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1、读后续写（新高考专用）模拟题02L （2022.福建厦门.二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。Shrieking Toad and Dancing AntKids got nicknames at a summer camp, and mine is Shrieking Toad （尖叫的蛤蟆）. I guess it was my fault that I couldnt get a cool one.A bunch of us campers were on our first nature walk. When we broke for lu

2、nch, we sat down on logs. I was on my nuts when a tree frog dropped onto my shirt from the branches above. I shrieked. It was totally unconscious and I didnt even know I could make a sound like that. Most kids forgot about it except Stan. Whenever I walked by, hed shout, Shrieking Toad, show us how

3、you can hop! I corrected him that it had been an eastern gray tree frog, not a toad, but that just made things worse.Three days later, Counselor Matt announced we would be paired for a treasure hunt. Excited whispers spread through the camp. But when he read Jay and Stan“ as a team, my nerves got co

4、mpletely fried. Stan shouted, Great! Shrieking Toad!” Then he called to the group, and I went red at what came out of his mouth. “Guys, if mosquitoes are bugging you, ask Shrieking Toad to eat them. Toads love bugs!” Kids roared with laughter.After all the teams wandered off, Stan and I were alone.

5、Then I had a great idea, surprising myself that I hadnt thought of it earlier. I suggested we split up so as to have a better chance of finding treasures. Yeah, I*d better do what Im toad （told）. Stan laughed and set off.Ten minutes later, I heard something that reminded me of myself a few days ago.

6、 I ran toward the sound. I never would have believed it if I hadnt seen it with my own eyes. Stan was jumping around near a mud pool like a monkey, shrieking and yelling something that sounded jumping around near a mud pool like a monkey, shrieking and yelling something that sounded like “Dance! Dan

7、ce!” Seeing him scratching at his body and hitting at his clothes made me realize what he was really saying: Ants! Ants!”One morning in October, Patty quietly slipped away. Michael and I picked Stephen up after school, drove him to a nearby park, and sat on a bench by a pond. I finally managed to sa

8、y, “Stephen, weYe sorry to have to tell you this, but your mom came to an end this morning.The sound that came out of his mouth was like nothing Id ever heard before. This skinny little guy sat between the two of us and just wailed （哀号）and wailed. It was as if his whole world was just destroyed.注意：1

9、 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Something inside me was telling me what to do.Finally, we took him home with us.参考答案：Something inside me was telling me what to do. I wanted to help the poor boy. Although I had three children of my own and a modest family income, I decided to adopt the boy. I told m

10、y husband what I thought, and he immediately agreed, saying, Thats exactly what I wanted to tell you. I told the boy we would give him a home and take care of him for his mother. The boy nodded, crying.Finally, we took him home with us. We introduced Stephen to our three children and told them that

11、he would live with us in the future. My children happily accepted and warmly took Steven to visit his new home and discussed making room for Steven. I was glad that my children were so kind and willing to share everything with other children. Stephen soon integrated into our family and lived a happy

12、 life with us.【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在癌症护理中心作护士，Patty是一位患有脑癌的病人， 她去世后留下了她的儿子Stephen, Stephen知道自己的妈妈去世后哭得很厉害。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我内心的某种东西在告诉我该怎么做。”可知，第一段可描写作者具体 的打算，也就是要收养这个男孩。由第二段首句内容“最后，我们带他和我们一起回家“可知，第二段可描写作者带Stephen 回家后所发生的事情。2,续写线索：决定收养告诉丈夫Stephen同意孩子们接受3 .词汇激活行为类决定：decide/determine告诉：tell/inf

13、orm点头：nod/give the nod接受：accept/take情绪类高兴地：happily/delightedly热情地：warmly/fervidly【点睛】高分句型 1Although I had three children of my own and a modest family income, I decided to adopt the boy.（由although引导的让步状语从句）高分句型 2I told my husband what I thought, and he immediately agreed, saying, Thats exactly what

14、I wanted to tell you/（由what引导的宾语从句，现在分词作状语，what引导的表语从 句）注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I rushed towards Stan and tried to help him.That night, we all routinely sat around the campfire and I saw Stans worry as clear as daylight.参考答案：Para 1:I rushed towards Stan and tried to help him. He was hit

15、ting his clothes violently. I did what must be done. I pulled him into a mud pool. He was shocked at first, and then he must have realized why I did it. The ants went away. Since Stan and I were both covered in mud, we decided to head back. I guess youre going to have a pretty good story fbr everyon

16、e J Stan said awkwardly. Yeah, I guess so. Youll probably be known as Dancing Ant from now on. Para 2:That night, we all routinely sat around the campfire and I saw Stans worry as clear as daylight I knew how it felt to be teased; it wasnt fun. I could see Stans worry which then turned into surprise

17、. The next day when I was picked for a basketball team, someone called, Unfair! Shrieking Toads a natural jumper! Stan shouted, Knock it off, guys. His name is Jay. I wouldnt have minded being given a cool nickname. But being known as plain “Jay”, and Stans friend, turned out to be cool too.【解析】【导语】

