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1、Week 2建议信Monday 满分范文晨诵满分优范本感悟作文并背诵Hi Worried,（理解与安慰）I m sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. Actually, everyone will have one of those periods when everything seems to be going wrong. Therefore, it is unnecessary to be worried. What matters most is to learn self-control so

2、that you may avoid what引导的主语从句+ so that从句是满分点saying or doing something that youll regret. The following are my suggestions.（提出建议）To begin with, sharing your feelings with your friends and teachers is a good choice as you can remove your negative emotions by doing so. Another effective suggestion is

3、that you should take more physical that引导的表语从句说明建议的内容，which引导的非限制性exercise, which can lift your spirits. Last but not least, keep an optimistic 定语从句说明理由。attitude towards life and you will enjoy the pleasure life has brought to you.“祈使句+and +简单句”说明最后一条建议。（表达愿望）1 hope youH find these suggestions helpf

4、ul!Yours, Jamie为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTO HEART专栏。假设你是该栏目的编 辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，让正 常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1 .表示理解并给予安慰；2 .提出建议并说明理由。注意：词数120左右。仿写再借鉴仿照范本中的句式补充范文并背诵Dear Tom,You wrote to ask for advice on how to get rid of your nervousness right before the C

5、hinese speech contest. （你应记住的是大多数人像你一样觉得紧张。用what从句）Just take it easy.（以下是我的建议）.To begin with, you should be prepared and understand the subject of your speech completely. The more familiar you are with the subject, the less nervous you feel. Besides,（另一个有效的建议是把紧张看成好事，这样能给你动力，用which非限制性定语从句）to delive

6、r your speech in an emotive way. Last but not least, as the old saying goes, the confidence is the first secret of success. So （相信自己，你就会成功）. （我希望你认为这些建议有益）.May you succeed in the competition!Yours sincerely,Li Hua假如你是李华。你的美国朋友Tom即将参加一个汉语演讲大赛，他为此感到十分紧张。因此，他用电 子邮件向你咨询如何克服赛前的紧张情绪。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信：1 .表示理

7、解并安慰；2 .给出建议并说明理由；3 .表达祝愿。注意：1 ,词数100左右；4 .可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；5 .信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Tom,Yours sincerely,Li HuaTuesday题型素材积累素材2建议与提议背满分词汇单词suggest/advise/recommend v. 建议；concerning/as to/regarding关于； practicalQh.实用的短语ask for sbs advice 征求某人的建议；give sb.advice/suggestions on 在方面给某人建议；make some suggest

8、ions 提出一些建议；in my opinion 在我看来；express onefs views/opinions表达某人的观点背满分句型夺人眼球开头句1. I have learned that you have some trouble in . and I would like to give/offer you the following suggestions.我知道你在.方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。1. Youve asked me for advice with regard to/regarding . and Ill try to make some usef

9、ul/helpful/practical suggestions here.关于你向我征求建议，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的/有帮助的/实用的建议。3. When it comes to/As for ,the following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows. 当涉及/关于，我的建议如下。4. Im writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand.我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。5. Im glad to receive your letter asking f

10、or my advice on how 我非常高兴收到你的来信，在信中，关于如何你向我征求建议。6. Here are my/some suggestions.这是我的/一些建议。亮点出彩篇中句In my opinion/As far as Im concerned/Personally, it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。1. When it comes to/As for ,I would like to suggest/advise/recommend you should .当说至“涉及/关于，

11、我建议你应该2. I think it would be of benefit/beneficial if you .我认为如果，将会受益c3. Doing . is a good/great/better choice.做是一个好/棒的/更好的选择。4. It is also a good idea/also helps to do , which can .做也不错，这能.。5. An effective suggestion is that you (should).一个有效的建议是你应该6. You may as well/had better do .你不妨/最好做韵味无穷结尾句I

12、will be glad if you will take my advice/suggestions into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的建议我将非常高兴。1. I hope that my suggestions/advice will be beneficial/of benefit to you. 我希望我的建议对你有益。2. I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/useful/practical/beneficial. 我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益。学写满分句1 .如果你能每天都读英语

