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1、A Writing Class of Grade 9A Writing Class of Grade 9襄阳市第三十九中学 郭 玲How soon will we separate from each other?In about two monthsWhat and who will you miss?Whatarethetruefriends?Friendsarethosepeoplewhocanmakeusfeelathome.makeuslaugh.IthinkIbelieveInmyopinionAsfarasIknowIamsurethatAsforme,AForeverFrien

2、dAfriendwalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksout.Sometimesinlife,youfindaspecialfriend,someonewhochangesyourlifejustbybeingpartofit;Someonewhomakesyoulaughuntilyoucantstop;Someonewhomakesyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld;Someonewhoconvincesyouthattherereallyisanunlockeddoorjustwaitingforyoutoope

3、nit.Thisisforeverfriendship.Whenyouredown,andtheworldseemsdarkandempty,yourforeverfriendliftsyouupinspiritsandmakesthatdarkandemptyworldsuddenlyseembrightandfull;Yourforeverfriendgetsyouthroughthehardtimes,thesadtimes,andtheconfusedtimes.Ifyouturnandwalkaway,yourforeverfriendfollows;Ifyouloseyourway

4、,yourforeverfriendguidesyouandcheersyouon;Yourforeverfriendholdsyourhandandtellsyouthateverythingisgoingtobeok.Andifyoufindsuchafriend,youwillfeelhappyandcomplete,becauseyouneednotworry,youhaveaforeverfriendforlife,andforeverhasnoend.1.Whatisaforeverfriend?2.Whatstheresultofhavingsuchafriend?change

5、your life just by being part of it make you believe that there really isget through the hard/sad/confused(迷惑的迷惑的)times lift you up and make that dark and empty world A forever friend:convince(说服说服)you that there really is What can he do?follow you,guide you and cheer you on make you laugh until you

6、cant stop hold your hand and tell you issomeonewhowalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksoutAresultofhavingsuchafriend:feelhappyandcomplete,needntworryAForeverFriendAfriendwalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksout.Sometimesinlife,youfindaspecialfriend,someonewhochangesyourlifejustbybeingpartofit;Someonewhomake

7、syoulaughuntilyoucantstop;Someonewhomakesyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld;Someonewhoconvincesyouthattherereallyisanunlockeddoorjustwaitingforyoutoopenit.Thisisforeverfriendship.Whenyouredown,andtheworldseemsdarkandempty,yourforeverfriendliftsyouupinspiritsandmakesthatdarkandemptyworldsudden

8、lyseembrightandfull;Yourforeverfriendgetsyouthroughthehardtimes,thesadtimes,andtheconfusedtimes.Ifyouturnandwalkaway,yourforeverfriendfollows;Ifyouloseyourway,yourforeverfriendguidesyouandcheersyouon;Yourforeverfriendholdsyourhandandtellsyouthateverythingisgoingtobeokay.Andifyoufindsuchafriend,youwi

9、llfeelhappyandcomplete,becauseyouneednotworry,youhaveaforeverfriendforlife,andforeverhasnoend.Whatdoyouknowaboutaforeverfriend?Whatcanyoulearnfromthisarticle?AForeverFriendAfriendwalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksout.Sometimesinlife,youfindaspecialfriend,someonewhochangesyourlifejustbeingpartofit;Som

10、eonewhomakesyoulaughuntilyoucantstop;Someonewhomakesyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld;Someonewhoconvincesyouthattherereallyisanunlockeddoorjustwaitingforyoutoopenit.Thisisforeverfriendship.Whenyouredown,andtheworldseemsdarkandempty,yourforeverfriendliftsyouupinspiritsandmakesthatdarkandempty

11、worldsuddenlyseembrightandfull;Yourforeverfriendgetsyouthroughthehardtimes,thesadtimes,andtheconfusedtimes.Ifyouturnandwalkaway,yourforeverfriendfollows;Ifyouloseyourway,yourforeverfriendguidesyouandcheersyouon;Yourforeverfriendholdsyourhandandtellsyouthateverythingisgoingtobeok.Andifyoufindsuchafri

12、end,youfeelhappyandcomplete,becauseyouneednotworry,youhaveaforeverfriendforlife,andforeverhasnoend.开开头主主干干结尾尾Topic paragraph（定义/观点等）SupportingParagraph1SupportingParagraph1（支撑论据（支撑论据（支撑论据（支撑论据1 1）SupportingParagraph2SupportingParagraph2（支撑论据（支撑论据（支撑论据（支撑论据2 2）SupportingParagraph3SupportingParagraph3

13、（支撑论据（支撑论据（支撑论据（支撑论据3 3）Concluding paragraphConcluding paragraph（总结升华）（总结升华）Rewritethearticleorally.(口头改编文章口头改编文章60字左右字左右)AforeverfriendSometimesinlife,youfindaspecialfriend,someonewhochangesyourlifejustbybeingpartofit.A friend can change your life just by being part of it.Afriendcanmakeyoubelieveth

14、attherereallyisgoodintheworld.Rewritethisarticleusingyourownwords!(口头改写口头改写)Someonewhomakesyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld.Which article do you think is better?Why?As far as I know,aforeverfriendistheonewhowalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksout.Firstofall,hecanchangeyourlifejustbybeingpartof

