高考英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累：2016年高考满分作文45389.pdf

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1、12016 年高考英语满分作文1.2016 年新课标全国卷 I假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教 Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：1.词数 100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【写作思路】该题虽然也是文字提示，属于书信体应用文写作，但它同往年的命题形式大不相同。写作要点没有单独罗列出来，而是包含在题目要求中，这对考生审题和构思提出了较大的挑战，这是前所未有的创新。经过认真审题，我们可以确定本文的写作要点有：（1）简单介绍自己、解释缘由；（2）说明写信的目的修改文字和格式；（3

2、）提示所附材料在哪里；（4）表示感谢。试题的情景是考生日常生活中熟悉的事情，题目要求明确、清晰，开放性很强，给考生留下了很大的自主发挥的空间。【满分范文】Dear Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua.I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also wantyou to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience,I am planning to take a part-time job

3、 in a foreign capital company.Ihave already finished my job application and personal resume.But this is the first time that I have written anapplication and the personal resume,so I dont even know if there are something to pay attention to.So,Imwriting you the letter,hoping you can give me some help

4、.I will be very grateful if you can help me.2Looking forward to your reply.And Id be really thankful.Yours,Li Hua2.2016 年新课标全国卷 II假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友 Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：1主题：环境保护；2展览时间；3投稿邮箱：.注意：1词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【写作思路】本文属于半开放作文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter 写信，建

5、议他参加你校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1.校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展，主题为环境保护；2.展览时间 6 月 15 日，持续三周；3.知道对方对摄影很感兴趣，也恰好有环保方面的图片，希望对方能够参加本次展览。4.投稿邮箱：。在写作时，注意书信的格式以及过渡用语的正确使用；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，恰当使用一些复合句或者谚语以增加获得高分的可能性。【满分范文】Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an InternationalH

6、igh School Student Photography Show.Thetheme of the show is environmental protection.It will start from June 15thand last for three weeks.Any student3who is interested is welcome to participate.I know you take good pictures and youve always wanted to dosomething for environmental protection.I rememb

7、er you showed me some photos on that theme the last timeyou visited our school.This is surely a good chance for more people to see them.If you want to join,you can sendyour photos to .Hope to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Hua3.2016 年新课标全国卷 III假定你是李华，与留学生朋友 Bob 约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因

8、；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【写作思路】题目要求写一封道歉信，李华因不能和 Bob 一起去书店而向 Bob 道歉，文章应使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。【满分范文】Dear Bob,Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I have just found that I haveto attend an important class meeti

9、ng that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning?We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books.If its convenient for you,lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.If not,let me know what time suits you best.I4should b

10、e available any time after school next week.Yours,Li Hua4.2016 年浙江卷“Planning is good,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇 100120 词的短文。要求如下：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。Planning Is Good,ButDoingIs Better_【写作思路】本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题

11、和提纲。结合题目可判断出主要是介绍将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写，不能跑题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定了作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意文章应用第一人称和一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来。注意要主次分明、详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章自然连贯。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【满分范文】Planning Is Good,ButDoingIs BetterPl

12、anning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do.However,a plan can bear no fruitwithout being actually carried out.My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I spenthours working out a schedule outlining my goals and pract

13、ical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for an5inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.I know how I achieved my success.It came from good planning and better

14、 doing combined.5.2016 年天津卷假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。（1）回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；（2）谈谈收获或感想；（3）表达祝愿与期望。注意：（1）词数不少于 100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear friends,How time flies!Thank you.【写作思路】这是一篇发言稿，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面涵盖，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点

15、只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法句型使文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【满分范文】Dear friends,6How time flies!Two weeks have passed since you came to our school for the exchange pr

16、ogram,which we allhave benefited from.During these two weeks,we have studied and lived together,which gives us the opportunity to promote ourfriendship.Doing sports as a team has enabled us to know each other better.Your art skills are excellent andadmirable,which leaves me a deep impression.I think

17、 all our classmates have learned a lot from ourcommunicationand the various activities.Now,on behalf of my schoolmates,I wish you a safe return.I also hope that there will be more events of thiskind in the future.Thank you.6.2016 年北京卷第一节（15 分）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的

18、中国历史人物。请你给 Jim 回信，内容包括：1.该人物是谁；2.该人物的主要贡献；3.该人物对你的影响。注意：1.词数不少于 50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【写作思路】题材新颖，要求介绍中国历史人物，内容包括喜欢的历史人物、他的贡献和对你的影响。不少于 50 词，7使用一般现在时和一般过去时以及第一人称和第三人称进行写作。题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度

19、较去年明显提升。【满分范文】Dear Jim,Its great to hear from you.I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.As for my favourite figure in Chinese history,it must be Wei Yuan,a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.He,in his book,Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World),introduced modern technologies

