2022年高三语文读后续写话题(二）亲情类话题素材积累.docx

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1、读后续写话题（二）亲情感悟篇语料积累亲情感悟篇的续写文章主题：亲情感悟一般属于人与社会中的主题语境，亲情感悟类话题主要涉 及到亲人之间发生的日常生活事件，包括纪念重要日子（如举办惊喜生日派对，送生日礼物，母亲 节，父亲节等）和父亲教孩子学习新技能，孩子为长辈解决困难，照看妹妹等。情亲感悟类话题也 涉及到亲人间的矛盾，如：父女之间缺乏沟通，父亲把自己的意志强加给子女，财产分配问题导致 手足决裂，子女觉得父亲偏心，孩子想要帮父母却帮倒忙等。这个话题引导考生思考亲人间的关系， 让考生们领悟拥有一个爱的家庭比物质上富足更让人快乐，或是亲人之间的平等、有效沟通，相互 尊重，相互关爱是非常重要，或是要珍惜

2、亲人间看似平淡却又温暖的亲情。亲情感悟篇的续写文章特点：亲情感悟类的续写文章，通常会涉及到矛盾冲突产生原因，如性格原因，环境原因，经济原因等。接下去是想方法解决矛盾冲突，续写原文往往会用较多笔墨交代冲 突解决过程，为续写冲突的解决埋下伏笔。冲突解决的过程往往是按照时间顺序描写重要事件，来 增加过程的复杂性和悬念性。续写往往要求考生能够用续写原文的伏笔，让冲突得到化解，化解可 以是弥补，解释，抱歉，回忆等。如果是纪念重要节日，如生日惊喜派对，往往会是派对的描写， 热闹，充满欢笑的场面描写加上我的收获，开心，感恩等。如果是亲人间的矛盾、误会，结尾往往 会亲人间冰释前嫌，握手言和。亲情感悟类文章的结

3、尾应该由主题提升包括亲情感悟，事件评论等。 此类题目备考温馨建议：L多积累相关话题语料库，写作过程中做到信手拈来，活学活用；2.多构思相关话题的续写文章，做到心里有数，总结共同点；使用需要注意的问题：1.防止生搬硬套，拒绝套句；2.注意时态语态。绿皮大书参考同类话题.第一节（1） 2021.06新高考全国卷a Mothers Day Surprise （母亲节惊喜）1 .第二节（2） My Dad best Flower爸爸最美的花3第二节（3） Going Home 回家一、亲情类的人物外貌&性格、品质描写：1.但你知道爸爸为打搅别人而感到内疚。But you know how Dad fe

4、el quilty to bother others.2他从来都不爱说话。他没有在餐桌上或我们去公园散步时讲述自己的故事。他是一个私密的人，似乎想 保持这种状态。He was never too much of a talker. He didnt tell stories at the dinner table or when we went for walks in the park. He was a private person and seemed to want to stay that way.3 .他在困难面前表现出来的巨大的毅力也让我影响深刻。I was also impre

5、ssed by the 口reat perseverance he shewed in the face of difficulty.4 .具有挖苦意味的是，我们非常相似：我们都有脾气暴躁、快速宽容的性格。The irony is that we are very much alike: we share the hot-tempered and fast-forgiving personality.5 .有着棕色卷发、圆眼睛和中国娃娃脸的露露非常可爱。With her brown curls, round eyes, and China doll face, Lulu was despera

6、tely cute.6 .露露没有听话，而是走到外面，以一种富有挑战性的方式面对我。Instead of being obedient, Lulu stepped outside, facing me in a chaHingine way.7 .然而露露摇了摇头，眼里流露出固执的神情。（2021年11月绍兴一模）However. Lulu shook her head eyes._.stubborn look in her eyes._.8,但爷爷固执地宣称，“我能！”当然，他这是耍孩子气。（2022.03潍坊一模）But Grandpa declared stubbornly, “I ca

7、n!” Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way.9 .他爱他的父亲，最想得到他的认可。（2021年9月嘉兴模拟考）He loved his father, and wanted his approval more than anything in the world.10 .我的童年充满了惊喜和娱乐，都是因为我的母亲慈祥、甜蜜，但心不在焉、健忘It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother - loving, sweet, and yet absent-mind

