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1、英语写作常见错误分析第1页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二 检查主要针对四个重点部位：1）是否切题是否切题它又分三个层面：一是整篇文章内容是否切合文章标题要求；二是段落主题句的内容是否与各段落提示句内容是否与各段落提示句内容相一致相一致；三是段落内部的内容是否与段落主题句的表达相一致。如果发现任何一个层面不切题，应尽可能弥补，删除那些多余的或不切题的地方；增添残缺的、语义表达不足的地方。由于时间所限，删的内容一定要精，要切中要害，切忌动“大手术”。第2页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二 2）是否连贯检查上下文是否连贯，句子衔接是否自然流畅，检验的标准主要是句子是否通顺，该用连接词的地方

2、用了没有，以及所用的连接词是否合适。第3页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二3）是否有语法错误主谓是否一致，动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确，词组的搭配是否合乎习惯。为避免不必要的语法错误，对把握性不大的词组、句型绝不要用。而应使用那些自己熟悉的词组、句型来表达相同或相近的意思。第4页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二4）是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误在这些细枝末节上，谨慎细心地处理，无疑会进一步提高文章的整体质量。在检查、改错的过程中，切忌乱涂乱抹。保持卷面清洁，无疑会给阅卷者留下好印象。第5页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二英语写作常见错误英语写作常见错误第6页，共91页，编辑于

3、2022年，星期二 一、一、不切题不切题 英汉不同的语篇思维模式是造成不切题的直接原因。一些外国人认为东方人写作善用迂回法，也就是总绕着主题的外围转，而不从主题入手展开讨论。汉语语篇的思维模式是中国历史文化的产物，人们认为这种方式含蓄、委婉，容易使人接受，而英美人则喜欢开门见山的叙述主题；所以我国学生进行英语写作时，由于受汉语语篇思维模式的影响，阐述时不从主题入手，不能紧扣主题进行写作，致使文章主题不明确，观点不够鲜明。我们来看一篇以Trees为题目的作文：第7页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二 Trees are mans friends.1.We can see trees every

4、where.2.We plant trees every year.3.We can make tables with trees.4.Trees also give us fruits to eat.5.I like to eat fruits very much.该段的主题句是Trees are mans friends,写作中心应围绕friends，也就是树的用途展开。但学生没有从friends入手阐明主题，而是绕圈子说了些无关紧要的话，第一、二、五展开句偏离了树的用途这个主题，而是说我们到处可以看见树木；每年都种树；喜欢吃水果等；而且段落框架松散，这样就属于主题句抓不住，中心思想不明确

5、，而且句型单调。第8页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二再来看改写后的段落：Trees are mans friends.1.They provide man with timber,fruits and seeds.With timber,man can build houses and make furniture.2.Fruits are the food,which is necessary to us every day.3.As for seeds,they can be used to extract oil.这样就克服了前面所犯错误，紧紧围绕了主题句来展开，算是一篇好的作文。

6、第9页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二二、语言表达的错误从题目或给出的关键词中照搬，不注意单词在句中所做的成分及大小写忽视第三人称单数忽视被动语态的用法第10页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二三、语言表达的错误重点分析。1句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整 或句子成分多余或句子成分多余 2 词性误用词性误用 3主谓不一致主谓不一致 4根据中文逐字硬译根据中文逐字硬译第11页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二5.名词可数与不可数的误用名词可数与不可数的误用6.介词介词to和不定式符号的混淆和不定式符号的混淆7.动宾搭配不当动宾搭配不当8.词组搭配错误词组搭配错误9

7、综合性语言错误综合性语言错误:有诸如时态，有诸如时态，语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误第12页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二三、语言表达的错误重点分析 1句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整或句子成分多余。句子不完整（Sentence Fragments）在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生第13页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例1There are large number of people die from

8、the disasters.改为1：There are a large number of people who die from the disasters.改为2：There are a large number of people dying from the disasters.改为3：A large number of people die from the disasters.第14页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例2There is a fire happened/broke out.There was occurred a fire in Honghua Hotel.改为

9、：A fire happened/broke out/occurred.第15页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例3She learn knowledge depend on herself.改为：She learns knowledge by herself.第16页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例4The driver of the red car was died on the spot.改为：The driver of the red car died on the spot.第17页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例5Helping others we also kno

10、w the significance of life.改为：We also realize the significance of life through helping others.第18页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例6The public service advertisement catch everyones eyes,enable us pay more attention about our lives and societies.改为：The public service advertisements catch everyones eyes,which enabl

11、es us to pay more attention about our lives and societies.第19页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例7The aging of population bring some problems,such as the lack of labor,seniors feel lonely and so on.改为：The aging of population brings about some problems,such as the lack of labor,seniors sense of loneliness and so on.

