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1、四级考试作文写作概要一、评分原则1、作文是否体现主题思想。2、组织结构是否合理。3、语法文字是否有重大错误。4、卷面布局是否整洁。启示重视文章的内容与语言尽量避免语法错误语言要有闪光点二、评分标准命题作文：满分15分14分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误。11分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量的语言错误。8分：基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字上连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量严重错误。5分：基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，文字连贯性差，有较严重的语言错误。2分：条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多为严重错误。便条：满分为10分作文格式：格式需

2、正确。内容：内容完整，不能遗漏。语言：语言要简单明嘹，用词平易。语言得体性：语言风格还应与情景一致。行文中都应体现态度诚恳礼貌。便条种类1、祝贺2、慰问/安慰3、邀请4、接受/拒绝邀请5、致歉6、询问/建议7、留言8、告示/广告1.邀请便条：发出邀请（告知、解释、询问、确认p62）发出邀请aApril20,2008DearFiona,Iamgoingtoholdadinnerpartywithseveralotherfriendsofours.ThepartywillbeheldinRoom6ofLijingHotelat5:00p.m.Today,Isincerely hopeyoucana

3、ttendandwewillhaveaveryhappytimetogether.Pleaseletmeknowwhetheryoucanmakeit.Yours,Amelia发出邀请bApril20,2008DearFiona,Hereisapieceofgoodnewsforyou.The*willgiveaperformanceinthe*tomorrowevening.Iamsurethatyouwillbehappytowatchit.Theperformancewillbeginatsevenoclocksharp.Iwillwaitforyouatthetheaterentran

4、ce.Pleaseletmeknowwhetheryoucanmakeitatyourearliestconvenience.Yourssincerely,Amy发出邀请cApril20,2008DearProfessorZhou,IamAmeliafromclass052;Ineedyoutogivemesomesuggestiononmyproject.If it doesnt trouble you too much,shallwehaveameetatyourofficetomorrow?Timeisuptoyou.Respectful yours,Amelia发出邀请d（通知）Apr

5、il20,2008Dear girls and boys in Class 0403,This Saturday evening,from 7 p.m.to 9 p.m.,at Singeing dining hall,there will be a ball held by Class 0301.We warmly invite you to take part in it.There you can enjoy yourselves with dance,music and various games.And well have a chance of communication,whic

6、h will enhance the friendship between us.Come and enjoy ourselves together.Yours,MikeMonitor of Class 0301接受邀请(致谢、取悦、期待、希望）April20,2008Dear Amelia,Its so kind of you to invite me to the dinner party,I would like to come.I will go to the place right after I finish my work at about 5 p.m.this evening.

7、(如果是如果是办在家里：办在家里：I shall be very happy to call at your house right after I finish my work at 6:30 this evening.)Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours,Fiona拒绝邀请（致谢、取悦、抱歉、解释、留机会、祝福）April20,2008DearAmelia，Its so kind of you to invite me to the

8、dinner party,I would like to but I have a meeting to attend this evening,pleasegivemybestregardstothemallandI hope my absence will not cause you any serious inconvenience,have fun.Yours,Amelia2请假条April 20,2008Dear Ms.Jiang,I am terribly sorry that I shall be unable to attend this morning two periods

9、 of English Class（Im terribly sorry to apply for ten days leave from the Aug.23rd to Sep.3rd）due to a bad cold and high fever.I will show you the certificate from the doctor to support my application.I will go back to school as soon as I recover.（I promise I will do my best to catch the missed lesso

10、ns on after I come back.）Wish for your allowance.Yours respectfully,Amelia3请求便条a讲清事情的因由（为什么请求）b请求行为c请求实现方式d致谢套句：请求帮助：Wouldyoudomeafavor?Wouldyoubesokindasto?/CouldItroubleyoutosendthisbookforme?/Ifitisnottootroublesome,couldyou?/Ihopethisrequestwillnottroubleyoutoomuch.April 20，2008Dear Professor Hu

11、,I am very happy to have the chance to listen to your lecture on“American Literature”.But it is a pity that I was late that day due to an accident on my way to the lecture and failed to get the handout.Your lecture is really instructive for my English study,so I wonder if you could kindly e-mail the

