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1、英语四六级作文英语四六级作文 四六级写作基本情况介绍四六级写作基本情况介绍全国大学英语四六级考试中写作的时间全国大学英语四六级考试中写作的时间是是30分钟，满分是分钟，满分是15分（分（710分制中，分制中，106.5满分，满分，63.9及格），占总分的及格），占总分的15%。四级要求字数至少为。四级要求字数至少为120，六级至，六级至少为少为150。n n本题满分为本题满分为本题满分为本题满分为15151515分，篇幅要求分，篇幅要求分，篇幅要求分，篇幅要求120120120120字左右。阅卷人员就总的字左右。阅卷人员就总的字左右。阅卷人员就总的字左右。阅卷人员就总的印象，从内容和语言两个方

2、面对作文进行综合评判，给出印象，从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判，给出印象，从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判，给出印象，从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判，给出奖励分奖励分奖励分奖励分(Reward Scores)(Reward Scores)(Reward Scores)(Reward Scores)。具体评分标准可以参考以下要。具体评分标准可以参考以下要。具体评分标准可以参考以下要。具体评分标准可以参考以下要求：求：求：求：n n白卷、作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法白卷、作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法白卷、作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而

3、无法白卷、作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给表达思想，则给表达思想，则给表达思想，则给0 0 0 0分；达不到字数要求的，要酌情扣分；达不到字数要求的，要酌情扣分；达不到字数要求的，要酌情扣分；达不到字数要求的，要酌情扣1-31-31-31-3分；分；分；分；n n只写一段者：只写一段者：只写一段者：只写一段者：0-40-40-40-4分；只写两段者：分；只写两段者：分；只写两段者：分；只写两段者：0-90-90-90-9分（指规定三段的分（指规定三段的分（指规定三段的分（指规定三段的作文）。作文）。作文）。作文）。那种写八段的作文一般来说只得两分。那种写八段的作文一般

4、来说只得两分。那种写八段的作文一般来说只得两分。那种写八段的作文一般来说只得两分。评分标准评分标准n n另外请参照以下要求与对应分数，在评卷时视实际情况加减：另外请参照以下要求与对应分数，在评卷时视实际情况加减：另外请参照以下要求与对应分数，在评卷时视实际情况加减：另外请参照以下要求与对应分数，在评卷时视实际情况加减：n n2 2分分分分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎。条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎。条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎。条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎。一塌糊涂一塌糊涂一塌糊涂一塌糊涂n n5 5分分分分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。大部分句子基本切题。表达思想不清楚，

5、连贯性差。大部分句子基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。大部分句子基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。均有错误，且多数为严重错误。均有错误，且多数为严重错误。均有错误，且多数为严重错误。糊里糊涂糊里糊涂糊里糊涂糊里糊涂n n8 8分分分分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中一些是严重错误。贯；语言错误相当多，其中一些是严重错误。贯；语言错误相当多，其中一些是严重错误。贯；语言错误相当多，

6、其中一些是严重错误。马马虎虎马马虎虎马马虎虎马马虎虎n n1111分分分分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。清清爽爽清清爽爽清清爽爽清清爽爽n n1414分分分分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。无语言切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。无语言切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。无语言切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。无语言错误。错误。错误。错误。漂漂亮亮漂漂亮亮漂漂亮亮漂漂亮亮高分作文标志高分作文标志 1.四级四级1

7、50-180字；六级字；六级180200字；字；2.是否是否长短句交叉长短句交叉长短句交叉长短句交叉；句型句型句型句型是否有变化；是否有变化；3.用词用词用词用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；师眼球的闪光词；4.关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；5.结构条理是否合理清晰；人称不做太多变化；时态不来回结构条理是否合理清晰；人称不做太多变化；时态不来回变化；请注意不管是什么类型的作文（命题、给定提纲、变化；请注意不管是什么类型的作文（命题、给定提纲、图表）简单明了地写图表）简单明了地写三段三段三