12、第20页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例8Children take care of the seniors should meet their material needs,but this is not enough,concerning their spiritual needs is more important.改为：When it comes to taking care of the seniors,children should meet their spiritual needs as well as material needs.第21页，共91页，编辑于2022年，

13、星期二例9When your opportunity coming,you attain success will be easier.改为：When your opportunity comes,it will be easier for you to attain success.第22页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二2 词性误用(Misuse of Parts of Speech)“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等例Its likely to success if you have confident,diligent and intelligenc

14、e.改为1：You are likely to succeed if you have confidence,diligence and intelligence.第23页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二 改为2：Its likely that you will achieve success if you are confident,diligent and intelligent.改为3：It is likely that you are on the way to success if you have confidence,diligence and intelligence.第2

15、4页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例2You cant success without your efforts.改为1：You cant succeed without your efforts.改为2：You cant obtain success without your efforts.改为3：You cant become successful without your efforts.第25页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二改为4：Success is no longer out of reach with your great efforts.第26页，共91页，编辑于

16、2022年，星期二例3As the development of science and technology,-改为：With the development of science and technology,-/As the science and technology develop-第27页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例4I usually do some public services for free,trying my best to service for the public.改为：I usually do some public services for free

17、,trying my best to serve the public.第28页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例5 The public service advertisement is benefit to us.改为1:The public service advertisement is beneficial to us.改为2:The public service advertisement benefits us.改为3：The public service advertisement is of great benefit to us.第29页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星

18、期二改为4:We benefits a lot from the public service advertisement.第30页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例6Some seniors were died because of without their childrens support.改为：Some seniors died for lack of their childrens support.第31页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例7The old man was hit by a car when he across the street.改为：The old m

19、an was hit by a car when he was crossing the street.第32页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例8The children are supposed to spare some time to company their parents.改为：The children are supposed to spare some time to accompany our parents chatting.第33页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例9With the rapid development of economic,the condi

20、tions of our life is improving.改为：With the rapid development of economy,the conditions of our life are improving.第34页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例10They need economical concerned,but also mental concerned.改为：They need not only financial support,but also emotional support.第35页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例11With the deve

21、lopment of the mordern social,more and more families prefer to have one child or even none,which cause the sum of the seniors has been increase quickly.改为：With the development of the modern society,an increasing number of families prefer to have one child or even none,which cause the rapid increase

22、of the sum of the seniors.cause sth.cause sb.to do sth.第36页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例12The fire was because of the wrong of electricity.改为：The fire was due to electric fault.第37页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例13The cause of the fire includes peoples careless and dry weather.改为：The cause of the fire includes peoples ca

23、relessness and dry weather.第38页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例14Although I am not a specialize student of computer,I have enough knowledge about computer and I have ever take a part-time summer job as a sellman before.改为：Although I am not a computer major/a student majoring in computer,I have enough knowledge a

24、bout computer and I have ever taken a part-time summer job as a salesman before.第39页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例15Many students choice go to the library in their spare time in order to get more knowledge.改为：Many students choose to go to the library in their spare time in order to update their knowledge.第40页，

25、共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二3主谓不一致主谓不一致 例There are too much thing we can do to protect our earth.改为：There are too many things we can do to protect our earth.第41页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例2The hard work/hard-working then achieve the success.改为1：Hard work then enables/helps us to achieve the success.改为2:We are bound to

26、 succeed through hard work.第42页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例3Happy mind leads a long life.改为:With happy mind seniors will lead a long life.第43页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二4根据中文逐字硬译根据中文逐字硬译例1:make us more perfect 改为：improve ourselves/make us perfect/perfect ourselves第44页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例2If someones family situation i

27、s not well,he can apply for scholarship.改为：If ones family is not well off,he can apply for scholarship.第45页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例3 keep a good body health 改为：keep fit/healthy第46页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例4 Dormitory was happened to a fire.改为：A fire happened/broke out in a dormitory.第47页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例5 St

28、udents should hard to learn knowledge.改为1：Students should study the new knowledge diligently unceasingly.改为2：Students should study hard and learn a lot of knowledge.改为3：Students should strive to learn knowledge.第48页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例6 Students will take more times to study or not play.改为1：Students

29、will take more time to study rather than play.改为2：Students will take more time to study instead of playing.改为3：Students will spend more time studying instead of playing.第49页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例7 I want in the summer vacation concurrent job computer marketing work.改为:I want to apply for/look for/hunt

30、for a concurrent/part-time job concerning computer marketing in the summer vacation.第50页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例8 Now I attend the university first grade in the college education scientific institute.改为:Now I am a freshman in College /School of Education Science/Education and Science Institute.第51页，共91页，

31、编辑于2022年，星期二例9Although I do not have the related computer marketing work experience,but I believe that I may be competent this work.改为:Although I do not have the work experience related to/concerning computer marketing,I believe that I will be competent for this work.第52页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例10Later w

32、e must even more pay attention to use electricity the security.改为:From now on we must more pay attention to electricity safety.第53页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二5.名词可数与不可数的误用名词可数与不可数的误用例1:Too much tests are disadvantage for students study.改为：Too many tests are disadvantageous to students.第54页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例

