右。自评标准自评标准：大声朗读自己大声朗读自己的文章，从结构、人称、时的文章，从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修标点符号等方面进行自我修正。正。Task 1 自我欣赏与修正自我欣赏与修正我欣赏，我快乐我欣赏，我快乐注意：注意：作文通用修改字符：优美句子；漏词作文通用修改字符：优美句子；漏词；错处：；错处：；去掉，语法错误；去掉，语法错误 G,人称错误人称错误 P，时态错误，时态错误 T Task 2项目项目标准标准自我评价自我评价同伴评

7、价同伴评价教师评价教师评价结构（结构（3分）分）段落合理段落合理（2 分）分）衔接自然衔接自然 (1分分)内容（内容（8分）分）3点建议点建议 （6分）分）拓展合理拓展合理 (2分分)语言（语言（3分）分）词汇丰富词汇丰富 (1 分分)句法正确，语言优美句法正确，语言优美(2分分)卷面（卷面（1分）分）书写工整书写工整（1分）分）集体赏析，共同进步集体赏析，共同进步Task 3Summary How to write an article on learning English？Where there is a will,Where there is a will,there is a way

8、!there is a way!Homework Rewrite your article and hand it in.二次修改作文并上交。二次修改作文并上交。写作写作题目：题目：My favorite Chinese festivalWrite about your favorite Chinese festival.Whats the story about?Look at the pictures and say what festivals they are.探究探究1：Brainstorm(头脑风暴头脑风暴)What Chinese festivals do you know?(你

9、知道有哪些中国节日吗？你知道有哪些中国节日吗？)The DragonBoat FestivalThe Mid-AutumnFestivalThe Spring FestivalThe LanternFestivalLets make a list!the popular festivals in China When is it?Spring FestivalLantern Festival Dragon Boat Festival Mid-Autumn Festival in January or Februaryon the 15th of the first lunar month on

10、 the 5th of the fifth lunar monthin September or OctoberWhen we talk about a festival,we can talk aboutChinese festivalbeginningname of the festivalWhen is it celebrated?Every year there is a Spring Festival in China.It is celebrated on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month of the year.It is ce

11、lebrated in/on It is a traditional Chinese festival called Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most popular festivals in China.body How do people celebrate it?things to eat things to dodumplings zongzitangyuanmooncakesnoodlesclean the houses make zongzi have dragon boat races admire the moon make lant

12、erns guess riddlesget together give best wishes share mooncakes with relativesWhat does it celebrate?It celebrates the beginning of new year.This festival is in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest Chinese poets.ending What do you think of the festival?Why do you like it so much?I think it is fun a

13、nd exciting.I usually have a great time during this festival because it makes me relaxed.I like the festival very much because I can get together and share happiness with my families.Not only can I spend more time with my families,but I get much lucky money.My favorite Chinese festival My favorite C

14、hinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival.The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional Chinese festivals,it is often celebrated in September or October.During the festival,family members get together and eat mooncakes.There are many kinds of delicious mooncakes.On the evening of the Mid-Autumn

15、 Festival,people can enjoy the full moon in the dark sky.I like Mid-Autumn Festival because it makes me happy.在这么多的中国传统节日当中，你最在这么多的中国传统节日当中，你最喜欢哪一个？请你从中选取你最喜爱喜欢哪一个？请你从中选取你最喜爱的一个节日的一个节日,以以”My favorite Chinese traditional festival”为题写为题写一篇一篇80词左右的说明文。词左右的说明文。My favorite Chinese festival isIt is celebr

16、ated in/on During this festival,peopleIts my favorite festival becauseIt makes me feel The following expressions can help you:My favorite Chinese festival _ _开声朗读自己的文章，并开声朗读自己的文章，并从结构、人称、时态、字从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。符号等方面进行自我修正。Task 1自我欣赏与修正自我欣赏与修正同伴互赏同伴互赏欣赏角度欣赏角度：1.写作基本要求写作基本要求:

17、人称人称,时态；时态；2.要点齐全；要点齐全；3.结构结构:开头，正文，结尾；开头，正文，结尾；4.好词好句。好词好句。Task 2欣赏与修正欣赏与修正 请请交换习作交换习作欣赏，用欣赏，用红笔划出红笔划出对方的对方的亮点亮点词、句词、句,并运用并运用改错符号改错符号找出不足，进行适当找出不足，进行适当修改修改。评分评分以满分以满分15分分为标准，给同伴的习作打分。为标准，给同伴的习作打分。点评点评由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构 分析分析-细细 节点评节点评)集体赏析，共同进步集体赏析，共同进步Task 3We are Chinese!We are Chine