20、 and ideas to China.That opened our eyes to the world.In fact,he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge betweenChina and the world.Interested in knowing more?I can find you some books!Just let me know.Cheers!Yours,Li Hua第二节假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Acti

21、ons for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。注意：词数不少于 60。提示词：地球日 Earth Day8_【写作思路】话题比较常规，整体难度适中。“地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的体裁内容，考生并不陌生。内容主要包括：公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。题目要求按照四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。词数不少于60 词，参考词汇必须使用。使用一般过去时和第一人称进行写作。【满分范文】Actions for a Gree

22、ner EarthA week before Earth Day,posters were put up around our school,calling upon us to join in the actions for agreener earth.Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials.We brought to our classroom worn-outclothes,pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned t

23、hose into dolls,handbags,tissue boxes andsmall vases.That weekend,we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there.All werevery happy with those unexpected gifts,especially little kids and elderly people.We did so well that we wereinvited to share our idea and experience with

24、all the students of our school.We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.97.2016 年四川卷某中学生英文报正举办“The SeasonI Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.你最喜欢的季节；2.你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受）。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.题目已为你写好；3.行文连贯，语篇完整；4.文中不得透露个人真实信息。_【满分范文】The Season I Like BestEach

25、 of us knows that there are four seasons a year.Different people like different seasons;my favouriteseason is spring.I love to smell the fragrance of flowers,see the new green trees and hear the singing of smallbirds.There are many busy butterflies and bees over the flowers.Sometimes it rains,but us

26、ually rains quietly.Therain moistens the trees and the flowers.And I can play outside too!Whether we like riding bikes,jogging or goingon long walks,spring allows us to enjoy outdoor activities that we had to put on the back burner during winter.Ofcourse,there are many other reasons to explain why I

27、 m so excited about the spring.Thank you,spring!8.2016 年江苏卷请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。In recent years,internet voting has become increasingly popular in China.People not only cast on-line votesthemselves,but also urge others to vote for competitions like the Most Beautiful Teacherand the Cutest

28、Baby.Li Jiang,a high school student,is invited to vote in the Best Police Officer competition,organized bythe local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers daily work.Li Jiang visits the10website and reads all the stories.He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds

29、.He is already thinking of becoming apoliceman himself in the future.Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the Future Singer competition.He has alreadyreceived three similar invitations this week.His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition,the familywill win an ove

30、rseas tour for free.Su Hua likes his cousin very much,but he finds other singers perform evenbetter.To vote,or not to vote?This is a question that troubles him very much.【写作内容】1.用约 30 个单词写出上文概要；2.用约 120 个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用 23 个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语

31、言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。_【写作思路】此类作文对考生的能力要求极高。首先考生要以 30 字概述短文内容。接下来就网络投票发表个人看法并提出理由和根据。文章要使用第三人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1.概述：网络投票越来越流行，几乎人人都参与了网络投票，在给人们带来好处的同时，有时候也让人进退两难不知道是否应该参加这样的投票。2.支持：网络投票和生活密切相关，我们应该积极参与。理由及依据：（1）它是一种社会生活的方式；网络投票方便容易，不受时间和地点的束缚，同时网络投票的反馈迅速可靠；（2）虽然有时候网络投票也会给我们带来困扰，但如果有更好的参与规则，网络投票会更加规范合理。3.反对：网络

32、投票会给人带来负面影响：（1）人们会因为网络投票而产生被迫的感觉；（2）网络投票结果并不客观；（3）网络投票可能会被故意利用。建议考生在写作概述时，语言简练不拖沓。【满分范文】11Possibleversion one:On-line voting becomes increasingly popular,and many competitions get people involved in it.It is beneficialto some people,while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.In

33、my opinion,on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed,since it is nomore than a way to participate in public life.It makes no difference from ordinary voting events,in whichcandidates go around to seek supports.In addition,the Internet makes surveying and voting easy

34、 and convenient,regardless of time and space.Furthermore,voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.To be honest,voters sometimes feel annoyed,not because they hate voting,but because they are dividedbetween emotion and fairness.Things will turn for the better if we can work out some par

35、ticipation rules forpeople to obey.Therefore,I hold a positive attitude towards on-line voting.(150 words)Possibleversion two:Internet voting is quite popular nowadays.Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of thevoting,although some are quite happy with it,and active in doing it.In m

36、y opinion,Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society.Firstly,peoplemay feel forced when asked to do things that they dont want to.Secondly,voting of this kind does not depend onthe strong points of the competitors,but rather on how many social-networking resources t

37、hey have.Thirdly,thevoters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercialpurposes.In short,Internet voting,to some extent,is unfair,if not immoral,and cannot be trusted.Therefore,rulesshould be worked out and strictly observed.Everyone in our society should help those in need,but it is moreimportant to be sincere and earnest.(150 words)