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1、托福写作备考作文写完怎么批改?4种实惠高效的批作文方式盘点 托福写作中考生想要提升自己的实力，动笔写文章是不行避开的训练环节。不过写完的作文想要找到高效实惠的批改途径也并非易事，许多同学也因为没人批作文而渐渐放弃了练笔的训练方式。那么托福写作自己写完的文章如何获得权威批改?下面我就来介绍详细方法。 托福写作备考作文写完怎么批改?4种实惠高效的批作文方式盘点 托福写作备考作文批改方式：上某宝找批改服务 想要获得比较权威优质的批改，最简洁干脆的方法不外乎上某宝了。目前某宝上供应这类作文批改服务的店铺许多，收费价格差距也比较大。而这种方式对于平常托福作文练笔训练量比较大又缺乏批改途径的考生来说是比较

2、简单获得的。当然在选择详细的服务机构时大家也要留意批改的时效性和精确性。能够快速进行批改反馈，同时批改精确度更接近官方水准的是优先选择对象。另外一些较大的教化机构供应的服务相对更具权威性，这也可以成为大家的参考目标。 托福写作备考作文批改方式：比照高分满分范文批改 假如大家不想花钱更倾向于免费的批改，那就只能靠自己来进行批改了。而自己批改时比较志向的方法之一就是比照高分满分范文进行批改。详细做法是先找寻一些带有高分满分范文的作文题目，然后依据题目在不参考范文的前提下自己先进行练笔写出一篇完整的文章，最终再比照着范文进行批改。这种批改方式的价值在于能够帮助考生更为直观地看出自身写作水平距离高分标

3、准的差距和不足所在，通过参照范文发觉自己在写作中存在的问题，并找到更为精准的提升方向。 托福写作备考作文批改方式：依据官方评分标准批改 除了参考高分范文进行比照批改外，另一种自我批改的方式则是结合官方评分标准来进行批改。托福考试的主办机构ETS已经在其官网上给出了明确的评分标准，不同水平的得分差异也可以通过评分标准来看到详细区分。考生借助这样的评分标准进行自我批改也是可行的。当然这种批改方式对考生的自我认知有很高要求，很多标准其实是比较主观的，也会因为个人水平的差距而体现出较大的不同，所以这种自我批改作文的方式大家须要量力而行，对自己的写作水平没有精确相识的话不建议采纳。 托福写作备考作文批改

4、方式：互助渠道寻求批改 那么既不想花钱又不想靠自己来批改的同学如何达成作文批改的目的呢?我再给大家举荐一个通过各种互助渠道来进行批改的方法。托福考试相关的论坛，QQ群和微信群大家可能多少都知道一些，不知道也没关系，在各平台上搜寻一下应当都能找到不少。在这些互动社区和探讨群组中其实考生都可以通过和别人相互批改等方式来得到作文批改的机会，假如考生能够找到一起备考托福的考友，想要让自己的作文获得批改也并非难事。 托福考试作文范文:人类行为对地球影响 托福考试作文题目：Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by hum

5、an activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 托福考试作文参考分析： 人类的行为对地球的影响，有好的，也有坏的，须要分条阐述。 托福考试作文范文参考： People have learned how to turn wild natural areas to farmland, how to exploit min

6、erals to adapt their needs, how to build roads and houses to expand their territories. People continuously improve their knowledge and develop technologies to improve their lives. It is undeniable that these activities of human beings make their lives better than ever before. Nevertheless, those act

7、ivities also cause side-effects to the Earth because of pollution, deforestation, and exaggerated natural resource exploitation. Nowadays, pollution becomes one of the most concerned problems. Because of the increasingly expanded factories, the industrialized areas, the burning of population etc, to

8、o much pollutant spills out everyday. Consequently, all of these things cause bad effect to the Earth. The purity of atmosphere is reduced seriously, the Earth is continuously warmed up, and ozone layer is holed. Additionally, forest is asking for help in desperation. For last few decades, the fores

9、t areas have been reduced to 50 percent because of human deforestation. Green forestland of the Earth can be compared to the lungs of human. How healthy you are if your lungs are trespassed. I am sure that you will get more difficult with aspiration; as a result, your health will be affect badly. Fr

10、om this example, we can infer that how serious problem our Earth has to face with. I wonder how long it can endure. Researchers show that the natural means is limited, but today, they are exploited so increasingly to adapt infinite human needs that someday, all mineral can be ended up. Because of se

