2020中考英语高分作文热点范文10二胎政策44952.pdf

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1、1热点 10 二胎政策二胎政策无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的影响。今天，选择的 2020 年中考英语写作预测话题是：二胎政策。【预测题目】（一）最近，社会上在热议已由全国人大立法通过的新的国家计划生育政策，即俗称的“二孩政策”（second-child policy）。假设学校本周“英语角”将以此为话题展开讨论，请你用英语写一篇短文作为讨论稿，阐述你的观点。要求：1.词数 80100 左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)2.表明你的观点（赞同或反对），至少说明两点理由。3.语句连贯，语法正确，书写工整。2Recently,the government announced t

2、hat all parents would be allowed to have a second child._【参考范文】Recently,the government announced that all parents would be allowed to have a second child.Some studentsobject to the new policy.They think the coming little sister or brother will share the love from their commonparents.And they will no

3、t get what they want so easily as before.The little sister or brother may also affect presentquiet life,even the study.Some students say they welcome the new policy.They think it will give more happiness to the family.Therewill be more people to communicate with and more brothers or sisters to look

4、after the old of the family.I agree on the second opinion.And I cant wait for a new baby in my family.I believe he or she can bringmany surprises to us.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇图表类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其

5、是数字的不同表达法。写作亮点：章结构完整，表达清晰，用了很多比较复杂的词汇和句子。例如：They think the coming littlesister or brother will share the love from their common parents;They think it will give more happiness to the family.使文章结构更清晰明了。（二）假如你是学生王俊,在家是独生子女,国家开放二胎政策后,你的父母想再生一个孩子,征求你的意见,恰好你的美国笔友 Peter 来信询问我国的二胎政策,你给他回一封信,内容要点如下:1.简单解释国家二

6、胎政策；2.得知父母打算生二胎后你的想法；3.征求 Peter 的看法。3注意:1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已给出，不计入总字数。Dear Peter,I have received your letter and Im glad to explain to you the two-child policy in China._Yours,Wang Jun【参考范文】Dear Peter,I have received your letter and Im glad to explain to you the two-child policy in C

7、hina.The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy,meaning thatevery family in China is allowed to have two children.Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to asecond child,which worries me a great deal.Though it is good to have a brother or si

8、ster to grow up with.I have toshare everything with him or her.Most importantly,what if the love from my parents is totally switched to the newchild?As you have a younger sister,did you have similar problems?Whats your opinion about this?I am looking forward to your early reply.【解析】1、题干解读：题干要求给你的美国笔

9、友回一封关于我国的二胎政策的信，信的内容要包括所给的要点以及 peter 的看法。2、例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态主要以一般现在时为主；例文详细的介绍了我国的二胎正常和 Peter的看法；结构清晰；逻辑性强。3、高分亮点：短语：plan to do；give birth to；share with；make a decision to do sth；most importantly。句型：The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy,meaningthat

10、every family in China is allowed to have two children；what if the love from my parents is totally switched to4the new child。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如 plan to do；give birth to；share with；make a decision to do sth；most importantly 等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可

11、适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。（一）国家现在放开了二胎政策，很多人认为有一个兄弟姐妹很好，你认为呢？根据提示写一篇短文。1.父母要花费更多时间和金钱，两个孩子会生气打闹；2.有玩伴，不孤独，学会照顾别人，学会分享等；3.注意：1.词数：80 词左右；2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；3.文中不出现真实姓名、校名和地名；4.短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。I am the only child in my family

12、.I get everything I want.If I have a sister or brother,_【参考范文】I am the only child in my family.I get everything I want.If I have a sister or brother,my parentsdont spendmuch time with me and they spend more money in daily life.Two children may make noise at home.But children5can learn to share somet

13、hing with others.They can look after each other.And they cant feel lonely.I thinktwo-child policy is good.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根

14、据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。（二）国家开放二胎政策后，学校进行了一项调查关于我们是否愿意有一个弟弟或妹妹，同学们各有主张，假如你是李华，请你据此给报社写一篇文章，要点如下表：主张理由78%的学生愿意不再感到孤独，学会分享。17%的学生不愿意担心他们并不是的家庭唯一，增加家庭的负担5%的学生无所谓是否有弟、妹毫无差异你的观点自列举 1-2 点Dear Editor,Im writing

15、to tell you about a survey carried out in our school about whether we are willing to have ayounger sibling（兄弟姐妹）in our families._6_Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about a survey carried out in our school about whether we are willing to have a youngersibling（兄弟姐妹）in our families.

