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1、专题01善行义举+爱心感悟（人与社会）新高考高一读后续写热点话题写作技巧【读后续写】1.（河北省邢台市2022-2023学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I worked day and night as a taxi driver, and I always dreamed of owning my own taxi company. One night, I took an order at 11:00 pm. When I arrived at the building, it was dark except for

2、 a single light in a ground floor window. In this situation, many drivers would just wait for a while and then left.But I had seen too many people who depended on taxis as their means of transportation. I thought this passenger might be someone who needed my help. So I walked into the building and k

3、nocked at the door.“Just a minute J answered an elderly voice. I could hear something being pulled across the floor. After a long time, the door opened. A small woman in her 70s stood before me. She was wearing a traditional dress and an old hat, like somebody out of a movie in the 1940s. By her sid

4、e was a small suitcase. The apartment looked as if no one had lived in it for years. All the furniture was covered with sheets. I found nobody else. In the corner was a cardboard box filled with photos.I helped take her suitcase out to the taxi, and then returned to help the elderly woman. She seeme

5、d a little weak and took my arm. We walked slowly towards the taxi. The elderly woman kept thanking me for my kindness. I told her, Its nothing. I just ti*y to treat my passengers the way I want my mother to be treated.She said I was the best man she had ever seen in the world. And she gave me an ad

6、dress, and then asked, Could you drive me to the hospital? I answered quickly, “OK!” She told me that she was ill and needed to stay in hospital for several days, but her sons were in other provinces and couldnt get home in time. I listened to what she said carefully and kept comforting her.When we

7、got to the hospital, I went to the emergency room with her. After half an hour, she was admitted into the hospital room. At midnight, I rushed home and completely forgot the taxi fare.行为类意识至U ： realize/be conscious of/ be aware of仔细看：looking carefully at /observing主动要求：offered to do/volunteered to d

8、o情绪类尖叫：shouted /screamed让她的一天有美好的结局：saved her day/made her day【点睛】高分句型 lMinutes later, Frank stood up, looking carefully at something held between his thumb and forefinger.（运用了现在分词作状语和过去分词短语作后置定语）高分句型2We talked while enjoying the coffee and dessert.（运用了 while引导的时间状语从句的省略句） 高分句型 3 That experience rea

9、ffirmed that an act of kindness, especially coupled with perseverance, is wonderful.（运用了 that引导的同位语从句）5.（山东省日照市2022-2023学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Adam, 8, and Peter, 10, played at the seaside with their mom every day. Every single day, they would come across an old man who

10、 would sit quietly on a chair, watching the waves.One day, the brothers approached him. For some reason, the old man who always avoided people started a long conversation with the two boys and introduced himself as Walter Bridgeton. After a while, Peter finally asked the question they had been longi

11、ng to ask: Sir, why do you sit out here every day?”Well, I have been waiting here for my brother, James, for 10 years. We were in the army together and then were sent to different countries. This happened a long time ago. When we last saw each other, we promised to meet right here, where we used to

12、walk with our motherthe old man explained.“How do you know hes still coming? Adam asked.“Thats the thing. I dont know. They gave me his army dog tags（军籍身份牌），but they never found him. He is still missing J he said. The old man patted the boys heads and said, Look after your brother, boys.The boys enj

13、oyed his company ever since that day, and they were also surprised to know they lived near each other. Deeply moved by Walters story, the brothers decided to use social media to spread it, hoping to find hisbrother. One day, they went to the beach to tell him about what they did, but didnt find him

14、at his usual spot.Something must have happened. Lefs go to his house now,“ Peter said.注意：L续写词数应为100左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。They knocked at the door when they got there.【答案】They knocked at the door when they got there. After a few seconds, Walter opened the door. Behind him stood a man who looked exact

15、ly like him. The two boys were taken by surprise at the sight of the man. “Its them! Those two boys posted your photo and address on the Internet!the man shouted. Excitedly, Walter stepped forward and hugged the boys. Thank you for finding my brother after fbrty-fbur long years!” he said. Looking at

16、 these two boys, memories of their past came flooding back to him. With a smile on his face, Walter patted their shoulders, saying, Take good care of each other, boys. Brotherly love is the greatest strength in the world that can help you through any hard times.”【导语】这是一篇记叙文。本文以人物生活细节展开，讲述了年幼的亚当和彼得兄弟

17、两人在海边玩耍时， 遇到一个十年如一日在这里等候失散多年兄弟的人，他叫Walter。逐渐熟识后，兄弟二人通过社交媒体，最 终帮助Walter寻找到自己的兄弟的感人故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“他们到了那里，然后敲门。”可知，第一段可描写亚当和彼得兄弟二人发现沃特尔并没 有像往常一般去海边，决定去他家中探明原因。2 .续写线索：登门到访亲人团聚感谢.词汇激活 行为类 .看至U ： at the sight of/upon seeing.（回忆）浮现：flood back to/flash back to,拍打：pat/tap 情绪类.惊讶：be taken by surprise

18、/be taken aback .激动地；动情地：excitedly/emotionally【点睛】高分句型 1. Behind him stood a man who looked exactly like him.（地点状语+stood+主语的完全倒装句型） 高分句型 2. Looking at these two boys, memories of their past came flooding back to him.（由现在分词短语作 状语）高分句型 3. Brotherly love is the greatest strength in the world that can h

19、elp you through any hard times.（由 that 引导的定语从句）6.（湖南省湖南师范大学附属中学2022-2023学年高一下学期入学考试英语试题） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。There is a nine-year-old kid sitting at his desk and all of a sudden, a pool of water forms between his feet and the front of his pants are wet.He thinks his heart is beating

20、 fastest because he cannot possibly imagine how this has happened. Its never happened before, and he knows that when the boys find out he will never hear the end of it. When the girls find out, they,ll never speak to him again as long as he lives. The boy believes his heart is going to stop; he puts

21、 his head down and says this prayer （祷告）,“Dear God, this is an emergency! I need help now! Five minutes from now Im dead meat. He looks up from his prayer and here comes the teacher with a look in her eyes that says he has been discovered.As the teacher is walking toward him, a classmate named Susie

22、 is carrying a goldfish bowl that is filled with water. Susie trips in front of the teacher and unbelievably pours the bowl of water in the boys lap.The boy pretends to be angry, but all the while is saying to himself, Thank you, Lord! Thank you, Lord!”Now all of a sudden, instead of being the objec

23、t of being laughed at, the boy is the object of sympathy. The teacher rushes him downstairs and gives him gym shorts to put on while his pants dry out. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。All the other children come up and are on their hands and knees cleaning up around his desk.Finally, at the e

24、nd of the day, the boy and Susie head for the bus stop.【答案】 All the other children come up and are on their hands and knees cleaning up around his desk. Sympathy is wonderful, and life is like a roller coaster. It has ups and downs. The downs“ that should have been his have been transferred to someo

25、ne else - Susie. She tries to help, but she is now the focus of being laughed at and is ignored despite the fact that she is apologizing all the time. Some unfriendly boys even tell her to get out. Youve done enough, you stupid,“ they say rudely.Finally, at the end of the day, the boy and Susie head

26、 for the bus stop. As they are waiting for the bus, the boy walks over to Susie and looks at her into her eyes. I just cant thank you enough, he says in a very low voice. The girl makes no answer with a forgiven smile on her face. Then the boy whispers, You did that on purpose, didnt you?” This time

27、 J Susie whispers back, “I wet my pants once too. The boy then knows that she remembers how she felt in that condition and she just understands him as if she were in it and tries to help as much as possible.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个九岁的男孩尿了裤子，正当他担心被同学们嘲笑时，老师向 他走来，这时候一位名叫苏西的同学正端着一个装满水的金鱼缸，她跳到老师面前，难以置信地将一碗水

28、 倒在男孩的腿上，避免了他的尴尬。突然间，这个男孩不再是被嘲笑的对象，而是被同情的对象。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“所有其他的孩子都走了过来，手脚并用，围着他的桌子打扫。”可知，第一段可描写其 他孩子过来帮忙打扫，对男孩表示同情、对女孩嘲讽的过程。由第二段首句内容“最后，在一天结束的时候，男孩和苏西向公共汽车站走去。”可知，第二段可描写男孩 和苏西之间的交流。2 .续写线索：其他孩子同情男孩帮忙打扫嘲讽苏西车站交流男孩表示感谢苏西道出 实情感悟.词汇激活 行为类转移：transfer/shift不理睬：ignore/neglect回答：answer/reply 情绪类不友好的：un

29、friendly/ unamiable感谢：thank/feel grateful【点睛】高分句型 1 She tries to help, but she is now the focus of being laughed at and is ignored despite the fact that she is apologizing all the time.（运用了动词名词作宾语和that引导的同位语从句）高分句型 2 As they are waiting for the bus, the boy walks over to Susie and looks at her into

30、her eyes.（运用 了 as 引导的时间状语从句）高分句型 3 The boy then knows that she remembers how she felt in that condition and she just understands him as if she were in it and tries to help as much as possible.（运用 了 that 和 how 引导的宾语从句及虚拟语气）7.（辽宁省本溪市第一中学2022-2023学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的

31、词数应为150 左右。I was in my home office on a boring Sunday in May 2020 when I looked out of the window and saw my dads car parked in my driveway. I had thought I mistook another person for my dad. However, when I looked at the man carefully again, I found that he was indeed my dad. He was walking from th

32、e front door to his car and was just about to drive away. Why would he drive all the way to my house, only to turn around and leave? Had the doorbell stopped working? Was something wrong?I raced downstairs, opened the door, and cried out, Dad! just before he made it out of the driveway. He looked up

33、 in surprise, and stopped the car. What are you doing?” I asked.My dad lived one hour away. I hadnt seen him in person since COVID- 19 was declared a pandemic （流彳亍病） two months earlier. We were all following the health guidelines of self-isolation （自我B的离）and wouldnt leave the house unless it was abs