18、本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者参加夏令营时，被掉在身上的树蛙吓得惊叫，一块露营 的Stan给作者取外号“尖叫的蛤蟆”，而且作者每次经过他身边时，他总是拿此取笑作者。 几天后他被蚂蚁吓得手忙脚乱，大声呼叫，正好被作者遇到了。【详解】.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我冲向Stan,试图帮助他。”可知，第一段可描写Stan被蚂蚁吓到后 的场面以及作者是如何帮助Stan的。由第二段首句内容“那天晚上，我们照例围坐在营火旁，我清楚地看到Stan的担忧。”可 知，第二段可描写作者没有嘲笑Stan,以及解释作者这样做的原因。1 .续写线索：作者帮助StanStan吃惊Stan担忧被嘲笑Stan维护作者作者感

19、 悟.词汇激活行为类拍打:hit/pat决定：decide to/ determine to嘲笑：tease/laugh at情绪类吃惊：shocked /surprised尴尬：awkwardly / embarrassedly【点睛】高分句型 1 Since Stan and I were both covered in mud, we decided to head back.（运用 了 since 引导原因状语从句）高分句型 2 But being known as plain Jay”, and Stans friend, turned out to be cool too.（运用

20、了动名词作主语）2. （2022.广东汕头.一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。After a very meaningful conversation with my dad about the old days, we came up with an object that we both remembered clearly. It was my very first bicycle. My mind told me I got it when I was seven, who was cheated to ride it for fifty

21、 yards alone the first time I tried!My dad put together all the small pieces of the bicycle from a beautiful material that he called, “Your own car. Of course I knew he had some magical ability, but I didnt think he could make such an awesome object. He added the seat and the pedals （踏板）so that I wo

22、uld not have any problems. My dad recalled the bicycle was the smallest he could find while I remember how huge it was. I was so afraid of it and there was no way that I was going to control that monster-sized material. The bicycle was left in my backyard as a decoration for a month because I refuse

23、d to ride it. Honestly, I was scared to try it.After a month, my dad gave me a lecture to teach me what being a man was all about. I was finally determined to try it. My dad was proud of me and I felt very manly. He and I went to the park to see what we could do there.The park was empty when we arri

24、ved. I had no doubt that my dad told everybody not to be there because we had to use it. I felt sorry for other people, but I was proud to have such an omnipotent （全能的）person as my dad.We found a smooth and open space. My dad was holding the back part of the seat to make sure I didnt fell. He promis

25、ed me that I was not going to fall because he would be running right behind, holding the bicycle. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I turned around and found my dad was not behind.I started to pedal and the bicycle moved. 练习，慢慢的开始会骑自行车了。2 .续写线索：转身发现爸爸不在后面爸爸放开手我摔倒了爸爸教我骑反复 的练习慢慢会自己骑了.词汇激活行为类反复练习：re

26、peated the practice/ practice over and over again .学会技巧：learned the skills/master the skills/get the skills.转身：turned around/turn back情绪类对某人生气：be angry with/be mad with害怕:scared/ afraid【点睛】高分句型 1 I was so scared I felt like I was going to fall at any moment.（运用 了 be+形容词弓| 导的宾语从句，其中省去连词that。）高分句型 2 I

27、 felt that I could ride independently slowly, while my father was cheering for me. （运用了 while引导的时间状语从句。）3. （2022.广东深圳.一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。Last March, Margarito drove to visit his mother who lived in the countryside. When he set off for home, Margaritos mother looked at the dark

28、sky and noticed the sign of a coming storm. Worried about her sons safety, she told him to drive as carefully as possible on his way home and he promised to give her a call upon his arrival.With his mothers words in mind, Margarito approached the main road carefully. Soon, it started to rain heavily

29、. Eager to get home, Margarito began to drive faster. Two hours later, he came to a bumpy mountain road that had been flooded by a creek （小溪）.Margarito, driving a four-wheel drive truck, figured that he would be OK. At that moment, he didnt realize that such a thought would be a big mistake.It was h

30、alfway across the creek that an unfortunate incident took place: The rushing waters grabbed hold of his vehicle, pushing it off the road and sending it down a rocky creek bed. The truck finally stopped some 80 feet away. Margarito problems only grew from there as the water had somehow positioned the

31、 truck into the creek bank at a 45-degree angle, making it difficult for him to open the drivers side door. Injured and trapped inside with the muddy water rising quickly, Margarito was certain he was going to die. Shaking with fear, he was at a loss about what to do.On the road right behind Margari

32、to were a delivery worker named Steve and his nephew Mike, who were on the way to deliver furniture to customers in the countryside. They witnessed the horrible incident, and when Margaritos truck came to rest in the middle of the overflowing creek, Steve quickly began to take action. First, he grab

33、bed a rope from the back of his vehicle and used it to ensure he could safely approach the truck. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Next, he turned to Mike and yelled, Give me a rock!Margarito was about to thank Steve and Mike when the mobile phone in his jacket pocket rang.参考答案:Next, he turned t

