英语写作指导2.ppt

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1、英语写作指导英语写作指导（二）Basic Writing三岔中学三岔中学 李五岳李五岳An exampleAn example 假如你是高中二年级的学生张明假如你是高中二年级的学生张明,在学校组织在学校组织了一项了一项“有烦恼向谁说有烦恼向谁说”的调查活动。请用英语的调查活动。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信，反映相关情况。内容包括：给校报编辑写一封信，反映相关情况。内容包括：调查结果（如图所示）、持相应想法的理由及你调查结果（如图所示）、持相应想法的理由及你对调查结果的建议、看法。对调查结果的建议、看法。61%turning to friends and schoolmates61%turning

2、 to friends and schoolmatesThe majority of the students surveyed choose their friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have troubles and want to get away from them.u同龄人容易交流和理解同龄人容易交流和理解22%22%going to teachers and parentsgoing to teachers and parents Another 22%choose their teachers

3、and parents to talk to.u阅历丰富阅历丰富,有生活和教育经验有生活和教育经验17%17%keeping to themselveskeeping to themselves There are 17%who dont share their troubles at all.They either think that their troubles are none of others business or find it hard to communicate with others.u不愿与别人说自己的事或难以与别人沟通不愿与别人说自己的事或难以与别人沟通最后写看法，

4、精彩之处！最后写看法，精彩之处！From my point of view,students can benefit from turning to their teachers and parents who should care for teenagers and help them in their life and studies.或：或：From my point of view,if one shuts himself away from others,he will find he has more and more troubles.A survey has been con

5、ducted among us Senior 3 students on whom we are to tell about our troubles.The majority of the students surveyed select their friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have troubles and want to get away from them.Another 22%choose their teachers and parents to talk to.A sampleA samp

6、le There are 17%who dont share their troubles at all,as they either think that their troubles are none of others business or find it hard to communicate with others.From my point of view,students should share their troubles with their friends and schoolmates since they are of the same age and can un

7、derstand each other well.读写任务训练读写任务训练读写任务步骤读写任务步骤:一一审读阅读材料审读阅读材料 寻找作者的论点寻找作者的论点,论据和论据和结论结论 二二概括原文观点概括原文观点 转述作者的论点，论据转述作者的论点，论据和结论和结论 三三提出自己观点提出自己观点 赞成或反对赞成或反对 四四论证自己观点论证自己观点 用事例论证自己的观点用事例论证自己的观点 五五.得出结论得出结论 读写任务型写作模板读写任务型写作模板 标题标题第一段第一段:第二段第二段:第三段第三段:概括所给短文内容要点概括所给短文内容要点约约30字字过渡词引出主题句过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点自

8、己的观点-理由理由 约约100字字总结句总结句 约约20字字标题标题标题是段落中心思想的精练表达形式。根标题是段落中心思想的精练表达形式。根据所写短文的内容，概括出中心思想然后据所写短文的内容，概括出中心思想然后加以提炼，拟定标题：加以提炼，拟定标题：Is time more valuable than money？On SmokingHow to make friendsHappinessIs watching TV a good thing?My view of money/time/pollutionMy attitude toward building a car factory.Wh

9、ere there is a will,there is a way 第一段：概括所给短文内容要点第一段：概括所给短文内容要点注意：利用原文中所给的语言材料，用自己的话来写；概括后的文章意思注意：利用原文中所给的语言材料，用自己的话来写；概括后的文章意思要通顺，行文要连贯。要通顺，行文要连贯。写作具体方法和要求写作具体方法和要求:1.第一段概括要做到第一段概括要做到开门见山开门见山:例如例如:1)According to the passage,we know2)This article is mainly about3)The writer tells us that2.第一段概括要第一段概

10、括要抓住要点抓住要点,语言精练语言精练;3.概括中不要涉及细节或具体事情概括中不要涉及细节或具体事情 第二段第二段:过渡词引出主题句过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点自己的观点-理由理由开头用语：开头用语：I do agree with the authorIn some way,I agree with,butThis opinion sounds right but is hardly practical.It is definitely not like that.As a matter of fact,From my personal angle aloneIn my opinion,I h

11、ave similar experience with the writerAs far as Im concerned 第三段第三段 最后一段最后一段 :总结句开头用语：总结句开头用语：In conclusion,In short,To make a long story short,In general,In a word,In brief,On the whole,All in all,注重以下几点注重以下几点:1)每一段的开头句,做到正确无误,引人入胜;2)文中要有亮点,如地道的表达,谚语或名言;3)句子要精练简洁,做到不罗嗦,控制在十五个句子左右,例如:能用非谓语做定语或状语就不要用定语从句或状语从句 4）一定要留有时间进行检查,避免小语法错误扣印象大分;5）注重字体的美化,卷面的整洁。Thank you!HomeworkHomeworkFinish the writing after class and hand in it.Thank you!Thank you!Good-bye!