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1、专题01人与动物+人与植物（人与自然）新高考高一读后续写热点话题写作技巧【读后续写】1.（安徽省十校联盟2022-2023学年高一下学期开年考英语试题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Elephants are known to have an excellent memory. According to studies, they could still recognize and remember a face, whether it is a human or another elephant. An elephants memory is im

2、portant to its survival. Elephants living in a rainforest need to remember the place where they search for food.Its always joyous to watch elephants getting reunited 便聚）with fellow elephants or people they came across in iheir lives. And just like humans, elephants lake note of the faces （hey see an

3、d recognize （hem like we remember our family, friends, and hundreds more of people. And when they see a familiar （熟悉的）face, youd know how happy they are.A veterinarian （兽医）recently had a heartwarming reunion with an elephant he saved. Pattarapol Manccon saved a wild elephant named Plai Thang in Rayo

4、ng, Eastern Thailand 12 years ago. Plai Thang was then suffering from a disease called Trypanosomiasis. Without proper treatment, the disease could cause an elephants sudden death. It can also be contagious （传染）to other animals. Elephants that suffer from Trypanosomiasis tend to go farther out of th

5、e area since they are weak and cant fight.Dr. Maneeon noticed that Plai Thang was very ill and it had very little chance to survive. The poor creature was struggling to eal or drink waler, and it could hardly stand on its feel.It took a while before the elephant allowed Dr. Maneeon to approach it. H

6、e shared that it was also challenging to find and reach for treatment. Plai Thang was so clever to be hiding farther from usual to avoid possible predators （捕食者）,so it was no easy task to take it to treatment. Anyway, with the help of a team of volunteers, the veterinarian eventually managed to take

7、 Plai Thang to a nearby zoo.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右: 一次作者不小心摔倒，无法求助，幸好有Gypsy的陪伴与安慰，直到隔壁邻居下班回家，听到作者呼救， 打电话叫来救护车。Gypsy在屋子里面对这么多陌生男人时显得很平静。她似乎意识到他们是来帮助作者的 故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“Gypsy显然被我的喊叫弄糊涂了。”可知，第一段可描写Gypsy陪伴作者的经过。由第二段首句内容“不久，我的邻居来到了房子里。”可知，第二段可描写邻居叫来救护车，虽然有很多陌 生男人，但Gypsy没有乱叫。2 .续写线索：陪伴安慰呼救一欣慰一治疗感悟.词汇激活行

8、为类.意识到：realize/be aware of .看：look at/watch.叫喊：call/shout at情绪类.安慰：comfort/ give comfort （o .幸运地：lucky/fortunately【点睛】高分句型 1. However, after a few minutes, she did the only thing she knew to do.（运用 了省略关系代词 that 引 导的定语从句）高分句型 2. It was my next-door neighbor, who had just come home and heard my shouts

9、.（运用 了 who 引导非 限定性定语从句）5.（河南省信阳高级中学2022.2023学年高一上学期12月月考英语试题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“I just couldn,t stop thinking about her. Thats what a nine-year-old cat lover Sutter Rowse said after he saw a story about a stray cat （流浪猫）in his community of Williams Lake, British Columbia, which wa

10、s in need of surgery （外科手术）.He decided to do something about it and raise funds to help the cat. Now, that cat is much better and has a brand new owner, all thanks to Sutters hard work and clever thinking.Online, Sutter came across a story posted by his local animal shelter. The BC SPCA explained th

11、at the cat which was named Hazel by shelter staff had been found at the transfer station in Anahim Lake, about fourhours west of Sutters home. A transfer station is a place where garbage and other waste are sorted. Shelter staff said Hazel was looking for food there.They later discovered that the ba

12、ck part of it was injured. The head of her femur （股骨）was broken and died meaning the death of cells in some part of the body - had set in. so Hazel would need surgery to gel better. SPCA staff put out a call to the community to raise funds for it, and thats when Sutter got to work. Sutter thought up