34、o Mike and yelled, Give me a rock! With the rock, he hit the window over and over but had little success. Steve then shouted to Margarito to move away from the window. He balanced himself on the truck, leaned back and threw the rock at the window. Finally, the glass broke and Steve kicked in the rem

35、aining pieces of glass. Relieved, Margarito reached out forSteves hand and was rescued. The two men escaped and returned to safety.Margarito was about to thank Steve and Mike when the mobile phone in his jacket pocket rang. With trembling hands, Margarito took out the phone and pressed it to his ear

36、. His mothers anxious voice came over the phone, “Are you home yet? Everythings good?” Tears welled up in his eyes at the familiar sound of concern. Margarito choked up as he explained the accident to his mom and comforted her. Hanging up the phone, he turned to Steve and Mike and sincerely thanked

37、both of them. Cold as the rain was, great warmth filled his heart like never before.【解析】【导语】本文以玛格丽托开车去看望住在乡下的母亲为线索展开，讲述了去年3月，玛格丽托去看望 住在乡下的母亲，返程途中遭遇到了暴风雨，他的车被卡在山路上的一条小溪中间，他受伤 了并被困在里面，这时，送货员史蒂夫和他的侄子迈克目睹了这可怕的一幕，他们把玛格丽 托从车里救了出来。玛格丽托对两位营救他的恩人非常感激。【详解】1 .段落续写由第一段首句内容“接着，他转向迈克喊道：“给我一块石头！可知，第一段可描写送货员史蒂夫看到玛格

38、丽托被困在车里，立刻想到了必须马上用石头砸破车窗户，把玛格丽托 营救出来，详细叙述他营救玛格丽托的过程。由第二段首句内容“玛格丽托正要感谢史蒂夫和迈克，这时他夹克口袋里的手机响了。” 可知，第二段可描写玛格丽托被救后接到了他母亲的电话，电话中他向母亲讲述了刚才自己 经历的惊险一幕，挂断电话后，玛格丽托向史蒂夫和迈克表达的真诚的感谢之情。2,续写线索：史蒂夫砸车窗玛格丽托获救玛格丽托接到母亲电话玛格丽托表达 感谢3.词汇激活 行为类 喊叫：shout / yell out 营救，得救：rescue /save 解释：explain /interpret/illustrate 情绪类焦急的：anx

39、ious / worried真诚地:sincerely /honestly【点睛】【高分句型1】Margarito choked up as he explained the accident to his mom and comforted her.（运用 了 as 弓导 的时间状语从句）【高分句型2】Cold as the rain was, great warmth filled his heart like never before.（运用 了 形容词+as + 主语+ 系动词倒装句型）4. （2022.山东临沂.一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完

40、整的短文。As a nurse at the cancer care center where Ive worked fbr seven years, Til do almost anything to make a patient feel better. But when I met Patty at the center, in 2011, she didnt want my help.She was a tiny 44-year-old single mom battling an aggressive head and neck cancer. Unlike many of our

41、other patients, Patty was alone during her treatment, but no matter what I did. I couldnt get her to open up. She just buried herself in book or pulled a blanket over her head to fend off conversation.Eventually I hit on a reliable way to make Patty smile: mentioning her nine-year-old son, Stephen.

42、Shed tell me how well he did in school, how hed been selected to read a poem he wrote at a local bookstore. She desperately wanted to live for him. With three kids myself, I totally understood how she felt.After a year and a half of treatment, in August 2012, Patty was told her cancer had spread, an

43、d I learned she wouldnt live much longer. My first thought was, “Whats going to happen to Stephen?”Nurses at the center shared stories at their meetings about how bright and unusual the boy was. but no one seemed to know how to resolve the issue of what would happen to him when his mom died. My husb

44、and, Michael, who too works at the center, started hearing about Patty and Stephen.参考答案：I turned around and found my dad was not behind. I was so scared I felt like I was going to fall at any moment. Sure enough, after shaking my body several times, I fell to the ground. I was very angry with my fat

45、her why let go of my hand and let me ride alone. My father smiled and said to me: Its OK, stick to it for a while.* 1 Then he started to teach me how to keep my center of gravity in balance. I learned the skills my father taught me, and repeated the practice several times.I started to pedal and the

46、bicycle moved. The bicycle moved when I pressed on the pedals. I rode for some distance and I felt my body was in balance. I felt that I could ride independently slowly, while my father was cheering for me. Finally I could ride a bike just like a free bird flying happily in the air.【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和在和爸爸就过去的时光进行了一次非常有意义的交谈 后，他们想出了一件我们都记得很清楚的东西。就是作者的第一辆自行车以及作者第一次骑 自行车的经历故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我转过身，发现爸爸不在后面。”可知，第一段可描写爸爸想放开手 让作者独自骑行。由第二段首句内容“我一踩踏板，自行车就动了。”可知，第二段可描写作者通过反复的