8、段三段，一般都不会有错，一般都不会有错；最好每一；最好每一段都有主题句和过渡句。段都有主题句和过渡句。6.卷面整洁卷面整洁卷面整洁卷面整洁，书写规范。，书写规范。评卷特点评卷特点语言是关键语言是关键n n按正规的作文要求，文章的语言、结构和内容是有机的整体，按正规的作文要求，文章的语言、结构和内容是有机的整体，按正规的作文要求，文章的语言、结构和内容是有机的整体，按正规的作文要求，文章的语言、结构和内容是有机的整体，三者分量同等重要。而在四六级国内考试中，此三者的分量三者分量同等重要。而在四六级国内考试中，此三者的分量三者分量同等重要。而在四六级国内考试中，此三者的分量三者分量同等重要。而在四

9、六级国内考试中，此三者的分量逐级递减。逐级递减。逐级递减。逐级递减。语言第一、结构次之、内容再次语言第一、结构次之、内容再次语言第一、结构次之、内容再次语言第一、结构次之、内容再次。四六级的判卷。四六级的判卷。四六级的判卷。四六级的判卷过程决定了这个顺序。道理简单，一分作文试卷被评卷人审过程决定了这个顺序。道理简单，一分作文试卷被评卷人审过程决定了这个顺序。道理简单，一分作文试卷被评卷人审过程决定了这个顺序。道理简单，一分作文试卷被评卷人审视的时间在视的时间在视的时间在视的时间在3030到到到到5050分钟，如超过这个时间，就无法完成任分钟，如超过这个时间，就无法完成任分钟，如超过这个时间，就

10、无法完成任分钟，如超过这个时间，就无法完成任务务务务工作量工作量工作量工作量。文章的结构，按照题干的提示大多数学生都会写。文章的结构，按照题干的提示大多数学生都会写。文章的结构，按照题干的提示大多数学生都会写。文章的结构，按照题干的提示大多数学生都会写成三段文章，一木了然。极少有超过成三段文章，一木了然。极少有超过成三段文章，一木了然。极少有超过成三段文章，一木了然。极少有超过5 5段，或者只写段，或者只写段，或者只写段，或者只写1 1段者。段者。段者。段者。所以不会是判断分数高下的重要标准。文章的内容需要阅卷所以不会是判断分数高下的重要标准。文章的内容需要阅卷所以不会是判断分数高下的重要标准

11、。文章的内容需要阅卷所以不会是判断分数高下的重要标准。文章的内容需要阅卷人在通读文章后才能做出客观判断完成的任务。通常的越短人在通读文章后才能做出客观判断完成的任务。通常的越短人在通读文章后才能做出客观判断完成的任务。通常的越短人在通读文章后才能做出客观判断完成的任务。通常的越短做饭时做饭时做饭时做饭时节选节选节选节选文章部分阅读，然后直接打分。这种做法直接决文章部分阅读，然后直接打分。这种做法直接决文章部分阅读，然后直接打分。这种做法直接决文章部分阅读，然后直接打分。这种做法直接决定了定了定了定了语言的正确和地道语言的正确和地道语言的正确和地道语言的正确和地道是高分的主要决定因素。是高分的主

12、要决定因素。是高分的主要决定因素。是高分的主要决定因素。如何提高作文水平？如何提高作文水平？n n（1 1）欣赏范文）欣赏范文）欣赏范文）欣赏范文，但不要囫囵吞枣式地整篇背诵。，但不要囫囵吞枣式地整篇背诵。准备一个写作专用的笔记本，从范文欣赏中摘抄准备一个写作专用的笔记本，从范文欣赏中摘抄自己喜欢的、老师讲评的、值得推荐的句式结构。自己喜欢的、老师讲评的、值得推荐的句式结构。n n（2 2）模仿名句）模仿名句）模仿名句）模仿名句，但不要生搬硬套。准备足够的草，但不要生搬硬套。准备足够的草稿纸，把自己摘抄来的名句。稿纸，把自己摘抄来的名句。n n（3 3）巧用心思，套用经典句型）巧用心思，套用经

