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1、 IELTS WRITINGWelcome to IELTS WRITING class!若要花解语，倾国城。花下死，做鬼也风流。IELTS WRITING TeachingPlanLessonOne:雅思写作简介+评分标准+写作步骤+如何写作首段LessonTwo:分论点的思维方法LessonThree:段落间的连接关系+如何写中间段+如何写末段LessonFour:雅思题型+话题分析LessonFive:小作文1LessonSix:小作文25.235.51各科均分（中国大陆各科均分（中国大陆A类考生）类考生）5.535.805.395.47writingreadingspeakinglis

2、tening中国考生的雅思考试成绩中国考生的雅思考试成绩资料提供资料提供:www.ielts.org IELTS WRITING雅思写作中中国考生所存在的主要问题：雅思写作中中国考生所存在的主要问题：1.词汇匮乏，表达单一，词不达意2.语法基础差，文章多语法错误3.中国式的英语。4.Ifyoudonnotthinkclearly,youwillnotwriteclearly.知识面窄，知识面窄，思路思路不开阔不开阔5.缺乏必要的英文写作技巧，如段落的展开方式以及作文的缺乏必要的英文写作技巧，如段落的展开方式以及作文的组织结组织结构构等。等。HOW?WHAT?Genarl Introductio

3、n时间字数题型考查能力分数比重A类G类Task 120mins/15mins150wordsChart(line,pie,bar,flow)Table,mapLetter（complaint,request,apology)客观描述信息和数据Task 240mins/45mins250words议论文说理和论证雅思议论文考查什么能力？雅思议论文考查什么能力？?根据题目要求做出描述、进行论述或根据题目要求做出描述、进行论述或表明态度。表明态度。?不仅考查不仅考查写作能力写作能力，同时也考查考生，同时也考查考生的的思维和论证能力思维和论证能力。IELTS WRITING：TASK II Task

4、II:less than or equals to 40 minutes and more than 250 words 一.TR（TaskResponse任务反应情况）二.CC（Coherence&Cohension连贯和衔接）三.LR（LexicalResources词汇资源）四.GR&A（GrammaticalRange&Accuracy语法范围和精确度）英文写作的特点：英文写作的特点：(第一条评分标准）第一条评分标准）points and supporting pointsInwriting,anyideathatyouadvancemustbesupportedwithspecifi

5、creasonsordetails.WRITING中英文修中英文修辞辞大不同大不同circular circular 迂迴迂迴Chinese RhetoricChinese Rhetoric枝状枝状 线状线状English RhetoricEnglish Rhetoric具体讲：英语的布局谋篇原则通常为：从一般到具体讲：英语的布局谋篇原则通常为：从一般到具体、从概括到举例，从观点到案例再到数据支具体、从概括到举例，从观点到案例再到数据支持。持。IELTS WRITING：TASK II任务反应易犯错误：1.总论点跑题（正评价，负评价，既有正评价又有负评价）2.分论点没有论证3.分论点的论据不够

6、充分4.语言太绝对 IELTS WRITING：TASK II总论点总论点Whatisyouropinionaboutnucleartechnologies?IELTS WRITING：TASK II1.总论点跑题总论点跑题要求论述在某一限定范围内的话题。题干必须从头到尾，词词读完。Somepeoplesaythatitisnotrightforthegovernmenttospendsomuchmoneyonartisticprojectssuchasartgalleriesandsculptures.Doyouagreeordisagree?Somepeoplethinkthatitisn

7、ecessarytopunishchildreninordertoteachthemthedifferencebetweenrightandwrong.Douyouagreeordisagree?Givereasonsforyouranswer.Ifyouagree,whatkindofpunishimentdoyouthinkshouldbegiventochildrenbyparentsandteachers?Givereasonsforyouranswer.IELTS WRITING：TASK II一个段落围绕一个观点来写，而且一个段落的段末不许出现新的观点。更重要的是，更重要的是，文章

8、的最后一段一般不许出现新的观点。一文章的最后一段一般不许出现新的观点。一般由重申论点和补充说明构成。般由重申论点和补充说明构成。IELTS WRITING：TASK II3.分论点的论据不够充分分论点的论据不够充分3.1论据不充分：文化差异3.2论据出处3.3论据不符合事实，建议：practical&cost-effective3.4论据以偏概全 IELTS WRITING：TASK II4.语言太绝对语言太绝对4.1表达总论点的时候，一般适宜表达某个事件的好处超过坏处，或是坏处超过好处，而不是这个事件只有好处或是坏处。（多使用副词）4.2表达分论点的时候也需要恰到好处。Thecapitalp

