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1、高考英语书面表达特训高考英语书面表达特训如何让写作靓起来如何让写作靓起来阅卷老师忠告1.网上阅卷对卷面要求提高。网上阅卷对卷面要求提高。阅卷教师看电脑屏评分，屏幕上视觉比纸上印象更突出，阅卷教师看电脑屏评分，屏幕上视觉比纸上印象更突出，每行高度约为直线格的每行高度约为直线格的2/3的作文视觉效果最佳，此类作文错的作文视觉效果最佳，此类作文错误少并用有效连接成分就能高分。误少并用有效连接成分就能高分。2.中等水平学生容易成为最吃亏学生群。中等水平学生容易成为最吃亏学生群。高考阅卷特点，决定了阅卷时间短、速度快、赋分中庸。高考阅卷特点，决定了阅卷时间短、速度快、赋分中庸。两极的考生优劣分明，容易赋

2、分，而中等学生，如果出现两极的考生优劣分明，容易赋分，而中等学生，如果出现书书写潦草或低级错误容易出现得分趋低情况，成为最吃亏的一写潦草或低级错误容易出现得分趋低情况，成为最吃亏的一个群体个群体。3.书面表达是提高平均分最大的潜力股。书面表达是提高平均分最大的潜力股。平均分：平均分：15分分 峰值：峰值：1719分分 提升空间巨大提升空间巨大感知典型范例感知典型范例词汇层面词汇层面1adj.聪明的、脑筋好的聪明的、脑筋好的clever wise wise smart smart bright bright intelligentintelligent感知典型范例词汇层面词汇层面2adj.adj

3、.令人惊奇的令人惊奇的surprisingamazingamazingastonishingastonishing关于所谓高级词汇与复杂结构及衔接关于所谓高级词汇与复杂结构及衔接Once you make the decision,Im afraid theres no going back.(regret)The house came through the storm without much damage.(experience)Shes had a rough day.过节是家庭欢聚的日子。过节是家庭欢聚的日子。Holiday should be about family.我确实有过那

4、个想法。我确实有过那个想法。That thought did cross my mind.他们为我们提供了机会。他们为我们提供了机会。They opened doors for us.要教青年人努力思考要教青年人努力思考,任何题目都会有效果任何题目都会有效果.In teaching the young to think hard,any subject will answer.他昨天下午来的。他昨天下午来的。1.He came here yesterday afternoon.2.He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon.3.Not until

5、yesterday afternoon did he come here.4.It was yesterday afternoon that he came here.感知典型范例句型层面句型层面1令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这么多事情。令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这么多事情。1.He is surprised that the little girl knows so many things.2.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.3.What surprises him is that the little girl knows

6、 so many things.感知典型范例句型层面句型层面2 让我们看看是不是有效果让我们看看是不是有效果.Lets see if it works.这真是一个太有效果太好的培训了这真是一个太有效果太好的培训了.What was a good course is going to be a GREAT one.感知典型范例段落层面段落层面1This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 19

7、78.People here are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.This village is very small，which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.However,it has changed a lot since 1978.People here are leading a richer and happier life than before.Now it is taking on a new l

8、ook.感知典型范例段落层面段落层面2I think,for us children,we should often go home and stay together with our parents though we are busy.Our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live happily.We can build a harmonious society only when all of us care for the aged.As far as I a

9、m concerned,for us children,we should often go home and stay together with our parents however busy we are.Whats more,our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live a happy life.Only when all of us care for the aged can we build a harmonious society.A Sample Se

10、asons chase each other and fade away one by one,year after year,without exception.However,among them,the most appealing one for me is winter.In winter,the whole world is decorated with pure whiteness,just like a graceful lady in a white dress-quiet and fascinating.The beauty wins my favor.Winter mea

11、ns calm and peace.I enjoy reading Gibrans poet collection-Sand and Foam in winter,as cold but soft wind whisper around my ears.Thats the time when I feel my life worthy and beautiful,which brings me the everlasting truth of life.Dont you think winter is appealing?A)Simple sentence(简单句简单句):Hearing th

