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1、 书面表达专题书面表达专题一、常见语法错误分析：一、常见语法错误分析：1.1.句子缺谓语句子缺谓语1)The building like a match box.1)The building like a match box.2)2)He told me that all my classmates sitting in He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom.the classroom.1)A worker of the farm lead us to the field.1)A worker of the far

2、m lead us to the field.2)All the students like books that was written by 2)All the students like books that was written by Lu Lu XunXun.2.2.主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误。主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误。3.3.时态错误时态错误 4.4.词性混用词性混用 1)When he came back,he found that his wife 1)When he came back,he fo

3、und that his wife has gone to bed.has gone to bed.2)What are you doing this time yesterday?2)What are you doing this time yesterday?1)She enjoys study English.1)She enjoys study English.2)If anyone against the plan,please let me 2)If anyone against the plan,please let me know.know.5.5.介词误用介词误用 6.6.冠

4、词误用冠词误用 1)In my surprise,he has got the first prize.1)In my surprise,he has got the first prize.2)He came here to attend the meeting by a new 2)He came here to attend the meeting by a new car.car.3)Dont read under the sun.3)Dont read under the sun.1)We elected Li 1)We elected Li HuaHua the monitor o

5、f the Class Five.the monitor of the Class Five.2)Once upon a time,there was an one-eyed lion.2)Once upon a time,there was an one-eyed lion.3)The history is actually a very interesting subject3)The history is actually a very interesting subject.7.7.名词的数混淆名词的数混淆 8.8.动词用法错误动词用法错误 1)It is rare to see su

6、ch a nice weather in 1)It is rare to see such a nice weather in Beijing.Beijing.2)There is always traffic jam.2)There is always traffic jam.1)Where are you come from?1)Where are you come from?2)When I arrived Hong Kong,my mother was there 2)When I arrived Hong Kong,my mother was there waiting for me

7、.waiting for me.3)He didnt notice the teacher to come into the 3)He didnt notice the teacher to come into the classroom.classroom.4)The accident was happened in 1999.4)The accident was happened in 1999.9.9.习惯用法错误习惯用法错误 1)The actor in this movie is very beautiful.1)The actor in this movie is very bea

8、utiful.2)I and My parents were working in the fields at 2)I and My parents were working in the fields at that time.that time.3)The reason is because he does not know what to 3)The reason is because he does not know what to do next.do next.二、怎样运用复杂结构：二、怎样运用复杂结构：1.1.改变时态改变时态The bell is ringing now.(一般

9、一般)2.2.改变语态改变语态People suggest that the conference be put off.(一般一般)There goes the bell.(There goes the bell.(高级高级)It is suggested that the conference be put off.It is suggested that the conference be put off.(高级高级)3.3.使用不定式使用不定式4.4.使用过去分词使用过去分词He is so kind that he can help me.(一般一般)He is so kind as

10、 to help me.He is so kind as to help me.(高级高级)She walked out of the room and many students followed her.(一般一般)Followed by many students,she.Followed by many students,she.(高级高级)Once it is seen,it can never be forgotten.(一般一般)Once seen,it can .Once seen,it can .(高级高级)5.5.使用使用v-ingv-ing形式形式When he arri

11、ves please give me an e-mail.(一般一般)If the weather permits,Ill come tomorrow.(一般一般)On his arriving/arrival,please give.On his arriving/arrival,please give.(高级高级)Weather permitting,Ill come tomorrow.Weather permitting,Ill come tomorrow.(高级高级)Now Zhang Zhuang primary School has three teachers.They teac

12、h 48 pupils.(一般一般)Now Zhang Now Zhang ZhuangZhuang Primary Primary ScholSchol has three has three teachers,teaching 48 pupils.teachers,teaching 48 pupils.(高级高级)It disappointed everybody that he didnt turn up.(一般一般)I happened to have met him.(一般一般)6.6.使用名词性从句使用名词性从句The fact that he didnt turn up disa

