读后续写妈妈另类的教育方式学案-高三英语二轮复习.docx

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1、读后续写原题:My mother was a supporter of physicalpunishment, but for all her talking she has never spanked (打屁股) my siblings and me only once. Instead she found ways of punishment that left a morelastingmemory than giving us a spanking. One of the most memorable of these occasions occurred when I was for

2、.In the early 70s my mother attended college during the day and I was in daycare. One day at daycare watched an extremely tired mother attempt to pick up her daughter. The little girl asked, “Momma, are we going to McDonalds for dinner?” The mother replied, “Honey, not tonight.Mommahas to run a few

3、errands (差事) and then we have to go home and cook dinner for Daddy.” “But I wanna go.” “Susie, I said not tonight. Maybe, if you are a good girl, we can go tomorrow.” Susie immediately dropped to the floor, kicking andscreaming, “I want to go to McDonalds.”No amount of pleading (恳求)or scolding her m

4、other tried stopped Susies tantrum (发脾气). Finally, her mothergave in, “Okay, Susie, lets go to McDonalds.” Susie stopped yellingland smiling,she grabbed her mothers hand and they left. To say I was amazed would be inaccurate; I was delighted that anything I wanted could be had by throwing a tantrum.

5、That day my mother picked me up early from daycare because we were going to a store to purchase some Christmas items. I was excited by the lights and decorations, and as we walked through the toy section on the way to the counter, I saw a toy I had to have. It was a white and red telephone whose bel

6、ls rang as it was pulled along on a string. Looking lovingly up at my mother I asked, “Mama, can I have thattelephone?”She replied, “Baby, not now, but if you are a good girl, maybe Santa will bring it to you.” “But Mama, I want that telephone right now.” Her eyes narrowed and her hand tightened on

7、mine. “Becky, you cant have that telephone today, but if you misbehave, you can have a spanking.”Paragraph 1:By now we were standing in the long Holiday line to pay the bill, and I figured itwas a good chanceParagraph 2: “Mama, stop. Mama, get up,” I tearfully pleaded.原文中好句积累：1.Insteadshe found ways

8、 of punishment that left a morelastingmemory than giving us a spanking.2.Susie immediately dropped to the floor,kicking andscreaming。3.No amount of pleading (恳求)or scolding her mother tried stopped Susies tantrum (发脾气).4.Looking lovingly up at my mother,I asked, “Mama, can I have thattelephone?”5.He

9、r eyesnarrowedand her handtightenedon mine.写作思路：第一段:场景一：我学小女孩的样子要妈妈给我买那个玩具，场景二：妈妈给予我劝告和警告，场景三：妈妈用她自己的方式对付我。第二段：场景一：妈妈就是不肯起来,周围人的议论，让我非常尴尬。场景二:有人建议我向妈妈保证不要那个玩具，并以后再也不用这样的方式了，场景三：妈妈起身，周围人投给她赞许的目光。下水作文： By now we were standing in the long Holiday line to pay the bill, and I figured it was a good chance

10、.All of a sudden, throwing myself to the ground, I kicked and yelled,”I want that telephone toy today.”What came to my mind was that way the girl behaved and that consequently she got what she wanted. Surprised and irritated, my mom knelt down, grabbed my hand and gave me a pull to make me stand up.

11、 I tried to lie on the ground, saying,”You must buy me the toy or I wont get up.”Unexpectedly, she gave her vent to her anger by lying beside me and screaming”I want a big house, I want a fancy car, I want.”Feeling a sense of embarrassment, I rose to my feet without hesitation and dusted myself down

12、. “Mama, stop. Mama, get up,” I tearfully pleaded.But she repeated her words several times as if she lost the power to hear. Looking around, I found some people were laughing at us and that some people were whispering, glancing at us now and then, making me more uneasy. I was at a loss what to do wh

13、en a lady in well-tailored dress who came to me suggested that I should give my mother my word. I promptly turned to my mom, saying:”Mom, I promise I dont want the toy and Ill never behave like that.”With a smile creeping over her face, my mom got up from the ground slowly, held my hand and moved to

14、 the checkout. Almost all people around us cast an approving look at my mom while I got a better lesson than from having a spanking.参考范文：Paragraph 1:By now we were standing in the long Holiday line to pay the bill, and I figure it was a good chance.I lay down on the ground and began screaming, “I wa

15、nt that telephone,” over and over again. Weary Christmas shoppers looked as my mother calmly said, “Becky, you better get up by the count of three or else. One.Two.Three.” Nothing. I was still in full tantrum. So then she lay down beside me on the floor, and began kicking and screaming, “I want a ne

16、w car, I want a new house. I want some jewelry, I want.” Shocked, I stood up.Paragraph 2:“Mama, stop. Mama, get up,” I tearfully pleaded.She stood, and brushed herself off. At first stunned, the others waiting in line began to sporadically clap, and before I knew it they were cheering and laughing a

17、nd patting my mother on her back. She blushed and took a little bow and the next thirty minutes in line was pure misery for me as various parents leaving the store, shake their heads at me and say with a smile, “Your mom got you good. I bet youll never try that again.” And I didnt, because it left a lasting mental picture more effective than any physical mark.学科网（北京）股份有限公司