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1、写作要点：写作要点：1.建议信：建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.对象：对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。第1页/共50页3.基本框架：开头（beginning）-开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(state your idea)主体(body)-对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)结尾(ending)-呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)第2页/共50页4.注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因

2、，建议的内容，提出建议的理由2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。3）符合英文信件的基本格式；4）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。第3页/共50页常用套语常用套语A建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式(照应材料照应材料,表明写作意图表明写作意图)1.AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat2.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto3.Iknowyouhavetroubleinafterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof5.Iamwritingt

3、osharesomeadvice/opinionswithyou.第4页/共50页B.表达建议（表达建议（body）1.I think it would be more beneficial if you could 2.I would like to suggest/recommend that3.is a good/great idea.4.In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.5.When it comes to such a situation,I would like to suggest that y

4、ou should 第5页/共50页C.建议信结尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句式1.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.2.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.3.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.第6页/共50页假假如如你你叫叫孙孙军军，是是实实验验高高中中的的学学生生，要要给给市市长长写写一一封封信信，反反映映学学校校门门前

5、前交交通通拥拥挤挤现现象象，包包括括以下要点：以下要点：参考词汇:穿行threadonesway天桥overpass问题问题建议建议学学校校和和一一所所小小学学毗毗邻邻，对对着着大大街街，高高峰峰期期交交通通繁繁忙忙；加加之之孩孩子子小小,家家长长接接送送。交交通通更更拥拥挤挤；学学生生过过街街在在车车辆辆中中穿行危险。穿行危险。政政府府应应采采取取措措施施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等。第7页/共50页第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题思考的问题样题分析样题分析第几人称？（第几人称？（person）文章的体裁是什么

6、？文章的体裁是什么？要写的文章主题是什么要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？怎样安排信息点的顺序？(order)动作是什么时候发生的？动作是什么时候发生的？(时态时态)(when)第一人称一封信建议政府采取措施舒缓交通拥挤的状况说理逻辑性一般现在时第8页/共50页三个步骤Step 1 List the key pointsStep 2 Make sentences Step3.Form a passage and polish第9页/共50页第二步：搜索相关词组或句型问题建议学学校校和和一一所所小小学学毗毗邻邻，对对着着大大街街，高高峰峰期期交交通通繁繁忙忙；加加之之孩孩子

7、子小小,家家长长接接送送。交交通通更更拥拥挤挤；学学生生过过街街在在车车辆辆中中穿行危险。穿行危险。政政府府应应采采取取措措施施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等。第10页/共50页学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街stand next to primary face/be faced with the main streetTheresaprimaryschoolnearourschool,andbothschoolsfacethemainstreet.Ourschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschool,anditisfacedwith/facingthemainstreet.推荐句型：

8、There be+并列句Standingnexttoaprimaryschool,ourschoolisfacedwith/facesthemainstreet.stands/lies/isourschool,facedwith/facingamainstreet.Nexttoaprimaryschool第11页/共50页润色小建议可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语be located next to(near/beside/by)在对面 be opposite to第12页/共50页 The traffic is busy during the rush hours.高峰期交

9、通繁忙.traffic.during the rush hoursDuring the rush hours,there are so many cars and buses going on the road thatDuring the rush hours,there is a lot of traffic.so.thatwith结构结构With so many cars and buses going on the road,第13页/共50页润色小建议“高峰期”可意译:atpeaktime，“交通繁忙”可译为:trafficjamcongestion交通堵塞第14页/共50页加之孩子

10、小,家长接送,交通更拥挤 sendto,fetch.,which 非谓语结构非谓语结构.Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,makingthetrafficheavier.第15页/共50页加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤Whats more,pick up.make.Tomakethingsworse/Whatsworse,manyparent

11、scomingtopickuptheirchildrenmakethestreetmorecrowded.Inaddition/Additionally,manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.Whatsmore,parentsoftenattendtheirkidstoschool,resultinginmoreserioustrafficjams.Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheir

12、parentsowingtotheiryoungage.第16页/共50页 学生过街在车辆中穿行危险学生过街在车辆中穿行危险thread ones way，when doingItisdangerousforthestudentstothreadtheirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad.固定句型Itis+adj.fortodo.第17页/共50页suggest/suggestion,take steps/measures/action to do such as政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。My suggestion is that the gov

13、ernment should表语从句表语从句固定句型固定句型 It is high time that(虚拟语气虚拟语气)It is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like buildingI suggest that the government should take steps such as building an overpass.简单句简单句第19页/共50页反面范例第21页/共50页反面范例第22页/共50页反面范例第23页/共50页反面范例第24页/共50页不推荐字体第25页/共50页优点：考生能灵