16、According to the survey,78%of the students would like to have a brother or sister whom they can play with,as a result,they will no longer feel lonely.Besides,they will learn to share with others.However,17%of them areagainst it.They worry that they arent the only of the family any longer.Whats worse

17、,having a younger siblingwill surely increase the burden(负担)of the family.Lastly,5%of the students think it makes no differences to themwhether they will have a younger sibling or not.In my opinion,having a sibling does have many advantages.So I hope to have a younger brother or a sister.Iwant to gr

18、ow up with him or her happily and support our parents with them together to make our parents enjoy theirlife when they become old.Yours,Lihua【解析】题干分析：阅读题干，这是一篇要求写看法关于国家开放二胎政策后，我们是否愿意有一个弟弟或妹妹的看法的作文。题干已经给出了第一段，表明了写作的目的“调查一项关于我们是否愿意在家里有一个弟弟妹妹的意愿。”。在写作时，要表述清楚他人的观点及理由，同时也要阐明自己的观点及理由。这是一份调查说明，时态应该是一般现在式。例

19、文点评：例文采取的是三段式写作手法，第一段是题干给出的，表明写作目的；第二段详细的介绍了关于二胎政策学生们看法；第三段开始阐述自己的观点。例文运用大量短语与句型，观点表述清楚，结构清晰。【高分亮点】短语：According to 根据；would like to sth 想要做某事；as a result 结果；share sth with sb 与某人分享某事物；Whats worse 更糟糕的是；In my opinion 照我的想法；hope to do sth 希望做某事；grow up 长大。7句型：（1）According to the survey,78%of the stude

20、nts would like to have a brother or sister whom they canplay with 根据这项调查，78%的学生希望有一个可以一起玩的弟弟或妹妹。Whom 引导的定语从句；（2）Lastly,5%of the students think it makes no differences to them whether they will have a younger sibling or not.最后，5%的学生认为是否有弟弟妹妹对他们来说没有区别。Whether 引导的宾语从句。（三）上周的一堂英语课上，老师就“二孩政策（two-child po

21、licy）”展开了全班调查。请你以“Do you want tohave a brother or a sister?”为题目用英语写一篇短文，先汇总班上同学的观点，再陈述自己的想法。观点理由不想有弟妹，愿意当独生子女（21%）不愿意与别人分享父母的爱，父母会很辛苦，.想要弟妹，不愿意当独生子女（62%）渴望有伴，有更多的亲人，有人分享.不介意，都可以（17%）你的观点要求：文中不能出现真实的人名和学校名称，100 字左右，开头已给出，不计入字数。Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Do you want to have a brother or

22、 a sister?Last week,_【参考范文】Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Last week,we had a discussion about two-child policy.Somestudents think they dont want to have a brother or a sister.Because they dont want to share parentslove withothers.Also,parents can

23、be tired because of two children.8However,others think they want to have a brother or a sister.Because they are eager for a person to play with.They can share their happiness and sorrow.17%of students think they cant mind having a brother or a sister.It should be decided by their parents.I think it

24、is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with.I can share everything with him or her.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇以“Do you want to have a brother or a sister?”为话题的调查报告，介绍同学们对“二孩政策（two-child policy）”不同的观点，并阐述理由。动笔前应根据主题组织材料，确定写作内容，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态、关键单词等问题。结合材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时态表达。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。还

25、要注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的观点和想法。【写作亮点】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。本文恰当使用了 had a discussion about，share parentslove with，because of，play with,however，also,be good to 等词（组）。采用了丰富的句型，比如：原因状语从句、I think 宾语从句、被动语态等多种句式交替运用，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。（四）国家为了优化人口结构，在 2015 年颁布了全面开放二孩的政策。上周你班就“你需要一个弟弟或妹妹吗？”开了一个班会，同学们各抒己见。请你根据下表提示内容，用英

