读后续写指导.pptx

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1、hidebringmeethearfreezebeginridewritearisecatchmistakepayspeakswimsmellcostgoburstteachflyreview读后续写读后续写1.good handwriting1.good handwriting2.logical story2.logical story3.vivid expression3.vivid expression鉴湖中学鉴湖中学黄超琼黄超琼Step 1 read to get the main ideaWho is the main character?When did the story hap

2、pen?Where did the story happen?What happened in the story?Why How Jenny /her mother/grandma/her father How?then whatbutFather asked her to give the necklace to him for many timesWho?What?Jennyher fathernecklaceShe got it through her own efforts Jenny didnt want to give up the necklace to her dadMain

3、 Idea Jenny liked the _ very much,and she got it through her own efforts.Her loving _asked her to _ for many times.Jenny wouldnt _ her favorite and refused her father.pearl necklacegive upDaddygive him the necklaceWhy How did Daddy want the necklace?did Jenny refuse Daddy?would this conflict be solv

4、ed?Step 2 Further thinking conflictPara1 A few nights later when her daddy came in,jenny was sitting on her bed,waiting for her father.Why was jenny waiting for her father?Para2With tears in his own eyes,Jennys kind daddy reached out one hand to take the cheap necklace.Jenny decided to give her favo

5、rite necklace to her father,and said something very moving.Step 3 Excavate the clues(挖掘线索）挖掘线索）The given sentences and wordsTip1:Focus on the given sentence of paragraph2 first.And some information in it must be mentioned in paragraph 1.Para2With tears in his own eyes,Jennys kind daddy reached out o

6、ne hand to take the cheap necklace.with tears in his own eyeshe was deeply movedkind daddythere must be a reasonone handwhat was the other hand doing?Tip2:small words,big clues.cheap necklace?his daughter deserve a better one.Daddy prepared an expensive necklace for Jenny,and his other hand was reac

7、hing for it.The underlined key words:metal box housework buy home cheap pearl necklace daddy love give me your necklace give upTip3:The key words that respectively stand for the most important information,the main character and the main object should be chosen in your writing.Step 3 Excavate the clu

8、es(挖掘线索）挖掘线索）The given words and sentencesStep 4 develop the plot(outline)Para1 A few nights later when her daddy came in,jenny was sitting on her bed,waiting for her father.Para2With tears in his own eyes,Jennys kind daddy reached out one hand to take the cheap necklace.D:why Jenny was waitingJ:gav

9、e the necklace to DaddyD:surprised and confusedJ:explained and said something movingD:his other hand.J:surprised D:explained,proud J:excited and kissed/hugconclusion:A lesson is learnedStep 4 develop the plot(outline)Para1 A few nights later when her daddy came in,jenny was sitting on her bed,waitin

10、g for her father.Para2With tears in his own eyes,Jennys kind daddy reached out one hand to take the cheap necklace.D:why Jenny was waitingJ:gave the necklace to DaddyD:surprised and confusedJ:explained and said something movingD:his other hand.J:surprised D:explained,proud J:excited and kissed/hugco

11、nclusion:A lesson is learnedDaddy asked Jenny,”Jenny,why are you still sitting?”Jenny gave the necklace to her father.Daddy was very surprised and confused,and asked.Jenny said,”You are the most important person.His other hand took out another necklace which is.Jenny was very surprised and asked why

12、.Daddy said,“You deserve a better one.Jenny was so happy that she hugged her father tightly.Sometimes,you have to learn to give up to get.1.Read to get the main idea(who what)2.Further thinking(why how/conflict)3.Excavate the clues (the underlined words,the given two sentences)4.Develop the plot (usually a positive lesson is learned)5.Begin to write6.Handwriting (neat and clear)Steps to complete a storyHomework:1.Review what weve learnt in this lesson;2.Polish the story on your paper.Thank you!