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1、读后续写：成长类Parti ：经典例文（街边按铃）1Parti：成长类故事构造“三部曲”4第一步：成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）4第二步：成长中（蜕变塑造）6第三步：成长后的升华（喜悦+感激+升华）7Part3：成长类场景描写9一、学习知识而成长9二、发挥天赋促成长9三、追逐梦想而成长10四、克服困难促而成长10Part4： 灵活应用11例1： 一首歌改变了我11例2：柔道比赛13Part5：高考真题再现（我的第一份薪水）15【2021年6月浙江卷】 15Parti：经典例文（街边按铃）阅读下面材料。根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的 短文。Ring a BellMs. Tr

2、acy looked up from her yellow notebook and cleared her throat. The noise in the class died down as we turned toward her. Were going to help a charity to collect money by ringing a bell. Each of you will ring it for four hours J she announced. As the words left her lips, complaints could be heard aro

3、und the room. Unwillingly, I dug for my planner and look notes. Four hours of ringing a stupid bell.三、追逐梦想而成长永远不要忽视了梦想的力量！ “做人如果没有理想，跟咸鱼有什么区别呢”。请看下面两个例句。Its never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize y

4、our dreams.追 梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。As long as we dare to dream and dont let difficulties get in our way, anything is possible.只要我们敢于梦想，不被困难所阻挡，一切皆有可能。【分析】take full advantage of 充分利用，realize your dreams 表示实现梦想”四、克服困难促而成长只有克服各种苦难，才能改变现状。请看下面的例句。通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并 竭尽全力克服所有困难，我

5、们最终会实现我们的目标(成功)。The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we dont give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal (success) finally.【分析】smooth 表示“平坦的overcome all th

6、e difficulties 表示克服困难；makeevery effort 表示“做出努力”；as long as，表示“只要”，引导条件状语从句。Part4：灵活应用例L 一首歌改变了我阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的 短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Where were you when you first heard My Heart Will Go On? You know that love song that took over the world in the late 1990s, the one that ruled radios and

7、 television screens, that trilled through the air when you rang your neighbours doorbell, or rang out of a Valentines Day musical card-the song we love to hate now because it is almost shameful to admit how much we listened to it in 1998. Im no fan of the song, but Ill tell you one thingit saved my

8、life.I remember where I was when I heard the song, 13 years old, only a few weeks away from receiving my class eight report card. When my mother and I went to collect it from school, the skies were grey. On the left side of the report card was the failure of my choosingMaths, Physics and Chemistryon

9、 the bottom of the right hand side it said Not Promoted（不升级）in red ink. My mother, an English teacher in another Calcutta school, was too proud to beg the principal for the three marks I needed in Chemistry to be promoted to class nine. I walked along, thinking of the last song I was watching on MTV

10、 before we left for school. It was Dions all & shy; knowing hit My Heart Will Go On You have come to showyou, go on.”I was a fool to have ever thought that I could get away with not studying and watching MTV for hours on end. Till class eight, my father had refused to get a cable connection on the g

11、rounds that my brother and I would forever be glued to the screen, not study and fail the exams. The year after he gave in to his desire to watch late night football, I proved him right. I failed class eight because I was in love with the Backstreet Boys and would watch MTV all the time so that I wo

12、uldnt miss a single video. Thats the whole truth and the band will never know the price I paid for my love.Paragraph 1 ：Failing the year changed the world as I knew it.Paragraph 2:Some months later, when the talent competition was announced in school, I was picked for the final round.【参考答案】Failing t

13、he year changed the world as I knew it. Overnight, it seemed as though everything had changed. I lost my friends in school because every conversation was filled with pity, theirs, and shame, mine. I was stopped from watching TV. At school, some teachers ignored my raising hands because Id already st

14、udied the text before but failed. I used to love singing, now my life was filled with sadness.失败的这一年改变了我所知道的世界。一夜之间，一切似乎都变了。我在学 校失去了朋友，因为每次谈话都充满了我的怜悯和羞愧。我已经不再看电视了。 在学校，一些老师无视我的举手，因为我以前已经学习过课文，但失败了。我曾 经喜欢唱歌，现在我的生活中充满了悲伤。Some months later, when the talent competition was announced in school, I was pic

15、ked for the final round. On the day of the contest, I stood before the entire school, closed my eyes and sang the song. In that moment, I realized what You have come to show you“ meant to me-I had come to show me to my classmates and my teachers, to show them that I wasnt just a girl who got held ba

16、ck, that failed, that I was good for something, that I was enough the way I was. Sometimes, when you sing like youmean the words, chances are you might win.几个月后，当学校宣布了比赛时，我被选中进入了决赛。比赛那天，我站在 整个学校面前，闭上眼睛，唱着这首歌。在那一刻，我意识到“我要展示给你看“ 对我意味着什么我来给我的同学和老师，让他们展示我不只是一个女孩。有 时候，当你像唱歌的时候，你很有可能会赢的机会。例2：柔道比赛阅读下面材料，根据