26、语写一篇短文，投给校报。要求：1包含表中所有信息，并适当发挥；2语句通顺，意思连贯，书写整洁；3词数不少于 100。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。赞成1.欢乐多了;减少了孤独感 2.学会照顾人了；有利于培养合作精神。反对1.占据时间;没有时间进行自己的爱好 2.父母关爱少了；有时相处不好会导致矛盾。你的观点(至少两点)Last week our class held a class meeting about“Would you like a younger brother or sister?.Every studentexpressed his opinion._9_【参考范文】Last

27、 week our class held a class meeting about“Would you like a younger brother or sister?.Every studentexpressed his opinion.Some students welcome a younger brother or sister.With a little child around,we may have great fun seeingtheir pretty faces or meeting many funny situations,which will make our l

28、ives full of joy.It can also make us feelless lonely.Besides it is important for us teenagers to learn to take care of a little child.It can help us work closelywith each other.However,some other students dont think so.They think it will take us much time to look after her or him.Asa result,we wont

29、have enough time for our hobbies.Whats more,parents may spare more time and love to theyounger.Sometimes,if we cant get along well with the younger,we may quarrel with them.In my opinion,I d like to have a younger brother or sister.Its wonderful to grow up with a brother or sistertogether.We may sha

30、re our happiness and sadness with each other.Moreover,when our parents get older,they canlive a better life with two children to support them.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。就国家 2015 年颁布的全面开放二孩的政策，上周你班就“你需要一个弟弟或妹妹吗？”开了一个班会，同学们各抒己见。根据表格中提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，投给校报。本文时态主要用一般现在时辅以一般过去时，人称主要用第一、三人称。在写作时注意文章所给出的提示要点，“赞成的、反对的”给出的要点

31、比较具体，学生需要用正确的英语准确的表达出来；最后在表达自己的观点时，要发挥想象力，使文章更加的丰富、充实。注意上下文的意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系；句与句、段与段之间的过渡要平稳、自然流畅；要灵活运用自己熟悉的高级词句，以提高文章的档次；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。101.Recently,the government announced that all parents would be allowed to have a second child.2.In my opinion,Id like to have a younger brother or sister.3.Its wond

32、erful to grow up with a brother or sister together.4.Moreover,when our parents get older,they can live a better life with two children to support them.5.It can help us work closely with each other.6.Sometimes,if we cant get along well with the younger,we may quarrel with them.7.Besides it is importa

33、nt for us teenagers to learn to take care of a little child.8.I think it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with.9.it makes no differences to them whether they will have a younger sibling or not.10.I want to grow up with him or her happily.11.The Chinese government recently plans to chan

34、ge the one-child policy into two-child policy.12.They think the coming little sister or brother will share the love from their common parents.13.They think it will give more happiness to the family.14.They can look after each other.And they cant feel lonely.15.I think two-child policy is good.11（一）随

35、着国家二胎政策的实行，二胎问题成为了时下热议的社会话题。有些同学赞成生二胎，因为作为独生子女在成长过程中，一个人感觉比较孤单。而另一些人则有不同的看法，认为有了二胎，父母需要赚更多的钱，会很辛苦。那么，你的观点是什么呢？请就此话题，写一篇短文，阐述自己的观点，你是赞成还是不赞成父母生二胎呢？至少写出两点原因。要求：1.词数 80-120。2.文中不得出现真实姓名，学校名。参考词汇：two-child policy二胎政策My view on two-child policy12【参考范文】My view on two-child policyFirst of all,two-child pol

36、icy is the gift for some only child.For some families,maybe the parents are only childand they also can have only child.Put aside the loneliness of their child,when their child grows up and they growolder,their child marry with an only child girl accidentally,the burden on their child and his wife i

37、s unimaginablyheavy.Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples.Usually,a young couple looking after an oldcouple is a little difficult;if the pressure increases twice,how can they stand it.But if their parents have twochildren,they can share the burden of taking care of their pare

38、nts.It would be much better.Secondly,two-child policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population.As the widely spread of one-childpolicy,some people have changed their conception about giving birth.If they firmly believe one-child policy,therewill be more and more the dink.After several decades,

