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1、The Last Sentence Has the Final SayTeaching objectives1.1.根据正面、积极、和谐原则明确文章主题；根据正面、积极、和谐原则明确文章主题；2.2.运用三种策略和常见句式，写好第二段最后一句；运用三种策略和常见句式，写好第二段最后一句；3.3.运用运用ACT原则，确定第一段最后一句原则，确定第一段最后一句 My dad,George,only had an eighth grade education.A quiet man,he didnt understand my world of school activities.From age

2、14,he worked.And his dad,Albert,took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.I didnt really understand his world either:He was a livestock(牲畜)trucker,and I thought that I would surpass(超过)anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.

3、Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets,hitting a baseball,or throwing a football,preparing for my future as a quarterback(四分卫)on a football team.In poor weather,I read about sports or practiced my trombone(长号).The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a

4、neighboring farmer hired to work in his field.He explained our basic task,the tractor(拖拉机)fired up and we were off,riding down the field looking for weeds to spray(喷洒)with chemicals.After a short way,the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed.Then we began again.This happened over and

5、over,but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs,lambs-quarters,foxtails,and the king of weeds,the pretty purple thistle.It was tiring work,but I looked forward to the pay,even though I wasnt sure how much it would amount to.At home,my dad said,“A jobs a big step to growing up.

6、Im glad you will be contributing to the household.”My dads words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.My labors lasted about two weeks,and the farmer said there might be more work,but I wasnt interested.I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.

7、The pay day arrived at last._I understood immediately what my parents were worried about._readexplorewritecharactersplotthe logicthemecharactersplottheme Three steps of continuation writing近三年读后续写分析近三年读后续写分析卷卷别情情节主主题2022年全国卷身体残疾学生参加越野跑bravery2022年1月浙江卷 与不喜欢的人分在一组做研究share and respect2022年6月浙江卷 参与社区慈善

8、服务love/kindness2021年全国卷为母亲做早餐love2021年1月浙江卷 万圣节雕南瓜被卡住harmonious family life2020年1月浙江卷 主人上大学后，狗狗伤心consideration2020年6月浙江卷 与熊对抗脱险calmnessconflict/problemSolution 学校生活、人间大爱、亲情学校生活、人间大爱、亲情How to explore the theme Topic Conflict EmotionDanger 系列和危险的动物Scared calm relieved/happy和危险的环境和危险的人 Quarrel 系列误解Disa

9、ppointed/angry mutual understanding背叛观念、性格或兴趣不一致 Frustration 系列 贫困、残疾、孤独.失败、自卑Sad/lonely/自卑的confident/brave 正面、和谐、积极正面、和谐、积极How to explore the theme正面、和谐、积极正面、和谐、积极总原则总原则成功脱险了战胜困难了和好如初了自信勇敢了Tip 1 衔接衔接 主题升华主题升华Paragraph 1 The pay day arrived at last._Paragraph 2 I understood immediately what my paren

10、ts were worried about._How to make a good ending good?策略一：首尾呼应策略一：首尾呼应A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.What a funny day!Arthur couldnt stop laughing whenever he looked back on this fabulous experience.开头开头：结尾结尾：策略二：名言警句策略二：名言警句It is during our darkest moments t

11、hat we must focus to see the light.Great works are performed not by strength,but perseverance.Dont judge each day by the harvest you reap but by the seeds that you plant.How to make a good ending good?策略三：情感升华策略三：情感升华A patient,in his 80s,hurried to the nursing home to eat breakfast with his wife,who

12、 had a special disease and couldnt recognize him for five years.He said:“She doesnt know me,but I know who she is.”Theme true loveTrue love is acceptance of all that is.The happiest people dont necessarily have the best of everything.They just make the best of everything they have.Life isnt about ho

13、w to live through the storm,but how to dance in the rain.How to make a good ending good?常用句式常用句式1.Only then_ it dawn on me that we should never take love for granted.2.It was this unforgettable experience _ made me realize that only by teamwork/by working in a team _we win the competition.3.Determin

14、ation and optimism are _ it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.4.Tough _ the process was,she persisted on it desperately.5.Our family is _ the branches of a tree.We may grow in different directions,yet our roots remain as one.6.Its never too late to go for your dream._ you grasp eve

15、ry opportunity and take full advantage of it,you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.7._ his timely help,I wouldnt have succeeded.How to make a good ending good?didthatcanwhataslikeAs long asWithout/But for倒装倒装强调强调虚拟虚拟从句从句from then on+行动行动 From then on,I placed a jack and some common tools in

16、 my car.When meeting people in need on the road,I would try my best to help them like the family.Only in this way,could more and more people help each other in the future.How to make a good ending good?半路车坏，好心人帮忙半路车坏，好心人帮忙动作动作+感动感动+感悟感悟 She held the paper bag tightly,tears rolling down without contr

17、ol.It is love that makes the world go around,which she felt deep in her heart.Exercise 1Paragraph 1 The pay day arrived at last._Paragraph 2 I understood immediately what my parents were worried about._How to make a good ending good?_Your version我们在改变之前，可能会有一些自卑的心理阻碍着我们成长，比如我们在改变之前，可能会有一些自卑的心理阻碍着我们成

18、长，比如自己的外貌的缺陷，性格内向等，如何克服自卑，实现人生逆袭自己的外貌的缺陷，性格内向等，如何克服自卑，实现人生逆袭？I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence.Now,I am proud of what I look like and much happier,because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.Exercise 2Your version_How to write the last

19、sentence of the first paragraphAnalyze the first sentence of the 2nd paragraphCircle the key wordsThink about the cohesion(衔接衔接)and take the sentence downACTParagraph 1 The pay day arrived at last._Paragraph 2 I understood immediately what my parents were worried about._understoodanalyzecircleThink

20、and takeA what my parents were worried aboutB what caused me to understandC what I understoodD how my money would be spentYour version_Framework of the continuation writing倒着写倒着写1:先把最后一句写好，即：主题先把最后一句写好，即：主题句句;2:再把衔接句写好，即第一段的最后再把衔接句写好，即第一段的最后一句一句;3:根据根据两两段的提示段的提示语语铺设合理的情节；铺设合理的情节；4:添加合理的细节，注意添加合理的细节，注意角色角色的动作和的动作和情感情感.