34、olutely necessary, so it was strange that Dad would just show up. My dad smiled and pointed at something beside the door, where I could see what looked like a plant wrapped up in wrapping paper.“Open it J he said.I opened it and found a bright yellow begonia （秋海棠）plant. It came to me that it was Mot

35、hers Day, and I had seen many women posting pictures on social media of the lovely flowers they had received from kids and husbands. Waving his hand, Dad drove off.Later that day, T made a phone call to thank him, letting him know how touched I was to know that he had made a two-hour round trip just

36、 to leave a begonia on my doorstep. His act of love really brightened my day.Im sad that I couldnt hug you. Dad, I love you J I said.“Me, too J he replied with a big smile.We got talking about the pandemic and how difficult it was to go so long without hugs and kisses from family. That was when my d

37、ad let me in on his little secret.Paragraph 1 ： Tt turned out that he did several acts of kindness in a couple of weeks.Paragraph 2： After listening to Dads story, I was inspired and determined to learn from him.【答案】Paragraph 1：It turned out that he did several acts of kindness in a couple of weeks.

38、 My dad ordered an ice cream and another small gift for his friend who was having a difficult day and called him to talk about it. He also sent some candies and toys to the families with kids secretly. He thought that doing something kind was a good way to deal with social isolation. He just wanted

39、to make a difference to people but didnt want his name to be known. It made him so happy to see the smiles on peoples faces.Paragraph 2：After listening to Dads story, I was inspired and determined to learn from him. I went online and ordered some supplies to make gift bags. Over the next several day

40、s, I secretly dropped off gift bags on the doorstep of people who were struggling or going out of their way to help others. Sometimes, if they happened to be connected with me through social media, I would see posts about how those surprises had made their day. My dad was right: It felt amazing.【导语】

41、本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了新冠疫情期间，作者在一个无聊的周日向窗外看去，发现自己的 爸爸把车停在自己的车道上正准备离开，作者跑下楼去问爸爸来做什么，原来爸爸开了一个多小时的车程 是为了给作者送一颗秋海棠，因为那天是母亲节，爸爸的举动让作者很感动，晚些时候作者给爸爸打电话 聊到疫情期间，没有家人的拥抱和亲吻是多么困难，于是爸爸告诉作者几个小秘密。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“事实证明，他在几周内做了几件善事。”可知，第一段可描写作者爸爸讲述自己在疫情 期间做了什么样的善事来应对社会孤立，给人们带来了笑容。由第二段首句内容“听了爸爸的故事后，我深受鼓舞，决心向他学习。”可知，第二段可描

42、写作者向爸爸学 习，做了一些礼物送给他人，并且感觉非常棒。2 .续写线索：爸爸送礼物给他人给别人带来改变别人的笑容让爸爸感到开心我向爸爸学习 送礼物给他人感觉很棒.词汇激活 行为类 .订购：order / buy / purchase.处理：deal with /manage/handle .联系：be connected with /get in touch with/contact 情绪类.善 良的：kind / kindhearted / virtuous .令人惊喜的：amazing /surprising【点睛】高分句型 1. My dad ordered an ice cream

43、and another small gift for his friend who was having a difficult day and called him to talk about it.（由关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句）高分句型 2. Over the next several days, I secretly dropped off gift bags on the doorstep of people who were struggling or going out of their way to help others.（由关系代词 who 引导的限制性定语从句）高

44、分句型 3. Sometimes, if they happened to be connected with me through social media, I would see posts about how those surprises had made their day. （if引导的条件状语从句和how连接的宾语从句）8.（河南省开封市五县2022-2023学年高一上学期期中考试英语试题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。One day an elderly postman knocked on the door of a house

45、and said, Take the letter.”As he said this, a little girls voice came from inside, “I am coming. Please wait.”But even after five minutes no one came. The postman said again, “Is there anyone to take your letter? I have to go to many more places.”The girl replied. “Uncle, if you are in a hurry, put

46、the letter under the door. I am coming. It will take some more time.”The postman said, “No, I am waiting. It is a registered letter. So someones signature （签字）is also needed.About ten minutes later, the door opened.The postman was a little angry, and was about to shout at the girl, However, as soon

47、as the door opened, he was shocked to see that in front of him was a little handicapped girl who had no legs. The postman quietly gave her the letter, took her signature and left.The little girl often lived alone in her house. Her mother was not in this world and her father had to work far away.In a

48、 month or two whenever mails came, the postman would knock and call for the girl and then wait patiently at the door. Gradually, interaction and attachment （T青感）grew between them. The little girl noticed that the postman used to come barefoot（赤脚的）to deliver mails.It rained one morning. When the postman left after giving a letter to the girl, his footprints were left on the wet ground. The girl came out with a paper, put it on print and took down a picture of his feet. She decided to give him a surprise on the New Years Day. which was around the corner.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2