9、unishmentcannotbereplacedbyanyotherpunishments.Itcannotbereplacedbyanything,todayorfuture.IELTS WRITING：TASK II二.CC（Coherence&Cohension连贯和衔接）关联词分为三种：段间，句间，和句内关联词。段间：写作流程中介绍句内关联词：主要用于句子扩展句间关联词：1.表转折：however,nevertheless2.表递进：inaddition,moreover,furthermore3.表因果：therefore,hence,thus,consequently IELTS

10、 WRITING：TASK II三.LR（LexicalResources词汇资源）正式，准确，多样四.GR&A（GrammaticalRange&Accuracy语法范围和精确度）准确，多样，时态，简单句+复杂句四大问题四大问题语语法法词汇词汇搭配搭配组织组织逻辑逻辑写作技巧写作技巧中式思维中式思维中式语序中式语序中式表达方式中式表达方式注意注意!Requirements1.认真阅读历年真题2.对应相应不太会写的内容做提纲训练3.写作文后自己修改（语法，词汇）-先质后量4.教师批改后自己再次修改5.在复习时候，应该针对话题然后按照题型训练雅思写作的训练方法雅思写作的训练方法（1）精读（2）互

11、译（3）改写何为模板？WRITING有用网站1.http:/ WRITING：TASK II 低于Band5的六种技术情况：1.没有完成写作任务2.格式错误3.字迹模糊，难以辨认4.Task1和Task2写反5.攻击考官1.不能缩写2.不能格式混乱3.不能使用口语化词语4.不能英式英语美式英语混用5.while的用法6.字迹模糊，难以辨认7.Task1和Task2写反8.题型判断错误学生常问的问题1.怎样才能得高分？2.分数是怎样得出来的？3.没有观点，不知道怎么展开怎么办？如何训练？4.得分点的分布？5.常考话题有哪些？IELTS WRITING构思构思-Brainstorming 分析分析

12、1：Children now watch more television than at any time in the past.Write an essay for a university lecturer considering its potential risks and benefits.For:gainknowledgeobtaininformationwiden(broaden,expand)theirvision/horizonswatchitforrelaxation.importanteducationaltool.IELTS WRITINGAgainst:Physic

13、al:weakenchildrenseyesight/doharmto/impaircouchpotatoPatientgrowthin/switchthechannelStudy:1.wastetime2.takeuptoomuchofchildrenslimitedprecioustimewhichcanotherwisebeusedformorevaluableactivities,suchassportsorhomework,andthereforeresultinpooracademicperformance.Studentsbecomeaddictiveandtheycannotg

14、etthemselvesawayfromthenegativeinfluenceoftelevision.IELTS WRITINGMind:Alienate/distancetheirrelationshipwithfamiliesadultonlyprogramsConfuse/puzzlechildrenMislead:violence/sexuallyappealingthings IELTS WRITING1.审题审题2.构思构思 IELTS WRITING1.审题审题 1）人们现在工作压力越来越大，说说这种现象产生的原因及提出）人们现在工作压力越来越大，说说这种现象产生的原因及提出

15、解决这一问题的建议解决这一问题的建议.2）Many people think that nowadays people are being subjected to more and more pressure in their work,and thus are having less and less time to relax.What is your opinion?IELTS WRITING 3）最近一项调查表明青少年每周花最近一项调查表明青少年每周花14小时看电小时看电视，而和家庭成员在一起的是时间只有视，而和家庭成员在一起的是时间只有6小时。有小时。有人认为这会对他们和其他家庭成

16、员间的关系造成不人认为这会对他们和其他家庭成员间的关系造成不良的影响。你是否同意这一观点。良的影响。你是否同意这一观点。4）有些父母几乎不和孩子呆在一起，他们让孩子）有些父母几乎不和孩子呆在一起，他们让孩子独自安静的看电视。为什么会出现这样的现象，这独自安静的看电视。为什么会出现这样的现象，这种现象会导致什么样的后果？种现象会导致什么样的后果？IELTS WRITINGBrainstorming 分析分析2：Boarding school:For：1.Cultivatethespiritofindependence,lookafterthemselves.2.Communicatewithth

17、eirpeers,learntocooperateandtolerate,developasenseofteamworkandcollectivism.3.LesslikelytobespoiledIELTS WRITING1.Lack of adequate communication and emotional exchange with parents,thus widening the generation gap.2.Bad for physical development3.Psychological health:homesick,lonely 4.Prone to negati

18、ve influence5.Expenditure/costAgainst:1.充分利用原题信息改写实例 At present it is hard for college graduates to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.What do you think?At

19、presentThesedays,nowadays,atthepresenttime,currently,inthecontemporarysociety/worldHard Finditdifficulttodo,havedifficultiesindoingsth.College graduatesCollegestudentswhentheygraduateManynumerous,agreatnumberof,countlessClaimargue,contend,insist,maintain,proclaim,state,advocate,holdtheviewthat,asser