8、ed and forgetful. （2017.11 浙江高考）二.亲情类的有关冲突产生、寻找解决方法、冲突解决的场面描写冲突产生:1. Uncle Richard had not been speaking with Prissy or her father since the two brothers9 quarrel about （关于 的争吵）the division of a piece of property eight years ago. The fault had been mainly on Richard*s side, but he was too stubborn t

9、o admit it（太固执而没有成认它。）2.1 thought it was going to be a special day 仔Hed with firn and presents （充满礼物和乐趣），but all I received was a Happy Birthday.” （2022.04 绍兴二模）3 . All of a sudden, the electricity was cut off and there was a complete darkness（片黑）in the house . I couldnt do anything. Therefore, I de

10、cided to go to sleep and end the unlucky day （结束这不幸的天）.4 .Dad was sitting at the dinner table and he suddenly slapped his forehead （拍他的前额）“I just realized that I am going to be 50 in June. Lets just quietly forget about it. I want to mourn（哀悼）the passing of his youth （青春的 流逝）in private.”stood there

11、silently （静静地站在那）for a second. Then, I turned around, went out of the house, and set out in the cold to tackle the enemy（对付敌人）that lay in my driveway. But I couldnt dam down （冷静）.I was really angry that she would leave me to battle this alone （让我单独一人战斗）.6 .My father, being an athlete himself, was ab

12、sorbed in（全神贯注于）her show. I was sad that no one was playing with me: no one was watching me. I became bored and jealous （厌烦和嫉妒）watching her show off.7 .我被这一发现深深地感动了，但我知道，我这样冲进她的房间，剥夺了她在圣诞节看到我既惊讶又高兴 的快乐，我又感到难过。I was deeply moved by the discovery and yet sickened by the knowledge that, bursting into h

13、er room like this I had robbed her of her pleasure（剥夺了 她的快乐）of seeing me astonished and delighted on Christmas day.8 . When I tried to pull her away from the piano, she began yelling, crying and kicking angrily （愤怒地大喊， 大哭，和踢）。9 . A helpless expression 9ashed across his face （在他。佥上闪现）.Grandma explain

14、ed that his health was declininq quickly（正在快速的下降）and maybe couldnt stand up on his own forever.寻找解决方法：1 .Together, they brainstormed a list of ideas（集思广益,想出 了 一系列点子）when suddenly Jenny murmured, “whats Dads resolution for the new year?”2.1 gathered up my courage（鼓起勇气）and started heading for the base

15、ment.3. Why not cook a meal for Uncle Richard? So miserable was he that he had to bear a cold bites（忍受冰冷的饭 菜）！ （2022.04杭二中4月模拟）Under the guidance of his father （在爸爸的指导下）,Jenna stirred the eggs and poured it on the pan. Several minutes later, it was fully cooked. To avoid the hot pot burning his Ange

16、rs （烫伤他的手指头）,Jeff took his fathers tips and picked the pot by a wet cloth. （2021.06 新高考卷）1. 1 fought tirelessly, my short arms swinginc from side to side（左右晃动）while the wind cut against my cheeks.我不知疲倦地战斗着，我的短胳膊在风刮着脸颊时左右摆动1 even started practicing the surprised face （练习吃惊的表情）in front of the mirror,

17、testing exclamations of delight:Wow !n7. My mind racing, I changed tactics immediately（立亥U改变策略）,begging and bribing（诱哄）Lulu to come back into the house.8. In a severe moment of desperation, it occuired to me （我突然想至Ll）that sending an email might be the key. An email can be crafted （精心制作）slowly and ca

18、refully. I could speakin a comfortable distance （在个舒适的距离）and give him room to adjust （调整的空间）.（2022.03金丽衢十二校、七彩阳光联盟）9. Apparently, my dad had carefully considered my message （认真考虑了我的信息），reached back into his memory and crafted a response （精心制作了 一份回信）.10. Then a bright idea came tn Jacks mind.Why not

19、make a cane （拐杖）out of a young tree!* 冲突解决：L恍然大悟，他们愉快地达成了一项协议,计划到他们曾经常去的那座山进行一次秘密徒步旅行,并在山 顶进行一次家庭野餐。（2022.04台州二模）It all clicked and they merrily reached an agreement to plan a secret hiking trip to the hill they once frequented and a family picnic at the top.2. 那天，我们点击了很多照片（注释：可能是手机拍照）也创造了很多记忆。That