13、 a good idea: making use of the power of cinnamon buns （肉桂面包）.He knew if there was anything that could get community members to empty their pockets, it would be this sweet treat: cinnamon buns.He and his mum, Leslie Rowsc, got to workbaking, and his mum posted about Sutters efforts on a social media

14、 page for his local community. Around 15 dozen （or 180） cinnamon buns later, Sutter had raised $850. His mum dropped off the money at the shelter, and Hazel was able to start her surgeries.Following HazeEs surgeries and several days of recovery, Sutters mum was ready to share some good news. Sutters

15、 mum told Sutter that Hazel had a new owner. She asked him to guess who that owner was. I guessed us! And I was right,M said Sutter.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。They decided to pick up Hazel on weekend.Since adopting Hazel, Sutter has made a lot to improve her condition.【答案】One possible vers

16、ion:They decided to pick up Hazel on weekend. That was a dream which came true for Sutter, who has been asking for a cat since he was really little. On Saturday morning, Sutter got up very early, earlier than he does in weekdays. The family had breakfast quickly and they drove to the local animal sh

17、elter. When Sutter saw Hazel, it was a little shy and looked weak. Sutter touched the head of Hazel softly and it looked as if Hazel had accepted the new kind owner completely.Since adopting HazekSutler has made a lol to improve her condition. He prepared many kinds of nutritious foods fbr Hazel car

18、efully. Whats more, he helped Hazel walk little by little and accompanied it as much as possible to make sure it enjoyed itself. After weeks of careful care, it recovered much from her injuries.The BC SPCA thanked Sutter fbr the “sweet“ fundraiser idea and helping Hazel recover. uWc hope she will re

19、gain full jumping and running abilities within the next months,“ said Sutters mum.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Sutter从网上得知一只小猫Hazel受伤，需要手术，他和妈妈通过 做肉桂面包这种“甜蜜”的筹款办法，筹到资金送到动物救济站。后来Sutter收养了小猫，实现了他儿时的梦 想。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“他们决定周末去接哈泽尔。”可知，第一段可描写Sutter要去收养小猫的激动心情以及 见到小猫后的反映。由第二段首句内容“自从收养Hazel以来，它的病情得到了很大改善。”可知，第二

20、段可描写Hazel被收养 后的情况。2 .续写线索：决定接激动见面状况改善感谢.词汇激活 行为类陪伴它： accompany i(/keep it company 玩得开心：enjoy itself /have fun 重新获得：regain /restore 情绪类.感谢：showing ones apprcciation/show ones gratitudc/bc grateful 小心地：carefully /with great care【点睛】高分句型 1 JSuttcr touched the head of Hazel softly and it looked as if Ha

21、zel had accepted the new kind owner completely.（由连接词as if引导的方式状语从句）高句型 2 Whats more, he helped Hazel walk little by little and accompanied it as much as possible to make sure it enjoyed itself.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语）6.（河南省信阳市普通高中20222023学年高一上学期期中教学质量检测英语试题） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。The dog whimp

22、ered （呜咽）and pawed （抓挠）at the leg of the dead man.“Its no good,“ said the boy. Hes not going to move. Hes ”He couldnt bring himself to say the word dead. Instead, he said, “Passed on.The dog whimpered again and then sat on the ground. It looked at the boy expectantly as if waiting for his advice.The

23、 boy looked up at the steep cliff face （峭壁）and pointed in that direction. Thats where we have to go J he said. We have to go up there before the sun set. Somehow or other. Thats the only way we can get home.”The dog gave one more whimper and began to walk downhill as if refusing （o accept his sugges

24、tion.“Not down there. This way, lets go home. The boy shouted hurriedly, waiting tor the dog to return. The dog turned around and looked at the boy for a while. But then it continued its own journey.“Come back. Not that way. Its too far. And you might get lost. The boy shouted at the dog again.The d

