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1、假设你是红星中学的学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊”英语园地“写一篇短文，讲述上学期你参加英语演讲比赛的过程。词数不少于60.第1页/共73页第2页/共73页第3页/共73页第4页/共73页第5页/共73页第6页/共73页第7页/共73页标准范文Last term an English speech contest was held in our school.Seeing the notice,many students took interest in it.My English teacher thought it was a good chance for me to im

2、prove my English and encouraged me to take part.So I decided to have a try.During the preparation,my teacher offered me great help.She not only polished my speech draft but also corrected my pronunciation.As a result,my speech improved greatly.Then the day for the competition came.I did a good job a

3、nd got the first prize!I owed it all to my teacher.Without her help,I wouldnt have got such a good result.第8页/共73页第9页/共73页第10页/共73页一 书面二 逻辑三 语法四 拼写五 闪光六 模仿七 检查第11页/共73页高考作文高分卷的特点外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的主题。第12页/共73页词汇美：词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。likebe fond

4、 of,be addicted to helpdo sb a favor 句式美：运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。衔接美：使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。第13页/共73页结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。内容包括：(1)你是如何看待微笑的作用的；(2)谈谈你所经历的让你最感动或给你印象最深刻的一次微笑；(3)你对微笑的感悟。第14页/共73页Which composition feels more attractive,why?第15页/共73页Discussion-找出这篇作文的错

5、误并改正Peopleoftensay,Asmilecanmakeyoutenyearsyounger.Notonlysmilecanhelpusforgettheunhappythings,butalsoithelpuskeepgoodmood.OnceIfailedinmyhistoryexam.Iareverysad.Later,I tell my grandma this thing say I hard-working historyeveryday,buthistorystillnotgood.IdidntknowwhatIcoulddo.Finally,I passed the e

6、xam becuase of her smile andencouragement.Youdontgiveupbecuasefailureisthemotherofsuccess.mygrandmasaid.Iknowthekindnesssmileislikesthesun,canwarmedourheart.第16页/共73页 你校英语社团部要组织一次英语赛，你校英语社团部要组织一次英语赛，就就“是否应该缩短中学生在校时间为是否应该缩短中学生在校时间为8小时小时”这一论题进行辩论，请你作为正方代表，这一论题进行辩论，请你作为正方代表，写一份发言稿，内容要点如下：写一份发言稿，内容要点如下：

7、1.保证充足保证充足睡眠睡眠 2.提高学习效率提高学习效率 3.增加自主学习时间增加自主学习时间 注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右左右2.可以适当增加细节，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯以使行文连贯 3.辩论稿的开头已为你写好辩论稿的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。（不计入总词数）。As a senior high student,I strongly recommend that 第17页/共73页语法篇语法篇第18页/共73页第19页/共73页 I strongly recommend that should shorten school time into eight hours.第2

8、0页/共73页 I strongly recommend that the time students devoted to studying in school should be reduced to eight hours a day.The main reasons accounting for it are as follows.你再看这开头第21页/共73页Short students time in school can have a good effect on study,it can important for students study xiaolu,and incre

9、ase students own time.第22页/共73页 In my opinion,we must have enough time to study,but we also should keep enough time to relax and sleep,either of them are important.Because of we have time to relax,we can study energetic.Reduce study time also can improve the quality of our school life.第23页/共73页第24页/

10、共73页你再看这词汇第25页/共73页欣赏一下这篇文欣赏一下这篇文章的句式结构章的句式结构第26页/共73页 If equal amount of work have to be accomplished with a declined school time,study efficiently is expected to be enhanced.Moreover,extra-curricular time will make up more of the students schedule.That is to say,chances are we can make a better us

11、e of our time.第27页/共73页卷面篇卷面篇第28页/共73页第29页/共73页第30页/共73页第31页/共73页第32页/共73页第33页/共73页第34页/共73页第35页/共73页太挤了太挤了第36页/共73页太乱了太乱了第37页/共73页太空了太空了第38页/共73页太潦草了太潦草了第39页/共73页太花了太花了第40页/共73页太没谱了太没谱了第41页/共73页标点呢？段呢？标点呢？段呢？第42页/共73页工整的字体难掩你每句工整的字体难掩你每句都错的事实啊！都错的事实啊！第43页/共73页别抄阅读理解！别抄阅读理解！第44页/共73页过长过长第45页/共73页答题不