13、文章会是一个不错的主意。2 .另一个有效的建议是你跟他面对面地谈一谈。Wednesday满分模板巧用题型微攻略考情分析考情分析题型解读写作步骤近年来全国卷虽未考查建议信, 但其形式符合高考命题注重交 际的大方向，备考时需注意近年来全国卷虽未考查建议信, 但其形式符合高考命题注重交 际的大方向，备考时需注意建议信是写给某人或某个组织 就某事（或其服务改进方面）提 出建议和忠告。建议信应写得 目的明确、合情合理、简明扼要 且具有说服力首段：表明写信原因/陈述事由，简单自我介绍；中间段：列由具体建议/先肯定对方优点，再写需改进之处；尾段：表达愿望满分巧模板满分巧模板Dear（对象），Im glad

14、lo receive your lelter asking for my advice on how to，点III建议的主题.说明写信的目的。（引出对方需要建议的主题）Im./Im writing to . / Here are a few suggestions （弓I 出作者的建议）.lb l）egin with, it is a good idea to. Then, it also helps to.Besides, doingis also a good choice, as .（可以根据要求用不同句式提出建议，如下：）As to, I suggest（具体到建议的某一方面）.In

15、 addition, （其他的建议）.Im sure（预测可能的 结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心）.I hope you will find these suggestions practical.Yours sincerely.Li Hua,针对具体情况说明建议的内容和理由。（如写给某个组织，应先肯定其优点，再针对需改进之处提出中肯的建议），表达愿望。模板示范文Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are my suggestions.

16、To begin with, it is a good idea to make more Chinese friends in your daily life, with whom you can practice your spoken Chinese. Whafs more, it also helps to listen to Chinese songs and watch Chinese movies, which can enable you to gain a better understanding of Chinese. Besides, keeping a diary is

17、 also a good choice, as it can benefit your writing level.I hope you will find my suggestions beneficial and make great progress in Chinese.Yours,Li Hua 亲爱的彼得：很高兴收到你的来信询问我如何学好汉语的建议。以下是我的建议：首先，在日常生活中多交中国朋友是个不错的主意，你和他们可以一起练习口语。另外，听中国歌曲 看中文电影也很有用，这能带你更好地理解中国。此外，记日记也很好，因为这能提高你的写作水平。我希望你认为我的建议有益，并在汉语上取得进

18、步。李华Thursday考场作文研析试考场好题假定你是李华，你喜爱的杂志读者创办了校园版（School Edition）,为了吸引更多的学生读者，现 面向广大学生征集意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封邮件，谈谈你的建议，内容包括：1 .说明该杂志校园版在学生中日渐受到欢迎，你本人也是它的忠实读者；2 .你的建议：（1）希望多刊登一些学生的原创文章；（2）（至少再提出两条建议）。注意：1 ,词数100左右；3 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；4 .开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear chief editor,Sincerely yours,Li Hua（请参考素材2“建议与提议”）练考

19、场审题第一步认真审题组织要点第二步遣词造句设计亮点1 .作为一个忠实的读者，我希望它变得更受欢迎。锤炼词汇和高级句式（强调谓语）：I am a faithful reader, so I it will become*高级句式（用非谓语动词）：a faithful reader, I it will become even morepopular.2 .如果你刊登一些校园故事将更好，这样，他们会对这个版本更感兴趣。锻炼词匚：It would be better if you can some campus stories. In this way, they would becomemore

20、interested in this edition.高级句式（非限制性定语从句）：It would be better if you some campus stories, they would become more interested in this edition. 第三步美化成文誉写清晰Handwritingalso counts /学写满分句满分句 1 ： You can achieve it by foUowing these suggestions.学写句1：你可以通过努力实现自己的梦想。满分句 2： Students could have an appetite。know

21、 about foreign students. 学写句2：孩子们渴望了解更多关于2022年冬奥会的情况。Friday新鲜作文集训Writing 1给Tom的建议2017山西临汾五校联考假如你是高中生李华，你的美国网友Tom的班上最近来了一位左腿残疾的同学，很多人都嘲笑他,Tom 不知如何应对。请你用英语给他写封信。内容要点包括：1 .指出正确的立场（接纳不完美的一面）；2 .给出可行的建议（多和这位同学接触；引导大家的行为）。注意：1 .词数100左右；3 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；4 .开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Tom,How are you going?You

