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1、基础写作评分标准基础写作评分标准要点齐全、要点组合合理；语句连贯、读起来流畅；语言得体、有复杂结构体现(长短句结合，错落有致)；（基本）没有语法和拼写错误；书写好。【写作内容】分析过程：1、审题；2、信息分组（不遗漏内容要点）；3、简译关键语言结构；（考虑复杂结构的投放）4、翻译成文。基础写作写作技巧二：谋篇布局基础写作写作技巧二：谋篇布局1、交代事件/现象/调查研究/采访报道/数据来源的背景2、展开叙述、调查研究或采访报道的数据呈现（寻找内在逻辑关系）3、总结概括（呈现结果或自我观点或呼吁号召或建议点评等）复杂结构的体现：复杂结构的体现：1、非谓语结构；2、强调句&倒装句；3、定语从句、状语

2、从句、名词性从句。Last week,we did a survey among 2,600 students on“who is your idol”.The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols while 48%of the boys favor sports stars.As the data shows,“parents”ranks second for the girls,but fourth for the boys.However,the percentage of the b

3、oys choosing“great figures”is the same as that of the girls.As for myself,Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life.广东广东07高考基础写作范文高考基础写作范文 Shooting,originated as a means of survival,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.The sport,which first appeare

4、d in 1896,was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games.It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic.However,not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting.With the sport becoming more and more popular,it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting even

5、ts at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.广东广东08年高考基础写作范文年高考基础写作范文广东广东09年高考基础写作范文年高考基础写作范文 Last weekend,I had an interview with Professor Wang,an eye-doctor,concerning the issue of short-sightedness of school children in China.According to Professor Wang,slightly more than 50%students,which ranks No.

6、1 in the world,are short-sighted.He also pointed out the cause for short-sightedness is so complicated that there is still no cure for short-sightedness.He suggested that we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor exercises.He particularly reminded us that how to hold a pen is also related t

7、o short-sightedness.Chinese government has decided that smoking should be banned in public places all over the country.This decision,which will be carried out from January 1,2011,aims to bring a complete smoke-free indoor environment.In order to achieve this goal,no-smoking signs will be put up in a

8、ll indoor public places.Statistics show that China has approximately 350 million smokers,among whom 75%are men and 25%are women.Whats more,around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke,causing over 100,000 deaths a year.广东广东10年高考基础写作范文年高考基础写作范文广东广东11年高考基础写作范文年高考基础写作范文(1)“Battle Hymn of

9、 the Tiger Mother”,written by an American-Chinese Amy,was published in 2010.(2)Ms.Amy,who is the professor in Yale University,deals with the stories of her educating her two daughters in the traditional Chinese ways.(3)Her 17-year-old daughter has been admitted by both Yale and Harvard universities.

10、(4)This book,whose Chinese version was launched at the beginning of 2011,has caused a heated discussion on the differences between the Chinese and American ways in educating Children successfully.(5)Surprisingly,the majority of Chinese mothers disapprove of Ms.Amys idea.写作中复合句常见的错误写作中复合句常见的错误1、只有从句，

11、没有主句 The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time,so he could keep calm in the storm.2、以逗号连接两个简单句 The old man thought of his son,tears came down from his face.The hall is different from all other buildings,it is made of glass.3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然 There are over fifty students in this school

12、 who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.4、过多地使用并列句组合信息 We were driving out into the country,and we saw our English teacher riding in a bus,and the bus was crowded.It is a beautiful day,and the

13、 sun is shining and a breeze is blowing.It is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing.As we were driving out into the country,we saw our English teacher riding in a crowded bus.学学会会运运用用复复合合句句和和非非谓谓语语动动词词 Kate is a new student.She comes from a northern province.She speaks a dialect.