12、可越界答题不可越界第46页/共73页作文五档：（从教师阅卷印象角度划分）漂漂亮亮（1720分）有模有样（1416分）马马虎虎（1114分）稀里糊涂（610分）一塌糊涂 （05分）第47页/共73页生活中，你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历，其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨请就此写一篇英语短文。主要内容包括：1)丢失的物品；2)物品失而复得的经过；3)你的感想。注意：1.词数不少于120个；2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Practice第48页/共73页【审题抓准信息快速推断】项目项目结论结论体裁体裁_话题话题_时态时态_人称人称_记叙文物品失而复得的经过和感想一般过去时为主第一人称第49

13、页/共73页writing(1)我仍然记得上学期我在学校的那一天(2)我丢了眼镜。(3)一个下雨的下午，我来到学校图书馆，希望去消磨时间。(4)我一意识到(丢眼镜)就返回去，结果发现图书馆关门了。(5)第二天我返回图书馆时发现眼镜不见了。(6)我感到烦恼。(7)我的同班同学也帮忙了.(8)一会儿之后，一位老师打电话告诉了我一个好消息。(9)没有人会知道那时我多么高兴。(10)我体会到，一方面，今后我应该更加细心，另一方面，我们应该乐于助人第50页/共73页(3)一个下雨的下午，我来到学校图书馆，希望去消磨时间。(4)我一意识到(丢眼镜)就返回去了，结果发现图书馆关门了。(5)第二天我返回图书馆

14、时发现眼镜不见了。(8)一会儿之后，一位老师打电话告诉了我一个好消息。come to.to do/doing.kill timehardly.when.only to find.the next day。不见了（be gone/missing）a piece of good newsInstructions第51页/共73页IstillrememberadaylasttermwhenIwasinourschool.Ilostmyglasses.Onerainyafternoon,Icametotheschoollibrary,hopingtokilltime.hardlyhadInoticed

15、itwhenIreturned,onlytofindthelibraryclosed.ThenextdaywhenIwentbacktothelibrary,Ifoundtheyweregone.Iwasworried.Myclassmatesalsohelpedme.Ashortwhilelater,ateachercalledmeandtoldmeapieceofgoodnews.No one could tell how delighted I was at that time.From theexperience,I learned that on the one hand,I sho

16、uld be carefulenoughinfuture,andontheotherhand,weshouldbereadytohelpeachotherandcareforeachother.【成篇衔接过渡，连句成篇】第52页/共73页书面表达有方法书面表达有方法三段结构把架搭三段结构把架搭十句中文心中划十句中文心中划主谓时态要一致主谓时态要一致每句短语，句型化每句短语，句型化特殊句型锦添花特殊句型锦添花Conclusion第53页/共73页高考英语写作中高考英语写作中怎样使用复杂结构怎样使用复杂结构第54页/共73页1.1.适当的语态适当的语态2.2.使用不定式使用不定式 3.3.使用过去

17、分词使用过去分词4.4.使用使用V.+ingV.+ing形式形式 5.5.使用名词性从句使用名词性从句 6.6.使用定语从句使用定语从句7.7.使用虚拟语气使用虚拟语气8.8.使用倒装句使用倒装句,感叹句感叹句 怎样运用复杂结构：怎样运用复杂结构：第55页/共73页怎样运用复杂结构：怎样运用复杂结构：1.1.主动转被动主动转被动 People suggest that the conference be put off.(一般一般)that the conference be put off.that the conference be put off.(高高级级)The advisor is

18、 expected to work 4 hours a week.We expect the advisor to work 4 hours a week.It is suggested第56页/共73页2.2.使用不定式使用不定式3.3.使用过去分词使用过去分词In order to earn money by myself and broaden my horizonsShe walked out of the room and many students followed her.(一般一般),shewalkedoutoftheroom.(高级高级)，I intend to look f

