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1、关于高中英语作文写作如何写建议信第1页，此课件共45页哦写作要点：写作要点：1.建议信：建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.对象：对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。第2页，此课件共45页哦3.基本框架：基本框架：开头（开头（beginning）-开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(state your idea)主体主体(body)-对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)结尾结尾(ending)-呼应开头，重申观点(restat

2、e your opinion.)第3页，此课件共45页哦4.注意事项：注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因原因，建议的内容内容，提出建议的理由理由，提出的理由要入情入理理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌礼貌当先当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力；2）建议的角度要多样化角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议；3）符合英文信件的基本格式基本格式；4）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。一般现在时和一般将来时。第4页，此课件共45页哦常用套语常用套语A建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式(照应材料照应材料,表明写作意图表明写作意图)1.

3、AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat2.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto3.Iknowyouhavetroubleinafterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof5.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvice/opinionswithyou.6.YouhaveaskedmeforsomeadvicewithregardtoandIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.7.Youhav

4、easkedmeformyadviceabout/on第5页，此课件共45页哦B.表达建议（表达建议（body）1.I think it would be more beneficial if you could 2.I would like to suggest/recommend that3.If I were you,I would4.Why not?/How(What)about doing 5.is a good/great idea.6.You may consider doing 7.It would seem/seems to me that you could 8.In my

5、 opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.9.When it comes to such a situation,I would like to suggest that you should First,/Firstly,/Secondly,/Then,/After that,/In the end,/Finally,/Meanwhile,/Whats more,/In addition,/Besides,/Furthermore,第6页，此课件共45页哦C.建议信结尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouwi

6、lltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.5.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.6.Intheend,Iwillbe

7、gladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.第7页，此课件共45页哦假假如如你你叫叫孙孙军军，是是红红星星高高中中的的学学生生，要要给给市市长长写写一一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：参考词汇参考词汇:穿行穿行threadonesway天桥天桥overpass问题问题建议建议学学校校和和一一所所小小学学毗毗邻邻，对对着着大大街街，高高峰峰期期交交通通繁繁忙忙；加加之之孩孩子子小小,家家长长接接送送。交交通通更更拥拥挤挤；学学生生过过街街在在车车辆辆中中穿行危险。穿行危险。政政府府应应采采取取措措施施,如修天桥等。

8、如修天桥等。第8页，此课件共45页哦第一步：审题第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题思考的问题样题分析样题分析第几人称？（第几人称？（person）文章的体裁是什么？文章的体裁是什么？要写的文章主题是什么要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？怎样安排信息点的顺序？(order)动作是什么时候发生的？动作是什么时候发生的？(时态时态)(when)第一人称第一人称一封信一封信建议政府采取措施舒缓交建议政府采取措施舒缓交通拥挤的状况通拥挤的状况说理逻辑性说理逻辑性一般现在时一般现在

9、时第9页，此课件共45页哦书面表达如何写？书面表达如何写？三个步骤Step 1 List the key pointsStep 2 Make sentences Step3.Form a passage and polish第10页，此课件共45页哦适当运用模板适当运用模板第11页，此课件共45页哦模板二：模板二：Dear_(对象对象)，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning_(问题问题).Firstandforthemost,_(建议一建议一).Inaddition,_(建议二建议二).Whatsmore_(建议三建议三).Ihopeyoullfindthe

10、seproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely,LiMing第12页，此课件共45页哦DearBob,Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon(引出主题引出主题).Here are a few suggestions.First,it isimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.(此三句此三句不同不同的句式提出建议的句式提出建议)Asto,Isuggest(有有时时根根据据需需要要具具体体到到某某一一反反面面).Inaddit

11、ion,(其其他他建建议议).Imsure(预预测测可可能能的的结结果果，给给对对方方以以行行动动的的信心和决心信心和决心).Imlookingforwardto(表达愿望表达愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHua第13页，此课件共45页哦第二步：搜索相关词组或句型第二步：搜索相关词组或句型问题建议学学校校和和一一所所小小学学毗毗邻邻，对对着着大大街街，高高峰峰期期交交通通繁繁忙忙；加加之之孩孩子子小小,家家长长接接送送。交交通通更更拥拥挤挤；学学生生过过街在车辆中穿行危险。街在车辆中穿行危险。政政府府应应采采取取措措施施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等。第14页，此课件共45页哦学校与一所

