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1、书面表达书面表达 How can we make a good article?Brainstorming1.要点齐全要点齐全2.应用较多语法结构应用较多语法结构 和高级词汇和高级词汇3.有效使用过渡词有效使用过渡词4.书写规范、卷面整洁书写规范、卷面整洁高考作文高分要点：高考作文高分要点：w过渡性词语包括关联词和连接词两大类。过渡性词语包括关联词和连接词两大类。一一 关联词：其根据句间关系可分为以下几种：关联词：其根据句间关系可分为以下几种：1 条件关系：如果，只要：条件关系：如果，只要：if,on condition that,as long as,so long as 除非，如果不：除非

2、，如果不：unless 否则：否则：or else,otherwise w2 递进关系：另外，还有：递进关系：另外，还有：what is more,besides,also,moreover,in addition to,apart fromw 3 转折关系：转折关系：但是，然而，相反：但是，然而，相反：but,however,yet,instead,on the other hand,on the contrary,while.w4 因果关系：所以，因此：因果关系：所以，因此：so,thus,therefore,as a result 因为：因为：because,since,as,for 既

3、然：既然：now that 5 目的关系：为了：目的关系：为了：to,in order to/that,so as to/that,for the purpose of 6 让步关系让步关系:尽管尽管,即使即使:although,though,as,even though,even if,no matter wh-,wh-ever.w二二 连接词：常见的连接词包括以下几种连接词：常见的连接词包括以下几种 1 换句话说：换句话说：in other words,that is to say,that is.w2 实际上实际上in fact,actually,as a matter of fact

4、说实话说实话,说真话：说真话：to tell the truth w3总而言之，总的来说：总而言之，总的来说：on the whole,in short,all in all,in general,in a word w4 信不信由你：信不信由你：believe it or not w5 例如：例如：for example,such as,take.for example 6 在我看来在我看来,我认为我认为:I think,in my opinion,personally w7 序数序数:首先首先,其次其次,接着接着,最后最后;第一第一,第二第二,第三第三.最后最后.1)firstly,sec

5、ondly,then,thirdly.lastly.2)First,second,then,third.last.8 糟糕的是糟糕的是:whats worse,to make matters worse Read and “think”Yesterday,Tom did some cleaning.First he cleaned the blackboard and windows.Then he cleaned the floor.Also,he carefully cleaned the tables.So our classroom was very clean.Yesterday T

6、om did a thorough cleaning.Not only did he clean the blackboard and dirty windows,but also carefully wiped the table.Whats more,the floor was swept and mopped as well.As a result of his hard work,our classroom took on a new look.以以变化求生动变化求生动 Fill the blanks with good words 1.She is very _(漂亮漂亮)prett

7、ybeautifulcharming/attractiveHer beauty is2._ people come to visit the place of interest every summer.(很多很多)Large crowds of Thousands of Hundreds of thousands ofA great many/great number of beyond description A:Some people agree with me.B:Some people are for my opinion.C:Some people are in favor of

8、my opinion.1.一些人赞成我（的观点）一些人赞成我（的观点）。A:However,others disagree.B:On the other hand,others are against me/my idea.C:On the contrary,others hold a different opinion.2.然而另外一些人反对。然而另外一些人反对。3.建于秦朝的长城有着悠久的历史，建于秦朝的长城有着悠久的历史，并且中外闻名。并且中外闻名。A:The Great Wall was built in Qin dynasty.It has a long history and is

9、 well known all over the world.B:The Great Wall,which was built in Qin dynasty,has a long history and is famous at home and abroad.C:The Great Wall ,built in Qin dynasty,has a long history and is well known at home and abroad.4.中国国家足球队中国国家足球队2002年表现出色，今年表现出色，今年却出师不利。年却出师不利。A:The Chinese football tea

10、m did a perfect job in2002.But they have donebadly this year.B:The Chinese football team,which played so well in 2002,has done badly this year.good expressions advanced sentence structures Task of writing 以以审题审题求求切题切题以以提纲求周密求周密以以变化变化求生动求生动以以过渡过渡求条理求条理以以常用常用求保险求保险以以整洁整洁求印象求印象六六 以以 六六 求求 假设你是李华，最近一假设你

11、是李华，最近一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。是你所在班级讨论的情况。请给该报写一封信，反映讨请给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。论结果。反对迁出反对迁出1.游客多，游客多，交通阻塞交通阻塞2.郊区环境好郊区环境好赞成迁出赞成迁出1.建于建于1906年，中外闻名年，中外闻名2.搬迁易造成动物死亡搬迁易造成动物死亡注意注意：1.词数词数100左右，信的开头已为你左右，信的开头已为你 写好。写好。2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇：郊区参考词汇：郊区

12、 -suburb Dear editor,Recently,our class have had aheated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city._ Yours truly,Li Hua 反对迁出反对迁出1.游客多，游客多，交通阻塞交通阻塞2.郊区环境好郊区环境好赞成迁出赞成迁出1.建于建于1906年，中外闻名年，中外闻名2.搬迁易造成动物死亡搬迁易造成动物死亡注意注意：1.词数词数100左右，信的开头已为你左右，信的开头已为你 写好。写好。2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，可根据内

13、容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇：郊区参考词汇：郊区 -suburb 内内 容容 要要 点点3.3.部分同学反对迁出。部分同学反对迁出。4.4.建于建于19061906年，历史悠久，中外闻名年，历史悠久，中外闻名 ；搬迁易造成动物死亡。搬迁易造成动物死亡。1.1.部分同学赞成迁出。部分同学赞成迁出。2.2.游客多，交通阻塞游客多，交通阻塞 ；而且郊区环境好。；而且郊区环境好。5.5.合适的结尾。合适的结尾。Suggested expressions and structures1.Some of my classmates are in favor of They

14、say/believe/think.Whats more,2.However,Other students are against the idea,saying that.On the other hand,others hold a different opinion.They think/say Besides/Moreover/In addition 内内 容容 要要 点点3.3.部分同学反对迁出。部分同学反对迁出。4.4.建于建于19061906年，历史悠久，且中外闻名年，历史悠久，且中外闻名；搬迁易造成动物死亡。搬迁易造成动物死亡。1.1.部分同学赞成迁出。部分同学赞成迁出。2.2

15、.游客多，交通阻塞游客多，交通阻塞 ；而且郊区环境好。；而且郊区环境好。5.5.合适的结尾。合适的结尾。Dear editor,Recently,our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.Some of my classmates are in favor of the move.They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams.They a

16、lso say that once moved,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs.However,other students are against the idea,saying that the Beijing Zoo,built in 1906,has a history of 100 years,and is well-known at home and abroad.So it should remain where it is.Whats more,moving may cause the death of some animals.To move or not,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.Recite the articleAssignment:Write another article NMET2002