39、our country will famous for lack of population.In conclusion,one-child policy has out of date.And two-child policy is needed and necessary.It can solve theproblem of nowadays and the future.【解析】这篇作文要求我们对现在国家实行的二胎政策提出自己的看法，短文的题目就是 My view on Two-childPolicy。这是一篇话题类的作文，题目中只给出了二胎这一话题，具体的写作内容需要学生自己发挥想象力

40、去完成，这对于学生们来说是一个难点，短文写什么，从哪个方面写，如何组织语言，这就要考查学生的英语功底了。另外写作的时候，还要注意写作的层次，内容要有条理，不能杂乱无章。首先点明自己的观点，再讲述自己的理由。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，第一人称来叙述，要注意正确使用动词的形式，注意主谓一致的问题。同时写作的时候，可以使用一些短语和句型，使上下文意连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目的要求对于国家实行的二胎政策提出了自己的观点。整篇短文的内容完整，结构清晰。作者主要从两个方面阐述了自己的理由，第一个理由中使用的句型有 Put asidethe lonelin

41、ess of their child,when their child grows up and they grow older,their child marry with an only child girlaccidentally,the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy.、if the pressure increasing twice,howcan they stand it.But if their parents have two children,they can share the burden

42、of taking care of their parents。第二个理由 Secondly,two-child policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population、If they firmly believeone-child policy,there will be more and more the dink 等。13（二）假如你是初中生李华，在家是独生子女，国家开放二孩政策后，你的父母想再生一个孩子，征求你的意见。恰好你的美国笔友 Peter 来信询问我国的二孩政策。请你给他回一封信，内容要点如下：1.简单解释国家的二孩政策；2.

43、得知父母打算生二胎后你的想法；3.征求 Peter 的看法。注意：1.词数 80 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好，不计入字数。Dear Peter,I have received your letter and Im glad to explain to you the two-child policy in China._Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Peter,I have received your letter and Im glad to explain to you the two-child policy in China.14Th

44、e Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy,meaning thatevery family is allowed to have two children.Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child,which worries me.Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with,I have

45、to share everything withhim or her.Most importantly,what if the love from my parents is totally switched to the new child?Do you have similar problems?Whats your opinion about this?Yours,Li Hua【解析】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的外国笔友 Peter 写信，内容是关于我们国家的二胎政策。通过审题可知，短文中应主要包括以下内容：首先给 Peter 介绍我们国家的二胎政策；然后说明自己的父母想要二胎以

46、及自己的想法；最后向 Peter 征求意见。题目中只给出了大概的提纲，具体的写作内容，需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，串联成文。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，并注意句式的完整，不要残缺成分。根据题目要求列出写作要点，然后罗列出需要用到的单词和句型，用简单句的句式先表达出来。然后为提升文章档次，改变几个较高级的词汇和复杂句式，如复合句、非谓语动词等。同时需要注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，以使全文意思连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整充实，作者根据题目中的提纲，解释了我们国家的二胎政策以及自己的父母打算要二胎之后自己的想法。文章结构清晰，叙述清楚、明

47、了，语言得体。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第一人称为主，时态主要是一般现在时。谓语动词形式准确，用法规范，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中以简单句为主，也使用了一些较高级的句型，如 The Chinese government recentlyplans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy,meaning that every family is allowed to have twochildren.，这是一个长句，使用了句型 plan to do sth.，change into，以及现在分词作状语、被动语态等。再

48、如 Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child,which worries me.中使用了非限制性定语从句；Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with,I have to share everything with him or her.使用了让步状语从句等。这些句型的使用提升了文章的档次和水平。（三）国家现在放开了二胎政策，很多人认为有一个兄弟姐妹很好，你认为呢？根据提示写一篇短文。1父母要花费更多时间和金钱，两个孩子会生

49、气打闹；2有玩伴，不孤独，学会照顾别人，学会分享等；153注意：70 词左右；短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。【参考范文】I am the only child in my family.I can get everything I want.If I have a sister or brother,my parents wontspend much time with me and they will spend more money in daily life.Two children may make noise at home.Butchildren can learn to s

50、hare something with others.They can look after each other.And they wont feel lonely.Anyway,I think two-child policy is good.【解析】本文属于话题作文，表达针对国家开放二胎政策不同的人不同的观点，并阐述自己的观点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯、符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 spend with、make noise、share.