读后续写专项练习 姐弟俩卖掉心爱之物互赠礼物--高三英语写作专项.pptx

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1、读读后后续续写写之之姐弟俩卖掉心爱之物互赠礼物阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Look,Tomiko!”Dandelion Pinkley said to her best friend.She held up a beautifully carved Viking ship in the coolest toy store in town.“Its the perfect gift for Doodlebug!”But it wasnt just a ship.It was actually a cleverly designed display

2、case for an action figure.“Hed love that,”Tomiko agreed.“He could totally show off his Sweyn Forkbeard Viking figure in this,”Dandelion said.“Yeah,”Tomiko said.“Were doing our family gift exchange tonight,”she said.“Too bad Ive only got one dollar and eighty-seven cents left.”She sighed.Dandelion lo

3、oked out the window.Suddenly she turned,her face brightening.“Tomiko!”she said excitedly.“I know how I can get the money!”When she explained her idea,Tomikos eyes widened.“Youd really do that,Dandelion?”she asked.“Sure,”she replied.“But I have to hurry.See you tomorrow.”“Good luck!”Tomiko waved as t

4、hey parted company.Dandelion hesitated outside the shop.The sign above the window said“Mademoiselle”in fancy lettering.Underneath,it read“Everything for the hair.”A long wig(假发)in the shop window was adorned(装饰)withbeautiful feather hair clips(发夹)labeled“Mademoiselles Finest.”Dandelion sighed.Shed w

5、anted one of those clips for ages.Shrugging(耸肩),she pulled the door open and went inside.The shopkeeper almost laughed when Dandelion took off her hat and made her request.But she finally said,“Ill take your hair.But I wont pay a cent more than nine dollars for it.”“Done!”Dandelion replied,shaking M

6、ademoiselles hand.Minutes later Mademoiselle lowered her scissors.“Now even Doodlebug had more hair than she did,”Dandelion thought to herself.With no time to spare,Dandelion rushed to the toy store and bought the Viking ship for ten dollars.Then,Dandelion skipped home happily.She couldnt wait to se

7、e the look on Doodlebugs face when he opened her gift.That night,Doodlebug cried when Dandelion appeared.“Whoa!What did you do to your hair?!”Dandelion smiled bravely but said nothing.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Doodlebug handed her the present hed gotten her,and she eagerly opened it.“Thanks,D

8、andelion,”Doodlebug said.“But I think we should use it to show off your hair clips instead at least for now.”理解材料Feather hair clips.1.Who are the characters in the text?Brother and sister Dandelion and Doodlebug.2.What gift did Dandelion want to buy for her brother?3.What did Dandelion want?A beauti

9、fully carved Viking ship.理解材料理解材料Dandelion and Doodlebug exchanged gifts.But Doodlebug said the ship can only be used to show off the hair clips.1.OpeningDandelion picked a present a Viking ship,for her brother.But she didnt have enough money.Dandelion decided to sell her hair for the Viking ship.An

10、d she saw the beautiful feather hair clips which she wanted for ages.Doodlebug was surprised to see his sisters short hair at the night of gift exchange.Dandelion and Doodlebug knew that they both sold their precious things to buy each other gifts.2.Build-up3.Climax4.Resolution5.EndingPara 1:Doodleb

11、ug handed her the present hed gotten her,and she eagerly opened it.研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？Q1:How might Dandelion react to the present?Q4:How might Dandelion react to Doodlebugs words?Q2:“Hair clips”was mentioned in Para.2.Could it be the present Dandelion got?Q3:“Thanks”in Para.2 suggests Doodlebu

12、g got the display case in Para.1;“But”suggests things might not go smoothly as Dandelion planned.How might we describe the situation?Q5:What might have happened?Why did Doodlebug say such words?Q6:How shall we design the ending?Para 2:“Thanks,Dandelion,”Doodlebug said.“But I think we should use it t

13、o show off your hair clips instead at least for now.”根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分。Doodlebug handed her the present hed gotten her,and she eagerly opened it._（Dandelion发出一声小小的喜悦的呼喊，随机立刻叹了口气。Burst的用法，过去分词作状语）Inside the gift box was“Mademoiselles Finest”the most awesome set of feather hair clips shed ever seen._

14、._（但现在她的头发太短了，无法戴发卡。她说：“没关系，头发还会长出来的。”她试着让自己轻松起来。tooto的用法，现 在 分 词 作 状 语）“Now you open mine,Doodlebug!”Doodlebug unwrapped the display case excitedly.Then he shook his head and laughed crazily.“Its for Forkbeard!”Dandelion explained.阅读以下参考范文，并学习范文的精彩表达。Doodlebug handed her the present hed gotten her,

15、and she eagerly opened it.A little cry of joy burst from her lips,followed immediately by a huge sigh.Inside the gift box was“Mademoiselles Finest”the most awesome set of feather hair clips shed ever seen.But now her hair was too short to wear any of them.“Oh well,itll grow back,”she said,trying to

16、be lighthearted.“Now you open mine,Doodlebug!”Doodlebug unwrapped the display case excitedly.Then he shook his head and laughed crazily.“Its for Forkbeard!”Dandelion explained.“Thanks,Dandelion,”Doodlebug said.“But I think we should use it to show off your hair clips instead at least for now.”_（Dand

17、elion回答：“那太疯狂了！Forkbeard去哪儿了？”What about的用法）“I sold him,”he said,“so I could buy you those feathery hair things.”“What?!”Dandelion cried.Then she started laughing,too.The next morning the Viking ship display case sat in full,feathered glory in the living room window._（它会一直呆在那儿，让每个路过的人感到困惑，直到Forkbear

