读后续写：人和自然类 海洋保护 讲义-高三英语二轮复习写作专项.docx

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1、高考续写：保护海洋一、问题导读1.文章有哪些可续写点，以便设置衔接？2.文章的矛盾是什么？3.文章的发展线和情感发展线是什么？4.续写思路是什么？二、续写题目MariaandPeterlivedinacoastalcity.Thegreatestpleasureinsummerforthemwastoswimattheirlocalbeachafterschool.Butonedaytheystartedtolosetheirenthusiasmforswimminginthewaters.Moreoftenthannot,theywouldfindplasticbagsthrownonthe

2、beach.Worsesill,astheyswaminthewater,someplasticbagswouldfloataroundthemandevensticktotheirlegswhentheywalkedtotheshore.续写第一段拍视频和写文章时，可再现海边脏乱差的场面。Theywereupsetanddecidedsomethingneededtobedonetostopthebeautifulseabecomingconsumedbywaste.Oneweekend,MariaandPeterbroughtabigbagtothebeachanddeterminedto

3、cleanitup.续写第二段写人们沙滩上捡垃捡塑料垃圾用big bags 装Sweatstreameddownfromtheirforeheadwhiletheybentdownandpickeduptheplasticbags.Totheirdisappointment,afteradayshardwork,therewerestillmanyplasticbagslyingonthebeachorfloatinginthewater.Goinghomewithachinglegsandarms,MariaandPeterwerealmostdefeatedbyastrongsenseof

4、failure.续写第一段拍视频和写文章时，可再现海边脏乱差的场面。Thatnightoverdinnerwiththeir parents,thepairalesilently. Noticingtheirlowspirits,Motheraskedgently,“Youtwolookedsodown.Whathappened?”ExchangingglanceswithPeter,Mariarepliedinalowvoice,“Itsthoseannoyingplasticbags.Wetriedtocleanupbutitwasjustimpossible.”Understanding

5、thepairsdisappointment,theirfatherpattedthemonthe backandcomforted,”Well,itsreallyhardforjusttwoofyoutofixsucha big problem.”“Justtwoofus.”complainedMariaandPeter,lookingateachother.Suddenly,anidealashedthroughtheirminds,theireyesshiningwithexcitement.“Yes,thats the point! We should make morepeople

6、aware of the problem and encourage them to take action! the pair said in chorus.第一段做计划时，因为想要更多的人关注，因此想到网络传播。注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Quickly finishing their dinner, the pair went upstairs and started planning._Excited and nervous, they posted the video and article on WeChat._三、问题解答1.文章有哪

7、些可续写点，以便设置衔接？见文章紫色批注。2.文章的矛盾是什么？如何清理海海滩垃圾。3.文章的发展线和情感发展线是什么？情节发展线：Maria和Peter喜欢放学到海里游泳发现沙滩和海面上大量的塑料垃圾影响游泳带上大袋子去捡垃圾依然有很多塑料垃圾父母安慰两个孩子想到好的注意。情感发展线：到海里游泳的喜悦(pleasure)发现到处是塑料垃圾的失落(upset)经过努力后依然有很多垃圾是失望和沮丧(disappointment/defeated/failure/low spirits)在父母的鼓励下想到好注意的激动(excitement)4.续写思路是什么？两段首句定一框：根据第一段所给句中的“

8、started planning”可知，Maria和Peter做计划想要引起公众的关注想到了传播力很强的网络媒体，如WeChat两人到海边拍摄视频并且写文章。根据第二段所给句中的“posted the video and article on WeChat”可逆推出，第一段应叙述Maria和Peter为了呼吁大家团结起来捡沙滩上的垃圾，在WeChat上发布相关的视频和文章。二框二首正能量：根据第二段所给句可知，Maria和Peter成功上传了视频和文章等待着公众的反应越来越多的人加入到捡垃圾的队伍中沙滩恢复了以前的模样四、参考范文Quickly finishing their dinner,

9、the pair went upstairs and started planning.Maria and Peter decided to take advantageof the Internet.语言描写“Maybe we can write an article to arouse peoples awareness.” Maria proposed.“Good idea! We can alsomake a video!” Peter added.无灵表达The next few hours witnessed their heated discussion and growing

10、confidence in a clean andbeautiful coast.The next day, they went to the beach andfilmed拍摄a short videoshowing plastic bags lying on the beach andfloating in the sea.Peter, who was good at writing,wrote an articletalking about the present situation of the beach andasking people to take part in the cl

11、ean-up.Excited and nervous, they postedthe video and articleon WeChat.To their amazement, their post went viral onlineimmediately.Countless comments flooded in saying how heartbroken they were when looking at the polluted beach andocean.What amazed Maria and Peter more was that numerous people in th

12、eir community, encouraged by their efforts, offered to join in their clean-up.More and more people came to the beach to collect plastic bags and they also appealed toothers to avoid throwing or using plastic bags.A year later, with their joint and continuous effort, the coast regained itsbeauty and Maria and Peter regained their long-awaited pleasure.学科网（北京）股份有限公司