读后续写：救援类----井中施救 讲义-高三英语写作专项.docx

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1、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。On a late afternoon, Brandon finished feeding his cows on the farm and decided to go back with his two sons, Louie, 6, and Everett, 3. As they headed for the house, the two boys ran ahead of their father. Suddenly Brandon was aware he forgot to close the door of

2、the barn (牲口棚). He told the boys to wait for him at the gate and returned to lock it. When he was at the gate minutes later, he saw only his youngest son.“ Wheres Louie? ” he shouted.“He fell in the hole!” Everett said.Brandon quickly realized what had happened. Noooo, he thought. Louie can barely s

3、wim! He ran to the well and heard Louie splashing, trying not to . Instinctively, he jumped in.Somehow Brandon managed to grab on to a pipe that ran down the side of the well, which slowed his fall and kept him from crushing (挤压) his son.FinallyBrandon hit the freezing water at the bottom of the wel

4、l. He popped his head out of the water and grabbed Louie, who was panicking and trying to stay afloat in water that was too deep for either of them to stand. Knowing they could tread (踩水) for only so long, Brandon lifted his son onto his chest as he packed his own back against the narrow walls for s

5、upport.“All right, Dad, you can pull us out now,” Louie said.If only it were that easy. There was no way he could climb out. The pipe that hed grabbed during his fall was too slippery to be of any use. There was only one way out.Looking up to see Everett peering down at them from the top of the well

6、, Brandon shouted, “Everett, youre going to have to be a big boy and save us. Run to the road and stand by the mailbox until someone stops. Tell them we need help. ”Everett did as he was told. He stood alone by the side of the road, waving to stop someone.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。After a

7、 while, Chris and Mark, nearby farmers, were driving by the farm._Twenty minutes later, Louie emerged (出现), then Brandon, both cold and wet._【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Brandon喂完牛后和两个儿子Louie和Everett一起回家。Brandon关上牲口棚门后却发现大儿子不见了，问过小儿子Everett后得知Louie掉进了井里。于是Brandon跳进井里救Louie，但是因为水太深，两人都不能逃出。Brandon让井口的Everett到路边

8、去寻求帮助。Everett答应了父亲，他站在路边。【详解】1.段落续写由第一段首句“过了一会儿，附近的农民克里斯和马克开车经过农场。”可知，第一段可描写两位农民在听到Everett的描述之后，两人加速开车到Brandon的农场救援两父子。由第二段首句“二十分钟后，路易出现了，然后是布兰登，又冷又湿。”可知，本段可描述两父子被救上来后，父亲感谢两位农民的救命之恩，而两位农民则说救他们父子俩的小儿子Everett。随后，父子三人相拥一起。2.续写线索开车经过了解情况援救成功感激感恩。3.词汇激活行为类快速赶去：speed up/rush to/fly to大声回应：shout back/respo

9、nd with a loud voice感谢：thank/show ones gratitude情绪类哭泣：tears well up in the eyes/eyes full of tears吃惊：surprise/astonishment/amazement【点睛】【高分句型1】Everett rushed towards them and stopped them, telling them what had happened.（运用了现在分词作状语和what引导宾语从句）【高分句型2】Struggling to his feet, Brandon hugged the two far

10、mers tightly, whispering “You save our lives! Thank you!”（运用了现在分词作伴随状语）参考范文1Paragraph1:After a while, Chris and Mark, nearby farmers, were driving by the farm. Noticing the boy waving his hands like crazy, they stopped to investigate. Everett hastened to explain - there was a clear sob in the boys v

11、oice, but he managed to get himself across. Realizing the severity of the situation, the two farmers were quick to act, grabbing a strong rope from the truck. No sooner had they arrived than the rope was lowered into the well. Having fastened it around Louies waist tightly, Brandon signaled to the m

12、en, and then up went the panic little boy. (85 w)Paragraph 2:Twenty minutes later, Louie emerged, then Brandon, both cold and wet. Though they were immediately wrapped in dry towel and offered hot water, they couldnt help trembling. The father, worn out in the process of sustaining the weight of his

13、 son, simply could hold no longer and collapsed onto the ground. With the calm assurance that his boy was safe now, he closed his eyes for some rest. Everett hugged his father and brother tightly, tears of relief pouring down. The two helping neighbors praised the little boy for remaining calm and b

14、eing brave in the critical moment.(87 w)参考范文2paragraph 1：After a while, Chris and Mark, nearby farmers, were driving by the farm. Everett rushed towards them and stopped them, telling them what had happened. Hearing the accident from Everett, they picked him up and sped to Brandon house. Upon arriva

15、l, they quickly jumped off the truck and grabbed a long thick rope and then rush to the well.“Brandon,” they shouted,“We are going to send a rope down to you.” “OK, I will send Louie up first.” Brandon shouted back, freezing down there.paragraph 2:Twenty minutes later, Louie emerged(出现), then Brando

16、n, both cold and wet. Struggling to his feet, Brandon hugged the two farmers tightly, whispering “You save our lives! Thank you!” Yet, Mark said,“It was actually Everett who saved your lives. Without him, we wouldnt have known the accident. Let alone the rescue! ”Words could not express his surprise

17、 when the father turned to the 3-year-old boy. Everett cried, rushing to Brandon and Louie. Brandon held them tightly in arms, cherishing them like never before, and tears welled up in the eyes of this tough guy. Finally, they thanked the two farmers Chris and Mark again.参考范文3：After a while, Johnson

18、 and Mark, nearby farmers, were driving by the farm.Noticing Everett waving by the roadside, they pulled over and asked if he was OK. “My daddy and brother are in a hole,” Everett told them. Puzzled, they piled Everett into their pickup and asked him to show them the hole. Finding out what happened,

19、 Chris and Mark grabbed a long thick rope at the back seat and sprinted to the well. “Brandon,” Mark shouted, “tie the rope around the waist and we are going to pull you up.” (79w)Twenty minutes later, Louie emerged (出现), then Brandon, both cold and wet.Johnson rushed Louie to his pickup where he bu

20、ndled him in several jackets and turned the heater up full blast. Handed by Mark, Brandon followed into the pickup, hurrying to check Louie for injuries. Fortunately, other than some scratches, Brandon and Louie were both fine. While Brandon expressed sincere gratitude to Johnson and Mark, Johnson said, “Were just neighbors helping neighbors. Three-year-old Everett is a real lifesaver.” (67w)学科网（北京）股份有限公司