17、其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Sometimes your biggest weakness can become your biggest strength. Everyone has his own weakness, but God always offers his unexpected strength in his misfortune. Wed make full use of it just like the girl below, we are certainly fortunate to be given other bl

18、essings from Heaven.The story of one girl who decided to study judo（柔道）despite the fact that she had lost her left arm in a car accident.The girl began lessons with an old Japanese judo instructor. The girl was doing well. So she couldnt understand why, after three months of training, the instructor

19、 had taught her only one move.Instructor, “the girl finally said, “Shouldnt I be learning more moves? It isnt far enough to learn just this.”“This is the only move you know, but this is the only move youll ever need to know, the instructor replied.Not quite understanding , but believing in her teach

20、er, the girl kept training. She didnt dare to complain about anything and it was apparent that since her teacher said so, she had to follow without any unhappiness.Several months later, the instructor took the girl to her first tournament. Surprising herself, the girl easily won her first two matche

21、s. The third match proved to be more difficult, but after some time, her opponent became impatient and charged. The girl skillfully used her one move to win the match. Still amazed by her success, the girl was now in the finals.This time, her opponent was bigger, stronger and more experienced. For a

22、 while, the girl appeared to be over-matched. Concerned that the girl might get hurt, the referee called a time out. She was about to stop the match when the instructor interrupted.“No, the instructor insisted, “Let her continue.”Soon after the match started again, her opponent made a critical mista

23、ke: she dropped her guard. Instantly, the girl used her move to hold her opponent tightly. The girl had won the match and the tournament. She was the champion.Paragraph 1：On the way home, the girl and her teacher reviewed every move in each and every match.Paragraph 2 ：i(Two reasons account for that

24、 you won, ffthe teacher answered.【参考答案】On the way home, the girl and her teacher reviewed every move in each and every match. Then the girl took courage to ask what was really on her mind.Instructor, how did I win the tournament with only one move? Is there any magic power about it? Is my opponent m

25、uch weaker than me? Please tell me the secret.” The judo instructor and his pupil talked excitedly as walking forward. She couldnt wait to know the answer, but the instructor appeared unhurriedly. Finally he opened his mouth.在回家的路上，女孩和她的老师回顾了每一场比赛的每一个动作。然后女孩 鼓起勇气问她到底在想什么。“教练，我是怎么只花一步就赢得锦标赛的？ ”它有 什么魔

26、力吗？我的对手会比我弱得多吗？请告诉我这个秘密。柔道教练和他的学 生兴奋地说。她迫不及待地想知道答案，但老师却急匆匆地出现了。最后，他张 开了嘴。(iTwo reasons account for that you wonf ” the teacher answered youve almost mastered one of the most difficult throws in all of judo. Second, the only known defense for that move is for your opponent to grab your left arm. It i

27、s your biggest weakness that makes you win the match. As a proverb says, Every coin has two sides/ Making full use of your strength is your achievement. Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble. God is fair to everyone.“你赢有两个原因，”老师回答，“首先，你几乎掌握了柔道最困难的投掷之 一。其次，唯一已知的防守是让你的

28、对手抓住你的左臂。这是你最大的弱点，让 你赢得了比赛。正如谚语所说，“每枚硬币都有两面性。”充分利用你的力量是你 的成就。请记住，无论如何你都不会放弃，尤其是在麻烦中。上帝对每个人都是 公平的。”Part5：高考真题再现（我的第一份薪水）【2021年6月浙江卷】My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didnt understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the

29、 money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.I didnt really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and 1thought that I would surpass （超过） anything he had accomplished by the time 1 walked across the stage at high school graduation.Summers in the mid, 70s were spent at ho

30、me shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone （长号）.The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in h

31、is field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and painted at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned toidentify

32、different grasses like cockleburs, lambs-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasnt sure how much it would amount to.At home, my dad said, A jobs a big step to growing up. Im glad you will be contribu

33、ting to the household.H My dads words made me realize that my earning might not be mine to do with as wished.My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasnt interested. I decided it was not fair that 1 had to contribute my money.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少

34、使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: The pay day arrived at last.Paragraph 2:1 understood immediately what my parents were worried about.【参考答案】Paragraph 1:The pay day arrived at last. I was glad that I finally got the payment after working hard for two wee

35、ks. While walking back home with an excited mind. I conceived many plans about how to dispose of it. I needed a new football because the old one we played had already worn out. I intended to purchase my favorite chocolates. Upon approaching the house, I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old

36、 truck, looking sadly. It seemed as if something unpleasant happened. “How much do we still need to pay for a new truck?*, asked my mother. Three hundred dollars, but we just had two hundred left.”发薪日终于到了。我很高兴，在我努力工作了两周后，我终于得到了 报酬。一边兴奋地走回家。我构思了许多关于如何处理它的计划。我需要 一个新的足球，因为我们踢的旧足球已经用坏了。我打算买我最喜欢的巧 克力。走近房