20、tGive priority toprioritize,paymore/increasingattentionto,laymorestresson,attachgreatimportanceto改写后 These days there is a growing tendency forcollegestudentstohavedifficultiesinfindingjobswhentheygraduate.（事实引入）Alargenumberofpeopleholdtheopinionthatlackofpracticalknowledge,amongotherthings,contribu

21、testothissituation.Inlightofthis,theycontendthatcollegeteachersshouldlaymorestressonpracticalcoursesthanontraditionalones.Formypart,Iaminfavoroftheirviewpoint.现代社会现代社会AtpresentInthecontemporary/modernsocietyInthisinformationeraAsweareusheredintotheinformationage IELTS WRITING提供大背景提供大背景1.Recently,sth

22、.hasbecomeapriorityforsb.seekingtosecureabrightfutureinthisrapidlychangingworld.IELTS WRITING2.Theissueofsb.doingsth.isacomplexandsensitiveonewhichhasdrawnattentionfromsb1.,sb2,andsb3.IELTS WRITING3.Thereisagrowingtendencyforsb.todosth.3.Overthelasthalfcenturythepaceofchangeinthelifeofhumanbeingshas

23、increasedbeyongourwildestexpectations.Thishasbeendrivenbytechnologicalandscientificbreakthroughsthatarechangingthewholewayweviewtheworldonanalmostdailybasis.IELTS WRITINGComputerandlibrary?IELTS WRITING IELTS WRITING一一.包含关系包含关系1.among which AA由很多后果由很多后果 （this phenomenon might have quite a few negati

24、ve effects）,among which B could be one of the most remarkable.A recent survey shows that teenagers spend 14 hours watching television programs each week,but only 6 hours with their family members.Some people claim that this has an unfavorable influence on the relationship between them and their fami

25、ly members.IELTS WRITING A recent survey indicates young people in their teens spend the vast majority of their spare time watching TV rather than talking with other family members.This phenomenon might bring quite a few negative effects,among which the unfavorable influence on the family relationsh

26、ip could be one of the most remarkable.IELTS WRITING 2:在问题在问题解决引出主题的过程中，都可以套叠一个大范围解决引出主题的过程中，都可以套叠一个大范围小范围小范围 问题问题很多解决方案很多解决方案 among which could be one of the most remarkable It is important for children to learn what is right and what is wrong at an early age.Punishment is necessary to help them le

27、arn the distinction.To what extent do you agree,and what sort of punishment should be given?Children should be instilled what is right and what is wrong at an early age.There are quite a few ways to achieve this end,among which punishment is a very popular means.Thebestwaytoimproveenvironmentistoinc

28、reasethepriceoffuel?IELTS WRITING二二.对等关系对等关系 通过强对比引出主题：先写强对比的事物通过强对比引出主题：先写强对比的事物A，然后再写主题然后再写主题A IELTS WRITING1)Whereas What are your opinions about the advantages and disadvantages of“fast food”and“traditional food”?Some people hurry to fast food restaurant to save their time,whereas some others wa

29、it a relatively long time for traditional food.IELTS WRITING Public transport or private cars?IELTS WRITING2)On the other hand Nowadays,there are two kinds of school:public and private.Recently,there is a growing tendency for students to enter private schools.On the other hand,some people still pref

30、er to go to public schools.Generalknowledgeorpracticalskills?IELTS WRITING三转折关系三转折关系 通过转折引出主题通过转折引出主题B but A 1)should have however/Admittedly however A report indicates that nowadays children are becoming more and more lazy;fat and unsociable.The social and economic development should have resulted

31、in a happier life.However,(nowadays)recently more and more(increasingly more)parents are concerning their children have become lazy,fat and unsociable.IELTS WRITING2)It is universally acknowledged that (It goes without saying)however The overuse of modern technologies in recreational activities have

32、 brought us(people)easier ad more convenient life.However,to use them too often might result in the loss of creativity belonging to human beings.IELTS WRITING:如何表明总论点如何表明总论点如何表明总论点：如何表明总论点：这一部分要表明自己的态度，一般来说总论这一部分要表明自己的态度，一般来说总论点有三种态度点有三种态度,两种模式：两种模式：1.两边倒两边倒2.一边倒一边倒 IELTS WRITING:如何表明总论点如何表明总论点1.两边倒

33、两边倒 认为事情的好处和坏处一样多认为事情的好处和坏处一样多 I am of the opinion that this new trend has both advantages and disadvantages.In fact,this new trend has both advantages and disadvantages.In fact,both types of schools are indispensable to society concerning the advantages and disadvantages of both of them.Merits/deme

