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1、1、在东北部、在东北部2、人口将近七万人、人口将近七万人in/on/to the northeast of The population of Venice is about 70000.Venice has a population of about 70000.There is a population of about 70000 in Venice.About 70000 people live in Venice.There are about 70000 people(living)in Venice.Venice is a city with a population of 70

2、000.有一千多年历史。有一千多年历史。Venice has a history of more than 1000 years.The history of Venice is more than 1000 years.Venice is a city with a history of more than 1000 years.Venice is more than 1000 years old.景点景点 attractionplaces of interestVenice lied in the northeastern part of Italian port city.Venice,

3、a port city,lies in the northeast of Italy.Venice is surrounded by the sea,has a“water city”reputation.Venice is surrounded by the sea,so it is called a“water city”.We will visit many famous attractions,not only the Grand Canal,the Doges Palace,the Bridge of Sighs,but also visit the boat,which the m

4、ost special in Venice gondola.We will visit many famous attractions,not only the Grand Canal,the Doges Palace,the Bridge of Sighs,but also the gondola,the most special boat in Venice.Venice is a port city located in the northeast of Italy.(黄雯晴黄雯晴)About 70000 people live in it.(吴诗琪吴诗琪)About 70000 peo

5、ple live here and Venice is 1000 years old.(陈楠陈楠)Its in the northeast of Italy and there are nearly seventy thousand people living here What an attractive city!(雷芷晴雷芷晴)Besides,you cant miss the most beautiful attraction gondola.This is the reason why Times Online called it“the most beautiful city of

6、 Europe.”(潘彤潘彤)Venice,a city in the northeast of Italy,was built around sea,so people call it“Water City”and Times Online regarded it as the most beautiful city of Europe.It is an ancient city with a history of more than 1000 years.About 70000 people live in this beautiful city.There are many wonder

7、ful attractions in Venice,such as the Grand Canal,the Doges Palace and the Bridge of Sighs,but gondola must be the special place of interest of Venice.I think you will love this city.(罗志兴罗志兴)Venice,a beautiful port city lies in the northeast of Italy with a long history of more than 1000 years.Nearl

8、y 70000 people are living in Venice.The Grand Canal,the Doges Palace and the Bridge of Sighs are the famous attractions.And the most characteristic of Venice is the boat named gondola.Venice has a beautiful name of the City on Water because it is surrounded by sea.Also,because of it,Times Online cal

9、led Venice the most beautiful city in Europe.(程欣程欣)Venice,which lies in the northeast of Italy has a history of 1000 years.About 70000 people live there.Venice is surrounded by sea,so that it is also called“the city on water”.Because of that,Venice has many harbors and the places of interest,such as

10、 the Grand Canal,the Doges Palace and the Bridge of Sighs.Also,you cant miss the most special thing gondola there.Last but not least,Venice was named the most beautiful city in Europe by Times Online.（冯捷）（冯捷）Located in the northeast of Italy,Venice is a major port city in the country.It has a popula

11、tion of nearly 70,000 with a history of over 1000 years.Venice has many famous tourist attractions,among which are the Grand Canal,the Doges Palace,and the Bridge of Sighs.And one thing you can never miss is the gondola,the classical boat for tourists.Since the city is surrounded by sea,Venice is called“the city on water”and was considered“the most beautiful city in Europe”by Times Online.(参考答案参考答案)