12、 handout to the address:.Heartfelt thanks.Respectfully yours,Amelia4抱怨投诉便条(关键词complain,dissatisfaction)a抱怨投诉行为b投诉内容具体描述c要求弥补纠正赔偿d抱怨投诉者对弥补纠正赔偿等的敦促或威胁套句：行为描述ImwritingtobringyourattentiontotheproblemsIhavehadwith.Herestheproblem解决方式的要求：Itwouldbeverykind(considerate)ofyoutoaddressthisproblemsoon./takest

13、epstorectifythissituationsoon./turnitdownalittle?敦促或威胁:Frankly,Ireallycantputupwiththesituationanymore.Youmustrectifythesituation,orIwilltakeittothecourt./Ifyoucantgivemeasatisfactoryanswer,IwillcomplainittotheConsumerAssociation.5.祝贺（获悉、祝贺、取悦、祝愿、期望）强调对方的成就语言要真挚热情例子：Directions:youareJean.Youhavegota

14、letterfromyourfriendEric,whichtellsyouhismarriagelately.Writeanotetoexpressyourheartfeltcongratulationsandwishagoodfuturetothenewcouple.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.February14DearEric,Ihavejustreceivedyourlettertellingmeofyourrecentmarriage.Thishappyeventinyour

15、lifepromptsmetoofferyoumyheartycongratulationsandgoodwishes.Youarelucky!Isincerelywishthatpeace,healthandhappinessmayattendbothyouandyourwifeforever.Allinall,Ioffermybestwishestoyou.Jean慰问(获悉，慰问，鼓励，建议，期望，祝福）Directions:YounameisMary.YourfriendJacobsonwasnotdoingwellwithhisbusinessinrecentdays.Writean

16、otetoofferyoursympathyandcomforthim.DearJacobson,Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavenotbeensuccessfulinyourrecentbusiness.AlthoughIamsendingyoumysympathy,Ifeelyououghtnottobeundulydistressedattheresult.Rightnow,youdbetterrelaxandhaveagoodrest.Youarealwaysexcellent.Iamconfidentthatthesituationwillbebettersoon.

17、Goodluck!Mary致歉（致歉，解释，补救，请求原谅，再度致歉，期待回复）Directions:youareKatherine.YouhavemadeameetingwithyourbusinesspartnerSamonMar.6.Unfortunately,youhavetobeoutoftownthatday.Soyouwanttopostponethedatetothesametimetwodayslater.Writeanotetotellhimthedelayandmakeanapology.DearSam,IamsorrytosaythatIshallbeoutoftown

18、onbusinessonMar.6,soIamafraidIwillhavetopostponeourmeetingtoFriday,Mar.8atthesamehour.Ihopethatyoucanstillcome,andIamregretfulfortheinconveniencethatthispostponementbringstoyou.PleasetellmeifyoucancomeonFriday.Katherine询问/回复（寒暄，询问事件，告知方式，感激，期盼）Directions:YournameisDavid.Youhaveattendedaconferenceont

19、hepollutionissue.Duringtheconference,youheardSamanthasspeechandgotinterestedinheropinions.Writeanotetoaskforthecopyofherspeech.DearSamantha,Congratulationsonyourexcellentspeechattheconference.Iamdeeplyimpressedbyyouruniqueopinionsaboutthepollutionissue.Iwouldbegratefulisyoudomeafavortosendacopyofyou

20、rspeechtome.Thankyouverymuchforyourkindness.Hopetohearfromyousoon.David留言（留言原因，留言目的，详细解释，期待答复）Directions:YouareWangMing.Today,youwenttovisitLiHua,afriendofyours.YouheardanAmericanprofessorwouldgiveaspeechinyourschoolthisSunday,soyouweregoingtoaskLiHuaifhewasinterestedinit.However,hewasnotathomeatpre

21、sent.Leavehimanoteforthewholething.DearLiHua，JustnowIcametoyourhouse,whileyouwereout.IwanttotellyouanimportantmatterthatanAmericanprofessorwillgiveaspeechinourschoolthisSunday.Ifyouwouldliketolistentothespeech,wecouldgotogether.Pleasecontactmeassoonaspossible.WangMing告示/广告（告知，解释，宣传，资格，希望）Directions:

22、Youareamemberoftheschooldramagroup.ThisSaturdayevening,yourdramagroupwouldgiveaperformanceintheschooltheater.Writeanotetotellallthosepeopletocomeiftheywouldliketo.Youshouldtellthemallthedetailedinformationabouttheperformance.Dearschoolmates,TherewillbeaperformanceofourdramagrouponSaturdayevening,Jun

23、e7,atsevenintheschooltheater.Wehavepreparedforthreemonthsfortheexcellentperformance.Everyschoolmatewhoisinterestedintheperformanceiswelcomed.Weareexpectingyourattendance.TheSchoolDramaGroup 致不熟悉的人，宜用较庄重的套语，如致不熟悉的人，宜用较庄重的套语，如Yours sincerely，Sincerely yours，或，或Sincerely等。等。对上级、长者，除了可用上述较庄重的套语，对上级、长者，除

24、了可用上述较庄重的套语，也可用也可用Yours respectfully或或Respectful yours。对一般朋友或熟人可用中提到的较庄重的套语语，也可用Yours等等较为随便的套语。对密友则采用较随便的套语为宜。例如，Yours，Love，With love，Best wishes，Best regards等等。对亲属可用下列任何一种：Love，With love，All my love，Yours affectionately，Affectionately yours，Lovingly yours，Yours lovingly，Your loving son(Dad?)；语法错误便条

25、中的语法错误有多种，常见的有冠词、词性、动词的时与体、句子结构等错误。(1)冠词错误冠词错误，如Imanxioustomakea(应为an)appointmentwithyou(2)词性错误词性错误，如Imustmakeanapologize(正确为apology)forfailingtoturnupfortheappointment(3)动词的时与体等方面的错误，动词的时与体等方面的错误，例如：aIfyouwillbefreetomorrow,weshallmeetagain(应把willbe改为are)bIamsorrytofailtoturnupfortheappointmentyest

26、erday(正确为tohavefailed而不是tofail，因事情已发生)(4)句子结构错误句子结构错误，例如：ImverysorryIdidntturnupfortheappointmentwithyouBecausemymotherwasseriouslyillyesterdayandIhadtotakehertoseethedoctor(应改为ImverysorryIdidntturnupfortheappointmentwithyouyesterdaybecausemymotherwasseriouslyillandIhadtotakehertoseethedoctor)提醒：考试时

27、注意在看到题目要求后不要忙于动笔。虽说作考试时注意在看到题目要求后不要忙于动笔。虽说作文的字数充其量在一百多个单词左右，但是最好还是要在文的字数充其量在一百多个单词左右，但是最好还是要在脑子里理清思路，打到腹稿。在仔细审题以后，认真列个脑子里理清思路，打到腹稿。在仔细审题以后，认真列个提纲，这样更有利于思路清晰。写作时，注意表达清楚以提纲，这样更有利于思路清晰。写作时，注意表达清楚以下几个方面。首先交代清楚写信目的下几个方面。首先交代清楚写信目的;其次为了让阅卷者其次为了让阅卷者对你的文章结构及表意一目了然，注意关联词或衔接词的对你的文章结构及表意一目了然，注意关联词或衔接词的运用运用;接下来

28、，应该对个人的观点进行阐述接下来，应该对个人的观点进行阐述(在写作有此必在写作有此必要的时候要的时候)。最后，行文间要注意简化描述。用简短的语句代替冗最后，行文间要注意简化描述。用简短的语句代替冗长的语句。在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗长的语句。在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节。漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节。作文练习：Directions:YourfriendMaryinterestsinmusicalperformanceverymuch.Occasionally,youhavegottwoadmissioncardstotheItalian

29、NationalBandsperformanceintheBeijingGrandTheater.Writeanotetoinvitehertotheperformance.Tellhertheexacttime,placeandotherdetails.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.Directions:Yourfriends.Mr.andMrs.Kramer,willholdacocktailwinepartyonApril18th.Theyhavesentyoutheinvitati

30、on.Youarehappytojointhem.Writinganotetoaccepttheirinvitationandexpressyourappreciationtothem.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.Directions:YouareDr.Smith.Severaldaysago,yourfriend,professorWang,onbehalfofhisinstitution,invitedyoutogiveaspeechinhisdepartmentonDecember

31、20thAlthoughyouwouldliketoacceptit,youarenotfeelingwellrecently.Writeanotetorejecttheirinvitation.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.命题作文35分钟（P12）审题：1-2分钟写提纲，组织素材，细节和关键词：4-5分钟；起草：20-23分钟；修改定稿：4-5分钟。撰写：第一段提出的论点要简洁明了，开门见山；第二段论据要能充分说明论点，论证条理清楚；第三段结论要严谨完整，切忌草率。检查和修改：拼写正确

32、。搭配正确。语法正确。(P20)1，如今，人们普遍在讨论是否应该在网上交友。Thereismuchdiscussiontodayaboutwhethertomakefriendsontheinternet.2.对于大学生或高中生打工这一现象，校园里存在着广泛的争论。Thereisageneraldebateonthecampustodayoverthephenomenonofcollegeorhighschoolstudentsdoingapart-timejob.3.我们应该存钱还是花明天的钱呢？人们的观点各不相同。一些人认为存钱是个好习惯，另一些人觉得花明天的钱能够提高生活质量。Shoul

33、dwesavemoneyorspendtomorrowsmoney?Opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.Someregardsavingmoneyasagoodhabit.Othersbelievethatspendingtomorrowsmoneycanimproveourlivingquality.4.我同意后者，有如下理由：Formypart,Iagreewiththelatteropinionforthefollowingreasons:In my opinion/From my perspective/I would prefer/As to this is

34、sue/I think/As for me5.就我而言，我同意教育不应该随着毕业而结束的观点，有以下原因：Asforme,Iminfavoroftheopinionthateducationisnotcompletewithgraduation,forthefollowingreasons:6.尽管许多人认为随着经济的高速发展，骑自行车的人数会减少，自行车可能会消失，然而我却不这样认为。这几年我收集的一些信息让我相信自行车仍然会继续在现代社会中发挥极其重要的作用。Althoughmanypeopleclaimthat,alongwiththerapidlyeconomicdevelopment

35、,thenumberofpeoplewhousebicycleisdecreasingandbicycleisboundtodieout,Ithinkquitedifferently.TheinformationIvecollectedovertherecentyearsleadsmetobelievethatbicyclewillcontinuetoplayextremelyimportantrolesinmodernsociety.AlthoughthepopularbeliefisButIthinkquitedifferently./Noopinionismoredangeroustha

36、n/ButIcantacceptthat7.最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。Thelatestsurveysshowthatquiteafewchildrenhaveunpleasantassociationswithhomework.(Theeisatypicalexample/Recentstudiesindicate/Although,theavailableinformationshows)8.最近的研究显示，大学生能够寻求学业和兼职之间的平衡。Recentstudiesindicatethatcollegestudentscanmakeabalancebetweena

37、cademicstudyandpart-timejob.9.通过以上讨论，我完全相信，随着现代社会的进步，悠闲地生活方式正在消失并不是件坏事。Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,Iamfullyconvincedthattheleisurelife-styleisundergoingadeclinewiththeprogressofmodernsociety,anditisnotnecessarilyabadthing.(Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusion/Insummary,itisimportan

38、ttoknowthat/Theevidenceuponallsidespointsto.)亮点词句1.对年轻人的生活可能产生不好的影响。Somenegativeinfluencethismayexertonyoungpeopleslife.2.各行各业Everywalkoflife.3.各种文化背景。Diversifiedculturalbackground.4.即使他们住在遥远的村庄，或大洋彼岸。Evenistheyliveinaremotevillageorontheothersideoftheocean.5.无拘无束地交流我们的想法。feelfreetogetacrossourideas

39、tothem.6.警惕潜在的风险。Befullyawareofthepotentialrisk.7.保护自己免受欺骗。Protectourselvesfrombeingcheated.8.现代生活的主要特征。Predominantfeatureofmodernlife.9.它给我们的生活带来了很多的便利，以至于有些人会想电话是否会取代书信呢。Itprovidesuswithsomuchconvenienceandpleasurethatsomepeoplearewonderingifphoneswillkillletterwritingsomeday.10.不如晚年Gointotheirlat