12、e news,he was happy.B)Compound sentence A（并列句）（并列句）:He gave me a book but I forgot to bring it back home.C)Compound sentence B（复合句）（复合句）:What he is doing has nothing to do with me.“规范的英语句子规范的英语句子”就是我们经常讲的三种句就是我们经常讲的三种句子：子：1.学会使用规范的英语句子Here are 3 ways to make sentences:I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简

13、单句：1)借助名词短语做同位语借助名词短语做同位语如：如：李立，男，李立，男，19岁，岁，1991年生；籍贯：广东。年生；籍贯：广东。Li Li,a boy of 19,was born in Guangdong in 1991.2)借助介词短语做定语借助介词短语做定语 如：如：李飞李飞,男，男，10岁，棕色短发，穿白色茄克。岁，棕色短发，穿白色茄克。Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and in a white jacket.如：如：有了有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。Wit

14、h the help of Tom,we soon found their village.4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语 如：如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。They were standing under the big tree,waiting for the president.Standing under the big tree,they were waiting for the President.3)借助介词短语做状语借助介词短语做状语II.II.巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句

15、：如：如：他给我很多钱，我不要。他给我很多钱，我不要。I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you.如：如：我刚走到拐角处，就见到你了。我刚走到拐角处，就见到你了。He gave me a lot of money but I refused.III.III.用好从句和引导词写出规范的复合句：用好从句和引导词写出规范的复合句：1)名词性从句名词性从句如：如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。老师生气。原因：王力迟到。That Wang Li came late to school made the teacher very angry

16、.2)定语从句定语从句如：如：中国中国,地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。China,which lies in the east of Asia,is a great country with large area and population as well as rich natural resources.I was deeply moved by this,because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.3)状语从句状语从句如：如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。雷锋还活在我们心

17、中，我深受感动。灵活运用九种句式有意识的将下列句式结构运用到作文中去，可有意识的将下列句式结构运用到作文中去，可以迅速地让我们的作文靓起来。重要的是我们以迅速地让我们的作文靓起来。重要的是我们要学会如何灵活的变通、巧妙地运用到考试作要学会如何灵活的变通、巧妙地运用到考试作文中去。文中去。一、适当的运用一些词组、习语来一、适当的运用一些词组、习语来代替单个单词或平淡的句子，以代替单个单词或平淡的句子，以增加文采，丰富语句的表现力。增加文采，丰富语句的表现力。1、You will find my house easily.have no difficulty in doing sthYoull h

18、ave no trouble/difficulty(in)finding my house.她很喜欢运动。She likes sports very much.1.be fond of 2.be into 3.be interested in 4.enjoy She is fond of sports.She is into sports.She is interested in sports.She enjoys sports.我们将尽力学好英语。try to do sthWell try to learn English well.do everything sb can to do st

19、htry to do sth1.I hope to receive your letter soon.2.Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Because of/Thanks to/Owing to the good weather,our journey was comfortable.二二、尽尽量量避避免免过过多多地地重重复复使使用用某某一一单单词词,短短语语选选择择使使用用其其他他恰恰当当的的同同义义词词、词组来词组来代替

20、。代替。1.He learns English well,he learns maths well,too.2.An earthquake happened in Wenchuan.It happened on May 12th.do well inbe good attake placecome about1.People grow rice in the south of China.Rice is grown in the south of China.2.They have printed one and a half million copies of the dictionary

21、since 1986.One and a half million copies of the dictionary have been printed since 1986.三三、主动句与被动句的互换。、主动句与被动句的互换。四、将陈述句改为倒装句。四、将陈述句改为倒装句。1.I could hardly understand the importance of English at that time.Hardly could I understand the importance of English at that time.2.We did not realize our mista

22、kes until at that time.Not until at that time did we realize our mistakes.五、将简单句改为强调句五、将简单句改为强调句1.Smoking did great harm to his health.It was smoking that did great harm to his health.2.Our money is earned through hard work by our parents.It is through hard work that our money is earned by our paren

23、ts.3.He went there yesterday.He did go there yesterday.六、将两个简单句合并为并列句六、将两个简单句合并为并列句1.You can do it.I can do it.One of us must do it.you I must do it.2.I want to buy this bike.I dont have enough money.I want to buy this bike,I dont have enough money.Eitherorbut七、将两个简单句合并为复合句七、将两个简单句合并为复合句1.同位语和同位语从句同