33、2:In modern society,people are under various pressures.改为：In modern society,people are under various kinds of pressure.第55页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二6.介词介词to和不定式符号的混淆和不定式符号的混淆例1:Too many tests will do harm to cultivate our independent thinking.改为：Too many tests will do harm to the cultivation of our indepen

34、dent thinking.第56页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例2:All these contributed to solve the serious problem.改为：All these contributed to the solution to the serious problem.第57页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二 7.动宾搭配不当动宾搭配不当例1:We must pay attention to it and make solutions of the problem.改为：We must pay attention and find/figure out

35、/work out a solution to the problem.第58页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例2:It also may help you to make success.改为：It may also help you succeed/obtain your goal.第59页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例3:A strong will means never give up.改为：A strong will means never giving up.第60页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二8词组搭配错误。例1The public service adve

36、rtisement is to call saving water to keep the environment in balance.改为1:The public service advertisement is to call on the public to save water to keep the ecological balance /improve earth environment.第61页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二改为2:The public service advertisement is to appeal to the public to save wat

37、er to keep the ecological balance /improve earth environment.第62页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例2Children are supposed to provide the seniors money,especially love and warm.改为1:Children are supposed to provide the seniors with money,especially love and warmth/care.改为2:Children are supposed to provide money,espe

38、cially love and warmthfor the seniors.第63页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例3The government should take actions to concern our seniors.改为1:The government should take actions to be concerned about our seniors.改为2:The government should take actions to show concern about our seniors.改为3:The government should take act

39、ions to care about/for our seniors.第64页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例4They should spent more time to talk with them and encourage them to join some cultural activities.改为:They should spend more timetalking with them,encouraging them to participate in some cultural activities.第65页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例5There are v

40、arious of scholarship for us to apply for.改为1:There are various scholarships for us to apply for.改为2:There are a variety of scholarships for us to apply for.改为3:Various scholarships are available for students.第66页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例6Its believed that scholarship can help students improve their study

41、 and increase teaching quality.改为:Its believed that scholarships can help to improve students study and teaching quality.第67页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例7Scholarship can inspire the students study more hard/hardly.改为:Scholarships can inspire/encourage/stimulate/motivate the students to study harder.第68页，共91页

42、，编辑于2022年，星期二9综合性语言错误:有诸如时态，语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误。例1Take care of the seniors is the societys moral as well as our duty.改为：Taking care of the seniors is the societys moral as well as our duty.第69页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二例2The fire was so terrible that I be afraid to saw it.改为：The fire was so terrible that I wa

43、s terrified/horrified /shocked/frightened to see it.第70页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二使文章富有表现力的手段：使文章富有表现力的手段：1、使用有难度的词汇；2、使用形容词修饰名词，用副词修饰动词或整个句子；3、使用被动语态；4、使用倒装句；(not only.but also.；only.)5、尽可能地使用名词，而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。第71页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二写作的基本句式There be+主语主语+定语定语+状语状语.1.There must be(a variety of)reasons for this

44、.2.There is no point in talking about it about again.(sense/use/good)3.There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem.第72页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二4.There remains nothing(more)(to be done).5.There is a great change(produced in the worlds communications).6.There is something

45、(you dont know).7.There are about 78%of the college students (wanting to further their study after their graduation).第73页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二名词化结构名词化结构1名词从句转换成名词短语名词从句转换成名词短语That the women actively participate in public life causes the change of their role in the society.The womens active participatio

46、n in public life-第74页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二2.表语从句转换成名词短语表语从句转换成名词短语 One of the positive effects of physical exercise is that it contributes directly to a persons physical health.-is its direct contribution to a persons physical health.第75页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二3由由of 连接含有连接含有by 的名词短语的名词短语That James Watt inve

47、nted the steam engine started the Industrial Revolution in the 18th century.The invention of the steam engine by James Watt第76页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二4.被动结构转换成名词被动结构转换成名词It has been suggested that we should spare no effort 不遗余力不遗余力to beautify our environment.A suggestion has been made that-第77页，共91页，编辑于2

48、022年，星期二5.副词与动词一起转换成名词短语副词与动词一起转换成名词短语The computer is chiefly characterized by accuracy and quick computation.计算计算The chief characteristic of the computer is-第78页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二6.介词短语与动词一起转换成名词短语介词短语与动词一起转换成名词短语The professor explained the theory of relativity to his students in detail.The profess

49、or gave his students a detailed explanation of-7.动词转换成介词短语动词转换成介词短语Some problems are being discussed.Some problems are under discussion.第79页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二Exercise:1.He has breakfast quickly.2.As the science and technology develop,the peoples living standard is on the rise.3.There is still room f

50、or improving your work.4.What he said is brief and to the point.5.The money in itself is not important to us.第80页，共91页，编辑于2022年，星期二Reference1.He has a quick breakfast.2.With the development of science and technology,the peoples living standard is on the rise.3.There is still room for improvement in