15、it;secondly,hecanmakeyoulaughuntilyoucantstop;moreover,hecanmakeyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld;lastly,hecanconvinceyouthattherereallyisanunlockeddoorjustwaitingforyoutoopenit.All in all,this is forever friendship.Aforeverfriendwalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksout.Hecanchangeyourlifejustby

16、beingpartofit;hecanmakeyoulaughuntilyoucantstop;hecanmakeyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld;hecanconvinceyouthattherereallyisanunlockeddoorjustwaitingforyoutoopenit.This is forever friendship.What makes a good argumentative writing?Topicbeginning(introduction)bodyendTopic(提出观点提出观点)Supporting4

17、:finallySupporting2:secondlySupporting3:moreoverSupporting1:firstlyConclusion总结升华总结升华1-2句句6-7句句1-2句句Good framework(框架图框架图)and content(内容内容)方法 1:1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,whats more not onlybut also,neithernor2.表示选择表示选择:or,eitheror3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway4.

18、表示因果表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,as a result5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比表示对比:instead,notbut,while,in the same way,on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words,to tell the truth8.表示顺序表示顺序:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),

19、next,later,since then,from then on,finally,in the end9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,in fact10.表示结论表示结论:all in all,altogether,in a word,generally speaking,in short关联词关联词(Linking words)方法 2:Aforeverfriendwalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksout._,hecanchangeyourlifejustbybeing_,hecanchangeyou

20、rlifejustbybeingpartofit;_partofit;_,hecanmakeyoulaughuntilyoucanthecanmakeyoulaughuntilyoucantstop;_stop;_,hecanmakeyoubelievethattherereallyhecanmakeyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld;_isgoodintheworld;_,hecanconvinceyouthattherehecanconvinceyouthattherereallyisanunlockeddoorjustwaitingfory

21、outoopenit.reallyisanunlockeddoorjustwaitingforyoutoopenit._,this is forever friendship._,this is forever friendship.FirstofallsecondlymoreoverlastlyAll in allmoreover,lastly,first of all,secondly,all in allLets try!善用词汇、短语善用词汇、短语(good words and(good words and phrases)phrases)甚至善用甚至善用高级词汇高级词汇方法 3:你永

22、远的朋友帮你克服困难。你永远的朋友帮你克服困难。A You forever friend helps you overcome difficulties.B You forever friend gets you through difficulties.C You forever friend helps you out with difficulties.妙用引文和例子妙用引文和例子（Good examples-Good examples-多用于多用于“the the bodybody”）方法 4:Aforeverfriendcanhelpyoualot,likeguidingyou,ch

23、eeringyouon活用多种句型活用多种句型(good sentences)(good sentences)方法 5:Eg.What a kind boy my friend is!How important a friend is!感叹句强调句Eg.It was the friendship that helped the hopeless boy.I do hope I can have many friends if possible.Eg.1.Only in this way can you make true friends.2.Not only do I learn how to

24、 get on wellwith others,but also I no longer feel lonely.倒装句1.用这种方式你才可以交到真正的朋友。用这种方式你才可以交到真正的朋友。2.我不仅学会了怎样和别人相处，而且还我不仅学会了怎样和别人相处，而且还不再感到孤独。不再感到孤独。各种从句1.你是否能交到好朋友取决于你的品质。你是否能交到好朋友取决于你的品质。2.据报道，拥有朋友的人活得更长。据报道，拥有朋友的人活得更长。1.Whetheryoucanmakegoodfriendsornotdependsonyourcharacter.2.Itisreportedthatpeople

25、withfriendslivelonger.主主语语从从句句Hecanmakeyoubelievethattherereallyisgoodintheworld.宾语从句宾语从句Themostimportantruletomakefriendsisthatyoushouldbehonest.表语从句表语从句 In my opinion,friends are those who can make me laugh.定语从句定语从句各种状语从句各种状语从句 Someone who makes you laugh until you cant stop.If you turn and walk a

26、way,your forever follows.As long as we have such a friend,we will feel happy and complete.Content（内容）Framework（结构）language（语言）handwriting（书写）A good article要点全，思想正语法、拼写正确详略得当行文流畅 工整、整洁上一级词汇、短语，优美句式结构连接词的合理使用评价标准Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真交。患难见真交。Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun.人生在世无朋友，犹如生

27、活无太阳。人生在世无朋友，犹如生活无太阳。Atruefriendisknowninthedayofadversity（逆境）（逆境）.疾风知劲草，患难见真情。疾风知劲草，患难见真情。每个人都渴望友谊，但是交朋友也是一门每个人都渴望友谊，但是交朋友也是一门学问。请你根据自己的实际情况，以学问。请你根据自己的实际情况，以“Howtomakegoodfriends”为题，写出一篇为题，写出一篇90个个词左右的英语短文。词左右的英语短文。25Three-step Analyzing(Three-step Analyzing(三审三审)三审person（人称）（人称）key points（要点）（要点）

28、tense（时态）（时态）第一人称第一人称一般现在时一般现在时topicSupportingconclusionHow to make good friendsContent（内容）Framework（结构）language（语言）handwriting（书写）A good article要点全，思想正语法、拼写正确详略得当行文流畅 工整、整洁上一级词汇、短语，优美句式结构连接词的合理使用How to write三审三审十十句句三段三段写作模式写作模式person（人称）（人称）tense（时态）（时态）key points（要点）（要点）1-2句句6-7句句1-2句句bodyendbeginning(introduction)Modify your writing and copy it out in your exercise books.