19、or a part-time job as a salesman.（为了独立赚钱和拓宽视野）（为了独立赚钱和拓宽视野）Followed by many students第57页/共73页4.4.使用使用v-ingv-ing形式形式2 2）,Ill Ill visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation.（天气允许的话）（天气允许的话）1）Now our school has three teachers.They teach 48 pupils.(一般一般)Now our School has three

20、 teachersNow our School has three teachers，Weather permittingteaching 48 pupils.伴随状语第58页/共73页What is the most important is that5.5.使用名词性从句使用名词性从句2.I can I can help children improve their English.(help children improve their English.(最为重最为重要的是要的是)1.I am sorry.I didnt reply without delay.I am sorry th

21、at I didnt reply without delay.第59页/共73页6.6.使用定语从句使用定语从句1）The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.(一般一般)The girlThe girl was was highly spoken of.spoken of.(高级高级)2)maybe I will work as a volunteer for a school as a teaching assistant_.(这将丰富我这将丰富我的生活的生活)which is able to enrich m

22、y life.which will make my life colorful.whose composition was well writtenenriching my life第60页/共73页7.7.使用虚拟语气使用虚拟语气我相信如果你是我，你也会做出同样的我相信如果你是我，你也会做出同样的选择。选择。I believe that if you were me,you would make the same choice.第61页/共73页8.8.使用倒装句、感叹句使用倒装句、感叹句 earn money by myself,but also it will broaden my ho

23、rizons.(我不仅能独立赚钱)1.I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it.(我多么希望)2.not only but also引起的倒装How I wish Not only can I第62页/共73页高考英语写作中高考英语写作中要要学会使用恰当的关联词第63页/共73页III.常用的常用的连接词连接词1.表示递进表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有另外，还有：whatsmore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition2.表示转折关系表示转折关系但是，但是，然而

24、，然而，相反相反：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary.第64页/共73页3.表示因果关系表示因果关系因为，因此，所以因为，因此，所以:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;4.表示条件关系表示条件关系如果，只要如果，只要:if;oncondition(that);aslongas除非除非:unless否则否则:orelse第65页/共73页5.表示时间关系表示时间关系当当的时候的时候:when;while在在之后之后:after在在之前之前:before直到直到:u

25、ntil直到直到才才:notuntil一一就就:assoonas后来，后来，然后然后:later;afterwards不久不久:soon近来近来:lately;recently自从自从:since从那时起从那时起:fromthenon第66页/共73页6.表示特定的顺序关系表示特定的顺序关系首先首先:firstly最主要的最主要的:aboveall其次其次:secondly然后然后:then;next最后最后:finally;intheend7.换一种方法表述换一种方法表述换句话说换句话说:inotherwords;thatistosay;第67页/共73页8.进行举例说明进行举例说明例如，比

26、如例如，比如:forinstance;forexample;like;suchasthatistosay,namely,actually,andsoon,believeitornot,totellyouthetruth,forthisreason9.用于陈述事实用于陈述事实实际上实际上:infact;actually;asamatteroffact跟你说实话跟你说实话:totellyouthetruth第68页/共73页10.对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说总而言之，总的来说:onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword,fi

27、nally,inconclusion,generallyspeaking,asyouknow,intheend,11.其它常用到的副词其它常用到的副词therefore;otherwise;finally;furthermore;Thus;namely;although;afterwards;personally;第69页/共73页12.表示结果：表示结果：thus,therefore,so,asaresult,seeingthat,luckily,unfortunately13.表示强调：表示强调：aboveall,indeed,surely,certainly,ofcourse,afterall,withoutanydelay,atleast,atmost,mostimportant,undoubtedly第70页/共73页背诵一些题材的常识性语句背诵一些题材的常识性语句第71页/共73页授之以鱼不如授之以渔第72页/共73页感谢您的观看！感谢您的观看！第73页/共73页