14、活地处理各个信息点，大量运用非谓语，介词短语，从句，连词等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显个性和语言功底。优秀作文范例1第26页/共50页优秀作文范例2优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用there be句型，介词短语，从句，非谓语，套用句式等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。第27页/共50页优秀作文范例3优点：考生运用倒装句，so that句式，精彩的表达以及虚拟语气等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。第28页/共50页优秀作文范例4优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底蕴。第29页/共50页第30页/共50页优秀作文范例5第31页/

15、共50页优秀作文范例6第32页/共50页Congestion n.阻塞阻塞,拥挤拥挤,充血充血第33页/共50页第34页/共50页Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facingamainstreet.Whenitcomestotrafficjams，itscrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour.Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.Asaconsequence,itsofgreatdangerfort

16、hestudentstogothroughthetraffic.Accordingtothephenomenonstatedabove,itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass.第35页/共50页如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整整体体三三部部分分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body 中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending 小结；呼应主题第36页/共50页适当运用模板第37页/共50页Dear_(对象对象)，Iamwritingtoex

17、pressmyviewsconcerning_(问题问题).Firstandforthemost,_(建议一建议一).Inaddition,_(建议二建议二).Whatsmore_(建议三建议三).Ihopeyoullfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely,LiMing第38页/共50页Dear_,You have asked me for my advice withregardto_,andIlltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.In my humble opinion(以我拙见),youwould be

18、wise to take the followingactions:_.Ihopeyoullfindtheseproposals usefuland I would be ready to discuss thismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou/your_(祝愿).YourssincerelyLiMing第39页/共50页DearBob,Imgladtoreceive your letter askingformyadviceonhowto(引出主题).Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportan

19、tto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.You canalso.(此三句不同的句式提出建议)Asto,Isuggest(有时根据需要具体到某一反面).Inaddition,(其他建议).Imsure(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).Imlookingforwardto(表达愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHua第40页/共50页 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPeter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。Dear Peter,Dear Peter,Im gl

20、ad to receive your letter asking Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese for my advice on how to learn Chinese well._ well._ _Best wishes,Best wishes,Li HuaLi Hua 参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班；看电视，报纸，杂志；看电视，报纸，杂志；学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友；交中国朋友；第41页/共50页DearPeter,Imgladtoreceiveyourl

21、etteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,asyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,it also helps towatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,it should be

22、a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,becausebydoingsoyoulllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.In addition,You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China andhelpyoulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHua第42页/共50页为了迎接即将到来的期末考试，你校要取消所有的体育课。请你

23、以学生王丽的身份给校长写一封信，建议不要取消体育课。注意：1.词数：120左右；2.文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Headmaster,Im writing to express my views concerning our schools decision that all physical education should be cancelled.第43页/共50页常见连接词常见连接词表时间关系：表时间关系：when/after/before/until/not until as soon as/later/afterwards/soon/lately/recently/s

24、ince/eventually/from then on/in the meanwhile(meantime)/then/finally/at last/all of a sudden/after a while/since then/immediately/instantly/every time/each time/the first time第44页/共50页常见连接词常见连接词罗列观点：罗列观点：Firstly/First of all/To begin with/Above all/In the first place/On one hand For one thing,Second

25、ly/Besides/Apart from/Whats more,/In addition，/Furthermore,/Moreover，/Worse still,/To make matters worse,/as well/On the other hand/For another thing,/Next,Finally/In the end/At last/Last but not least,第45页/共50页常见连接词常见连接词表列举：表列举：for example(instance)/such as/take for example/thats to say/in other wo

26、rds/as follows表条件关系：表条件关系：if/unless/as long as/on condition that/only if第46页/共50页常见连接词常见连接词表因果关系：表因果关系：since/as/because/for/thanks to/due to/owing to/as a result of/for the reason that/now that/therefore/so/as a result表陈述事实表陈述事实:in fact/actually/as a matter of fact/to tell you the truth/to be honest

27、/honestly speaking第47页/共50页常见连接词常见连接词表让步转折关系：表让步转折关系：however/but/on the contrary/nevertheless/instead/despite/in spite of(the fact that)/whereas/though/although/as/even if(though)/while/in contrast/after all表目的：表目的：For this reason/purpose,For the purpose of so that in order to/so as to 第48页/共50页常见连接词常见连接词表总结：表总结：As I have shown,/In short,/In brief,/In conclusion,/In a word,/On the whole,/All in all,/In general,/In summary,/As has been stated,表换种方式表达：表换种方式表达：in other words/that is to say/to put it another way 第49页/共50页感谢您的欣赏！第50页/共50页