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1、专题10动物奇遇与生活故事（人与社会）新高考高一读后续写热点话题写作技巧【读后续写】L （安徽省A10联盟2022-2023学年高一下学期开年考英语试卷）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整短文.A spider （蛛I蛛）was looking for a suitable place to make its web. He wanted his web to be in such a place where a lot of insects and flies would come and get trapped in his web. In this way

2、 he wanted to spend his life eating, drinking and relaxing happily.Soon, he found a corner （角落）of the room of a house and started preparing to make his web there.Just when he started weaving （织网）the web, a cat passing by started laughed loudly after seeing him. When the spider saw the cat laughing,

3、he asked, “Why are you laughing?”The cat replied JT am laughing because you are foolish. Cant you see how clean this place is? No flies or insects will come here. Who will fall in your web?”After listening to the cat, the spider gave up the idea of making a web in that corner and started looking for

4、 another place.Then he saw a window and started weaving his web there. The spider had prepared half of the web. Then a bird came and started making fun of him, saying, Have you lost your mind? Why weaving your web near this window? A strong wind will blow and your web will fly away.”The spider under

5、stood and stopped weaving the web on the window and started looking for another place. While searching, his eyes fell on an old cupboard （橱柜）.The door of that cupboard was slightly open. He went there and started weaving a web. Just then a cockroach （嶂！fi即）came and said, “It is useless to make a web

6、 at this place. This cupboard is very old. It will be sold in few days. All your hard work will go fruitless. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;担心它野生动物的天性会伤害到自己的儿子。有一天女主人外出打水，一条黑蛇进入了房间。猫鼬勇敢地 和黑蛇搏斗，杀死了它，保护了自己的兄弟。但是女主人回来后看到猫鼬嘴上和牙上的血误会猫鼬杀死了 自己的儿子，于是女主人杀死了猫鼬。在发现真相后，女主人非常后悔。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“勇敢的小猫鼬迅速跳到了巨大的黑蛇身上。”可知，第一段可

7、描写经过激烈搏斗，猫鼬 杀死了黑蛇，然后女主人回来了。由第二段首句内容“但当高瑞看到猫鼬嘴里和牙齿上的血迹时，她想：，这只野兽杀了我的小儿子可知, 第二段可描写女主人非常愤怒，杀死了猫鼬，在发现真相后十分后悔。2 ,续写线索：搏斗胜利迎接愤怒杀死发现真相后悔3 .词汇激活行为类返回：return/go back保护：protect/defend进入：enter/get into情绪类愤怒：anger/rage惊奇：amazed/surprised【点睛】高分句型 1 In a fit of anger Alvins wife threw the pot full of water on the

8、 mongoose, killing him instantly.（运用 了现在分词作状语）高分句型 2 On the floor was a huge black snake with its ugly head bitten off.（运用 了 完全倒装和 with 的复合结 构）5.（河北省邢台市2022-2023学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I worked day and night as a taxi driver, and I always dreamed of owning my own taxi co

9、mpany. One night, I took an order at 11:00 pm. When I arrived at the building, it was dark except for a single light in a ground floor window. In this situation, many drivers would just wait for a while and then left.But I had seen too many people who depended on taxis as their means of transportati

10、on. I thought this passenger might be someone who needed my help. So I walked into the building and knocked at the door.“Just a minute,“ answered an elderly voice. I could hear something being pulled across the floor. After a long time, the door opened. A small woman in her 70s stood before me. She

11、was wearing a traditional dress and an old hat, like somebody out of a movie in the 1940s. By her side was a small suitcase. The apartment looked as if no one had lived in it for years. All the furniture was covered with sheets. I found nobody else. In the corner was a cardboard box filled with phot

12、os.I helped take her suitcase out to the taxi, and then returned to help the elderly woman. She seemed a little weak and took my arm. We walked slowly towards the taxi. The elderly woman kept thanking me for my kindness. I told her, Its nothing. I just try to treat my passengers the way I want my mo

