读后续写 练习写作指导讲义--高考英语复习写作备考.docx

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1、读后续写练习写作指导讲义读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。The Saturday before Christmas, 1 oclock a.m., I was heading for a bird-watching site a few hours north. The weather forecast called for the possibility of fog, but the drive down was clear.As I approached the destination, the fog began to build. At a ben

2、d, I hit a road shoulder and lost control of the truck. I tried to correct, but it was too late. With a clang, the back of my truck went over a steep bank and slid down to the water. There was a series of flashes, clicks, and whirs before all lights and electronics went out. I prayed that the water

3、wasnt deep.At first, the scene seemed peaceful, almost beautiful. In the dim light, I could barely make out that I was in a large canal floating gently downstream and spinning slowly. I tried to open the door, but it was locked. The water had shorted the electrical system.I remembered I had a glass

4、breaker. It was in the centre console （仪表盘）.I grabbed the tool and gave the passenger window a sharp hit, but the breaker merely bounced off. I hit it again, with the same result. I tried a two-handed swingbut only managed to scratch the window.With each failed attempt, the urgency of my situation b

5、uilt. Water gathered at my feet. I lay down on the seat and tried to kick out the window, but my feet just bounced off. By this point, the truck was mostly submerged （淹没）and the water was pushing against the window. Inside, the water level was over the seat, and cold water soaked my back and neck.If

6、 I could reach my toolbox behind the seat, surely I would find the tool to break the window. I dived for it, with objects floating around me: a plastic bottle, a foldable windshield cover, a small pillow. The inside of my truck had become a giant snow globe, and I was trapped in it.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为1

7、50左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:While struggling with the toolbox, my hand hit my fire extinguisher by acciden t.Paragraph 2:I swam for shore and tried to climb up the bank of the canal. 写作解析前文分析时间the Saturday before Christmas, 1 oclock a.m.

8、地点on the way to a bird-watching site a chanal人物I事件I was heading for a bird-watching site but an accident happened.主要情节圣诞节前的那个周六，为了观鸟，我凌晨一点出发前往观鸟地。天气预报说，可能有 雾，但没特别留意。在接近目的地的时候，在一拐弯处，因雾太浓，看不清，车撞到了路 肩上，之后车滑进了水渠里。车子到了水里，因为浸水，汽车出现了故障，更麻烦的是， 车门打不开，没法逃生。后来，经过一系列的努力，下文分析两段开头段1:While struggling with the tool

9、box, my hand hit my fire extinguisher by accident.段2:I swam for shore and tried to climb up the bank of the canal.情节安排段1:于是就潜水去取灭火器，但因水冰车晃，没法抓牢。求生的欲望，让我在拿到灭火器后把窗砸开了。就从砸破的车窗逃出去。段2：寒风低温让我一时爬不上岸。最终经过多次尝试，用尽最后一点力气，上了岸。反思此事，吸取教训。范文1Paragraph 1:While struggling with the toolbox, my hand hit my fire exting

10、uisher by accident. I dived for it, but the cold water and the swinging motion of the truck made it impossible for me to grasp it tightly. However, it was the belief of survival that gave me the perseverance to swim to the window. I gathered all my strength, grasped the fire extinguisher and slammed

11、 the window.It was really a life-saving tool, which helped to crack the passenger window. A definite relief came to me. Nothing was more important than being alive. I passed through the broken window.(86 words)Paragraph 2:I swam for shore and tried to climb up the bank of the canal. The biting wind

12、and the low temperature added the difficulty, making my body lose almost all sensation. With several constant attempts, I managed to take hold of the stone on the canal side with my last strength. Having a short rest, I succeeded in getting myself out of trouble. When dawn finally came and thefog fa

13、ded, surviving was the happiest thing, though I had no chance to head for a bird-watching site! Looking back, I always told myself never blindly to be over-trusting. (84 words)范文2While struggling with the toolbox, my hand hit the fire extinguisher by accident. I grasped and used it to break the wind

14、ow. The extinguisher, too, merely bounced off the glass. The water level had risen. I experienced a moment of fear bordering on panic. But I knew I had to carry on. In the following time, I swung the extinguisher underwater, went above the water to gulp air, and then dived down and took as many swin

15、gs as my breath would allow, with the only hope of weakening the window through repeated impact. I didnt know how long it lasted, but suddenly the impact felt different. I extended my left hand and felt a hole in the window. Im going to live! I used the tool to break away the rest of the glass and s

16、wam out of the truck. (127 words)I swam for shore and tried to climb up the side of the canal. The bank was wet and slippery and I noticed multiple cuts in my fingers from ripping the door open, all of which made climbing up extremely difficult. A part of me just wanted to give up. My life flashed b

17、efore my eyes. I thought of all the people Id known, the experiences Id had, and the experiences I would never have. It took all my remaining willpower to scream at the top of my lungs. Incredibly, someone responded. Two birdwatchers spotted me and dragged me onto the bank of the canal with the help of a rope. Finally the sun peeked over the horizon, the fog lifted and my rescuers called in an ambulance. Though embarrassed about losing control of my vehicle, Im pleased that I didnt panic as I went through the problem-solving process. (135 words)