13、典句型）巧用心思，套用经典句型）巧用心思，套用经典句型。利用经典句型组装。利用经典句型组装一些长句子、靓句子和复杂句子对作文高分非常一些长句子、靓句子和复杂句子对作文高分非常有帮助。比如作文开头常用句型：有帮助。比如作文开头常用句型：It is undoubted It is undoubted that;there is no doubt that;undoubtedly,there that;there is no doubt that;undoubtedly,there is;It is beyond doubt that.is;It is beyond doubt that.一些具体的

14、技巧一些具体的技巧1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反 映事实映事实,句子开头不要总是用句子开头不要总是用we/I。eg.We should pay attention to this problem.Attention should be paid to this problem.Youd better say2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连 接接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放 在主语、在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。例如：however/

15、therefore/for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。eg.Other individuals,however,take the attitude that 3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替替太宽泛的。（考试中一般不要出现太宽泛的。（考试中一般不要出现 good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion 等等等）等）eg.Many people think we should study hard.A vast majority of college stu

16、dents take it for granted that study should be taken seriously.Youd better say英语四六级五大类作文写法英语四六级五大类作文写法 作文分类：作文分类：n n对立观点型n n解决问题型n n谚语警句型n n图表图画型n n应用写作型n n模版（一）模版（一）模版（一）模版（一）Nowadays,there are more and more XX in Nowadays,there are more and more XX in some big cities.It is estimated that(1).some b

17、ig cities.It is estimated that(1).Why have there been so many XX?Maybe the Why have there been so many XX?Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that(2).Besides,(3).The The first one is that(2).Besides,(3).The third reason is(4).To sum up,the mai

18、n cause of XX third reason is(4).To sum up,the main cause of XX is due to(5).is due to(5).It is high time that something were done upon It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,(6).On the other hand,(7).All it.For one thing,(6).On the other hand,(7).All these measures will cert

19、ainly reduce the number of these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX.XX.解决问题型解决问题型n n注释：（1）用具体数据说明XX现象（2）原因一（3）原因二（4）原因三（5）指出主要原因（6）解决建议一（7）解决建议二解决问题型解决问题型n n模版（模版（1）n nNowadays,there are more and more XX in some big Nowadays,there are more and more XX in some big cities.It is estimated

20、that(1).cities.It is estimated that(1).Why have there been so many XX?Maybe the reasons Why have there been so many XX?Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.can be listed as follows.The first one is that(2).Besides,(3).The third reason The first one is that(2).Besides,(3).The third reason is(4)

21、.To sum up,the main cause of XX is due to(5).is(4).To sum up,the main cause of XX is due to(5).It is high time that something were done upon it.For one It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,(6).On the other hand,(7).All these measures will thing,(6).On the other hand,(7).All

22、 these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX.certainly reduce the number of XX.解决问题型解决问题型n n注释：（1）用具体数据说明XX现象（2）原因一（3）原因二（4）原因三（5）指出主要原因（6）解决建议一（7）解决建议二n nGeneration gap between parents and children Nowadays,there are more and more Nowadays,there are more and more misunderstanding between

23、parents and children which is misunderstanding between parents and children which is so-called generation gap.so-called generation gap.It is estimated thatIt is estimated that(75 (75 percentages of parents often complain their childrens percentages of parents often complain their childrens unreasona

24、ble behavior while children usually think their unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old fashioned).parents too old fashioned).Why have there been so muchWhy have there been so much misunderstanding misunderstanding between parents and children?between parents and chi

25、ldren?Maybe the reasons can be listed as followsMaybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The The first one is thatfirst one is that(the two generations,having grown up (the two generations,having grown up at different times,have different likes and dislikes,thus at different times,have different l

26、ikes and dislikes,thus the disagreement often rises between them).the disagreement often rises between them).Besides(due to having little in common to talk about,they are not willing to sit face to face).The third reason is(with the pace of modern life ecoming faster and faster,both of them are so b

27、usy with their work or study that they dont spare enough time to exchange ideas).To sum up,the main cause of XX is due to(lake of communication and understanding each other).It is high time that something were doneupon it.For one thing(children shouldrespect their parents).On the otherhand,(parents

