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1、Teacher:STEELrewriting请你根据表格中的提示，以请你根据表格中的提示，以 A Healthy Eating Habit 书面表达书面表达noodles,rice,milk,bread,eggsvegetables fruit fish,meatjunk food(不利不利于健康的食物于健康的食物)every day8-11 times a week7-9 times a week3-4 times a weekeat least为题写一篇短文。为题写一篇短文。要求：要求：1.短文必须包括提示中的所有内容短文必须包括提示中的所有内容2.不少于不少于80个词。个词。11一、审题

2、一、审题:明确明确:是什么是什么(What)？列题纲(outline)1.读要求(demands)2.抓中心(grasp the main idea)3.排结构(beginning-body-ending)noodles,rice,milk,bread,eggsvegetablesfruit fish,meatjunk food(不利于健康的食物)every day8-11 times a week7-9 times a week3-4 times a weekeat least 1.短文必须包括提示中的所有内容。2.不少于80个词。请你根据表格中的提示，以 A Healthy Eating

3、Habit为题写一篇短文。要求：要求：二二.写作写作4.Improving the passage(合理润饰)1.words(字）noodles.vegetable fruit fish,meat junk foodfoodevery day 8-11 times a week 7-9 times a week 3-4 times a weekeat leastFrequency(频率)Four Steps in Writing2.sentences(扩展成句)主 -谓 -宾 (状语）(We)(eathave)food(1).We should eat noodles.every day.(5

4、).We should eat the junk food least.3.paragraphs(组句谋篇)Eg:Reasons:1.Noodles can give us energy(能量)and heat.every day三、检查找错三、检查找错:1.单句改错单句改错1.We are need a healthy eating habit.2.Because it bad for your health.3.Three meals is very important.4.You eats some noodles.5.We must have a breakfast every day

5、.6.good luck to you.(Str:主+谓+宾)isareG(Str：主+系+表)(Sv：主谓一致)(Sv：主谓一致)(A：冠词)(Cap：大写)Cap 大写字母 capital letterSp 拼写 spellingSV 主谓一致 subject-verb agreementStr句子结构sentence structureVT 动词时态 verb tenseP 标点 punctuationA 冠词 articleWW 错词 wrong wordNum 数(=单数/复数)number(=singular/plural)缺成分2.常见错误类型常见错误类型3.改错完善改错完善;找

6、出美言找出美言交流合作交流合作cooperationA.Good sentences(好词好句）好词好句）1._ 2.3._Fill the blanksA Healthy Eating Habit Its very important for us to have a healthy eating habit.But what is a healthy eating habit?We should eat noodles,rice,bread,eggs and milk every day.They give us heat.There are a lot of vitamins in ve

7、getables and fruit.Scientist suggests we have vegetables eight to eleven times a week.We can eat fruit seven to nine times a week.If we eat too much fish and meat,we dont feel well.Its enough for us to have fish and meat three to four times a week.We had better eat junk food least.Its bad for our he

8、alth.If you want to have a good health,just do like this.美文欣赏美文欣赏 v审题，抓点审题，抓点v造句，成文造句，成文v改错，誉写改错，誉写How to write the expression?写作技巧小结写作技巧小结：认真审题，抓住要点。认真审题，抓住要点。确定体裁，注意格式。确定体裁，注意格式。草拟提纲，理清思路。草拟提纲，理清思路。语言规范，把握时态。语言规范，把握时态。多用简句，慎用长句。多用简句，慎用长句。巧用连词，行文连贯。巧用连词，行文连贯。拼写正确，书写规范。拼写正确，书写规范。全面检查，万无一失。全面检查，万无一失。卷面潦草一定要扣分!v书写规范书写规范 卷面整洁卷面整洁HomeworkvRewriting重写重写v背诵精彩范文背诵精彩范文祝同学们在中考中取得好成绩祝同学们在中考中取得好成绩!Thank you for your attention!Im obliged to you for your criticism!