25、og paid no attention this time and soon disappeared behind a clump of ferns （ 从蕨类植物）.The boy followed without thinking twice. Soon the boy lost all sense of where he was. The golden red sun was setting and it was getting cold. The only direction he could be sure of was down. And suddenly he was on h

26、is own.“Come back, dog, he shouled. Dont leave me. Ill freeze （冻死）.And so will you. There was no reply from the silent forest. He looked around and up. One gum tree loomed （赫然耸现）above all the others.“I wont move out of sight of that gum tree/ he thought to himself. He didnt dare to go far, just circ

27、ling the gum tree.“Where arc you hiding, dog?” he said.注意：1 .续写短文的词数应为15。左右；.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:Minutes passed, and then an hour or more.Paragraph 2:The words had no sooner left his lips （嘴唇）than he saw the dog.答案 Minutes passed、and ihcn an hour or more. He walked slowly in a big circl

28、e, always keeping the gum tree in sight. While walking around, he also had to push through the bush. Sometimes, he made some noise on purpose to cheer himself up because it was so quiet in the forest. Mm looking fbr you, honey,n he called. Can you hear me? Or are you back on the road? Have you forgo

29、tten me? Left me? Its getting colder.The words had no sooner left his lips （嘴唇）than he saw the dog. It just stood still in front of the boy in a small open space, dirty and hungry. uAre you okey, my dear dog? the boy shouted in an excited voice and immediately rushed over to hug the dog. This time,

30、the dog didnt refuse and softly licked the boys hand in return. It was obvious that it was also happy to see the boy again. Happily, the boy and the dog went home together just before the sun set.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个男孩和他的狗迷路了，在途中他们遇到了一个死掉的人，男 孩抬头看着陡峭的悬崖，指着那个方向，说必须在太阳下山之前到那里去，但是狗却往下坡走，消失在一 丛蕨类植物后面，男孩

31、怕迷路了，只能一边绕着一棵高高的桂树转，一边寻找狗。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“几分钟过去了，然后是一个小时甚至更久。”可知，第一段可描写男孩寻找狗的过程。由第二段首句内容“话刚出口，他就看见了那条狗。”可知，第二段可描写男孩和狗团聚的情形。2 .续写线索：边走边找大声叫狗找到了狗拥抱狗一一起回家.词汇激活 行为类 呼喊：call/shoul 拥抱:hug/embrace 一起回家：go home together/head home together 情绪类激动的:excited/thrilled高兴低：happily/merrily【点睛】高分句型 1 Sometimes,

32、he made some noise on purpose to cheer himself up because it was so quiet in the forest. （由because引导的原因状语从句）高分句型 2 It was obvious that it was also happy to see the boy again.（由 that 引导的主语从句）7.（福建省宁德市2022-2023学年高一上学期期中英语试题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。My very first fur baby was a white cat na

33、med Rebel, 1 got him from the Animals center, and he quickly took over the house and my heart. He was almost six months old when he disappeared, and I was heartbroken.I searched for him everywhere, talking to （he neighbors, putting up posters, and even offering a reward. I checked the shelter and th

34、e emergency vet clinic to see if he had been injured or picked up. No one had seen him, so I kept searching.I lived in the city, close to high traffic road, and Rebel didn,t have “street smarts because he was an indoor cat. I also had an idea that if he got lost, he wouldnt be able to find his way h

35、ome. Every time I went out, I would search for him as I drove down the road. Nothing.Weeks went by with no sign of my cat. Everyone said 1 had to accept the result that was certain to happeneither he was dead, or someone else had him and was giving him a good home. I didnt accept that. I just couldn

36、,t.After two weeks with no sign of him, I put his bed, toys, food, bowls, and litter box into storage so I wouldnt have to walk by the sad reminders every day. But I still wasnt ready to give up.One morning, I left for work a few minutes early and started walking to the bus stop a block away. It was