20、day, we clicked many pictures and indeed I created a lot of memories3,眼泪顺着我的脸流下来，我紧紧地把他们抱在胸前，哽咽着说：“谢谢。妈妈，爸爸。这是我过的最特 别的生日JTears streaming down my face, I hugged them to my chest firmly and choked, “ Thanks. Mom, Dad. This is the most special birthday that Ive eve】 had.”家庭得以重建，百里茜的关心和奉献终于让理查德松了一口气。The

21、 family was rebuilt and Richard finally got relieved by Prissys care and devotion.4. Jeremy发现父亲的眼里没有失望，只有骄傲和爱。（2021年9月嘉兴模拟考）Jeremy discovered there was no disappointment ie their eyes, only pride and love.5. Arm in arm, we walked inside as darkness fell, waiting for father to come home（等着父亲I同家）.6. T

22、here was no scolding, just a biq hug and smile （一个拥抱和微笑）because he knew I was all right.7. I threw my arms around my mom and kissed her spontaneously. Thank you mom! It is the best birthday gift that Ive had received !（这是我收到最好的礼物）”My problems havent been magically solved, but getting to know my dad

23、better - and learning to love him more - has made stuff things more manageable and life sweeter （让艰难的事情更容易处理和生活更加甜美） 10. Its hard to talk to dads sometimes, but Tm glad that I found a way to talk to mine.（找至U 了一种同我父亲沟 通的方式）.（2022.03金丽衢十二校、七彩阳光联盟）11. A smile of understanding flashed across （闪现在）his f

24、ace. （2021.06 新高考卷）三、亲情类的情绪描写：1 .表达开心的描写：（独立主格）All of them laughed with happiness, chuckles lingerinc around the house （笑声回荡在房间 里）（2021.06新高考全国卷1）（so.that 倒装）Hearing the words, so glad was she that her face beamed with joy （面露喜色）and his bright smile lit up the room（照亮房间）.（21 新高考全国 1） A brilliant smi

25、le bloomed on my mom飞 face （妈妈脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容）as she held me tightly.（常州市2021-2022届高三年级第一学期期中考试 Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy （欣喜假设狂）and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain,（但是没有成功）.Staring at the fancy cane, Grandpa was so happy with smiles on his face shin

26、ing like a diamond （像钻石 一样闪闪发光）.He thanked his grandsons for the wonderful gift with affection （深情地）（2022.03 潍坊一模） My face wearing a sweet smile, my eyes rkled with excitement （闪烁着激动）.2 ,表达激动&惊讶的描写Every shovel of snow was a witness to the energy and excitement in me （见证了我内心的活力和兴奋）.I didnt have to pr

27、etend the excitement and surprise （掩饰我的兴奋和惊讶）as the bicycle came into my sight.（常州市2021-2022届高三年级期中考试）When she saw the breakfast, her eyes rkled/twinkled with excitement （她的眼睛睁得地，兴奋地闪闪发光）. （2021.06新高考全国卷1）（惊讶加开心）Bill stood frozen for a while（呆呆地站 了一会）before a broad smile came across his face. （惊讶+开心

28、）Hearing this, Bill was numb for a while （愣住了 一会）. Then came a broad/brilliant smile on his weather-beaten face,他饱经风霜的脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容.3 .表达愤怒的描写：（-ing形式作状语）我内心的愤怒就像一个不断增长的怪物，失控般地把我逼到了疯狂的边缘。My inner anger was like a growing monster, uncontrollably driving me to the edge of madness.在我意识到这一点之前，我在姐姐的房间里抽泣着，嘴

29、里喷出子弹一样的言语、表达了我长期以来对她 不参于和我一起铲雪的不满。Before I realized it, I was sobbing in my sisters room, with bullets of words firing through my mouth, expressinq my long-buried dissatisfaction towards her absence from my snow shoveling experiences.Their father asked them confusedly with a sense of anger floating

30、 up in his mind.（心中升起了一种愤怒）4消极情绪的描写.挫败、紧张、恐慌、羞愧等At the thought of losing his fathers approval一想到失去父亲的认同），a sense of failure overcame him and surged through him ,tears fallinq onto the silent around .（泪水落到 了寂静的地上） （形容词做状语）Jeremy dropped his head down, tense and speechless4紧张而不语）（伴随状语）At eight oclock