13、ther to be treated.She said I was the best man she had ever seen in the world. And she gave me an address, and then asked, “Could you drive me to the hospital? I answered quickly, “OK!” She told me that she was ill and needed to stay in hospital for several days, but her sons were in other provinces

14、 and couldnt get home in time. I listened to what she said carefully and kept comforting her.When we got to the hospital, I went to the emergency room with her. After half an hour, she was admitted into the hospital room. At midnight, I rushed home and completely forgot the taxi fare. 注意：1 .续写词数应为15

15、0左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The next day, I got a call from the elderly woman.A month later, the elderly woman and her sons came to visit me.答案One possible version:The next day, I got a call from the elderly woman. Young man, how much do I owe you? she asked. I said, Nothing, madam. Just take good care o

16、f yourself. She couldnt thank me enough. She also told me some people needed to be discharged and asked if I could pick them up. Almost without hesitation, I went to the hospital and sent them home. To my joy, I made some money. After that, I would go to the hospital to see her until she recovered.A

17、 month later, the elderly woman and her sons came to visit me. I welcomed them with open arms. Actually, I kept in touch with the elderly woman from time to time, and we became good friends. I had a nice talk with her and her family. When her sons learned that I wanted to start a taxi company, they

18、offered to fund it. This was a harmonious and pleasant meeting. Amazingly, my kindness brought me closer to my dream.【导语】本文以故事发展为线索展开。作者是一名出租车司机，一直梦想拥有自己的出租车公司。一天晚 上11点，作者接了一份订单。客户是一位老妇人，作者帮她上了车，并把她送到医院，然后离开，完全忘 了车费的事。第二天，老人打电话给作者钱，从那以后，作者常去医院看望老人。一个月后，老人和他的 儿子来看望作者，老人和作者成为好朋友。老人的儿子想资助作者开出租车公司，作者的善行

19、让他离梦想 更近了。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“第二天，我接到了一位老妇人的电话。”可知，第一段可描写老人给作者出租车费，作 者常去医院载客并看望老人。由第二段首句内容“一个月后，那位老妇人和她的儿子来看我可知，第二段可描写作者和老人成为朋友, 老人的儿子想资助作者开出租车公司，作者的善行让他离梦想更近了。2,续写线索：接订单帮老人上车送老人去医院常去看望老人成为朋友资助作者开公司 离梦想更近了.词汇激活 行为类 接某人：pick somebody up/collect somebody 赚钱： make some money/earn some money 与某人保持联系：kee

20、p in touch with somebody/keep in contact with somebody情绪类感谢：thank somebody/showing appreciation to somebody/be grateful to somebody热情地： with open arms/with enthusiasm/passionately【点睛】高分句型 1 She also told me that some people needed to be discharged and asked if I could pick them up.（由连 接词that引导的宾语从句作

21、told的宾语和if引导的宾语从句作asked的宾语）高分句型 2 When her sons learned that I wanted to start a taxi company, they offered to fund it.（由连接副词 when引导的时间状语从句）6.（江西省南昌市2022-2023学年高一上学期2月期末英语试题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Andrew Robertson was a lovely three-year-old boy. He had wonderful parents. They were a h

22、appy family until an accident struck their lives.One day they decided to go to a carnival. The carnival was too crowded with a sea of people. Andrew was very content holding on to his toy. Suddenly a little boy took the toy from his hands and ran away. Andrew got annoyed, ran towards him and disappe

23、ared in the crowd. His parents ran after him but soon lost sight of their child. They asked people around but no use. After some time Andrew returned, but his parents were nowhere in sight. He called out Mom!, Dad! but no one looked like his Mom or Dad in the crowd.Andrew started crying. The police

24、noticed and went to him. They asked him why he was crying, Andrew was so upset, and told them he was lost. The police announced his name and informed their headquarters（总部）but no one came for him. Andrew was finally sent to a foster home. A kind-hearted couple Mr, and Mrs. Clinton offered to take ca

25、re of him, who had no child of their own and considered Andrew a gift from God.Many years passed. Andrew was now twelve. By now he had gradually forgotten his real family. One day at the dinner table his foster parents had to make a hard decision. Mr. Clinton told Andrew “I have some good news fbr y

26、ou, Andrew. Your birth parents lives in KansasAh, you mean I am adopted?” “Yes” replied Mr. Clinton. “They want to meet you and want you to stay with them from now on. So we have booked a ticket fbr you to Kansas tomorrow. Andrew could not understand whether to be happy or sad. He said I am very exc

27、ited to meet my birth parents Dad, but I dont want to stay there forever. I cannot live without you both.” 续写要求：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:He was a little sad and rushed to his room.Paragraph!:A tall woman opened the door and warm-heartedly asked him to come in.【答案】范文He was a litt

28、le sad and rushed to his room. Although Mr. Clinton could not control Andrews emotions and not part with him, he could not say No to Andrews birth parents either. After several attempts, Andrew was finally convinced. The next morning he said goodbye and left for the station. During the journey of he

29、ading to his destination, the past came into his mind. Finally, he arrived at a rather old, but tidy house, where he rang the doorbell.A tall woman opened the door and warm-heartedly asked him to come in. When entering the house, he saw a man sitting on the sofa reading the newspaper. Andrew was cau

30、ght by a photograph on the wall and asked who the child was. The old couple told him an accident took their lovely kid away at the age of 3. And here he stood today. God had a new beginning prepared for them. Andrew lived happily ever with his parents but deeply missed his foster parents for their s

31、incere love they had together all these years.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了安德鲁罗伯逊是一个可爱的三岁男孩。他有很棒的父母。他们曾 经是一个幸福的家庭，直到一场意外破坏了他们的生活。安德鲁在狂欢节上和父母走散了，并且一直没有 找到父母，好心的克林顿夫妇表示愿意照顾他，他们自己没有孩子，认为安德鲁是上帝赐予的礼物。12年 后，养父母告诉了安德鲁亲生父母所在地，安德鲁于是前去找了自己的亲生父母。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“他有点伤心，冲进了自己的房间。”可知，第一段可描写安德鲁养父母对此的反应，以 及安德鲁去找亲生父母的经过。由第二

32、段首句内容“一个高个子女人开了门，热情地请他进来。“可知，第二段可描写安德鲁见到亲生父母 的过程以及感悟。2,续写线索：伤心被说服告别一到家一相认感悟.词汇激活行为类 分开：part /separate说月艮：convince/persuade告诉：tell/inform情绪类快乐地：happily /joyfully可爱的：lovely /adorable【点睛】高分句型 1 Although Mr. Clinton could not control Andrews emotions and not part with him, he could not say No to Andrews

33、 birth parents either.（运用 了 although 引导让步状语从句）高分句型 2 Finally, he arrived at a rather old, but tidy house, where he rang the doorbell.（运用 了 where 引导非 限制性定语从句）7.（湖北省孝感市2022-2023学年高一上学期1月期末考试英语试题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段。使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150 左右。How many times do we miss blessings because they are not

34、 packaged as we expected? Think before you act and do not spoil （损坏）what you have by desiring what you dont have. What may appear as bad fortune may in fact be the door that is just waiting to be opened.There was once a young man who was getting ready to graduate from college. For many months he had

35、 wanted a beautiful sports car, and knowing his father had much money, he told him that was all he wanted.With Graduation Day coming, the young man waited for signs that his father had bought the car. Finally, onthe morning of his graduation, his father called him into his room. His father told him

36、how proud he was to have such a fine son, and told him how much he loved him. He handed his son a beautiful wrapped （包装）gift box.Curious, but somewhat disappointed, the young man opened the box and found a lovely, leather-bound （皮革精装 的）Bible （圣经）,with the young mans name decorated in gold. Angrily,

37、he raised his voice to his father and said, “With all your money, you give me a Bible?” He then stormed out of the house, leaving the Bible. He didnt want to see his father forever.Paragraph 1：Many years passed and the young man was very successful in business.Paragrap2:Deep sadness and regret fille

38、d his heart when he went into his fathers house alone.【答案】Paragrap 1:Many years passed and the young man was very successful in business. Suddenly he thought of his father, and realizing his father was very old, he thought perhaps he should go to see him. He had not seen him since that graduation da

39、y. Before he could make the arrangements, he received a special letter telling him his father had passed away, and all of his possessions had been given to his son. He needed to come home immediately and take care of things.Paragrap2:Deep sadness and regret filled his heart when he went into his fat

40、her house alone. He began to search through his fathers important papers and saw the still new Bible Just as he had left it years ago. He opened the Bible and began to turn the pages. As he was reading, a car key dropped from the back of the Bible. The key had a label. On the label was the date of h

41、is graduation. He knew the real gift for him from his father was the sports car he had desired. He was moved to tears. What a great father he had. He felt sorry for what he had done before, but it was too late.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了从前，有个年轻人即将大学毕业，他一直想要一辆漂亮的跑车， 他知道父亲很有钱，就告诉父亲这就是他想要的，在毕业典礼的那天早上，父亲递给他一个包装精

42、美的礼 品盒，年轻人打开盒子，发现里面是一本精美的精装本圣经，上面用金子装饰着年轻人的名字，年轻人 很生气，觉得父亲那么有钱，却只给了自己一本圣经，然后，他丢下圣经，冲出了房子，他永远也 不想再见到他的父亲。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“许多年过去了，年轻人在事业上非常成功。”可知，第一段可描写年轻人想起了父亲, 却得知父亲已经去世。由第二段首句内容“当他独自一人走进父亲的房子时，内心充满了深深的悲伤和悔恨。”可知，第二段可描 写年轻人发现了车钥匙。2 .续写线索：年轻人想去看父亲得知父亲已经去世回家处理后事看到圣经钥匙掉出来 年轻人觉得感动和后悔.词汇激活 行为类 收到来信： re

43、ceive a letter/get a letter 回家：come home/return home 从掉出：drop from/fall from情绪类感动：be moved/be touched对感到懊悔：feel sorry for/be regretful for【点睛】高分句型 1 Suddenly he thought of his father, and realizing his father was very old, he thought perhaps he shouldgo to see him,（由that引导的宾语从句，省略了 that）高分句型 2 He fe

44、lt sorry for what he had done before, but it was too late.（由 what 弓I 导的宾语从句）8.（山西省太原市2022-2023学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题）阅读下面材料，根据所给段落开头语完成故事内容和人物描述。Noah went to the pet store with his mom and his brothers, Ben and John. Noah looked at a beautiful fish while he was waiting.“May I have a pet? Noah asked.“You ca

45、nt take care of a pet, Ben said. “Youre tooIm almost seven,“ said Noah.“You wont be gentle with a pet J said John. Youre too little.”Mom smiled. Its hard to keep a pets cage neat.Noah stood tall. I can be neat.When they got home, Noah went to the room. He dropped his blocks （积木）into a box. He parked

46、 the cars on his shelf. Noah put his pajamas （唾衣）away. He smiled. He could be neat.The doorbell rang. Uncle Jay arrived. Noah heard his baby cousin, Alice, crying. “Hi, Uncle JayJNoah said. “Why is Alice crying?” Shes hungry, Noah J Uncle Jay said. Can you get her baby bottle? Do you want to feed Al

47、ice?,said Uncle Jay. Noah nodded.“Youre very gentle. Youre really growing up. Thank you fbr helping take care of Alice,“Uncle Jay said to Noah. Mom looked at Noah. “Yes, he is J she said.That night, Mom and Dad told Noah he could have a pet fbr his birthday. Wow, thanks J Noah said. “I know just wha

48、t I want.” 注意：1 ,词数应为100左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。1. Please retell the story using at least 60 words.Noah was attracted by a pet fish in a pet store.2. Please describe Noah using at least 40 words.Noah is a little boy who doesnt give up easily.【答案】One possible version:1. Please retell the story using at least 60 words.Noah was attracted by a pet fish in a pet store. He wanted to have a pet fish but he was refused because his parents thought he was not old and neat enough to take care of a pet. To prove his ability to r