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1、专题33读后续写之如何构思故事情节考点题型技巧四流考点导航一、情节拓展方法1：选择关键词1.关键词语blow 吹howl咆哮crash碰撞stir搅动darken使变黑envelope信封，包裹gloomy阴郁的dip蘸pour 泼sunshine /sunlight 阳光breeze微风dim昏暗的faint微弱的winding蜿蜒的frighten是某人害怕chilling寒冷的thunder雷,打雷lightening 闪电frosty寒冷的melt融化and returned the remaining and the money. Peter put those shells bac

2、k into his pocket very happily, leaving with Shirley holding the doll tightly.Seeing Peter leaving happily with his sister holding the doll tightly, an assistant in that shop got surprised. He asked the shopkeeper, Sir! You only charge them for 2 shells?! The shopkeeper said with a smile, “For us th

3、ese are shells, but for the boy they are treasures. His love for his sister is the most precious/ Watching the lovely kids until they were out of sight, he continued, “When he grows up, he will remember he purchased a doll for his sister with the shells from a shopkeeper. He will cherish love and wa

4、rmth in life-cherish every little shining sea shell in his heart/7 （196 词）Version 2With his eyes fixed on Peters pocket, he wondered what Peter would do. Hesitantly taking out the treasured sea shells in his pockets, Peter asked in a low voice, “Sir, can these help cover the cost?” Watching the 5-ye

5、ar- old carefully lay down all his shining shells on the counter, the man was somewhat touched, but he just pretended to be counting the shells seriously, “Let me see, one, two.Ok. The shells are just enough. You can take the doll and save the money”. Hearing this, Peter felt truly amazed and thanke

6、d the shopkeeper; who actually wanted to thank the two little kids, especially when he saw a big smile quickly spread over the little girls innocent face. They said goodbye and left happily with the doll.Seeing Peter leaving happily with his sister holding the doll tightly, an assistant in that shop

7、 got surprised. Since his boss had been in such a low mood recently that he seldom wore any smile and talked much. When the shopkeeper turned around and noticed the assistants surprised look, he said smilingly, zzlovely kids, arent they? When I see the little boy is willing to take all he has to buy

8、 a doll for his lovely sister; it really warms my heart. The assistant replied thoughtfully, Z/When he grows up, he will remember he purchased a doll for his sister with the shells from a shopkeeper; which will surely warm his heart, too. （209 词）【写作解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个以贝壳为宝物的小男孩与妹妹逛商场，妹妹渴望得 到洋娃娃，但没有足

9、够钱的故事。1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“他的眼睛盯着彼得的口袋，不知道彼得会怎么做。可知，第一段可 描写Peter将自己宝贵的贝壳拿出来给妹妹买了洋娃娃。由第二段首句内容“看到彼得带着妹妹紧紧地抱着洋娃娃高兴地走了，那家商店的一个售 货员很惊讶。可知，第二段可描写店主解释想要帮助Peter的原因。2 .续写线索：掏出贝壳一一留下贝壳一一高兴离开一一店员惊讶一一店主解释.词汇激活 行为类 掏出贝壳：take out shells/pull out shells 数钱：count money/tell over money珍惜：cherish/treasure情绪类尸定决心： make up

10、 ones mind/be determined to高兴：be glad/happy/cheerful 惊讶：be amazed/surprised【范文点评】高分句型 l.He took out all the shells from his pocket, giving them to the shopkeeper, who took them and started to count as if he had been counting the money.（由关系代词 who 引导非 限制性定语从句修饰the shopkeeper）高分名J型 2.Peter put those sh

11、ells back into his pocket very happily, leaving with Shirley holding the doll tightly.（现在分词作伴随状语）高分句型 3.When he grows up, he will remember he purchased a doll for his sister with the shells from a shopkeeper, （ when 引导的时间状语从句）3.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。When I was in second grade, I did s

12、omething that really taught me a lesson. After finishing my homework on a sunny weekend, I was thinking about what to do for fun. Then my best friend, Eric, called me and asked me to go for a bike ride in a park near our school. I readily agreed.I got on my bike and couldnt wait to fly to the park.