24、位语和同位语从句1)Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete.He won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games._,_,won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.2)The word is true.The president will give our school a speech._ is true _ the president will give our school

25、 a speech.Liu Xiangan excellent athleteItthat2.定语从句定语从句 1)The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing,and its slogan is One World,One Dream,The 2008 Olympic Games,_ _2)In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting.In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace _3)

26、Yesterday,we went to the East Gate,and we bought a lot of clothes.Yesterday,we went to the East Gate,_ _One Dream,will be held in Beijing.are the two places which are well worth visiting.where we bought aWhose slogan is One World,lot of clothes.将两个简单句合并为一个由将两个简单句合并为一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句引导的非限制性定语从句1.Re

27、cently many students spend their money on unnecessary things.Different people have different opinions about it.Recently many students spend their money on unnecessary things,about different people have different opinions.2.Many boys learn to smoke.It does harm to their health.Many boys learn to smok

28、e,_ _whichwhich does harm totheir health.3.主语从句主语从句1)His wonderful performance on the stage impressed me.most was his wonderful performance on the stage.2)It satisfied me.The dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.the dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of

29、dishes.3)I learned from the story that as long as we have patience,confidence and perseverance,we can realize our dreams.as long as we have patience,confidence and perseverance,we can realize our dreams.What impressed meWhat satisfied me is thatWhat I have learnt from the story is that 推荐句型推荐句型What

30、surprises astonished satisfied impressed me is thatWhat I would like to suggest advise put forward is thatWhat matters most is that What I learnconclude from the story is that4.表语从句表语从句推荐句型：推荐句型：is no longer what it used to be.1)我的家乡不再像以前那样了。我的家乡不再像以前那样了。My hometown is no longer what it used to be.2

31、)他不再是以前那样了。他不再是以前那样了。He is no longer what he used to be.5.状语从句状语从句 结果结果、程度、程度 sothat;such that 让步让步 no matter how what when where.=whatever,however,whenever,wherever 时间时间 was doingwhen,as soon as,the moment,the next time,every time1)不管前面有多少困难，我们都要学会独立的克服他不管前面有多少困难，我们都要学会独立的克服他们。们。_ _,we should learn

32、 to overcome them independently.2)我正沿着马路走，突然我听到有人叫我。我正沿着马路走，突然我听到有人叫我。I _ along the road _ suddenly I heard my name called.No matter how many difficulties therewas walkingwhenare ahead of us,八、八、it 作形式主语或形式宾语句型作形式主语或形式宾语句型1.You pretend to know what you dont know.Its no good.Its no good pretending to

33、 know what you dont know.2.It is easy to get on with Pam.I find.I find it easy to get on with Pam.九、分词结构代替状语从句九、分词结构代替状语从句1.If you work harder,you will do better in the exam next time._,you will do better in the exam next time.2.Because my friend was frightened of losing his job,he said nothing to t

34、he police._,my friend said nothing to the police.Working hard Frightened of losing his job 十、十、将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with 引引导的短语或者复合结构。导的短语或者复合结构。With+宾语宾语+adj./adv./介词短语介词短语/to dodoingdone常用句型常用句型 with a population of.with a total area of with a long history of yearsBecause people c

35、ommunicate in English every day,it will become more and more important to have a good knowledge of English.With so many people communicating in English every day,it will become more and more important to have a good knowledge of English.Text book page 11With+宾语宾语+宾语补足语宾语补足语（doing/done/adj/to do/adv）

36、1)这个地区占地这个地区占地2000平方千米，人口平方千米，人口10万。万。This area covers an area of 2000 square kilometers,_2)我们学校周围种了很多花，吸引了大量的学生来参观。我们学校周围种了很多花，吸引了大量的学生来参观。_,it attracts a large number of people.3)我们学校是一所有我们学校是一所有100多年历史的名校。多年历史的名校。Our school is a famous one _ _ with a population of 100,000.With many flowers surrou

