读后续写：一个难忘的感恩节 讲义-高三英语写作专项.docx

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1、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Weeks before Thanksgiving arrived, my anxiety about it increased. My husband and I recently made a crosscountry move with our young child Jill. Our neighbor was an old couple, Mr. Smith and Mrs. Smith, who were kind and friendly.Our new home was in a mess.“We sho

2、uld start thinking about plans for Thanksgiving，”I suggested.“Dont worry about it，”my husband said. “Heat up some hot dogs, maybe some cheese, and the kid will be happy.” That sounded great. I was in a relief! In the past holidays, I had never been responsible for cooking a full Thanksgiving dinner.

3、 My job was always to bring drinks or a side dish to a large gathering（items that had the highest success rate）and help clean up after the meal.But one day my son Jill happily showed newlycreated turkey crafts.“Lets go on a walk and try to find a rock that looks like turkey！”Jill shouted to me.“Take

4、 me on a walk, Mommy！”The excitement was building, and I had a feeling that hot dogs were not going to be enough for my child on Thanksgiving.“Im going to try and prepare Thanksgiving food, Leonard，”I said to my husband late one night. He eyed me curiously.“You sure？”Then he said. “Okay, then, if yo

5、u think you can do it.” I said.“Ive got two days to prepare. The grocery store is open twentyfour hours. Im going to the store！”Unfortunately, only a huge turkey remained, so I had no choice but to buy a thirtypound turkey. Early Thanksgiving morning, I dragged（拖拽）the bagged turkey home. When my fam

6、ily saw it, they got a big surprise at its size. Seeing the surprise on their faces, I realized there was no way we could finish the turkey. Its too big for my family. “There was only one turkey left in the store.” I explained.“But how could we finish the turkey？”I asked my husband and Jill.注意：1.续写词

7、数应为150左右；2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Jillsaidwecouldinviteourneighbor, Mr.andMrs.Smith, tosharewithus.Soon, Mr.andMrs.Smithcametomyhousewithabigsmileontheirfaces.文本主旨：文本讲述了主人公一家刚刚移居国外，人生地不熟，正好赶上感恩节。为了不让儿子失望，不擅长烹饪的女主人准备做感恩节大餐火鸡，但不幸地是，买到了一只硕大的火鸡。正在一家人对如何吃完这只火鸡一筹莫展的时候，儿子提议让邻居一对年长的夫妇来分享。该话题的主题语境属于“人与自我”，语言通俗易懂，正

8、文351词，如果算上续写开头的两段，大约有382个词。文本篇幅较长，需要学生在读完文章内容后，短时间内梳理出核心要点，再根据所给定的两段首句进行续写。这对于高一学生来说有一定的挑战。重点词汇及句子：a cross-country move跨国的搬家in a mess一团糟in a relief如释重负a side dish配菜a large gathering大型聚会The excitement was building.那种兴奋劲儿越来越浓。He eyed me curiously.他好奇地看着我。（eyev.注视，审视）the bagged turkey袋装火鸡No way.绝不段落大意第

9、一段描写了主人公感恩节前，全家移居国外，遇到了友善的邻居。第二段描写了新家一团糟，女主人担心感恩节晚宴，但丈夫善解人意，希望一切从简！第三段描写了作者过去从未烹饪过一顿丰盛的感恩节晚餐，只是带着饮料或配菜参加聚会，餐后帮助清理。第四段讲述了儿子Jill从展示火鸡工艺品到尝试寻找像火鸡的石头，让作者感觉到感恩节，不能没有火鸡。第五段描写了作者向丈夫提议要试着准备感恩节食物，但丈夫有些疑虑。第六段讲述了作者运气不佳，商店只剩下了一只30磅重（约27斤）的火鸡。当家人看到这个庞然大物时，异常惊讶，作者也发愁如何吃完续写提示：续写第一段的首句为“Jill说我们可以邀请邻居史密斯夫妇和我们一起分享”，再

10、结合续写第二段的首句为“很快，史密斯夫妇满面笑容地来到我家”可知，续写第一段应该描写儿子Jill提出建议后，作者和丈夫都同意了，然后邀请邻居过来分享感恩节晚餐，当然对方也表示同意。为了使描写生动，衔接原文，第一段描写时，可以添加作者在邀请邻居时尴尬地承认自己的厨艺不佳，但邻居不介意并且提出帮忙。续写第二段可以描写邻居来了之后，一起准备感恩节晚餐并用餐，有说有笑，画面温馨。结尾处可以升华为，异国他乡，邻里间的照顾让人动容。下水文：Jill said we could invite our neighbor, Mr. and Mrs. Smith, to share with us.Having

11、heard what he said, my husband and I didnt say anything at once, but exchanged glances. Then we nodded at the same time,“Good idea!”While standing at my neighbors front door, I had butterflies in my stomach, wondering if they would agree or not. Luckily, after I offered oursincereinvitation, the Smi

12、ths gladly accepted it and even gave me a heartfelt hug. However, I had to admit that I wasnt good at cooking such a huge“monster”. Without a second thought, they agreed to give a hand. (90 words)Soon, Mr. and Mrs. Smith came to my house with a big smile on their faces.Unexpectedly, they brought a b

13、ottle of wine and even a model car for my son. A moment later, Mrs. Smith was helping to preparethe turkeyin the kitchen while Mr. Smith was chatting with my husband in the living room. Seeing Mrs. Smith skillfully dealing with the turkey, I was mixed with embarrassment and admiration. About an hour

14、 later, the turkey was put into the oven. Of course, Jill was overjoyed. Finally, with our neighbors generous help, it turned out that we had a wonderful and cosyThanksgivingdinner in a new country.(94 words)附原文标准答案:Jill said we could invite our neighbor, Mr. and Mrs. Smith, to share with us.“I foun

15、d the old couple were very lonely because no one had paid a visit to them since we moved here. Besides I didnt see them buy anything for Thanksgiving.” Knowing that, we reached the agreement on inviting the couple. Jill was responsible for the invitation and my husband and I were in charge of dinner

16、. Realizing it would take hours to cook, we busied ourselves making an entire dinner.Soon, Mr. and Mrs. Smith came to my house with a big smile on their faces.They greeted us and we made introduction to each other. Seeing my husband and I were clumsy(笨拙的) at preparing dinner, the couple offered to g

17、ive us a hand. With the help of them, a fancy dinner was done in no time. Obviously Mrs. Smith had a great talent for cooking. As a special treat, I laid out a beautiful red table cloth, candles and our best china. We gathered around the table, eating delicious Thanksgiving dinner and making a promise to spend Christmas together.学科网（北京）股份有限公司