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1、广东省一模读后续写 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Hector stoodin the front of his fifth-grade classroom as one of the last two competitors in the Room Five Geography Bee. His opponent having missed the last question, it was Hectors turn. If he answered his question correctly, he would be the Room Five
2、 champion. “Where did I put that second sheet of questions?” Mr. Adler whispered while searching through a thick pile of papers on his messy desk. Mr. Adler, though a great teacher, had a reputation of being disorganized with a long history of misplacing things. “Oh well, I apologize for the delay.
3、said Mr. Adler after what seemed like a long time. “Hector, please tell us the capital city of Brazil. ” Hearing the question, Hector smiled. Then, there was the answer. Later that day in the courtyard, many classmates congratulated Hector. Wearing a proud smile, he greeted and thanked them all. Oh,
4、 the sweet taste of victory. As it was getting late, the courtyard became deserted. But Hector still didnt want to leave. Then he saw Mr. Adler crossing the courtyard and holding a half-open bag full of papers. As he hurried past, an envelope dropped out but Mr. Adler was unaware, turned a corner an
5、d disappeared out of sight. Hector picked it up. On the envelope were the words “Fifth Grade Geography Bee Questions and Answers. Hector stared wide-eyed at the envelope. Before he even had time to reflect on the consequences, he opened it and read the questions. As soon as Hector had done it, he kn
6、ew it was the wrong choice. Hed cheated and whatever he did now, he couldnt change the fact. “What if Mr. Adler thought I stole this mornings questions too?” Hector thought. “Hed take away my Room Five victory for sure. ” Little did he know that one of the best days in his life would be turned into
7、the worst so quickly. Torn by his conscience, Hector was totally at a loss what to do.注意:1续写词数应为150左右;2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Before he realized it, Hector found himself standing in Mr. Adlers room.The next day the entire school came to watch the Fifth Grade Geography Bee.I.文章基本要素分析: 故事背景:The story takes
8、 place in a school, specifically in Hectors fifth-grade classroom, the courtyard, and Mr. Adlers room. 主要人物: Hector: A fifth-grade student who is participating in theGeography Bee. Mr. Adler:Hectors teacher, who is disorganized but values honesty and integrity in his students. 主题:诚实,正直和承认自己错误的重要性。 故
9、事主要情节: 1.Hector has a chance to win theRoom Five Geography Bee. 2.Mr. Adler accidentally drops an envelope with the questions and answers.3.Hector finds the envelope and looks at the questions. 4.Feeling guilty, Hector confesses his actions to Mr. Adler. 5.Mr. Adler holds a new Geography Bee and com
10、mends Hector for his honesty. 6.Hector learns a valuable lesson about honesty and integrity. 叙事结构:故事遵循线性叙事结构,从地理竞赛开始,按时间顺序逐步展开,包括赫克托的行动、忏悔和重新竞争的过程。 故事视角:本故事采用第三人称有限视角叙述,聚焦于赫克托的想法、感受和经历。 故事冲突:故事的主要冲突是一个内部冲突,赫克托在查看地理竞赛的问题和答案后,陷入了良心的挣扎。他必须决定是坦白承认错误还是保守秘密。II. 问题导入 可以提问以下几个问题,看看学生是否读懂了文章。 1.How is Mr. Ad
11、ler described in the story, particularly in terms of his organizational skills? 2.What happens when Hectors opponent misses their question in the Geography Bee?3.How does Hector feel after the competition, as he receives congratulations from his classmates?4.What does Hector find in the courtyard af
12、ter the competition, and how does he come across it?5.What is written on the envelope that Hector finds?6.How does Hector feel after opening the envelope and reading the questions inside?7.What concerns does Hector have after realizing he has cheated by looking at the questions?IV、试题解读1任务解读 Hector获得
13、了初赛的胜利,沉浸在胜利的喜悦,久久还不愿意离开院子。老师在匆匆经过院子时,无意间掉落了第二天决赛的问题及答案。Hector捡了起来并看了。之后他的内心很是矛盾。2. 续写线索: 第一段:解决矛盾冲突“他打开了信封并且看了题目和答案是错误的选择。他还担心老师还会怀疑他偷了早上考试的题目并取消他的决赛资格”。后来Hector主动到老师办公室跟老师主动说明事情经过,并得到老师的肯定和鼓励。 第二段:主要写Hector参加第二天的比赛经过和结果。(可以写成功和失败),呼应主题诚信比结果更重要,或者其它正能量的人生感悟。IV.范文(范文I)Before he realized it, Hector f