37、 a nice autumn day, pleasantly cold and sunnya good day for a walk. I arrived at the bus stop and checked to see if the bus was coming, but a little early. Something told me to keep going, so 1 decided to walk to the next bus stop. I got there and saw the bus coming, but I just kept walking and watc

38、hing the bus swiftly pass by, knowing I was going to be late for work. But something told me to keep going. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I continued to walk for another twenty minutes.I turned around and carried him home.答案I continued to walk for another twenty minutes. Subconsciously, I wen

39、t off in the direction of a neighborhood that I wasnt familiar with. I was walking along when I heard a cals meow faintly. It was my cat! I was totally surprised to find him sitting by a fence. Dirty as he was, I still recognized him at first sight. His fur was in a mess and having an extremely bad

40、smell, and he even had a skin disease on a ragged torn car. He was frighteningly thin. I called his name as I scooped him into my arms. He pushed his dirty face into mine. I teared up with happiness because I had found my cat.I turned around and carried him home. He settled comfortably in my arms an

41、d made a quiet continuous soft sound all the way. When we got home, I refilled his bowls with food and water and set up his litter box. I hold him close in my arms some more and then phoned to tell my boss I was on my way promising to make up the time I had missed. I had another quick snuggle with m

42、y cat, washed up, grabbed my bags, and ran to catch the next bus. How amazing a day it was!【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者苦苦寻找丢失的猫的过程。作者在丢失了猫后，没有选择放 弃寻找猫而继续打听猫的下落。幸运的是，作者一次偶然的机会找到了自己的猫，与猫重逢。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我又继续走了二十分钟。”可知，第一段可描述作者走了 20分钟后突然发现了丢失的 猫以及看到猫后的情绪以及对猫的描述。由第二段首句内容“我转身，把他抱回家。”可知，第二段可描述作者将猫带回家后好好照顾猫。

43、2 .续写线索：走路发现猫描述猫带回家照顾猫感悟.词汇激活 行为类发现：find/discover流泪：lear up/shed tears回家：get home/arrive home/return home情绪类惊讶：be surpriscd/bc amazed开心：happiness/delight/joy【点睛】百分句型 1 Subconsciously, I went off in the direction of a neighborhood that I wasnt fiimiliar with.（由 that 弓 I 导的定语从句）高分句型 2 When we got home

44、, I refilled his bowls with food and water and set up his litter box.（由 when 引导 时间状语从句）8.（山东省蒲泽市2022-2023学年高一上学期期中考试英语试题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Cats are a mysterious kind of animal-there is more passing in their minds than we know of I cant agree more with this because of my recent exp

45、erience.It was the Sunday before Labor Day, and I was tired after spending the day at a picnic in a relatives garden. I looked out of the window before climbing onto bed. Stars filled the night sky, and crickets（蟋蟀）gently sang in the darkness. All seemed right with the world.My big, old black-and-wh

46、ite cat, Oreo, lay on the foot of my bed where he slept every night, keeping my feet warm. I climbed onto bed and immediately fell into a deep sleep.I had just fallen asleep when Oreo woke me up by walking over my stomach. I looked at （he bedside clock: 3:10 am. I had no idea why Oreo was troubling

47、me. Hed never done that before unless I overslept in the morning, hut that usually happened at 8:00 am, not in the middle of the night.I pushed Oreo off me, rolled over and pulled the blanket （毯子）over my head. But Oreo didnt stop. He stepped on my head and began to make noises loudly.Oreo,I said. Go

48、 back to sleep.MBut Oreo wouldnt stop. He kept walking on my stomach and legs, continuing to trouble me. Suddenly, there was a crash of thunder （雷），and I sat up on the bed and looked out of the window. Lightning filled the sky. Strong winds blew through the window. Rain started to come down hard, making it almost impossible to see the trees in （he yard. Soon the wind was picking up and the branches of （he trees were moving violently（强烈地）.A terrible storm had started.Seeing the sight, I was struck with horror. Thinking that it was not sa