14、We find it hard to understand her dialect.Kate,a new student from a northern province,speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.用一句话表达用一句话表达不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。学学会会运运用用复复合合句句和和非非谓谓语语动动词词第一步：拆分成几个简单句第一步：拆分成几个简单句不是人人都能学好英语。不是人人都能学好英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。这会影响汉语学习。这会影响汉语学习。第二步：分别

15、翻译这几个简单句第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句 Not everyone is good at learning English.Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at the same time.This will affect their Chinese study.Not everyone is good at learning English.Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time.This

16、will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子第三步：合并句子方法方法1：That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learning English.Not everyone is good at learning English.Children from primary school start to

17、learn English and Chinese at the same time.This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子第三步：合并句子 If children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time,this will affect their Chinese study方法方法2 2：because not everyone is good at learning English.Not everyone is good at le

18、arning English.Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time.This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子第三步：合并句子 If children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time,this will affect their Chinese study方法方法3 3：for the sake of the fa

19、ct that not everyone is good at learning English.学学会会使使用用复复合合句句和和非非谓谓语语动动词词你来试试你来试试现象学生作文中出现很多错别字原因1.上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。2.每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。参考词汇：错别字:wrongly-written characters网络语言：web language要求：1、用两句话表达表格内容 2、两句话要有连贯性步骤1：信息分组 2：分解成最基本的句子单位 3：简译关键结构 4：整合信息（翻译成文）第一句（两个信息点）：1、学生作文中出现很多错别字 2、（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言

20、。There are many wrongly-written characters in students compositions.The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.合并句子：合并句子：They often use web languages when chatting on line.1.They have so much homework to

21、 do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters第二句:1.每天有很多作业做 2.没有记住生字。They have much homework to do every day.2.With so much homework to do,they fail to memorize the new characters.3.Because they have so much homework to do,they fail to memorize the new characters.合并句子：They fail to memo

22、rize the new characters.连接两句话（连贯性连贯性）：The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.Moreover,they have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters.1、一个乞丐在路边讨钱、一个乞丐在路边讨钱(as

23、k for money)。李先生匆忙。李先生匆忙赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。2、乞丐很生气，伸出、乞丐很生气，伸出(stick out)拐杖，差点把李先生绊拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了倒了(trip over)。3、李先生意识到他是个残疾人，便在口袋里找钱给他。、李先生意识到他是个残疾人，便在口袋里找钱给他。4、李先生拿出了一张百元钞票、李先生拿出了一张百元钞票(a 100-yuan note)。突然。突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中。一阵风把钞票吹到了空中。5、乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票。、乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票。李先生站在那里，惊得合不拢嘴。李先生站在那里，惊得合

24、不拢嘴。实战演练实战演练实战演练实战演练：以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过观察、整理排列成的五个信息块，请分别用一个句子观察、整理排列成的五个信息块，请分别用一个句子表达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。表达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。beggar(1)一个乞丐在路边讨钱(ask for money)。李先生匆忙赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。步骤：二、分解信息（基本句子单位）：李先生匆忙赶路上班；没有注意到一个乞丐；那个乞丐在路边讨钱。三、简译：go to work in a hurry fail to notice was asking for mone

25、y on the roadside.go to work in a hurry fail to notice was asking for money on the roadside.四、整合信息(1)One day,Mr.Li went to work in such a hurry that he failed to notice a beggar who was asking for money on the roadside.(2)乞丐很生气，伸出(stick out)拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了(trip over)。步骤二：分解信息乞丐很生气；伸出拐杖；把李先生绊倒了。步骤三：简译 g

26、ot angry stuck out his walking stick tripped Mr.Li over步骤三：整合信息(2)As a result,the beggar got angry and stuck out his walking stick,which almost tripped Mr.Li over.(3)李先生意识到他是个残疾人，便在口袋里找钱 给他。(3)Realizing the beggar was disabled,Mr.Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give him.(4)李先生拿出了一

27、张百元钞票(a 100-yuan note),突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中。(4)When he took out a 100-yuan note,it was suddenly blown into the air by the wind.(5)乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票。李先生站在那里，惊得合不拢嘴。(5)Seeing this,the beggar jumped quickly to run after the note,leaving Mr.Li standing there with his mouth open,surprised.(1)One day,Mr.Li went to w

28、ork in such a hurry that he failed to notice a beggar who was asking for money on the roadside.(2)As a result,the beggar got angry and stuck out his walking stick,which almost tripped Mr.Li over.(3)Realizing the beggar was disabled,Mr.Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give him.(4)When he took out a 100-yuan note,it was suddenly blown into the air by the wind.(5)Seeing this,the beggar jumped quickly to run after the note,leaving Mr.Li standing there with his mouth open,surprised.