28、also should show solicitudefor their children).All these measures willcertainly bridge the generation gap.n n模块（模块（2）n n These days we often hear that(1).It is common These days we often hear that(1).It is common that(2).that(2).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of Why does such circumstance

29、 occur in spite of social protects?For one thing,(3).For another,(4).social protects?For one thing,(3).For another,(4).What is more,since(5),it is natural that(6).What is more,since(5),it is natural that(6).To solve the problem is not easy at all,but is To solve the problem is not easy at all,but is

30、 worth trying.We should do something such as(7)to worth trying.We should do something such as(7)to improve the present situation,and I do believe improve the present situation,and I do believe everything will be better in the future.everything will be better in the future.注释：注释：1)1)提出论题提出论题2 2）说明现状）

31、说明现状3 3）理由一）理由一4)4)理由三理由三5 5）理由三）理由三6 6）引起的后果）引起的后果7 7）解决方法）解决方法n nOn Students Choosing Lectures n n Nowadays,there is a hot debate aboutNowadays,there is a hot debate about whether students whether students should be allowed to have optional choices of their teachers.should be allowed to have optio

32、nal choices of their teachers.n n A number of factors contribute toA number of factors contribute to students decision on students decision on choosing teachers.choosing teachers.On the one hand,On the one hand,teachers personalities teachers personalities play a significant role in this issue,which

33、 include a good play a significant role in this issue,which include a good sense of humor,being easy to communicate with and open-sense of humor,being easy to communicate with and open-mined.mined.On the other handOn the other hand,it is likely that opinions from it is likely that opinions from othe

34、r students have an impact on the decision.other students have an impact on the decision.n n Clearly,there are both advantages and disadvantages as to Clearly,there are both advantages and disadvantages as to the view of this matter.the view of this matter.For one thingFor one thing,students enjoy mo

35、re students enjoy more freedom than before.freedom than before.For anotherFor another,some top teachers might some top teachers might be ignored if they are not able to meet students taste.In be ignored if they are not able to meet students taste.In general,both students and teachers rights should b

36、e general,both students and teachers rights should be respected.respected.解决问题型真题解决问题型真题n n20052005年年年年6 6月月月月n nDirections:Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products.You write a s

37、hort essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products.You should write at least should write at least 150150 words following the outline given words following the outline given below:below:n n目前盗版的现象比较严重目前盗版的现象比较严重目前盗版的现象比较严重目前盗版的现象比较严重n n造成这种现象的原因及其危害造成这种现象的原因及其危害造成这种现象的原因及其危害造成这种现象的原因及其危害n n我们应该怎么做我们应该怎么

38、做我们应该怎么做我们应该怎么做n n n nUseful words and expressions:Useful words and expressions:n n 盗版：盗版：盗版：盗版：piracy(n.)piracy(n.)n n 盗版产品：盗版产品：盗版产品：盗版产品：pirated productspirated productsn n 知识产权：知识产权：知识产权：知识产权：intellectual property rightintellectual property rightn n 侵犯版权：侵犯版权：侵犯版权：侵犯版权：infringe infringe sbssbs c

39、opyright;copyright infringement copyright;copyright infringementSay No to Pirated Products n n There is no denying the fact that piracy is a grave problem with which we are confronted.Taking a look around,we can find examples too numerous to list.In many places we see people peddling pirated books o

40、r disks.Say No to Pirated Products n n A number of factors could account for the problem,but the following might be the most critical ones.First,pirated products are much cheaper than copyrighted ones,so they are very attractive to people,especially youngsters,who are not financially well-off.Second

41、ly,with highly developed technology,it is not difficult to manufacture pirated products.With one authorized copy,the illegal producers can make thousands of fake ones at a very low cost,thus making huge profits.Say No to Pirated Products n n As a result,intellectual property rights are severely infr

42、inged upon.Honest producers will lose the motivation to develop new products.Meanwhile,pirated products are often of low quality,thus damaging the interest of buyers.n n In view of the seriousness of the problem,it is essential that laws and regulations be formulated and enforced to ban the manufacture and circulation of pirated products.Meanwhile,people should be educated to say no to these products.With these measures taken,we have reasons to believe that the problem can be solved in the near future.