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1、读后续写题目My mother was a supporter of physical punishment, but for all her talking she has never spanked (打屁股) my siblings and me only once. Instead she found ways of punishment that left a morelastingmemory than giving us a spanking. One of the most memorable of these occasions occurred when I was fou

2、r.In the early 70s my mother attended college during the day and I was in daycare. One day at daycare watched an extremely tired mother attempt to pick up her daughter. The little girl asked, “Momma, are we going to McDonalds for dinner?” The mother replied, “Honey, not tonight.Mommahas to run a few

3、 errands (差事) and then we have to go home and cook dinner for Daddy.” “But I wanna go.” “Susie, I said not tonight. Maybe, if you are a good girl, we can go tomorrow.” Susie immediately dropped to the floor, kicking andscreaming, “I want to go to McDonalds.”No amount of pleading (恳求)or scolding her

4、mother tried stopped Susies tantrum (发脾气) . Finally her mothergave in, “Okay, Susie, lets go to McDonalds. ”Susie stopped yelling and smiling she grabbed her mothers hand and they left. To say I was amazed would be inaccurate; I was delighted that anything I wanted could be had by throwing a tantrum

5、.That day my mother picked me up early from daycare because we were going to a store to purchase some Christmas items. I was excited by the lights and decorations, and as we walked through the toy section on the way to the counter, I saw a toy I had to have. It was a white and red telephone whose be

6、lls rang as it was pulled along on a string. Looking lovingly up at my mother I asked, “Mama, can I have that telephone?”She replied, “Baby, not now, but if you are a good girl, maybe Santa will bring it to you.” “But Mama, I want that telephone right now. ”Her eyes narrowed and her hand tightened o

7、n mine. “Becky, you cant have that telephone today, but if you misbehave, you can have a spanking.”Paragraph 1:By now we were standing in the long Holiday line to pay the bill, and I figured it was a good chance.Paragraph 2:“Mama, stop. Mama, get up,” I tearfully pleaded.Read for the InformationPara

8、 1Insteadshe foundways of punishmentthat left a more lasting memory than giving us a spanking.One of the most memorable ofthese occasionsoccurred when I was four.相反，她找到了惩罚的方法，给我们留下了比打屁股更持久的记忆。其中最难忘的一次发生在我四岁的时候。转折之后必有重点，第一段要定下整篇文章基调和主题，本文妈妈并没有打我，而是用了另一种特殊方式来教育我。倒推情节:结尾para1提示句写道I figured it was a goo

9、d chance. 我得到了一个很好的机会。是什么机会呢？通过前文描写了一个小女孩通过耍浑、撒泼、发脾气的方式从妈妈那里得到了自己想要的东西（去吃麦当劳），于是“我”也我也逮到了一个好机会向妈妈发脾气达成目的。我明白了，首段必须得记叙“我”在地上撒泼耍浑的场景。结尾para2，“Mama, get up”为什么要恳求妈妈站起来呢？难道妈妈也坐在地上？妈妈怎么会坐在地上呢？首段还要记叙妈妈也模仿我在地上撒泼耍浑的场景。那我们stand in the long Holiday line，周围人有什么反应呢？思路总结Para 1我躺-妈妈躺-周围人反应-我起来Para 1我劝妈妈起来-认错-妈妈的反

10、应-总结要认真构思这几个情景：1.我躺下撒泼的样子。2.妈妈看到我耍浑，她生气的样子。3.看到妈妈躺下撒泼，我惊讶的样子。4.人群围过来了，我特别尴尬的样子。5.人群议论中，我祈求妈妈起来，认错。6.我面对妈妈羞愧又后悔的样子。提示:用with复合结构 adj 非谓语动词 虚拟语气来丰富句子。suggestedversion1.我躺下撒泼。a)It suddenly struck me that a tantrum is likely to help persuade my mother to buy the gift.b)Immediately, I sank down on the flo

11、or, kicking and shouting regardless of the passers-by.c)In spite of the fact that I would be laughed at, I sat down on the ground, screaming desperately and hoping mama would meet my demand.d)Tears of sadness and pleading filled my gloomy eyes, and then slipped to the floor.2.妈妈看到我耍浑，她生气的样子。a)A look

12、 of annoyance ran through my mothers face, after which came her voice,“No”.b)Seeing what I did, my mother frowned as if to ask me to stand up quickly.3.妈妈躺下撒泼，我惊讶的样子。a)With a group of people staring at us, my mother also lay down on the floor, kicking and screaming as I did.b)目瞪口呆的：be struck dumb wi

13、th astonishment; dumbfounded; stunned; The scene made my jaw drop.c)What shocked me a lot was that my mother sat down beside me, screaming in a naughty voice.d)Feeling shocked and embarrassed, I struggled to my feet, holding my mothers hand to get her up.e)Seeing what my mother did, I was frozen wit

14、h shock, at a loss what to do.f)The instant my mother began to scream at the top of her voice, the crowd gathered around with curiosity.g)So shocked was I that I was dumbfounded with my eyes wide open.4.人群围过来了，我特别尴尬。a)With the crowd surrounding us, my throat was tightening as if a rock was stuck in

15、it and couldnt utter a word.5.人群议论中，我祈求妈妈起来，做保证。a)Looking around, I lay down on the ground, screaming in a loud voice in an attempt to persuade my mother to stand up.b)Feeling ashamed and regretful, I hugged my mother as tightly as possible, promising that I would not throw a tantrum again.c)With my

16、 eyes sparkling, I regretted with endless embarrassment, folding my arms around her.d)Impressed by what my mother did, I promised that the same thing would never happen again.e)With the crowd murmuring, I begged my mother to stand up, making a guarantee that I would not do that again.6.妈妈的反应a)Wearin

17、g an expression of relief, my mother stood up, patting me on the shoulder.参考答案:By now we were standing in the long Holiday line to pay the bill, and I figure it was a good chance. Ilay down on the ground and began screaming, “I want that telephone,” over and over again. Weary Christmas shoppers look

18、ed as my mother calmly said, “Becky, youd better get up by the count of three or else. OneTwoThree.” Nothing. I was stillin full tantrum. So then she lay down beside me on the floor, and began kicking and screaming, “I want a new car, I want a new house, I want some jewelry, I want” Shocked, I stood

19、 up.“Mama, stop. Mama, get up,” Itearfully pleaded.She stood, andbrushed herself off.At first stunned, the others waiting in line began to sporadically clap, and before I knew it they were cheering and laughing and patting my mother on her back. She blushed and took a little bow and the next thirty minutes in line was pure misery for me as various parents leaving the store, shake their heads at me and say with a smile, “Your mom got you good. I bet youll never try that again.” And I didnt, because it left a lasting mental picture more effective than any physical mark.学科网（北京）股份有限公司