14、ound himself standing in Mr. Adlers room.His heart poundedand the envelope was clutched tightly in his hand. The weight of his decision pressed heavily on his chest, a mixture of guilt and fear threatening to overwhelm him. He took a deep, shaky breath and confessed to Mr. Adler, explaining that he
15、had inadvertently found the envelope with the Geography Bee questions and answers. Hectors voice wavered as he admitted to giving into temptation and looking at the contents, and now he was ready to face the consequences, even if that meant losing the title he had so proudly won.The next day, the en
16、tire school gathered to watch the Fifth Grade Geography Bee.The air buzzed with anticipation and curiosity. Mr. Adler addressed the audience, his voice filled with pride as he commended Hector for his honesty and integrity, qualities that were far more important than winning a competition. As the re
17、newed competition began, Hectors heart swelled with a newfound sense of pridenot in a title or a trophy, but in his choice to do the right thing. Win or lose, he knew that he had learned a valuable lesson about the importance of honesty and owning up to ones mistakes, a lesson that would stay with h
18、im long after the Geography Bee had ended.范文(II)Before he realized it, Hector found himself standing in Mr. Adlers room.His heart pounded like a drum in his chest, filling his ears with an overwhelming beat. He held the envelope tightly in his trembling hands, the weight of his guilt crushing him. H
19、is mind raced with conflicting emotions, torn between the desire to protect his victory and the need to confess. He felt like a balloon on the verge of bursting, filled with an unbearable mix of shame, dread, and regret. As Mr. Adler looked up from his desk, Hector swallowed the lump in his throat,
20、his voice barely a whisper as he began to speak. Mr. Adler, I need to tell you something about the Geography Bee.The next day, the entire school came to watch the Fifth Grade Geography Bee.Whispers filled the air as students and teachers alike wondered about the sudden rematch. Hectors stomach churn
21、ed with a mix of anxiety and relief as he faced his opponent once more. The memory of his confession lingered in his mind, like the ghostly echo of a painful cry. He knew that he would never forget the disappointment in Mr. Adlers eyes, but he also felt a glimmer of hope as his teacher praised his h
22、onesty. Hector took a deep breath, his heart swelling with newfound determination. As the first question was asked, he knew that no matter the outcome, he would face it with integrity and the knowledge that he had made the right choice.V.官方范文Before he realized it, Hector found himself standing in Mr
23、. Adlers room.“Hector! Come and help me look for” “This?” Hector stopped Mr. Adler midsentence, holding out the open envelope. Mr. Adlers brows were smoothed but then knitted again. Before he formed questions, Hector started unbosoming his regrets. If he had waited another moment, they would have to
24、rn him into pieces. “Can I still be in the Bee?” asked Hector timidly. “Absolutely, my honest boy,” Mr. Adler patted his shoulder. “I dont believe in punishing people for making the right decisions and correcting their mistakes.” Immense relief washed over Hector.The next day the entire school came
25、to watch the Fifth Grade Geography Bee.Having been up late studying, Hector looked exhausted but extremely excited. So did all the other competitors. All the eyes fixed on the stage, Hector felt blood rushing onto his cheeks and his heart beating fast. Unfortunately, the questions Mr. Adler rewrote were so tough that he was knocked out in round three. But Hector realized to his surprise that he didnt feel bad about losing at all. Whether others knew he was smart was of no significance. Hed set out to learn everything about the world and ended up learning more about himself.学科网(北京)股份有限公司
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