13、ppointed The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed everybody.everybody.(高级高级)It happened that I had met him.It happened that I had met him.(高级高级)To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.(一般一般)What surprised him is that the girl.What surprised him is that the girl.(高级高级)7.7.使用状语从句使用状语从句

14、I wont believe what he says.(一般一般)If you come back before six oclock,you can go out.(一般一般)The meal was very nice.We all enjoyed it very much.(一般一般)No matter what he says,I wont believe.No matter what he says,I wont believe.(高级高级)You can go out on condition that you come back You can go out on condit

15、ion that you come back before.before.(高级高级)The meal was so nice that we all.The meal was so nice that we all.(高级高级)8.8.使用定语从句使用定语从句The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.(一般一般)The girl whose composition was well written was The girl whose composition was well written was spoke

16、n highly of.spoken highly of.(高级高级)I studied Chinese,maths,English,physics,chemistry and computer at school.(一般一般)The subjects I studied at school included Chinese,The subjects I studied at school included Chinese,mathsmaths,English.,English.(高级高级)9.9.使用虚拟语气使用虚拟语气The ship didnt sink with all on boar

17、d because there were the efforts of the captain.(一般一般)I wasnt invited to the party,so I didnt attend it.(一般一般)If I had been invited to the party,I would have If I had been invited to the party,I would have attended it.attended it.(高级高级)But for the efforts of the captain,the ship would But for the ef

18、forts of the captain,the ship would have sunk with all on board.have sunk with all on board.(高级高级)10.10.使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.(一般一般)It was not until 1920 that regular radio.It was not until 1920 that regular radio.(高级高级)Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.Weak

19、 as I am,Ill make the effort.(高级高级)Though Im weak,I will make the effort.(一般一般)How glad we were to see the crops and.!How glad we were to see the crops and.!(高级高级)We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well.(一般一般)11.11.使用并列句使用并列句If you go through the gate,youll find the entrance t

20、o Bear Country.(一般一般)Go through the gate,and youll find.Go through the gate,and youll find.(高级高级)I got up late this morning,otherwise I could have I got up late this morning,otherwise I could have caught the early bus.caught the early bus.(高级高级)I got up late this morning.I didnt catch the early bus.

21、(一般一般)The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.(高级高级)When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.(一般一般)三、学会使用恰当的关联词：三、学会使用恰当的关联词：1.1.表示平行、对等或选择关系表示平行、对等或选择关系andand，bothand,as well as,together with,bothand,as well as,together with,neithernor,also,not onlyb

22、ut also,neithernor,also,not onlybut also,eitheror,as well.eitheror,as well.2.2.表示转折关系表示转折关系but,yet,however,nevertheless but,yet,however,nevertheless(然而然而),),in spite of,although,otherwise,while,after allin spite of,although,otherwise,while,after all.3.3.表示对比关系表示对比关系4.4.表示因果关系表示因果关系on the contrary,in

23、stead of,on one handon on the contrary,instead of,on one handon the other hand,just like,unlike,in the same the other hand,just like,unlike,in the same way,at the same timeway,at the same timeso,for,therefore,as a result(of),because,so,for,therefore,as a result(of),because,owing to,due to,thanks to,

24、on account owing to,due to,thanks to,on account(理由理由)of.of.5.5.表示时间、顺序关系表示时间、顺序关系6.6.表示递进、强调关系表示递进、强调关系shortly afterwards,first,second,then,next,shortly afterwards,first,second,then,next,finally,for one thing,for another,in the end,finally,for one thing,for another,in the end,eventuallyeventually(最后

25、最后,终于终于)besides,furthermore besides,furthermore(此外此外),),whats more,in whats more,in addition,moreover addition,moreover(而且而且),),worse still,to make worse still,to make matters worse,indeed,certainly,surely,above allmatters worse,indeed,certainly,surely,above all7.7.表示解释、说明关系表示解释、说明关系8.8.表示结论表示结论name

26、ly namely(也就是也就是),),actually,such as,for example,actually,such as,for example,for instance,that is to say,in other words,and so for instance,that is to say,in other words,and so on,to tell you the truth,according to thison,to tell you the truth,according to thisin short,in brief,in a word,in general

27、,as you know,in short,in brief,in a word,in general,as you know,as far as I know,on the whole,in conclusion,at last,as far as I know,on the whole,in conclusion,at last,finallyfinally1.a)Go to see the doctor at once.b)Your cold may get worse.2.a)Alice was the first to complete her paper.b)Alice made

28、quite a few mistakes in her paper.Go to see the doctor at once,or your cold may get worse.Alice was the first to complete her paper,but she made quite a few mistakes in it.Help3.a)We were about to start off last night.b)The phone in the living room began to ring.We were about to start off last night

29、 when the phone in the living room began to ring.4.a)Unfortunately,Johns car broke down on the way home.b)John had to stop a car for a lift.5).a)He has made great progress in his studies.b)All the teachers praise him.Unfortunately,Johns car broke down on the way home,so he had to stop a car for a li

30、ft.He has made He has made such such great progress in his great progress in his studies studies thatthat all the teachers praise him all the teachers praise him.Help6.a)Some people waste food.b)Other people havent enough food.Some people waste food,while others havent enough food.7.a)Its too late t

31、o go to the cinema now.b)I have an important meeting toattend after lunch.Its too late to go the cinema now.Besides,I have an important meeting to attend after lunch.1.阅读下面范文（选自阅读下面范文（选自1994年英语高考全国卷年英语高考全国卷）May I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.The Student Union is going to

32、 hold a party on Saturday evening,August15,to welcome our friends from the United States.The party will be held in the roof garden of the Main Building.It will begin at 7:30 pm.There will be music,dancing,singing,games and exchange of gifts.Will everybody please bring along a small gift for this pur

33、pose?Remember to wrap it up,sign your name and write a few words of good wishes.Dont forget:7:30,Saturday evening,roof garden,Main Building.Theres sure to be a lot of fun.Everybody is welcome.Back2、根据下列内容，模仿范文，写一则书面通、根据下列内容，模仿范文，写一则书面通知，词数为知，词数为80100。1）事宜：关于计算机的用途以及如何利用）事宜：关于计算机的用途以及如何利用Internet网络进行

34、学习的讲座网络进行学习的讲座2）讲座人）讲座人:北京大学计算机系王书涵教授北京大学计算机系王书涵教授3）时间：）时间：12月月22日，星期六，下午日，星期六，下午2:004）地点：图书楼）地点：图书楼204室室5）参加对象：电脑爱好者）参加对象：电脑爱好者6）要求：参加者准备一些自己在学习过程中）要求：参加者准备一些自己在学习过程中遇到的问题遇到的问题7）组织者：校学生会）组织者：校学生会The lecture is about the use of computer.The lecture is about how to learn through the Internet.The lect

35、urer is Professor Wang Shuhan,from the Computer Department of Zhejiang University.The lecture begins at 2:00 pm,Saturday,on the twenty-second of December.The lecture will be held in Room 204 of the Library Building.Any computer-lover is welcome.Please prepare some questions in learning through the I

36、nternet.To help students learn more about computers,we have invited Professor Wang Shuhan from the Computer Department of Beijing University to give us a lecture on Saturday,December 22.Professor Wang will talk about the use of computer and how to learn through the Internet.The lecture begins at 2:0

37、0 pm in Room 204 of the Library Building.Any computer-lover is welcome to attend the lecture.Please bring your questions in computer learning.Professor Wang will leave you time for questions.Dont forget to be on time.HomeworkHomeworkWrite the passage on page 32 in your exercise book4.4.没有避开难点而错误使用不准

38、确的结构没有避开难点而错误使用不准确的结构 2)家家有存款、余粮。家家有存款、余粮。1)The main subjects I studied at school including The main subjects I studied at school including Chinese,Chinese,mathsmaths,English,physics,chemistry and,English,physics,chemistry and puter.Every family has more grain and money than they Every family has more grain and money than they can use.can use.3)看完了这本书看完了这本书,我写了一些读后感。我写了一些读后感。I wrote something after reading this book.I wrote something after reading this book.