18、se!We love our family!We love our family!We love our motherland!We love our motherland!Summary How to write an article on your favorite Chinese festival.Rewrite the articles.写作题写作题目：目：Write a letter asking for information politelyLearn how to ask information politely.假设你是李磊，你将去英国假设你是李磊，你将去英国Oxford U

19、niversity进行交流学习。学习之前，你要进行交流学习。学习之前，你要写信给负责人写信给负责人Miss Smith，有礼貌地向她，有礼貌地向她咨询有关信息，请用咨询有关信息，请用80字左右完成这封信。字左右完成这封信。在你的信里，应该提及以下几点：在你的信里，应该提及以下几点：1.介绍你自己介绍你自己 2.告知她你将什么时候去告知她你将什么时候去 3.礼貌地询问你想知道的信息礼貌地询问你想知道的信息 4.感谢她的帮忙感谢她的帮忙Lets analyze the requirements:(审题审题)体裁：体裁：人称：人称：时态：时态：应用文应用文-书信书信第一人称、第二人称第一人称、第二人

20、称一般现在时、一般现在时、一般将来时一般将来时1.介绍你自己介绍你自己 2.告知她你将什么时候去告知她你将什么时候去 3.礼貌地询问你想知道的信息礼貌地询问你想知道的信息 4.感谢她的帮忙感谢她的帮忙Which requirement is the most difficult for you?1.introduce yourself:_2.say when you are coming:_3.thank Miss Smith for helping you:_1.introduce yourself:_2.say when you are coming:_3.thank Miss Smith

21、 for helping you:_My name is and Im from Ill be coming to your school in/onI would like to thank you for Im looking forward to your reply.the coursetime of the courseWhere and what you can eat Where you will stay What activitiesyou can do How to go there3.礼貌地询问你想知道的信息礼貌地询问你想知道的信息Oxford University礼貌用

22、语句型：礼貌用语句型：连接词：连接词：and,also,besides,whats more Could you please?May I ask?I wonderI want to know Dear Miss Smith,Yours,Li Lei 假设你是李磊，你将去英国假设你是李磊，你将去英国Oxford University进行交流学习。学习之前，你要进行交流学习。学习之前，你要写信给负责人写信给负责人Miss Smith，有礼貌地向她，有礼貌地向她咨询有关信息，请用咨询有关信息，请用80字左右完成这封信。字左右完成这封信。在你的信里，应该提及以下几点：在你的信里，应该提及以下几点：1

23、.介绍你自己介绍你自己 2.告知她你将什么时候去告知她你将什么时候去 3.礼貌地询问你想知道的信息礼貌地询问你想知道的信息 4.感谢她的帮忙感谢她的帮忙开声朗读自己的文章，并开声朗读自己的文章，并从结构、人称、时态、字从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。符号等方面进行自我修正。Task 1自我欣赏与修正自我欣赏与修正同伴互赏同伴互赏欣赏角度欣赏角度：1.写作基本要求写作基本要求:人称人称,时态；时态；2.要点齐全；要点齐全；3.结构结构:开头，正文，结尾；开头，正文，结尾；4.好词好句。好词好句。Task 2欣赏与修正欣赏与修正 请请交换习

24、作交换习作欣赏，用欣赏，用红笔划出红笔划出对方的对方的亮点亮点词、句词、句,并运用并运用改错符号改错符号找出不足，进行适当找出不足，进行适当修改修改。评分评分以满分以满分15分分为标准，给同伴的习作打分。为标准，给同伴的习作打分。点评点评由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构 分析分析-细细 节点评节点评)集体赏析，共同进步集体赏析，共同进步Task 3SummaryHow to analyze the writing requirements?写作写作题目：题目：How I have changed!Learning aim Write about changes

25、of yourself.Watch and tell difference.She is Sun Yanzi.She used to wear glasses.Watch and tell difference.He is a boy.He is Han Geng.He used to have short hair.He used to be like a girl.appearance（外貌）（外貌）personality(性格性格)hobby habit learninglifestyleshort hair long hairstrong slim/thinHow people hav

26、e changed!.used tonow.used tonowDiscuss in groups and write down as many phrases/wordsas possible about the following aspects:changesappearancepersonalityhobbieshabitlearninglifestyle How I have changed!I have changed a lot in the last few years.My life is different!When I was young,I used to be shy

27、,but now Im outgoing and I enjoy talking with others.In the past,I used to be interested in Chinese,however,now I like English.I think English is useful and important.And I am an English teacher now.I often went fishing with my friends,now I m used to going shopping in free time.Whats more,I used to

28、 ride the bike to school,now I walk there instead.What great changes I have.beginningendingHow many changes?How I have changed!I have changed a lot in the last few years.My life is different!When I was young,I used to be shy,but now Im outgoing and I enjoy talking with others.In the past,I used to b

29、e interested in Chinese,however,now I like English.I think English is useful and important.And I am an English teacher now.I often went fishing with my friends,now I m used to going shopping in free time.Whats more,I used to ride the bike to school,now I walk there instead.What great changes I have.