34、rits;favorable/unfavorable effects;strength/weakness IELTS WRITING Nowadays,there are two kinds of school:public and private.Discuss the merits of each.Recently,there is a growing tendency for students to enter private schools.On the other hand,some people still prefer to go to public school.In fact

35、,both types of schools have advantages and disadvantages.whether we should believe in the news stories presented by journalists depends on the actual situation involved.IELTS WRITING2.一边倒一边倒1）正面表达自己的观点正面表达自己的观点2)好处比坏处多好处比坏处多 The advantages outweigh its disadvantages.Modernization is more a curse tha

36、n a blessing for females.3)同意同意/不同意不同意 I am for/against I find myself on ones side.I find myself in virtually complete with 如果同意，请再引出主题的最后一个主语后面加上如果同意，请再引出主题的最后一个主语后面加上as far as I am concerned;如果如果不同意，请吧题干的观点写成别人的观点，然后进行让步和反驳。不同意，请吧题干的观点写成别人的观点，然后进行让步和反驳。IELTS WRITING常用句型练习:我喜欢/认为/同意/赞同/支持.According

37、tomypersonalityandfondness,Iwouldprefer.rather thanInmypointofview,I like.muchmorethan.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iam inclined to be onthesideofthelatterview.In my opinion,theadvantagesof.aremorethanthoseof.To my mind,theadvantagesfaroutweighthedrawbacks.IELTS WRITING As far as I am concerned,thisproposals

38、eemsabitabsurdandridiculous.Personally,I hold thatItotally agree withthisstatement,andIwillexplainwhythisisthecase.Ifully support/agree withthestatementthatPersonally,Iside withtheformer/latteropinion.Personally,Iam in favor oftheformerpointofview.Tobefrank,I advocate theargumentthat.IELTS WRITING 我

39、不同意我不同意/反对反对Iwouldstate my objection tothisissueafteranalyzingthefollowingthreereasons.Icanhardly share/consent tothisproposalbecauseitissoinconceivableandimpractical.IELTS WRITING1.A recent survey indicates that young people in their teens spend the vast majority of their spare time watching TV rat

40、her than talking with other family members.This phenomenon might bring quite a few negative effects,among which the unfavorable influence on the family relationship could be one of the most remarkable.IELTS WRITING同意：同意：A recent survey indicates that young people in their teens spend the vast majori

41、ty of their spare time watching TV rather than talking with other family members.This phenomenon might bring quite a few negative effects,among which the unfavorable influence on the family relationship,as far as I am concerned,could be one of the most remarkable concerning the following aspects(per

42、spectives).IELTS WRITING不同意：不同意：Admittedly,TV has brought people colorful life by supporting them with better information in terms of quality and quantity.However,nowadays,young people in their teens spend the vast majority of their spare time watching TV rather than talking with other family member

43、s.Quite a few people insist that this phenomenon might bring quite a few negative effects,among which the unfavorable influence on the family relationship could be one of the most remarkable.To some extent this may be true,but in practice watching TY for long time does not necessarily mean the aloof

44、 family relationship concerning the following aspects.IELTS WRITING2.Scientific and technological advances have improved our daily lives.However,in many fields scientists cannot solve the problem they have created themselves.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Give your reasons.-IELTS WRITING

45、 Admittedly,our daily lives have been greatly improved by scientific and technological development.However,the problems created by scientist cannot be settled by themselves.同意：同意：Admittedly,our daily lives have been greatly improved by scientific and technological development.However,the problems cr

46、eated by scientist,as far as I am concerned,cannot be settled by themselves concerning the following aspects.不同意：不同意：This may be true for those scientists in a single field,but now scientists in different areas are cooperating well aiming to solve all the problems confronted by people.IELTS WRITING3

47、.The overuse of modern technologies in recreational activities makes human beings less creative.Do you agree or disagree?IELTS WRITING It is universally acknowledged that modern technologies in creational activities have brought us easier and more convenient life.However,to use them too often might

48、result in the loss of creativity belonging to human beings.同意：同意：It is universally acknowledged that modern technologies in creational activities have brought us easier and more convenient life.However,to use them too often,as far as I am concerned,might result in the loss of creativity belonging to

49、 human beings.不同意：不同意：it is true that nowadays children are more inclined to be lazy and less creative.However(Nevertheless),the overuse of modern technologies,by nature,will not lead to loss of ingenuity concerning the following aspects.IELTS WRITING4.It is important for children to learn what is r

50、ight and what is wrong at an early age.Punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction.To what extent do you agree,and what sort of punishment should be given IELTS WRITING 同意：同意：Children should be instilled what is right and what is wrong at an early age.There are quite a few ways to ach