(1.2.1)--1.2.1好句那么多我该选哪个（0711).ppt

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1、1.2造句：1.2.1“好”句那么多，我该选哪个？快来帮帮忙，我觉得写的没有什么语法错快来帮帮忙，我觉得写的没有什么语法错误，可老师说没有加分点，属于基础级，误，可老师说没有加分点，属于基础级，让我再修改一下。让我再修改一下。Mike is a good student.He is good at playing badminton.He studies in Zhongzhou University.He has won the championship for three consecutive years.导入good student-smart/brilliant/superior s

2、tudentbe good at-be skilled in 我知道第一个“好学生”的“好”可以有不同的表达，比如可以换成smart，brilliant，superior，再借助Cambridge dictionary查看词的级别之后,可以选最后一个,be good at可以换成be skilled in避免了用词的low。其他的,除了句子主语总是用he,有点重复，没有看出更多的问题。The choice of words The choice of sentences句子写作：“好”句那么多，我该选哪个?CONTENTS目录句子结构1五大原则4评分标准2趁热打铁：实战演戏5实例分析：五问四改

3、3总结6句子写作：“好”句那么多，我该选哪个?basic sentence structures si im mp pl le ec co om mp po ou un nd dc co om mp pl le ex xAn ideal piece of writing contains sentences of a variety of lengths:some short,some long,some medium.Band12345 56 67 78Band9Grading criteria for IELTS writing exam in grammatical range and

4、accuracy BeginningAdvancedExamplesMike is a good student.He is good at playing badminton.He studies in Zhongzhou University.He has won the championship for three consecutive years.实例分析：五问四改Question 1:Question 1:something in common?*simple sentences*share the same subject(he)实例分析：五问四改Question 2:Quest

5、ion 2:change to compound sentence？?*1st edition：*Mike is a superior student and he is particularly skilled in playing badminton.He studies in Zhongzhou University,and he has three years experience in Henan Hotel.实例分析：五问四改Question 3:Question 3:compound sentence to complex sentence？?*2nd edition：*Mike

6、,who is particularly skilled in playing badminton,is a superior student.When he studies in Zhongzhou University,he has won four consecutive badminton championships.实例分析：五问四改Question 4:Question 4:avoid unnecessary word reoccurrence？?*3rd edition：*Mike,particularly skilled in playing badminton,is a su

7、perior student.During his studies in Zhongzhou University,he has won four consecutive badminton championships.实例分析：五问四改Question 5:Question 5:other ways？?*4th edition：*As a superior student,Mike is particularly skilled in playing badminton.He has won four consecutive badminton championships when stud

8、ying in Zhongzhou University.Avoid overuse of simple sentence structure五大原则Writing tipsTry to use compound structure if the sentences share the same subject.Use subordinate clauses when necessary No.1No.2No.3No.4Increase the sentence variety by using parenthesis,adverbial phrases.e sentences share t

9、he same subject.Vary sentence lengths and structuresNo.5趁热打铁“好”句那么多，我该选哪个?The conferences objectives is equality,mutual benefit,cooperation and win win.It is devoted to promoting economic exchanges,coordination and cooperation between Asian countries.It aims to enhance dialogues and ties between Asi

10、a and other parts of the world.Now you try实例分析：五问四改 Tip:Avoid using only one sentence structure;use“and”to connect the ideas.*1st edition：*The conferences objectives is equality,mutual benefit,cooperation and win win and it is devoted to promoting economic exchanges,coordination and cooperation betw

11、een Asian countries.It aims to enhance dialogues and ties between Asia and other parts of the world.实例分析：五问四改 Tip:use subordinate clauses when necessary*2st edition：*The conferences objectives is equality,mutual benefit,cooperation and win win.The conference which aims to enhance dialogues and ties

12、between Asia and other parts of the world is devoted to promoting economic exchanges,coordination and cooperation between Asian countries.实例分析：五问四改 Tip:use adverbial phrases,parenthesis to avoid word repetition.*3st edition：*With equality,mutual benefit,cooperation and win win as its objectives,the

13、conference which aims to enhance dialogues and ties between Asia and other parts of the world is devoted to promoting economic exchanges,coordination and cooperation between Asian countries.实例分析：五问四改 Tip:change to a different sentence pattern.*4st edition：*With equality,mutual benefit,cooperation and win win as its objectives,the conference is devoted to promoting economic exchanges,coordination and cooperation between Asian countries as well as enhancing dialogues and ties between Asia and other parts of the world.SUMMARY总结句子结构1五大原则4评分标准2趁热打铁：实战演戏5实例分析：五问四改3总结6“好”句那么多，我该选哪个?Thank you