30、So many changesyou can do it this way:How Ive Changed!My life has changed a lot in the past few years.I used to _.Now Im _.The biggest change in my life was_.This is the most import change because_.过去与现在的生活情况I used to.,but now.In the past,I often.Now.In the past,I used to be.but now I am.总结观点My life

31、 has changed a lot in the past few years.自我感受It seems that.I really miss the old days.现现在在你你已已经经是是一一位位九九年年级级的的学学生生了了，你你感感觉觉自自己己和和以以前前有有变变化化吗吗？请请根根据据自自己己的的体体会会，多多角角度度，多多方方面面谈谈谈谈自自己己的的变变化化。请请以以“How I have changed!”为为题写一篇文章题写一篇文章。要求：要求：1.至少谈至少谈3个方面的变化个方面的变化;2.语句通顺、连贯语句通顺、连贯;3.词数约词数约80左右。左右。自评标准自评标准：大声朗

32、读自己大声朗读自己的文章，从结构、人称、时的文章，从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修标点符号等方面进行自我修正。正。Task 1 自我欣赏与修正自我欣赏与修正我欣赏，我快乐我欣赏，我快乐欣赏角度欣赏角度：1.写作基本要求写作基本要求:人称人称,时态时态,2.要点齐全要点齐全,3.结构结构:开头，正文，结尾开头，正文，结尾,4.好词好句。好词好句。注意：注意：（作文通用修改字符：优美句子；漏词（作文通用修改字符：优美句子；漏词；错处：；错处：；去掉，；去掉，语法错误语法错误 G,人称错误人称错误 P，时态错误，时态错误 T）Task 2 集体

33、赏析，共同进步集体赏析，共同进步Task 3Summary How to write an article about changes.Be the person you Be the person you want to be!want to be!Homework Rewrite your article and hand it in.二次修改作文二次修改作文Thank you!写作写作题目：题目：Chinese paper cutting Learning aim Introduce Chinese paper cuttingWhat are some special things th

34、at your hometown or city is famous for?These can be food,artwork or any other products.(请介绍家乡的特色产品，如某种食物、请介绍家乡的特色产品，如某种食物、艺术品或玩具等艺术品或玩具等)，假设你要推销一件特产，你将如，假设你要推销一件特产，你将如何将产品介绍给其他人，介绍的内容会包哪些信息？何将产品介绍给其他人，介绍的内容会包哪些信息？Group work presentation 1、雷州特产：菠萝罐头（、雷州特产：菠萝罐头（Canned pineapple）产地：雷州英利镇）产地：雷州英利镇 特点：水特

35、点：水果类产品，香甜美味，可口佳肴，远近果类产品，香甜美味，可口佳肴，远近闻名畅销东南亚。闻名畅销东南亚。Group work presentation 2、湛江特产：茗皇茶（、湛江特产：茗皇茶（Minghuang tea）产地：廉江）产地：廉江 特点：人工采摘闻名的特点：人工采摘闻名的优质茶叶，喝后回味无穷。优质茶叶，喝后回味无穷。Group work presentation 3、湛江特产：廉江红橙（、湛江特产：廉江红橙（Red orange）产地：廉江）产地：廉江 特点：水果类，香特点：水果类，香甜可口，深受大众喜爱。甜可口，深受大众喜爱。Group work presentationH

36、ow to introduce a product?Facts about the product你能想到的其他信息Where/how is it made?The name What is it made of/from?(wood/paper)history/usages Feelings about the productWhy is it so good?What do you think of it?Chinese paper cutting How to make it?How to introduce Chinese paper cutting?Facts about the p

37、roductTurn to your book P38Where/how is it made?The name What is it made of/from?(wood/paper)History/usages Feelings about the productWhy is it so good?What do you think of it?Now discuss with your partner and write down the answers in your worksheet:1、What is the product?_2、What is it made of/from?