12、小学毗邻学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街对着大街stand next to primary face/be faced with the main streetTheresaprimaryschoolnearourschool,andbothschoolsfacethemainstreet.Ourschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschool,facedwith/facingthemainstreet.推荐句型：推荐句型：There be+并列句并列句非谓语结构非谓语结构Standingnexttoaprimaryschool,ourschoolisfacedwith/faces

13、themainstreet.第15页，此课件共45页哦润色润色小建议小建议可将可将stand next to替换为高级词汇替换为高级词汇/短语短语be located next to(near/beside/by)border/adjoin vt.be adjacent to与与毗邻毗邻在在对面对面 be opposite to第16页，此课件共45页哦 The traffic is busy during the rush hours.The traffic is busy during the rush hours.高峰期交通繁忙高峰期交通繁忙.traffic.during the rus

14、h hoursDuring the rush hours,there are so many cars and buses going on the road that the traffic becomes extremely busy.so.thatwith结构结构With so many cars and buses going on the road during the rush hours,the traffic becomes busy.第17页，此课件共45页哦加之孩子小加之孩子小,家长接送家长接送,交通更拥挤交通更拥挤 sendto,fetch.,which 非谓语结构非谓语

15、结构.Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakes/makingthetrafficheavier.第18页，此课件共45页哦加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤Whats more,pick up.make.Tomakethingsworse/Whatsworse,manyparentscomingtop

16、ickuptheirchildrenmakethestreetmorecrowded.Whatsmore,parentsoftenattendtheirkidstoschool,resultinginmoreserioustrafficjams.Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.第19页，此课件共45页哦making the situation more serious.making the traffic heavier可意译为：可意译为：so.that.=

17、tootoThechildrenaresoyoungthatparentshavetosendthemtoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakes/makingthetrafficheavier.making 可替换为：可替换为：causing,leading to,resulting in“sendfetch”可替换为短语：可替换为短语：pick up润色润色小建议小建议第20页，此课件共45页哦 学生过街在车辆中穿行危险学生过街在车辆中穿行危险thread ones way，when doingItisdangerousforthestudentstothread

18、theirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad.固定句型固定句型Itis+adj.fortodo.第21页，此课件共45页哦1.Studentsareriskingtheirlivestothreadtheirwayamongcars.润色润色小建议小建议2.Someareexposedtodangerwhencrossingtheocean/seaofcars.灵活运用其它的短语进行意译：灵活运用其它的短语进行意译：适当增加形容词和副词：适当增加形容词和副词：itisextremelydangerous，itisofgreat/tremendousd

19、anger第22页，此课件共45页哦suggest/suggestion,suggest/suggestion,take steps/measures/action to do such astake steps/measures/action to do such as政府应采取措施政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等。My suggestion is that the government should表语从句表语从句固定句型固定句型 It is high time that(虚拟语气虚拟语气)It is high time that relevant authorities took

20、some measures like buildingI suggest that the government should take steps such as building an overpass.简单句简单句第23页，此课件共45页哦1.Inordertoreleasethestressoftrafficproblems,润色润色小建议小建议2.Aimedatsolvingtheseproblems,thegovernmentshouldA.适当添加一些意思（过渡句）适当添加一些意思（过渡句）Thegovernmentshouldpaymoreattentiontoitandtry

21、tosolveit.B.语义的意译语义的意译3.Seeingthesematters,neverwillIstopurgingourgovernmenttotakesomemeasures.Forthesakeofimprovingthequalityoftraffic,itissignificanttobuildC.添加形容词和副词添加形容词和副词Istronglysuggest,active/effectivemeasures第24页，此课件共45页哦第三步第三步.连句成文连句成文但要注意：篇章的连贯性但要注意：篇章的连贯性Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourscho

22、ol,facingamainstreet._,itscrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour._childrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage._,itsofgreatdangerforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic._,itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass.A.As a consequence B.According to the phenomenon st

