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1、高考书面表达高考书面表达 高级表达方式高级表达方式（一一）一般句一般句高级句高级句1.You can find my house easily.Youll have no trouble finding my house.2.I hope you can write me back soon.I am looking forward to hearing from you.3.Women are more important than before in society.women are playing a more important part in society.4.My hometo

2、wn is in the south of China.My hometown is located in the south of China.比如：比如：“北京很吸迷人北京很吸迷人。”你也许不知道你也许不知道“迷人迷人”或或“吸引人（吸引人（attract people）”用英文怎么说。但是，用英文怎么说。但是，你可以绕开生词，换一种方式把这句话写出来，比如你可以绕开生词，换一种方式把这句话写出来，比如这么写这么写:你看，你看，“sothat”结构是初中学过的，这句话每结构是初中学过的，这句话每个单词都很简单啊。像这个档次的句子，就足以使你个单词都很简单啊。像这个档次的句子，就足以使你脱颖

3、脱颖而出了！而出了！Beijing is so beautiful that many people come here every year.So beautiful is Beijing that many people come here every year.启发你的“创造力”要能够把短句拼成长句要能够把短句拼成长句到此时，尽量不要使用“many”这个字,因为它代表的数字不具体,使你的文章给读者一种“空”的感觉。不妨换“many”为“thousands of”，于是改进为：Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come her

4、e every year from all around the world.或者再“拉长”为：Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world,no matter young or old,men or women.简单变换简单变换 能够美化句子的结构能够美化句子的结构,写出高考满分句式写出高考满分句式当你写出“If I have time,I will take you to my school.”你可以把这句话写成 I will,if I have

5、 time,take you to my school.这样的句式，早已体现在官方满分样本范文之中，痛心的是，绝大多数考生对此完全不知晓。My brother is a college student,and my brother is glad to help others.你要意识到这两个英文句子还可以被拼成一个结构优美的句子：接下来，我再教你一个简化规则，让你最终把这句话写得相当洗练：My brother,who is a college student,is glad to help others.My brother,a college student,is glad to help

6、 others.1.Our government wants to build a“harmonious society”.=2.A dictionary is very useful to English learners.=PracticePracticeOur government is aiming to build a“harmonious society”.A dictionary is of great use to Englishlearners.3.He arrived here at 5 pm yesterday.=4.In our school,there are twe

7、nty-six classrooms.=PracticePractice He didnt arrive here until 5 pm yesterday.Our school is made up of twenty-six classrooms.5.A large number of visitors come here every day.=6.I hope my summer holiday will come soon.=PracticePractice A large number of people pay a visit here every day.Im looking f

8、orward to the coming of my summer holiday.记叙文一、审题认真读题然后找出基本要素:5W1H何 时 何 地 何 人 为何 如 何 做 了 何 事二、抓要点确定主要行为，配动词，注意时态、语态及搭配的副词、介词等What happened?三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位，把要点变成完整的句子，注意连词Who did what?四、连句成文时间 空间 细节连贯 呼应词与词搭配 句与句相连五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？语态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？六、誊写卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！逻辑角度逻辑角度 合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇

9、时间顺序时间顺序 first,second,then,finally/at last,soon immediately,suddenly空间顺序空间顺序here,there,on one sideon the other side,in front of,at the back of,next to 对称顺序对称顺序for one thing,for the other thing,on one hand,on the other hand转折顺序转折顺序but,however,while,though,otherwise因果顺序因果顺序because,since,as,thanks to,a

10、s a result(of)条件顺序条件顺序as long as,so long as,on condition that,if,unless让步顺序让步顺序though,as,even if/though,whether,who (what,when,where)ever递进顺序递进顺序whats more,besides,to make matters worse,whats worse过渡性插入语过渡性插入语I think,Im afraid,you know,As we all know1.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many th

11、ings.（使用名词性从句）使用名词性从句）2.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(使用倒装句使用倒装句)3.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型使用强调句型)4.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚用虚拟语气）拟语气）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Have a tr

12、yHave a tryWeak as I am,Ill make the effort.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.5.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用过去分词使用过去分词)6.They sang and laughed as they went bac

13、k to school.(使用使用V-ing形式形式)7.I wont believe what he says.（使用状语从句）使用状语从句）8.If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.（用并列句）用并列句）9He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒装句使用倒装句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Followed by many students,s

14、he walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing,they went back to school.No matter what he says,I wont believe.Study hard and youll make rapid progress.审题：审题：1。体裁：。体裁：2。时态：。时态：3。人称：。人称：4。分段及。分段及要点要点：以以“The Importance of Water”为题，用为题，用英语写一篇英语写一篇100词左右的短文，要点如下：词左右的短文，要点如下：1没有水便没有生命。没有水便没有生命。2随着现代社会的迅速发展

15、，需要越来越随着现代社会的迅速发展，需要越来越多的水。现在许多地方的水已经变得越来越多的水。现在许多地方的水已经变得越来越缺乏缺乏(scarce)。3一些河流和湖泊已经被工厂排出的污水一些河流和湖泊已经被工厂排出的污水所污染。这使得所污染。这使得 4为了保护水资源为了保护水资源,我们必须采取措施，我们必须采取措施，与污染作斗争。与污染作斗争。The Importance of Water没有水便没有生命。没有水便没有生命。_(众所周知众所周知)where there is no Water ,there are no lives.So water _.As we all know,Its we

