读后续写：Friends 讲义-高三英语写作专项.docx

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1、01读后续写文章阅读下面短文，根据所给情节和给定段落开头语进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。续写的词数应为150左右。Whether we notice it or not, our child is a little reflection of ourselves. They grow up looking more and more like us. They even have similar personalities and hobbies. And in some cases, the standard of choosing a good friend.One day, my 1

2、0-year-old Jane said, “Mom, I made a new friend at school today. Can she come over tomorrow?” Her words made me extremely happy because Jane was a shy girl and I wanted her to make some friends to bring her out of her shell.“Sure, honey, that sounds great.” I said, thinking back to my own childhood

3、best friend, Susan. We lived across the street from each other in Washington Heights, New York. We met at the age of 10, too. Like my daughter. I was shy and had trouble making friends. But Susan drew me out. She was one of the friendliest people in school, with shiny black hair and a mile-wide smil

4、e. Thanks to Susan. I was happy every day.In senior high school, Susan went on a trip to Florida. This was the first time we had to be away from each other for a few days. “Ill be back soon and I will write to you as soon as I arrive.” she told me. But I didnt get her phone call nor receive any mail

5、 from her. Soon, my family moved to New Jersey, making my hope of seeing Susan impossible.Whenever I thought of her, tears came into my eyes.The next day Jane brought her new friend home. “Hi, Mrs. Smith.” the little girl said. Her hair was so shiny and black and she gave me a big smile. “My name is

6、 Jo. My mom will pick me up 2 hours later.”Paragraph1:I was puzzled because my daughters new friend looked so familiar.Paragraph 2:Two hours passed really quickly, and there was a knock on the door.02范文I was puzzled because my daughters new friend looked so familiar.But I was sure that I had never m

7、et Jo before. She told me that her family just moved from Los Angeles, which puzzled me even more because I had never been to Los Angeles and we had no relatives living in Los Angeles, either. I convinced myself that it was only my imagination. The two girls got on very well and theygiggledfrom time

8、 to time. I watched them play and felt so happy for my daughterfrom the bottom of my heart.Two hours passed really quickly, and there was a knock on the door.It was Jos mom coming to pick her up later that afternoon.On seeingher face, I was shocked. “Judy!” she cried. “Its me, Susan!” Weembracedeach

9、 other.It turned out thather fathers company sent his father to Los Angeles before they settled in Florida. She tried calling me later but we had moved. The two little girls were happy to see their mothers became good friends at once before we told them our story,with happy tears rolling down our ch

10、eeks.03思路分析主要角色I：怀念童年好友我的女儿Jane：对朋友的做客充满期待我童年的好友Susan：友善，善解人意-应该是Jo的妈妈女儿的好朋友Jo：有礼貌文章大意：通过阅读所给文章可知，作者的女儿Jane想要邀请自己的朋友来家里，这让作者想起了自己童年时的好朋友Susan，回忆了当初和Susan相处的事情，后来因为作者搬家就没能再和Susan见面。第二天Jane把新朋友带回家，小女孩说自己叫Jo，她妈妈两个小时后来接她。情节走向：续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：我很困惑，因为我女儿的新朋友看起来很面熟。所以后文应该是讲述作者对于觉得Jo面熟的困惑，以及看到Jo和Jane两个女孩相处得

11、很好，作者从心底里为女儿感到高兴。第二段开头是：两个小时过得真快，有人敲门。本段应该写Jo的妈妈来接Jo，作者发现正是Susan，Susan曾经联系过作者，但作者一家已经搬走了。两个小女孩也很为他们高兴，Susan和作者都流下了快乐的泪水。语言积累：疑惑/迷茫（心理、表情、动作）平庸版：He felt confused.进阶版：1.With a confused look on his face, he had no idea what to do.他露出困惑的表情，不知道该做什么。2.He scratched his head, having on idea what to do.他挠了挠头

12、，不知道该做什么。3.He scratched his head, not understanding a word.他挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。激动开心开心（通过心理、表情、动作来表达）平庸版：He was happy.进阶版:1. Her eyes shone/glittered/sparkled /twinkled with joy.2.Her face lit up with pleasure.（容光焕发）3.Happiness/joy/pleasure/delight took hold of him.(极度开心)4.She was overflowing wit happiness

13、/joy/pleasure/delight.(幸福洋溢)例句：1. His eyes twinkled with pleasure when he saw the news.当他看到新闻，他的眼里闪耀着快乐。2.The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪耀。3.I couldnt restrain my joy and jumped into the house.我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。4.He cast us a look/glance,with his face wearing abroad/wide/radiant/warm smile.她看向我们，面带灿烂/温暖的笑容。学科网（北京）股份有限公司