37、子，我注意到我爸爸和妈妈站在旧卡车旁边，悲伤地看着。 似乎发生了一些不愉快的事情。“我们想买一辆新卡车还得付多少钱？ ”。我 妈妈问。300美元，但我们只剩下200美元了。”Paragraph 2:I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. Really, the truck my dad drove often broke down on the way, which made my dad in trouble. My parents had intended to buy a new truck but cou

38、ldn*t afford it. Suddenly, I realized what I should do. Stepping forward, I said, “Dad, here is what I received for my work. I think it would help you a little/5 A little surprised at what I said, my mom hugged me tightly. That night, before I went to bed, 1 thought I would tell the farmer the next

39、day that I would continue my work, after all 1 grew up.我立刻明白了我的父母在担心什么。真的，我爸爸开的卡车在路上经常坏了， 这给我爸爸惹上了麻烦。我父母本来打算买一辆新卡车，但买不起。突然，我意 识到我应该做什么。我走上前去，说：“爸爸，这是我工作的回报。我想这会对 你有帮助。我说的话有点惊讶，妈妈紧紧地拥抱着我。那天晚上，在我睡觉之前, 我想第二天我会告诉农夫，在我长大了之后，我将继续我的工作。Four hours that I could be studying for the SAT. Was this supposed to be

40、 a joke? I joined the students around the table and signed up for Ihe first day of break-to get it over with.A few weeks later, I was standing next to the big blue-and-white Walmart. There was another guy holding ajar across from me. Great, I was going to be stuck here ringing a bell with a guy who

41、was trying to get donations for another charity. To top it off, it was only about 4.4 .Slowly, I put on the red dress bearing the symbol of ow charity. I hoped that I already spent two minutes doing that, Ring! Ring! A group of older women came up with their walking sticks to drop in some change. A

42、man with a broad-cimmed bat came by and put some coins in. I checked my phone. Just 10 minutes had passed.A strong bitterly-cold wind blew against my人 / V 1rzfreezing face. I was starting to regret ignoring myYmoms advice to wear a scarf. I looked up, wishing that time would pass more quickly. A few

43、 birds swept around the poles, The sky was gently blue. Palm trees waved in the cold wind. How comfortable it might be to curl（蜷缩）up with a hot cup of tea and a book on the cozy sofa. Then another ring brought me back to reality.注意:L续写词数应为15。左右;From the parking lot stepped out a poorly-dressed man,

44、walking with difficulty toward me.Inspired by his generosity, I continued to ring my bell happily.【参考答案】From the parking lot stepped out a poorly-dressed man, walking with difficultytoward me. I saw his unbalanced shoulders and awkward figure. His hair was a mess and his shirt was dirty. I stopped r

45、inging the bell, wondering what he was going to do. He pulled some change out of his worn pocket and reached towards the bucket. I couldnt help but say, “Thank you, sir. He turned to smile. The money he donated was not a lot, but it was clearly a lot to him. This act of charity, though not much, was

46、 worth so much more than donations given by those who were better off.从停车场从一个衣着不好的男人走出来，艰难地朝我走去。我看到了他那不 平衡的肩膀和尴尬的身材。他的头发很乱，衬衫也很脏。我不再按铃了，不知道 他要做什么。他从破旧的口袋里掏出一些零钱，伸手向水桶走去。我忍不住要说, “谢谢你，先生。”他转身微笑起来。他捐的钱并不多，但显然对他来说是很多的。 这项慈善行为虽然不多，但比那些富裕的捐款价值得多。Inspired by his generosity, I continued to ring my bell happ

47、ily. The bell rang so merrily that it attracted more people. I broadly smiled at everyone who approached me, feeling me shameful inside about my unwillingness and resistance when given the task. It was still chilly but I was bathed in the sunshine of kindness. Many say that these days people are bec

48、oming more and more selfish. I say that whoever believes that needs to go and ring a bell for a charity as I did受他慷慨的启发，我继续高兴地按铃。钟响得很愉快，所以它吸引了更多的 人。我对所有走近我的人哈哈一笑，当我接受任务时，我的不情愿和抵抗感到可 耻。天气仍然很冷，但我却沐浴在善良的阳光下。许多人说，现在人们已经变得 越来越自私了。我说，那些认为需要这样做的人都会像我一样去为慈善机构打电 话【解析】本文以态度变化为线索展开，讲述了作者一开始对于摇铃的任务很抗拒，在执行 过程中感受

49、到了人性的温暖与伟大，慢慢的开始接受并积极起来的故事。1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“一个衣衫褴褛的男人从停车场出来，艰难地向我走来。” 可知，第一段可描写作者通过这个男人的捐赠态度发生改变。由第二段首句内容“受他慷慨大方的鼓舞，我继续愉快地按门铃。”可知，第二段可描写作者感受到人性的温暖，反思自己。2 .续写线索：不情愿后悔感动积极感悟.词汇激活行为类向某人走过来：walk toward/up to掏出：pull out of/take/pick out情绪类感谢：thank sb fbr/show ones appreciation/gratitude/be grateful感到羞耻：be ashamed of/feel ashamed【点睛