31、in the evening of my lucky birthday, I was alone at home complaining and frowning （抱怨,皱着眉头）and pitying myself for my misfortune（可怜自己的不幸）.（2022.04 绍兴二模） （独立主格）After carrying out of the water, he hugged me tight, tears with water pouring down his toughguy face.眼泪和海水从他那如硬汉的脸上流下来）。（湖丽衢联考）Suddenly, a red

32、 flush of shame spread over my body （突然，一股羞愧覆盖了 我的全身）.I could feel tears welling up in my eyes （泪水在眼睛里涌出来） as I clenched the shirt.Some days I can even ask my dad questions face to face without qettinw a lump in my thrsat （喉咙哽咽）Jenna cried, with regret and guilt oveewhelmin/ her like endless tides.（

33、像无止境的潮水一样淹没 了她）。The very thought of dying filled me with a mad panic （十分恐慌）.四、亲情类有关的动作描写：1 .动作链：内疚和悲伤的泪水涌上心头，叔叔走向她，抚摸着她的手，把她抱进他温柔的怀抱。Tears welling up with guilty and sorrow, Uncle stepped towards her, stroked her hand and lathered/ wrapped her into his tender embrace.2 .（伴随状语）一路走来，两个孩子蹦蹦跳跳，谈笑风生.（202

34、2.04台州二模）All the way, the two kids bounced back , laughing and chatting.（无灵主语句）我的眼睛落在了那个大蛋糕上，蛋糕闻起来很香甜。My eyes rested on the gigantic cake, which smelt so wonderful.3 .（独立主格）Eyes Rintinc and lips curving into a big smile （眼睛闪闪发光， 嘴唇弯曲成灿烂的笑容）,the boy was jumping with joy, recording his father and the

35、charming scenery.4 .（省略 be 动词）By the time we finished, my back was aching, muscles sore, and body exhausted （我的背部 疼痛，肌肉酸痛，身体疲惫。）.（动作链）Without saying anything further, she got up, pushed me out of the room and slammed the door in my face （当面把门砰地关上）5 .They paced back and forth （来来回族踱步）,staring at the

36、gate, hoping to find the familiar figure.6 . Hugging me tightly in his arms （我父亲把我紧紧地抱在怀里），my father explained that they had noticed my sadness and anqer. （湖丽衢联考）. My strength was slowly out and my body lowered and lowered under the water（我的身体在水下不断下降）.（湖丽衢联考）9.1 slapped the water fiercely and tried

37、to And my way to the surface to take a breath, while the more wildly I struggled （我越挣扎）,the deeper I was stuck in （我陷得越深）10. Unexpectedly, Richard patted her on the shoulder, giving her a reassuring 】rin（抚慰的笑容）.五.亲情类有关修辞手法描写：比喻：1.1 could hardly contain my ecstasy , jumping up and down like a bird（像一

38、只鸟）.（2022.04 绍兴二模） 我几乎无法抑制我的狂喜，像鸟儿一样跳上跳下It was at this very moment that the frozen ice between two generationsmelted down intv a warmstream（融化成一股温暖的溪流），flowing into their hearts. （2022.04 杭二中）My inner anger was a growing monster（像一个不断生长的怪兽），uncontrollably driving me to the edge of madness.（武汉市2022届高

39、中毕业生二月调研考试）夸张：1 .Prissy shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles （如坐针毡）.（2022.04 杭二中）2.1 cried in my heart, feeling as if I were sinking into the hell （感觉自己好像要沉进地狱里 了）。.5.My heart sank as if being splashed by cold water.好像被泼 了冷水一样。拟人：1 .Looking at the victorious snow（胜利的雪）1 thought o

40、f Dads disappointment2,The house seemed to be holding its breath（正屏住呼吸）when I stopped my accusation, still weeping.（武汉市 2022届高中毕业生二月调研考试）升F 比：1.1 cried because I wished I had opened up earlier but was grateful it wasnt too late. I cried because in the midst of my own struggles, his letter instantly