22、rs,Li Hua（请参考素材2“建议与提议”，热点话题一“人际关系”）Writing 2给英语教研组的一封信2017 安庆一模假如你是李华，你所喜爱的校英语选修课英语电影欣赏向同学们征集意见。请你依据以下内容用 英文给你校英语教研组写一封信，内容主要包括：1 .说明你对这门英语选修课的喜爱；2 .赞赏该课的优点；3 .对该课的内容或方式提出两点建议。注意：1 .词数100左右；4 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；5 .开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir or Madam,Im Li Hua, one of the students who attended the course

23、 English Film Appreciation last term.Sincerely yours,Li HuaWeekend循序写作训练从写对句子开始（二）记写作公式该句型中的谓语动词是及物动词（短 语），用作宾语的有：名词、代词、数词、不 定式、动名词和从句等。该句型中的谓语动词是及物动词（短 语），用作宾语的有：名词、代词、数词、不 定式、动名词和从句等。写作公式3主语+谓语（及物动词）+宾语（+状语）（重庆卷写作）You have introduced two ways to share books. 后置定语你已介绍了两种分享书的方法。（重庆卷写作）I am wondering

24、 if you could tell me more.主谓语宾语从句我想知道你能否告向我更多祸况。、写作公式4主语+谓语（及物动词）+间接宾语+直接宾语（+状语）I bought my dad a nice present,我给爸爸买了一个很好的礼物。主招谓语间接宾语直接宾语一（浙江卷写作）I showed my attitude to them at proper time. 主语直接宾语 介祠 间装宾语荻语一我在恰当的时间向他们表明了我的态度。I bought my dad a nice present,我给爸爸买了一个很好的礼物。主招谓语间接宾语直接宾语一（浙江卷写作）I showed

25、my attitude to them at proper time. 主语直接宾语 介祠 间装宾语荻语一我在恰当的时间向他们表明了我的态度。 （ 1 ） give, tell, teach , write, bring, lend, hand, show, offer, send, pay, award等动词的间接宾语前川介词too （2） buy, do, get, fetch, save, make, sing, choose等动词后的间接宾语前用 介词foro练写作技能I .以往考生典型病句诊断1. Our class will organized a voluntary activi

26、ty.2. Im looking forward to hear from you.3. Im very much like English.4. My favourite subjects including English and Chinese.5. . Ed like to show the arrangements for you.6. The other day in your letter you told me you are interested in teaching in China.II.根据上面句子的正确表达进行一对一再练习1 .我们学校将举行一个运动会。2 .我们盼

27、望着你的到来。3 .我很喜欢这个活动。4 .我的爱好包括旅游和游泳。5 .这个图画向我们展示了 一个令人感动的（touching）时刻。6 .你在信中告诉我你要到北京玩。IIL用“主谓宾”和“主+谓+间宾+直宾”句式完成下面的建议信，并背诵成文Dear Paul,I understand the great trouble you are suffering from. Maybe （下面的建 议能帮助你，主+谓+宾）.To begin with, I suggest that you communicate with your teachers and classmates about yo

28、ur trouble so as to get help from them. You are not supposed to think about your exams all the time, which only makes you more stressed. Instead,（你应该考虑进步，主 + 谓 + 宾）that youve made in your study, which will surely increase your own confidence. In addition,（你要多 锻炼，主 + 谓 + 宾）in your spare time to get r

29、elaxed. Besides,（运动能提供好 的睡眠，主 + 谓 + 间宾 + 直宾）at night. As for me, I would like to listen to music if I have time.（我希望你摆脱困境，主+谓+宾从）sooner and live happily.Yours sincerely,Li Hua补充练一点下面这篇建议信中每句中有12个同学们常犯的错误，请改正（共有10处错误）Dear Jack,You have asked for my advices about how to get along with friends, and it

30、was my pleasure to give you my suggestions.First of all, when your friends are upset, youd better to calm them down and try to help them solve the problems. In addition, you should be concerning about your friends rather than ignoring them. Besides, when your friends disagree you, it would be a good idea if you could communicated with them face to face. And when they help you, you should be gratefully to them.These is my personal suggestions, and I hope they will be of great helpful to you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua