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1、托福写作的五种形式 一般状况下，托福独立写作是就某个事务、现象或者个人的经验询问“Do you agree or disagree”。所以，要回答这个问题，我们同意与否都是可以的，当然也可以选择折中的观点。那么针对托福写作题目，我们有哪些写作方式呢?我在这里想要和大家共享一下托福写作的五种形式。 托福写作的五种形式 一、一边倒开头： 1. 引用他人相反观点转折： People live in the present. They plan for and worry about the future. History, however, is the study of the past. Som

2、e people might ask, "Given all the demands that press in from living in the present and anticipating what is yet to come, why bother with what has been? Given all the desirable and available branches of knowledge, why urge many students to study even more history than they are required to?"

3、; However, it's undeniable that learning about past has its value, it will help us comprehend people and societies, and it will help us accommodate change and forecast how the society we live in came to be. 模板： 陈述事实，however, _坏的缘由_. Some people might ask. “ Given all the demands that _， why both

4、er with _? Given all the desirable and available _， why urge the children” However, it is undeniable that _ have its value, it will _子优点_, and it will _子优点_. 二、一边结尾： Consider _，_ and _, we can definitely say that; 三、 两边倒开头：(肃穆型) 1. 肃穆型 Art and science are essentially a strange coupling. Yet more oft

5、en than not, they are considered as divergent(叉开的) rather than consistent with each other：The artist employs image and metaphor(隐喻); the scientist uses number and equation. These two fields seem to have little in common: there are few, if any, references to art in any standard textbook of science; a

6、rt historians rarely interpret an artist's work in light of the conceptual framework of science. Despite what appear to be irreconcilable(不能妥协的) differences, however, they do have at least one thing in commonboth of them have significant contribution to the society, but through probably distinct

7、ive way. 模板： _are essential a stranger coupling. Yet more often than not, they are considered as the divergent rather than consist with each other; _ employs _;_ use _， these two fields seem to have little in common: _举例子_; Despite what appear to be irreconcilable, however, they do have at least one

8、 thing in commonboth of them have significant contribution to the society, but through probably distinctive way 2. 一般型： Skyscrapers are becoming standards of metropolis from North America to East Asia. In the process, historic buildings are making room for the seemingly unstoppable advancement of mo

9、dernity. Generally， modifications occur in faces of those global cities. At the same time city planners are facing the stern pressure about conserving traditional cultures through preserving conventional buildings. Sustaining the cultural architecture or replacing them with modern ones, the final de

10、cision should depend on a thorough analysis of the specific situation at hand, as there are intense arguments for either option. 模板： _are becoming _ from North America to East Asia. In the process, _子_ Generally,_由_ At the same time, _理由_ Sustaining _or replacing them with _ the final decision shoul

11、d depend on a thorough analysis of the specific situation at hand, because there are intense arguments for either option. 四、 两边倒结尾： 1. 肃穆型的： However, it's been said that there is no science without fancy and no art without facts. Scientists share parallel view of space, time and light, something

12、 else with artists. Not only are art and science interrelated with each other but they also contribute to each other in various way. Therefore, it is simply partial to say that either one contributes more to the society than another does. 模板： However, its been said that there is no _without _ and no

13、 _ without _. Scientists share parallel view of space, time and light, something else with _. Not only are _ and _ interrelated with each other but they also contribute to each other in various way. Therefore, it is simply partial to say that either one contributes more to the society than another d

14、oes. 2. 通用型：(重要) As to which source is more important, the answers vary. As mentioned above, some knowledge can be acquired only through books. It's hard to imagine we can have a comprehensive understanding of history without reading books. On the other hand, some knowledge can be obtained only

15、through experience. When we try to learn to swim, merely a detailed manual of swimming skills, even abundantly filled with illustrations, is at most useless. We have to jump into the water and then gain the knowledge with experience. In most time, we have to use books and experience as source simult

16、aneously to get what we want to know. Take learning physics for example, theory from the books, experience from the experiments they are both equally significant sources. Therefore, I think whether one source is more important than the other depends on circumstances. 模板： As to which source is more i

17、mportant, the answers vary. As mentioned above, _an be acquired only through books. It's hard to imagine_例子_; On the other hand, _can be obtained only through experience. When we try to _子_ In most time, we have to use _simultaneously to get what we want to know, Take learning physics for exampl

18、e,_子_ Therefore, I think whether one source is more important than the other depends on circumstances. 五、一般通用性开头结尾: Many people believe that it is significant to add physical activities as part of a teenagers everyday curriculum at school. Others disagree, arguing that students should focus their va

19、luable but limited bloom on academic studies. Personally, I believe that physical education is a vital part of an education as it instructs children of methods to take care of their bodies, render the spirits about how to work in a team, and provides a path for releasing tension and aggression. 模板：

20、Many people believe that it is significant to do _ Others disagree, arguing that _理由_ Personally, I believe that _点_ _由一_ _由二_ _ 托福写作满分作文的练成法 当我们说到21分向30分进行攀登的时候，必需在这里找到一个标尺来给我们供应充分的例子。以前我们对于作文分数的推断，总是模糊不清的，究竟什么样的作文该21分，什么样的作文该30分。 其实新托福考试作文部分的推断标准，既可以被我们称为多元化，也可以被我们称为单一化。说多元化，是因为推断标准的细化，也就是要求我们能够清晰

21、精确的表达自己的含义，并且逻辑清楚，用词精确。 当我们的作文达到21分的时候，其实句子里面严峻的错误已经很少了，比如说一个句子缺少谓语，没有主语的状况已经很少了。多也就是写写stop smoking这样的Chinglish。简洁来说，很硬性的语病已经不多了,可是这个时候，是令人茫然的时候，因为这个时候似乎我们的已经达到了自己的极限，自己能做的全都已经做了，似乎一下失去了前进的方向，更是因为作文是主观题，我们身边总是缺少一个推断标准。对于托福作文，一个很关键性的要求就是要用词精确，行文流畅。我们以前往往总是会陷入一个误区，就是要用大词，要写一些句式磅礴的句子。之所以这样就是因为现在中国95%以上

22、的作文老师，尤其是托福作文老师对于什么样的作文才是满分作文缺乏一个概念，虽然许多人能考出高分作文，但是他们很难做出一个指向性，就像是他们杀鸡用牛刀，然后他们就认为杀鸡只能用牛刀，是一个道理。他们不知道，其实杀鸡的时候，只用一把菜刀就可以了，是一个道理。所以，这就是为什么现在许多国内的初中常常用博士来当老师，但是这些人一上课就发觉，学生根本不喜爱听他在说什么，甚至这些老师还常常被学生赶走，就是这个道理。 我们来看一些真实的例子。 Nevertheless, it would not work either if everybody just keep to themselves without

23、communicating. It is also essential for roommates to share their experiences with one another and thus get close in their relationship. In this case, a good sense of humor can be a such a valuable quality as a single joke may break the silence and open up a nice conversation. 从这段文字里我们就会发觉，本段几乎没有什么我们

24、以前许多老师推崇的长难句，困难句，整段内容，几乎都是由简洁句组成的。这对于现在的培训机构的老师讲课的内容是一个大大的嘲讽，但是反过来又能告知我们考生许多信息。 这段节选告知我们： 1 托福满分作文，要求的不是浩大的单词量，而是在已有的8000单词的精确应用。 2 想拿满分作文，不是靠单纯的堆砌困难句就可以完成的，假如你还不信任这一点，请去中国各大留学论坛，看看一片哀嚎之音。 3 想要拿到30分，要求你写出更为详细化的例子，而不是单纯的泛泛而谈。 有时，“投机取巧”与“踏实肯干”的差别就在一线之间。同样一种方法，花1周的时间来探讨，就是“踏实肯干”;只花一分钟，读完了事，就是投机取巧。 托福写作

25、成果如何快速提高 托福写作里包括两块：一个是独立写作一个是综合写作。对于独立写作来讲，从早期PPT托福考试始终持续下来的形式，这个形式大家比较熟识，包括思路和写作材料，须要我们关注的有几点，第一个Well Organized&Well Developed，怎么样让文章结构写的完整，而且把你的观点阐述清晰。大家在写的过程中可能Developed过程是特殊重要的，你平常阅读的时候要特殊留意。 其次个是Appropriate Word Choice，就是你怎么样把这个词用对，写出来一句话你要让阅卷者完成阅读并且完成理解假如你用一个说法以前没有人用过，这个时候他看了也不知道是什么意思，假如我们

26、其次语言学英语的时候，就像英语是第一母语学汉语的时候犯的错误是一样的。 第三个Cohesive&Coherent，主要是在语言论述和阐述过程中的问题，托福的作文写的是争论文，不是小说也不是散文，所以在这个过程当中如何让文章结构变得严谨，这是重要的过程，你怎么样让它实现完整的论文结构，所以老师会告知大家怎么样实现。另外在描述的过程中须要保持语言的连贯，第一个是逻辑的连贯性，逻辑是不是一样的，有没有出现冲突。其次是语意上的连贯。 第四个Variety of Language Use你须要一种语言改变，平常在写作文的时候会有一个问题，写任何一个东西的时候我可能想脑子里信出来的表述方式特别有限

27、，所以导致一讲Said你就听不明白了，对于语言的改变并不是要去炫，而是要你的语言表述有一种特征，向考官表明你能自由驾驭一种语言，这也是托福考试本的核心和目的。 其次个综合写作，第一个No Attitude of the author，独立写作是你自己的想法，综合写作肯定不能有自己的想法，你要看别人的东西，其次个就是Completely repeated Points必需完整复述你听到、看到的东西，你在写的时候不能漏掉听到和看到的。第三个Parophrase我们在高校上课的时候须要看教科书、讲义，听教授讲课，同时要做笔记，同时还要有自己的理解。可能课后老师要你完成一个作业，托福考试在这点上把全部

28、的练习都放在一个环境当中，通过阅读也好、写作也好会对你自身在美国的学习打下特别好的基础。 托福写作的万能论据整理 【插图】 there are a great many beautiful and delicate pictures to illustrate the words and make it more understandable. With those wonderful pictures, learning can be real fun and easy! 【环境美丽】 The amazing part is its picturesque view and enjoyabl

29、e surroundings. Having a walk beside the lake and rockery, I can smell the fragrance of grass and the flowers, hear the cries of the birds and feel the bracing breeze on my face. 【学习英语】 With the language surroundings, itll be easy for me to polish my speaking and listening skills.This can render me

30、a good opportunity to practice my English, and eventually put me in a favorable position in the upcoming competition. 【英勇】 Youve got to have faith and courage; the only thing we have to fear is fear itself. In this rapid developing society, if were easily freaked out by various challenges, then ther

31、es no way we can succeed. 【放松】 It drives away my lassitude and helps me relax and relieve the pressure from work and study. Whats more? It even puts me in a better mood and wards off the depression and pessimism . 【好笑】 The scene is extremely hilarious and funny and make me laugh. Laugh can definitel

32、y drive away my lassitude and helps me relax and relieve the pressure from work and study. Whats more? It even puts me in a better mood and wards off the depression and pessimism . 【结交挚友】 I would be able to make friends with those who share the same love for this. Perhaps we can have a little get-to

33、gether. We can talk, laugh, I mean, exchange our ideas and share our feelings. We all feel like one big family. 【榜样作用】 Since he is the role model for us, heneeds to speak and behave appropriately, in order to set a good example for us. No one can deny that a good example can exert an profound influe

34、nce on the people. 【守信】 He is a man of his word and he never breaks his promise. I remember once I asked him to pick up my cousin when I couldnt come back. He did so even though he had caught a bad cold. I said thanks and sorry but he said its ok because he promised me. It is the characteristic of k

35、eeping faith enabled him to win my complete trust. 【热心】 He is very obliging. Whenever you are in trouble, he is always the first one who comes up and gives you the shirt off his back. Once my computer was attacked by Trojan horse, it is him who spent four hours to help me get rid of it. 【擅长表达】 He sh

36、ould be expressive to convey his ideas effectively and efficiently. He is supposed to speak loud and clear and be able to put difficult things in a way that is easy to understand. Only in this way can we fully comprehend his idea and better do our own job. 【爱护】 He is considerate and shows much care

37、and concern about others. He is always trying to look at things from your angle and not to hurt you or upset you. For example, knowing that I am taking a nap or reading books, he would turn down the volume of the CD player. 【节约时间】 Its such a time saver. In this fast-paced society, we all do our utmo

38、st to keep up with time. With the time it saves for us, we can do various meaningful things thus make the most of precious time which elapses every second 【避开堵车】 Since there is no traffic jam in subway lines, passengers can perfectly avoid the unpleasant traffic congestion. On one hand, it saves us

39、time, on the other hand itll make it easier for us to make plans and schedules. In contrast, other vehicles running on the roads and streets are extremely subject to traffic conditions. 【覆盖面广】 The subway system cover almost all the major parts of the cities, stations can be seen everywhere. So it would be more convenient to go out by subway. 托福写作的五种形式本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第18页 共18页第 18 页 共 18 页第 18 页 共 18 页第 18 页 共 18 页第 18 页 共 18 页第 18 页 共 18 页第 18 页 共 18 页第 18 页 共 18 页第 18 页 共 18 页第 18 页 共 18 页第 18 页 共 18 页