38、_3、How is it made?_4、What is its history and usages?_5、Why is it special_单元主题写作五单元主题写作五假设你是王明，你的外国网友假设你是王明，你的外国网友TonyTony在网上看到几幅中国剪纸（在网上看到几幅中国剪纸（Chinese Chinese paper cuttingpaper cutting），他对此很感兴趣，给你发邮件询问有关中国剪纸的），他对此很感兴趣，给你发邮件询问有关中国剪纸的信息，请根据下表提示给他回复邮件。信息，请根据下表提示给他回复邮件。Chinese Paper Cuttinglong histo

39、ryover 1，500 years very popularin different parts of China,be fond of,do well in different shapesbirds,animals,flowers where to put onusually put them on doors or windows What do you think of Chinese paper cuttings?Why？要求：要求：1.1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；2 2内容可以适当扩充，字数内容可以适当扩充，字数8080词左右。词左右。1.本习

40、作要求写一封电子邮件，书信格本习作要求写一封电子邮件，书信格式要正确。因为是回复的邮件，首先式要正确。因为是回复的邮件，首先要谈一谈对方邮件的内容。要谈一谈对方邮件的内容。2.因为是介绍中国剪纸艺术，所以主要因为是介绍中国剪纸艺术，所以主要时态是一般现在时或一般现在时的被时态是一般现在时或一般现在时的被动语态。动语态。3.可以从剪纸的历史、流行状况、图案可以从剪纸的历史、流行状况、图案和用途等方面来介绍。和用途等方面来介绍。习作指导习作指导思路点拨思路点拨 have a long history of over 1500 yearscan be seen in different parts

41、of ChinaLots of people are fond of themcut paper into different shapes,likeanimals,flowers and so onusually put them on doors or windowsl like Chinese paper cuttings very much.not only beautiful but also very useful称呼及回应对方邮件内容Dear Tony,You wanted to know Im glad to 祝语及落款I hopeBest wishes,Wang Ming单元

42、主题写作五单元主题写作五假设你是王明，你的外国网友假设你是王明，你的外国网友TonyTony在网上看到几幅中国剪纸（在网上看到几幅中国剪纸（Chinese Chinese paper cuttingpaper cutting），他对此很感兴趣，给你发邮件询问有关中国剪纸的），他对此很感兴趣，给你发邮件询问有关中国剪纸的信息，请根据下表提示给他回复邮件。信息，请根据下表提示给他回复邮件。Chinese Paper Cuttinglong historyover 1，500 years very popularin different parts of China,be fond of,do we

43、ll in different shapesbirds,animals,flowers where to put onusually put them on doors or windows What do you think of Chinese paper cuttings?Why？要求：要求：1.1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；2 2内容可以适当扩充，字数内容可以适当扩充，字数8080词左右。词左右。开声朗读自己的文章，并开声朗读自己的文章，并从结构、人称、时态、字从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。符

44、号等方面进行自我修正。Task 1自我欣赏与修正自我欣赏与修正同伴互赏同伴互赏欣赏角度欣赏角度：1.写作基本要求写作基本要求:人称人称,时态；时态；2.要点齐全；要点齐全；3.结构结构:开头，正文，结尾；开头，正文，结尾；4.好词好句。好词好句。Task 2欣赏与修正欣赏与修正 请请交换习作交换习作欣赏，用欣赏，用红笔划出红笔划出对方的对方的亮点亮点词、句词、句,并运用并运用改错符号改错符号找出不足，进行适当找出不足，进行适当修改修改。评分评分以满分以满分15分分为标准，给同伴的习作打分。为标准，给同伴的习作打分。点评点评由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构 分析分

45、析-细细 节点评节点评)集体赏析，共同进步集体赏析，共同进步Task 3Dear Tony,You wanted to know about Chinese paper cutting.Im glad to tell you something about it.Chinese paper cutting has a long history of over 1500 years.It can be seen in different parts of China.Many people,no matter young or old,are fond of it.People in north

46、ern part of China especially do well in making paper cuttings.People cut paper into different pictures,like birds,animals,flowers and so on.I think Chinese paper cuttings are usually put on doors or windows when people celebrate something happy,especially for the Spring Festival.More and more people

47、 are interested in it.I hope youll come to China to see more Chinese cuttings one day.Best wishes,Wang Ming例文例文习作资料习作资料单词History,different,shape,beautiful,useful,celebrate,interested,hope短短语no matter,be fond of,do well in,not onlybut also,and so on,be interested in句子句子Im glad to tell you something about Chinese paper cutting has a long history More and more people are I hope youll come to China to see