13、As soon as I entered the park, I saw Eric, who was reading a book on a stone bench. How could this fellow be so quiet today? What a rare thing! I shouted to him, “Eric, Im coming!” But Eric remained the same. This guy became crazy about reading. What book interested him so much?It was not until I pa

14、tted him on the shoulder that he looked up. Eric quickly put his book on the bench, smiled at me and said, Tm so sorry! Now lets start riding! Then we rode our bikes freely in the vast park. After a while, we went on our own routes to enjoy the fun. Suddenly, I found myseif riding to the stone bench

15、 where Eric had just sat, and I noticed the book again. It raised my curiosity greatly. I thought to myself, “What kind of book could it be that made him so captivated （着迷）?” I stopped and bent down to pick up the book. Wow! A Little Story, a Big Lesson. This was （he book of my dreams! Suddenly, an

16、idea came to my mind: Take the book away secretly!I looked around, but there was no sign of Eric, so I put the book into my jacket, looked for Eric and deliberately rode my bike past him in the park. I told him that there was something urgent going on at home, so I had to leave first. Eric smiled an

17、d said goodbye to me. Then I hurried home on my bike. When I passed the living room, my mother saw me and asked, Whats that bilge （鼓 起）in your jacket? uOh. Nothing.,I replied. Then I slipped into my room and opened the book.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Paragraph 1Suddenly, my mother came in.Para

18、graph 2Finally, / told my mother exactly what had happened.【参考范文】Suddenly, my mother came in. She stood in front of me and stared at me calmly. The more silent she was, the more frightened I became. After a few minutes, my mother finally spoke up, “Tell me where you got this book.” I borrowed it fro

19、m one of my friends. No, from the school library/ I said. My mother touched my head and said, “Just tell me the truth. Your eyes have told me your secret.”Finally, I told my mother exactly what had happened. t4It is a good habit to read books, but you have made a big mistake. There is no excuse fbr

20、you to take other peoples books without their permission. Come on! Return the book to Eric and apologize to On hearing these words, I was really ashamed of what had done. I said nothing, closed the book, ran out of the house, got on my bike and sped off to the park.【写作分析】所给文章讲述作者在和朋友Eric 一起游公园的时候看到E

21、ric拿着自己一直想 拥有的一本书，因为喜欢，他决定不告诉朋友偷偷带走，于是他找了个借口就离开了，回到 家，妈妈看到作者鼓起的衣服，问是什么，他搪塞了一句就走进卧室去看书了。【写作步骤】.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“突然，我的妈妈走了进来。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈发现作者的异常 之后进来了解情况的过程。由第二段首句内容“最终我告诉了妈妈发生的事。可知，第二段可描写作者和妈妈坦白之 后，妈妈对作者的教育和开导。1 .续写线索：走进来询问坦白开导忏悔弥补.词汇激活 行为类 盯着：stare al/gaze al归还：return/give back道歉：apologize to sb./say s

22、orry to sb.情绪类害怕：frightened/afraid羞耻：ashamed/dishonored【写作亮点】高分句型1. Tell me where you got this book.（由where引导的宾语从句作Tell的宾语） 高分句型 2|. On hearing these words, I was really ashamed of what had done.（由 what 引导的 宾语从句）4、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成篇完整的短文。The Meredith family lived in a small community. As

23、 the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew

24、 they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their lit

25、tle boy. The little boy -his name was Bernard-had interested her very much.“I wish you could see him,“ she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I dont see what he can do.”After their mother left the room, the ch

26、ildren sat thinking about Bernard. z/l wish we could help him to earn money/ said Clara. /zHis family is suffering so much.”“So do 1/ said Harry. We really should do something to assist them.”For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, have a great idea! I ha

27、ve a solution that we can all help accomplish（完成）The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. tell you what we can do/ said John. You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn（爆米花），and put it into paper bags, and

28、Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右：2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too.With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.【答案】When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good