40、erstageoflife.11.众所周知。Itisgenerallyacknowledgedthat12.未雨绸缪FortherainydayEg.SavingfortherainydayisalongandfinetraditionofChinesenationality.13.我支持后面这种观点Imsupportiveofthelatterpoint.14.考虑到手机和信件的优缺点，我们很自然地得出结论，Judgingfromtheprosandconsofphonesandletters,wemaysafelyarriveattheconclusionthat.15.随着科技的发展，电

41、脑已经不仅应用于办公室中而且应用于许多家庭中。Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,computershavebeenfoundawideapplicationnotonlyinoffices,butalsoinmanyfamilies.16.考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效地措施。Inviewoftheseriousnessofthisproblem,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.17.应该采取适当的措施限制外国游客的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅

42、游也得不利影响。Propermeasuresmustbetakentolimitthenumberofforeigntouristsandthegreateffortsshouldbemadetoprotectlocalenvironmentandhistoryfromtheharmfuleffectsofinternationaltourism.18.人民生活状况的改善原因有两点。首先，我们一直在贯彻执行改革开放政策。其次，国民经济正在迅速发展。Therearetworeasonsfortheimprovementinpeopleslivingconditions.Inthefirstpla

43、ce,wehavebeencarryingoutthereformandopening-uppolicy.Secondly,therehasbeenarapidexpansionofournationaleconomy.19.而且，学生生活在自己家中，有舒适的生活，并有更多机会和父母交流，这对他们个性的培养是有利的。Furthermore,studentslivingintheirownhomewouldhaveaccesstoacomfortablelifeandhavemoreopportunitiestocommunicatewiththeirparents,whichhavebenef

44、icialimpactondevelopmentoftheircharacter.20.我们可以使用替代汽油作为解决之道。Wemayusesubstitutioninsteadofpetrolasasolutiontotheproblem.21.最后，我们既不需要限制车辆的使用，也不需要减少车辆的数量。Asaresult,wewillnothavetoimposerestrictionsontheuseofvehicles.Norwillweneedtotrimdownthenumber.22.现今，大学生心理健康成为一个普遍关注的问题。Nowadays,thementalhealthofco

45、llegestudentshasarousedmoreandmoreattentionofthewholesociety.hasrecentlybecomeaheatedtopic.Nowadays,itisaheateddiscussedtopicthatMoreandmorepeoplepayattentiontoCurrentlyhasbecomeamatterofconcernMoreandmorepeoplebegintorealizetheimportanceof23.一个人必须衡量有点和缺点两个方面来决定哪种方法好。Todecidewhichthebestwayis,onehas

46、toweightheadvantagesanddisadvantagesonbothsides.24.Shewassympathetic,tolerant,andpeoplerespectedher.(p86)Shewassympathetic,tolerant,andrespectedbypeople.（improved）25.ThePrimeMinistersteppedofftheplane.Journalistsimmediatelysurroundedher.ThePrimeMinistersteppedofftheplane.Shewasimmediatelysurroundedb

47、yjournalists(improved)26.Wehaveanoldmusicalinstrument.Peoplecallitaclavichord.SomeonemadeitinGermanyin1681.Wehaveanoldmusicalinstrument.Itiscalledclavichord.ItwasmadeinGermanyin1681.(improved)27.Tocooperatewithotherswell,oneneedstoknowsomethingaboutcooperation.Tocooperatewithotherswell,oneshouldbeto

48、lerant,considerateandshouldhaveasenseofteamwork.(improved)28.Everygraduatehastheequalchance.Everygraduatehastheequalchancetogetasatisfactoryjobinjob-hunting.(improved)29.Ienjoysportsverymuch.Participatinginsportsactivitiesoccupiesmostofmysparetimeintheuniversity.(improved)30.Examinationisimportantto

49、gettoknowthestudents.Testingstudentsbyexaminationshasalwaysbeenregardedasthereliablemethodtomeasurestudentslevel.(improved)31.TherewasastrongearthquakeinWenchuanin2008.Aterribleearthquakehit/struckWenchuanin2008.(improved)32.a).Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining.b).Hefeltveryuneasy.1).Theyou

50、ngpilotonhisfirstoverseastrainingfeltveryuneasy.2).Theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasyduringhisfirstoverseastraining.3).Theyoungpilotsfirstoverseastrainingmadehimfeelveryuneasy.4).Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training.5).Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feelingve