37、nding our school with a history of over 100 years.4）没有做完作业，这个小孩不敢去上学。）没有做完作业，这个小孩不敢去上学。_,the boy dared not go to school.5)这两个男人早早就睡了，蜡烛烧了一晚上。这两个男人早早就睡了，蜡烛烧了一晚上。The two men went to bed early,_.6)他睡觉的时候嘴巴张得大大的。他睡觉的时候嘴巴张得大大的。He sleep _.with candles burning a night long With homework not finished with h

38、is mouth wide open 实战演练巩固实战演练巩固1 请根据以下的情景说明请根据以下的情景说明,使用使用5个规范的英个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。标题为标题为 “My English Learning”注：所给情景有时是中文要点，有时是表格。注：所给情景有时是中文要点，有时是表格。我学英语已经六年了，在英语学习上有了我学英语已经六年了，在英语学习上有了一定的进步，但总是觉得英语难学，尤其是一定的进步，但总是觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法。自己今后一定要努英语中的一些习惯用法。自己今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，力学习这门有用的外语

39、，争取早日掌握这门争取早日掌握这门语言。语言。我学英语已经六年了我学英语已经六年了I have been learning English for over 6 years.在英语学习上有了一定的进步在英语学习上有了一定的进步I have made some progress in my English.但总是觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法。但总是觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法。But I always feel English is hard to learn,especially some English idioms are difficult.自己今后一定要努力学习

40、这门有用的外语自己今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语 I will work hard at this useful foreign language.争取早日掌握这门语言。争取早日掌握这门语言。I will try hard to grasp this foreign language.My English Learning I have been learning English for over 6 years.It is six years since I began to learn English.I have made some progress in my English.Wit

41、h the help of my teachers and classmates,I have made progress in my English.Now Im doing well both in writing and reading in English.But I always feel English is hard to learn,especially some English idioms are difficult.But I still find it hard to learn English,such as some difficult idioms.I will

42、try hard to master this foreign language.Difficult as it is,I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.My English Learning It is six years since I began to learn English.With the help of my teachers and classmates,I have made progress in my English.Now Im doing well both i

43、n writing and reading in English.But I still find it hard to learn English,such as some difficult idioms.Difficult as it is,I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.实战操练：实战操练：最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信

44、息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。60%的同学认为的同学认为1、不应收门票、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象响城市形象40%的同学认为的同学认为1、应收门票，但票价不宜高、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资支付园林工人工资3、购新花木、购新花木注意：注意：1、信的开头已为你写好、信的开头已为你写好2、参考词汇：门票：、参考词汇：门票：entrance fee实战演练巩固实战演练巩固2160的同学的同学认为认为公园公园不应该不应该收费。收费。S

45、ixty percent of the students think that the park should not charge entrance fees Sixty percent of the students hold the view that entrance fees should not be charged 被动句被动句Sixty percent of the students have the idea that people should be allowed to enter parks without charge.In the opinion of 60of t

46、he students,people can enter parks for free 2公园是公众休闲的地方。公园是公众休闲的地方。A park is a place for the public to rest and enjoy themselves A park is a place where people rest and relax 定语从句定语从句3如如收门票收门票，需建大门，需建大门围墙，会围墙，会影响影响城市形象。城市形象。If entrance fees are charged,it will be necessary to build gates and walls,w

47、hich will affect the appearance of the city（which指指代上文）代上文）With entrance fees charged,it will be necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearance of the city 440%的同学认为应收门票，的同学认为应收门票，但票价不宜高但票价不宜高。40 of the students think that entrance fees are necessary,but the prices should no

48、t be high There are 40of the students who think that entrance fees should be charged,but fees should be low（定语从句）（定语从句）In the opinion of 40 of the students,entrance fees should be charged low5门票收入支付园林工人工资门票收入支付园林工人工资购买新花木。购买新花木。The income from entrance fees is used to pay the gardeners and buy new p

49、lants and flowersThe money from entrance fees is made use of to pay garden workers and buy new plants With money from entrance fees,the gardeners are paid and new plants as well as young trees are bought （With的短语）（被动句）的短语）（被动句）Dear Editor,Opinions are divided on the question.60%of the students are a

50、gainst the idea of entrance fees.They believed a public park should be free of charge.People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.Without doubt,Charging entrance fees will keep some people away.What is more,it will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the