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1、She used to be,but now she is She used to have,but now she has quietoutgoingoutgoing quietseriousfriendlysilentactivelong hairshort hair straight hair curly hair 第1页/共18页假设你是 Tom,进入九年级以来你在各个方面都有了很大变化。请根据表格提示写一篇短文，说说你的变化。过去（过去（in the past）现在（现在（Now）胖胖瘦瘦文静文静外向外向起床晚，上课迟到起床晚，上课迟到早起读英语，按时到校早起读英语，按时到校上课说话

2、，上课说话，不听课不听课认真听讲，每天记笔记认真听讲，每天记笔记晚上不学习，抄别人的作业晚上不学习，抄别人的作业晚上在家认真学习，晚上在家认真学习，经常和其他同学打架经常和其他同学打架总是帮助同学总是帮助同学一、审题：人称、时态、体裁第2页/共18页过去（过去（in the past）现在（现在（Now）used to be fatam thin 二、列要点：根据提示和要求列出英文要点第3页/共18页二、列要点根据提示和要求列出英文要点过去（过去（in the past）现在（现在（Now）used to be fatthinused to be quietoutgoingused to ge

3、t up late,used to be late for class get up early to read English，get to school on timeused to talk with others in class,didnt use to listen to the teacherslisten to the teacher carefully，take notes every daydidnt use to study at night，used to copy others homeworkstudy hard at home every nightused to

4、 fight with other studentsalways help my classmates第4页/共18页三、连词成句：使用句型，给每个句子加上主语 如：I used to be fat,but now Im thin.I used to,but now I第5页/共18页二、列要点根据提示和要求列出英文要点过去（过去（in the past）现在（现在（Now）I used to be fatbut now I am thinI used to be quietbut now I am outgoingI used to get up late,I used to be late

5、 for class but now I get up early to read English，but now I get to school on timeI used to talk with others in class,I didnt use to listen to the teachersbut now I listen to the teacher carefully and I take notes every day.I didnt use to study at night，I used to copy others homeworkbut now I study h

6、ard at home every nightI used to fight with other studentsbut now I always help my classmates第6页/共18页四、连句成篇：加上开头结尾和连接词 My life has changed a lot in the last few years.First,I used to be fat,but now I am thin.Second,I used to be quiet,but now I am outgoing I have made great progress(取得了巨大的进步），and Ill

7、 try my best to be a better boy/girl.第7页/共18页五、美化：尽量使用多种不同的句型和词语。注意扩写相关要点。My life has changed a lot in the last few years.First,I used to be fat,but now I am thin.Because I play sports everyday.Second,I used to be quiet,but now I am outgoing.I have made many friends.I have made great progress(取得了巨大的

8、进步），and Ill try my best to be a better boy/girl.第8页/共18页五、检查：先看字数是否达到要求，再通读全文，检查是否有人称、时态、单复数、拼写和搭配等错误 My life has changed a lot in the last few years.First,I used to be fat,but now I am thin.Because I play sports everyday.Second,I used to be quiet,but now I am outgoing.I have made many friends.Third

9、,I used to talk with others in class and I didnt use to listen to the teachers.Because I have no interest in studying.But now I listen to the teacher carefully，and I take notes every day.第9页/共18页Whats more(而且）,I didnt use to study at night，and I used to copy others homework.But now I study hard at h

10、ome every night.Only in this way can I get into a good high school.Finally(最后），I used to fight with other students.But now I always help my classmates.Because I want to make more friends.I have made great progress(取得了巨大的进步），and Ill try my best to be a better boy/girl.第10页/共18页Write a passage in abou

11、t 100 words with the help of the following points about Zhanghuas life change.The first sentence has been given.【2011山东枣庄】第11页/共18页Zhanghua as a child Zhuanghua now used to have much timeused to spend a lot of time playing games with his friendsused to watch TV or chat with his grandma in the evenin

12、gused to go to concerts with his father.is too busygets up early and stays in school all day.hasnt any more time to play games with hisdoes his homework and goes to bed late,hardly has time for concerts.misses the old days.第12页/共18页Zhuanghuas life has changed a lot in the last few years._第13页/共18页On

13、e possible version:Zhuanghuas life has changed a lot in the lastfew years.In the past,he used to have muchtime to play after school.He spent a lot of timeplaying games with his friends.When hefinished his homework,he often watched TVor chatted with his grandma.On Saturday,heoften went to concerts wi

14、th his father.第14页/共18页But now his school life has changed a lot.Heis very busy every day.He has to get upearly and stays in school all day because hehas to study hard.He hasnt any more timeto play games with his friends.He has to dohis homework and goes to bed late everynight.He hardly has any time

15、 for concerts.He misses the old days very much.第15页/共18页要求：假设你是无锡日报英文周刊English Weekly的特约小记者，请在答题卡指定的位置上，以“A New Town”为题，写一则80词左右的简讯，介绍我市的太湖新城（Taihu New Town）。内容提示见下表：简介位于无锡南部，近五年来变化巨大过去有很多大型工厂现在政府已迁走所有工厂，空气清新，没有污染问题尚存一些，其中之一是公交线路太少展望注意：1.简讯须包括表格内所有信息，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2.表格中“展望“栏，请用自己的2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；3.简

16、讯的标题已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数。Practice第16页/共18页 One possible version A New Town Taihu New Town is in the south of Wuxi.It has changed a lot in the past five years.There used to be many big factories here.The government has moved them all away,so the air is fresh and there is no pollution.There are still a few problems.One of them is there are too few bus lines.But I believe all these problems will be solved soon.The new town will become a wonderful place to live.第17页/共18页感谢您的观看！第18页/共18页