16、ll-known thatis very important for us 随着现代社会的迅速发展随着现代社会的迅速发展,我们需要越来越我们需要越来越多的水多的水.现在许多地方的水正在变得越来越缺现在许多地方的水正在变得越来越缺乏乏(scarce)。_ modern society,we need more and more water.However,water _ in many places.With the rapid development ofis becoming more and more scarce一些河流和湖泊已经被工厂排出的污水所污一些河流和湖泊已经被工厂排出的污水所污

17、染。这使得染。这使得 Some rivers and lakes _ by the waste from factories.The pollution has _ unsafe drinking water for people _.It has also _ the ecology of the area,killing many plants and animals.have been pollutedresulted inliving near the rivers who livehad harmful effects on4为了保护水资源为了保护水资源,我们必须采取措施，我们必须采

18、取措施，与污染作斗争。与污染作斗争。_,we must _ fight against pollution.Its our responsibility to keep it clean.In order to protect our watertake measures to以以“The Importance of Water”为题，用为题，用英语写一篇英语写一篇100词左右的短文，要点如下：词左右的短文，要点如下：1没有水便没有生命。没有水便没有生命。2随着现代社会的迅速发展，需要越来越随着现代社会的迅速发展，需要越来越多的水。现在许多地方的水已经变得越来越多的水。现在许多地方的水已经变得

19、越来越缺乏缺乏(scarce)。3一些河流和湖泊已经被工厂排出的污水一些河流和湖泊已经被工厂排出的污水所污染。这使得所污染。这使得 4为了保护水资源为了保护水资源,我们必须采取措施，我们必须采取措施，与污染作斗争。与污染作斗争。As we all know,where there is no water,there are no lives.So water is very important for us.With the rapid development of modern society,we need more and more water.However,water is beco

20、ming more and more scarce in many places.Whats more,a lot of rivers and lakes have been polluted by the waste from factories.The pollution has resulted in unsafe drinking water for people living near the rivers.In addition,It has also had harmful effects on the ecology of the area,killing many plant

21、s and animals.In order to protect our water,we must take measures to fight against pollution.Its our responsibility to keep it clean.As we all know,everyone needs friendship,so do I.I have a number of close friends,and the best one is Alice,an host and lovely girl with big eyes and long hair.So easy

22、going and humorous is she that all of us like her.When I am angry and worried,she always tells me some jokes,which makes me peaceful and cheerful.Besides,she is the very person who gives me a hand when necessary.In addition,she gives me a lot what money can not buy.I still remember the days when she

23、 helped me.Last year,when I was sick in hospital with a bad disease,I became unhappy and felt as if everything had been hopeless.She managed to make me happy and help me with my lessons.It was she who did help me a lot.Without her help,I couldnt have recovered from the disease and passed the exams.W

24、ith Alice being my friend,I am living a happy life.May our friendship last till the end of the universe.(My Best friend written by Huang dong hua)第六期报纸作文：第六期报纸作文：As is shown in the picture,the earth is the only home to all of us.However,environmental problems are becoming more and more serious.Farme

25、rs continue cutting down trees,leading to desertification.Besides,factories produce large quantities of waste full of poisonous chemicals,which endanger the lives of both human and animals.In addition,with more and more cars on the road,air pollution becomes more and more serious.Whats worse,the wor

26、ld is becoming more and more crowded.From my point of view,since there is only one earth,people all over the world should make efforts to help solve these problems.Personally,there are many measures that we can take.To begin with,recycling of the resources is the key to solving the problems.Besides,

27、we should control the increase of the world population.Whats more,we should teach people about environmentally friendly ways of living.What we need is more effective laws to protect the earth.Only by changing the way we live and think and learning to live in harmony with the earth,can we hope to hav

28、e a happy future.As is well-known,my motherland,China lies in the east of Asia,with an area of 9,600,000 square kilometers and a population of about 1.3billion,and Beijing is her capital.The letters“Peoples Republic of China is her full name.China is a great country with a long history.To begin with

29、,there are many beautiful mountains and rivers as well as rich resources in China.Besides,the Great Wall is one of the Seven Wonders of the World.Whats more,It is the Yangtze River that is one of the longest rivers in the world.The climate varies from place to place.Usually,the north is colder and t

30、he south is hotter.Chinese people are hard-working and brave,which I think helps China to become richer and stronger.1,Nothing is+er than to+V Nothing is+more+形容词形容词+than to+V例句：例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.没有比接受教育更重要的事。没有比接受教育更重要的事。2 cannot emphasize the importance of too

31、much.(再怎再怎么强调么强调的重要性也不为过。的重要性也不为过。)例句：例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。3,There is no denying that+S+V(不可否认的不可否认的)例句：例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经不可否认的，我们