11、rious pollution, alarming deforestation and progressive mineral exploitation, the ecosystem becomes unbalance. Consequently a lot natural calamities happen each year such as flood, hurricanes. A lot wild living creatures are exposed to narrow place of shelter and lacking foods. For these reasons, th

12、e Earth will become unhealthy. In conclusion, the human beings harm the Earth. Human beings as well as their dear planet, the Earth, have been badly suffered by what caused by humans themselves. I hope that humans are soon aware of those problems so that they can have suitable policies in order to n

13、ot only improve their lives but also keep and maintain the Earth fresh and green. 托福考试作文范文:做领导者的好处 托福考试作文题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 托福考试作文

14、参考分析： 探讨做leader的好处：主动，可以操纵更多的资源，获得更多;缺点：风险大;探讨做member的好处：安逸;没有风险;缺点：收获较小。做leader和member肯定程度上与一个人的性格有关。另外，还要看是做什么的group。视状况而定。 托福考试作文范文参考： According to my opinion, it is always better to be a leader than a follower. True leader show initiative. They take actions and they assume responsibilities. A le

15、ader makes a decision. Some followers may approve of the decision, others may complain about it. However, these followers all chose to follow, not to lead. They chose not to make a decision. That's how I am different. I am not a follower. I want to make decisions. A good leader will not react to

16、 events, but will anticipate them. A leader will start a plan of action and then will persuade others to follow. For example, a class president at a local college may feel that the relationship between the community and the campus is not a good one. The citizens may feel that the college kids make t

17、oo much noise on the street, litter public areas, and shop in other communities. A good class president will recognize that the community and the campus depend on one another. The president will ask the student body to keep noise down, help clean up the neighborhood, and work with businesses to attr

18、act students. A good leader takes the initiative. Good leaders must be action-oriented. Having taken the initiative, they must see the job though. They have to take charge and lead the followers. They have to motivate and encourage the followers. The followers (in this example, the student body) mus

19、t understand why good relations with the community are necessary. The followers must be persuaded to do something about it. I enjoy taking the initiative, determining the direction, and being responsible for my actions. I do not want to suffer through other people's stupid decisions. If there ar

20、e going to be stupid ways to do something, let them be mine. Would not you agree? 托福考试作文范文:偏好手工还是机器制作 托福考试作文题目：Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you preferitems made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific examples to explain you

21、r choice. 托福考试作文参考分析： 这道题选择比较自由，无论选哪一种都行，只要列出几个好的理由(留意：家具也有许多种，依据不同的种类，也可以有不同的偏好)。 托福考试作文范文参考： From my point of view, there are many factors affecting whether to choose an item made by hand or by machine. The main factor to make a judgment is whether we use the item for our daily life or for collect

22、ion and decoration purposes. For items used in our daily life, the choices we make depend on the following factors: function, form, and price. Function is the most important thing for us. If a product is beautiful, but it is not able to perform the function, it can only be called a decoration, or a

23、piece of garbage. For example, when we buy a TV, what we really care about first it is the quality of the picture and sound, how many stations it can receive, and whether it can be connected easily to the VCR and DVD player at home. The second factor that affects our choice of a product for daily us

24、e is its form. Is the TV too big, too small, or too ugly? Will it fit into the living room? Will it be compatible with the colors of other appliances and the furniture? The third factor we may consider is the price. Even if we are very happy with the item, there is no meaning if we cannot afford it.

25、 So, in our daily life, there is really no difference whether our clothes or furniture are made by hand or made by machine. It just doesn't matter as long as they can perform their function. For items for collection and decoration, it is a completely different story. Ancient tools and historical

26、 artifacts have more market and educational value than modern day massively produced products, and traditional handicrafts make good tourist souvenirs and beautiful decoration for the house. Therefore, when it comes to items for collection and decoration, I would definitely choose items made by hand

27、, because they are just so special. In conclusion, depending on different items and different uses, I will make different choices. 托福写作备考作文写完怎么批改?4种实惠高效的批作文方式盘点本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第11页 共11页第 11 页 共 11 页第 11 页 共 11 页第 11 页 共 11 页第 11 页 共 11 页第 11 页 共 11 页第 11 页 共 11 页第 11 页 共 11 页第 11 页 共 11 页第 11 页 共 11 页第 11 页 共 11 页