41、put me at ease（让我放松）.And I cried because in the end, it was so simple: I just had to hit 6Send我哭了，因为我希望我能早点翻开，但也很感激现在还不算太晚。我 哭了，因为在我自己的努力,他的信立刻让我自在（让我放松）。我哭了，因为到最后，事情很简单:我只需要 按下“发送”键六.亲情类的主题升华：1 .在凉爽的微风中，爸爸假设有所思地凝视他们。突然间他意识到，在家人们爱的陪伴下，过生日不再是 件烦人的事。（2022.04台州二模）With the cool breeze, Dad gazed at them

42、 reflectively and suddenly realized that its no longer disturbing to celebrate birthday with the love of family.2 .仍然沉浸在惊喜派对的美好回忆中，我坐在房间里，开始梦想着我的下一个生日和与家人朋友的新聚 会。（展望未来式结局）（2022.04绍兴二模）Still bathed in after glow of the surprise party, I sat in my room and started dreaming for my next birthday and a n

43、ew get-together with family and friends.3 .这个生日一定会留在我的记忆中，照亮我前进的道路。（2022.04绍兴二模）This birthday is bound to be kept in my memory forever, lightening my future path.4 .很多年后，大蛋糕的味道，朋友们的笑声，父母的拥抱仍然萦绕在我的脑海中。（2022.04绍兴二模）After so many years, the taste of the gigantic cake, the laughter of friends and the em

44、brace of my parents still lingered in my mind.5 .看着四周的树和草，爷爷动情地说，他会永远珍藏他们一起在森林里美好时光。（2022.03潍坊一模） Watching the trees and grass around,he emotionally said he would forever cherish the fond moments they were together in the forest.6 .笑声回荡在房间里，它不在那么冷了。With laughter lingering around the room, it was not

45、 cold anymore. 7.沐浴在柔和的月光下，他们俩都欣赏着欢乐的家庭气氛，这是无价的。（2022.04杭二中4月考）Bathed in the soft moonlight, both of them appreciated the cheerful family atmosphere, which was invaluable.8 .她从来没有这样开心和骄傲！（2021.06新高考卷）Never had she been so happy and proud.9 .房间里不断爆发出灿烂的笑声，全家都沉浸在无比的幸福之中（2021.06新高考卷）Radiant laughter bu

46、rst out from the room constantly, and the whole family was enveloped in overwhelming happiness.10 .清晨的阳光照进来，全家人沉浸在幸福和爱中。（2021.06新高考卷）The early sunlight streaming in, the whole family was bathed in happiness and love.七、亲情类有关的生日（节日）情境描写.生日惊喜派对描写（2022.04绍兴二模）（适用面：送别、欢迎惊喜派对；求婚惊喜现场）前情概述：“我”是一个很重视生日的人，并且很

47、早就开始期待自己生日这一天，但今年生日时，一整天 “我”都没有收到礼物与惊喜。直到到晚上八点，“我”的期待彻底落了空，准备直接睡觉时，被地下室的声响给吸引了，这时 小情节构思：1 .灯突然翻开，是熟悉的父母和朋友2.房间装饰着气球，桌子上铺着白色和红色的桌布 3.桌子上放着蛋糕。自我点评（按照什么顺序来组织情节，时间还是空间？是否有具体的细节描写？）：范文赏析：Suddenly, the lights were on and there stood my parents and friends cheering me. Itwith the beautiful presents they ha

48、d carefully prepared for me._It was a surprise party ! The room was decorated with colorful balloons. Tables and chairs were laid and covered with white and contrasting red sheets. A gigantic birthday cake was positioned on the innermost table.突然，灯亮了，我的父母和朋友站在那里，拿着他们精心为我准备的漂 亮礼物向我欢呼。这是个惊喜派对房间里装饰着五颜六

49、色的气球。桌子和椅子都铺上了白色和比照鲜明 的红色床单。最里面的桌子上放着一个巨大的生日蛋糕。1 .过生日情境描写（2022.04绍兴二模）前情概述：现在一切都准备好了，聚会开始了Now everything was ready and party was set in motion小情节构思：L许愿，吹蜡烛，切蛋糕2.分蛋糕，朋友祝福，共同庆祝3.感想参考范文 Surrounded by the guests, I made a wish and with all the strength blew the candles. The instant they extinguished, the guests gave