29、 one, too. So, they went to the local supermarket together. They bought a bag of corn and some special bags for popcorn. When they got home, they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags. With the popcorn, they went to Bernards home. They told Bernard how to sell the popcorn. Bernard and

30、 his parents were very grateful. And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family.With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn. He earned a lot of money. Then, he wanted to be self-dependent. Therefo

31、re, he asked Mrs. Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn. After that, not only did he sell popcorn, but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better. Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man. He did not forget the help of Merediths family, and he also did what he could to hel

32、p those in need.【解析】本文是根据短文进行续写，使之成为一个完整的故事.【详解】1.认真读懂所给提供的材料:善良的Meredith 一家住在一个小社区里，他们想帮助 一个贫困的家庭。那家的男主人生病卧床，女主人要照顾丈夫、无法外出赚钱，家中的小男 孩Bernard也做不了什么事情,生活十分困难。后来,Meredith的孩子想出了一个主意制 作爆米花，让Bernard去卖爆米花。2 .根据所给材料确定文章主题:Meredith如何通过制作和实爆米花帮助Bernard 一家摆脱困境 的。3 .续写部分和前面的文章衔接得上，并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相致，故事情节的向 后延续发展要

33、合乎情理。4 .根据第一段首句 When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too.（当Meredith太太听到John的主意时，她也认为这是个好主意）可以针对如何实现制作爆 米花这个提议展开构思；根据第二段首句With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.（一切准备就绪后，Bernard开始了他的新生意）可以针对Bernard如何通过卖爆 米花让家庭摆脱困境展开构思。5 .续写的语言要尽可能与原文的语言保持风格上的一

34、致。文章时态以一般过去时为主。应使 用自己熟悉的句型和短语进行写作，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使 用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。作文要层次清晰，要点全面, 表达流畅，切合题干要求，句子结构准确，适当补充信息，使篇章结构连贯。5、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We too

35、k a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad a

36、nd I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. The day starts at dawn on my farm, he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while m

37、y dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze（吃草）.I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by

38、myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. Dont be late for supper/ Uncle Paul cried, and keep to the track so that you dont get lost! OK! my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It

39、 was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven（编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.注意：（1）所续写短文的

40、词数应为150左右；（2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.【答案】Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to

41、the left to avoid the little rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, “Hold on!” All of a sudden the horse began to run. My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked arou

42、nd and realized that we were way off the track.We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad

43、 and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night!6、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Peter, a 5-year-old boy, showed such great interest in sea shells that he would rush to pick them up with his 3-year-ol

44、d sister; Shirley. They screamed out their joy as Peter collected his treasure into his pockets. For Peter, sea shells lay shinning on the peaceful beach, waiting for him, just like stars twinkling （闪烁）in the sky. As waves touched them, they seemed to be flowers blooming （绽放）in gentle wind.One day,

45、Peter was wandering through market with Shirley, with some shells in his pocket. Suddenly Peter found his younger sister was lagging （落后）behind. He stopped and looked back, finding Shirley was standing in front of a toy shop and was staring at something with great interest.The boy went back to her a

46、nd asked, What do you want? Shirley pointed at the doll, wearing a smile on her innocent face. Peter held his younger sisters tiny hand, walking into the shop. He tiptoed （踮起脚尖）to reach for the doll, and like a responsible elder brother; gave the precious doll to Shirley. Holding tightly the doll, t

47、he sister was very very happy.The shopkeeper was watching everything and getting amused to see the matured （成熟的） behaviour of the boy. Now the boy came to the counter and asked the shopkeeper, How much does this doll cost, Sir?”The shopkeeper was a cool man, who had suffered from something in his li

48、fe. So he asked the boy with love and affection, Well, what can you pay? Peter reached into his clothes for money that was intended for these two little guys breakfast. Having counted the money, Peter put it carefully on the counter; asking again, 6Sir, is it enough for my little sisters doll?The amusing scene just in front of the shopkeeper eventually brought a smile on his face.Shaking his head slightly, he replied, My boy, I am afraid it seems not to be enough. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。With his eyes fixed on Peters pocket, he wondered what Peter would do.Seeing Pe