23、ated above C.When it comes to traffic jamsD.What makes things worse is that A.C.D.B.第25页，此课件共45页哦反面范例反面范例第26页，此课件共45页哦反面范例反面范例第27页，此课件共45页哦反面范例反面范例第28页，此课件共45页哦反面范例反面范例第29页，此课件共45页哦不推荐字体不推荐字体第30页，此课件共45页哦优点：考生能灵活地处理各个信息点，大量运用非谓语，介词短语，从句，优点：考生能灵活地处理各个信息点，大量运用非谓语，介词短语，从句，连词等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显个性和语言功底。连词等来提亮

24、句子，使得文章更彰显个性和语言功底。优秀作文范例优秀作文范例1 1第31页，此课件共45页哦优秀作文范例优秀作文范例2 2优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用there be句型，句型，介词短语，从句，非谓语，套用句式等来提亮句子，介词短语，从句，非谓语，套用句式等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。第32页，此课件共45页哦优秀作文范例优秀作文范例3 3优点：考生运用倒装句，优点：考生运用倒装句，so that句式，精彩的表达句式，精彩的表达以及虚拟语气等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和以及虚拟语气等来提亮句子，使得文章

25、更彰显内涵和语言功底。语言功底。第33页，此课件共45页哦优秀作文范例优秀作文范例4 4优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇等来优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底蕴。提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底蕴。第34页，此课件共45页哦如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整整体体三三部部分分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body 中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending 小结；呼应主题第35页，此课件共45页哦 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPeter来信向你咨询

26、如何才来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。能学好中文。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。Dear Peter,Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ advice no how to learn Chinese well._ _Best wishes,Best wishes,Li HuaLi Hua

27、参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班；看电视，报纸，杂志；看电视，报纸，杂志；学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友；交中国朋友；第36页，此课件共45页哦DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,asyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,it al

28、so helps towatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn andrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.In addition,You can also make more Chinese friends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyo

29、ulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHua第37页，此课件共45页哦为了迎接即将到来的期末考试，你校要取消所有的体育课。请你以学生王丽的身份给校长写一封信，建议不要取消体育课。注意：1.词数：120左右；2.文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Headmaster,Im writing to express my views concerning our schools decision that all physical education should be cancelled.第38页，此课件共45页

30、哦常见连接词常见连接词表时间关系：表时间关系：when/after/before/until/not until as soon as/later/afterwards/soon/lately/recently/since/eventually/from then on/in the meanwhile(meantime)/then/finally/at last/all of a sudden/after a while/since then/immediately/instantly/every time/each time/the first time第39页，此课件共45页哦常见连接词

31、常见连接词罗列观点：罗列观点：Firstly/First of all/To begin with/Above all/In the first place/On one hand For one thing,Secondly/Besides/Apart from/Whats more,/In addition，/Furthermore,/Moreover，/Worse still,/To make matters worse,/as well/On the other hand/For another thing,/Next,Finally/In the end/At last/Last b

32、ut not least,第40页，此课件共45页哦常见连接词常见连接词表列举：表列举：for example(instance)/such as/take for example/thats to say/in other words/as follows表条件关系：表条件关系：if/unless/as long as/on condition that/only if第41页，此课件共45页哦常见连接词常见连接词表因果关系：表因果关系：since/as/because/for/thanks to/due to/owing to/as a result of/for the reason t

33、hat/now that/therefore/so/as a result表陈述事实表陈述事实:in fact/actually/as a matter of fact/to tell you the truth/to be honest/honestly speaking第42页，此课件共45页哦常见连接词常见连接词表让步转折关系：表让步转折关系：however/but/on the contrary/nevertheless/instead/despite/in spite of(the fact that)/whereas/though/although/as/even if(thoug

34、h)/while/in contrast/after all表目的：表目的：For this reason/purpose,For the purpose of so that in order to/so as to 第43页，此课件共45页哦常见连接词常见连接词表总结：表总结：As I have shown,/In short,/In brief,/In conclusion,/In a word,/On the whole,/All in all,/In general,/In summary,/As has been stated,表换种方式表达：表换种方式表达：in other words/that is to say/to put it another way 第44页，此课件共45页哦2023/4/12感感谢谢大大家家观观看看第45页，此课件共45页哦