32、的生活品质已经每况愈下。每况愈下。五五.It is universally acknowledged that+句子句子(全世界都知道全世界都知道)六、六、There is no doubt that+句子句子(毫无疑问的毫无疑问的)例句：例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫无疑问我们的教育制度毫无疑问我们的教育制度令人不满意。令人不满意。七、七、An advantage of is that+句子句子(的优点是的优点是)例句：例句：An advantage of us

33、ing the solar energy is that it wont create(produce)any pollution.使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。八、八、The reason why+句子句子 is that+句子句子(的原因是的原因是)例句：例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fre

34、sh air for us.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。九、九、So+形容词形容词+be+主词主词+that+句子句子(如此如此以致于以致于)例句：例句：So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。十、十、Adj+as+Subject(主词主词)+be，S+V(虽然虽然)例句：例句：Rich as our country is，the qualities of our living are by no m

35、eans satisfactory.by no means=in no way=on no account一点也不一点也不虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。十一、十一、The+er+S+V，the+er+S+V The+more+Adj+S+V，the+more+Adj+S+V(愈愈愈愈)例句：例句：The harder you work，the more progress you make.你愈努力，你愈进步。你愈努力，你愈进步。The more books we read，the more learned we become

36、.我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。十二、十二、By+Ving，can(借着借着，能够能够例句：例句：By taking exercise，we can always stay healthy.借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。十三、十三、enable+Object(受词受词)+to+V(使使能够能够)例句：例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。十四、十四、On no account can we+V(我们绝对不能我们绝对不能)例

37、句：例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。by no means=in no way=on no account一点也不一点也不十七、十七、There is no one but(没有人不没有人不)例句：例句：There is no one but longs to go to college.没有人不渴望上大学。没有人不渴望上大学。十八、十八、be+forced/compelled/obliged+to+V(不得不不得不)例句：例句：Since the examina

38、tion is around the corner，I am compelled to give up doing sports.既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。十九、十九、It is conceivable that+句子句子(可想而知的可想而知的)It is obvious that+句子句子(明显的明显的)/evident/clearIt is apparent that+句子句子(显然的显然的)例句：例句：It is obvious that knowledge plays an important role in our life.明显明显

39、知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。二十、二十、That is the reason why(那就是那就是的原因的原因)例句：例句：Summer is sultry.That is the reason why I dont like it.夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。二十一、二十一、For the past+时间，时间，S+现在完成式现在完成式(过去过去年年来，来，一直一直)例句：例句：For the past two years，I have been busy preparing for the exam

40、ination.过去两年来，我过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。一直忙着准备考试。三十、What a+Adj+N+S+V！=How+Adj+a+N+V！(多么多么！)例句：例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise！How important a thing it is to keep our promise！遵守诺言是多么重要的事！遵守诺言是多么重要的事！十五、十五、It is time+S+过去式过去式(该是该是的时候了的时候了)/should do例句：例句：It is time the authorities concerne

41、d took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。树木对人类的生存与发展起着重要的作用。树木对人类的生存与发展起着重要的作用。请以请以“Trees are important to us”为题，写为题，写一篇一篇100词左右的英语短文。词左右的英语短文。要求：要求：1.简要叙述树木对人类的重要作用；简要叙述树木对人类的重要作用；2.最近滥砍滥伐现象严重最近滥砍滥伐现象严重,使得使得 ；3.保护树木的必要性及具体措施。保护树木的必要性及具体措施。W

42、riting:Good morning,everyone.This is David at the school radio station.Recently weve had an investigation on shortsightedness.The rate of shortsightedness among primary school students is twenty-two point eight percent.Among junior high school students,the number increases to fifty-five point two pe

43、rcent,and by the time students get to senior high school,more than seventy point three percent of them need to wear glasses.The number is still on the increase.According to the the survey,the reasons why so many students are shortsighted are as follows:too much homework,poor lighting and bad habits.

44、Both the school and parents are worried about this problem.Here are the suggestions from doctors:first of all,you should do eye exercises twice everyday.Besides,youd better not read in bed or without good light.Moreover,you should have your eyes relaxed once an hour when working on computers or watc

45、hing TV.What s more,its important to let your eyes have a look at green trees or grass for a rest and examine your eyesight regularly.Eating some vegetables which contains vitamins is good for your eyesight.I hope this survey will bring your attention to the problem and doctors suggestions can be he

46、lpful and beneficial to you.Its time to say good-bye today.Thank you for listening.Dear Mike,Thank you for trusting me.Its my pleasure to share my opinions on smoking with you.I think you should follow your teachers advice and stop smoking.The reason why you must stop smoking is that smoking has man

47、y negative effects on you.To begin with,smoking is bad for your health.People who smoke often develop lung cancer,heart disease and other illnesses.Besides,smoking pollutes the air,making people unable to work or study well.Reports state that passive smoking is even more harmful than active smoking.

48、In addition,smoking wastes money,and students smoking may cause some bad behaviors,making students not focus on study.Now that smoking has so many effects on people,you should stop smoking.In my opinion,you can join school clubs to make friends.It is friends that can help you solve many problems.I hope you can enjoy your new school life!Best wishes.yours truly,Frank