18、d回到Pinkley家并且Dandelion长出头发。地点状语位于句首，现在分词作状语，until的用法）根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分。阅读以下参考范文，并学习范文的精彩表达。“Thanks,Dandelion,”Doodlebug said.“But I think we should use it to show off your hair clips instead at least for now.”“Thats crazy!”Dandelion replied.“What about Forkbeard?”“I sold him,”he said,“so I could bu

19、y you those feathery hair things.”“What?!”Dandelion cried.Then she started laughing,too.The next morning the Viking ship display case sat in full,feathered glory in the living room window.And there it would stay,deeply puzzling every passerby,until Forkbeard the Viking returned to the Pinkley house

20、and Dandelions hair grew back.范文精彩语言逻辑清晰，动作连贯Doodlebug handed her the present hed gotten her,and she eagerly opened it.A little cry of joy burst from her lips,followed immediately by a huge sigh.Inside the gift box was“Mademoiselles Finest”the most awesome set of feather hair clips shed ever seen.Bu

21、t now her hair was too short to wear any of them.“Oh well,itll grow back,”she said,trying to be lighthearted.“Now you open mine,Doodlebug!”Doodlebug unwrapped the display case excitedly.Then he shook his head and laughed crazily.“Its for Forkbeard!”Dandelion explained.递礼物，打开礼物Dandelion的反应：先开心（梦寐以求），

22、再叹气（头发短无法戴发卡）礼物是发卡，下一段有提示；解释叹气的原因情绪很快转变，安慰自己和弟弟，符合人物乐观勇敢的性格，具有积极的导向作用Doodlebug对礼物的反应与下一段吻合“Thanks,Dandelion,”Doodlebug said.“But I think we should use it to show off your hair clips instead at least for now.”“Thats crazy!”Dandelion replied.“What about Forkbeard?”“I sold him,”he said,“so I could buy

23、you those feathery hair things.”“What?!”Dandelion cried.Then she started laughing,too.The next morning the Viking ship display case sat in full,feathered glory in the living room window.And there it would stay,deeply puzzling every passerby,until Forkbeard the Viking returned to the Pinkley house an

24、d Dandelions hair grew back.暗示Forkbeard已被卖掉Dandelion感到诧异，进行提问，符合事实Doodlebug的回答以景结情，温馨收尾，切合主题：姐弟间的深厚亲情范文精彩语言逻辑清晰，动作连贯Doodlebug handed her the present hed gotten her,and she eagerly opened it.A little cry of joy burst from her lips,followed immediately by a huge sigh.Inside the gift box was“Mademoisel

25、les Finest”the most awesome set of feather hair clips shed ever seen.But now her hair was too short to wear any of them.“Oh well,itll grow back,”she said,trying to be lighthearted.“Now you open mine,Doodlebug!”Doodlebug unwrapped the display case excitedly.Then he shook his head and laughed crazily.

26、“Its for Forkbeard!”Dandelion explained.高级词汇burst过去分词作状语介词短语位于句首，主语为名词，倒装tooto现在分词作状语范文精彩语言高级表达“Thanks,Dandelion,”Doodlebug said.“But I think we should use it to show off your hair clips instead at least for now.”“Thats crazy!”Dandelion replied.“What about Forkbeard?”“I sold him,”he said,“so I could

27、 buy you those feathery hair things.”“What?!”Dandelion cried.Then she started laughing,too.The next morning the Viking ship display case sat in full,feathered glory in the living room window.And there it would stay,deeply puzzling every passerby,until Forkbeard the Viking returned to the Pinkley hou

28、se and Dandelions hair grew back.What about的用法地点状语位于句首，主语为代词，不倒装现在分词作状语范文精彩语言高级表达高级语块a little cry of joy一声小小的喜悦的呼喊a huge sighshake ones headreturn to一声长叹摇头长回来grow back回归burst from突然出现too.to.太以至于不能try to be lighthearted试着轻松一些what aboutstart laughing那呢?（用于询问人/物）开始大笑 The next morning the Viking ship di

29、splay case sat in full,feathered glory in the living room window.And there it would stay,deeply puzzling every passerby,until Forkbeard the Viking returned to the Pinkley house and Dandelions hair grew back.亮点评述 此句以景结情、寓情于景、情景交融，营造了和谐温暖的画面，读来令人回味无穷。另外，该部分中的the Viking ship display case sat in full,fe

30、athered glory in the living room window与续写第二段给出句中的we should use it to show off your hair clips instead形成照应，上下文衔接得十分自然。再次，最后一句中的deeply puzzling every passerby作为插入语，为文章增添了画面感，最后，until Forkbeard the Viking returned to the Pinkley house and Dandelions hair grew back解释了续写第二段给出句中Doodlebug所说的at least for n

31、ow的内容，使得上下文衔接紧密。Pa r a 11.When she saw what was inside,she almost cried.续写素材积累2.Her eyes sparkled at the sight of her present but soon dimmed.3.What came into view was the dream present she wanted for ages “Mademoiselles Finest”.4.The finest present ever feather hair clips appeared into her eyes.5.D

32、oodlebug opened the box and burst out laughter when he saw his present.“What a pair we are!”he said,shaking his head.6.“I dont understand.Have you lost your Forkbeard?”Dandelion asked anxiously.“Calm down,sister.I just sold him as I wanted to give you a nice surprise tonight,”he replied.7.The brother and sister hugged each other and laughed lightheartedly together.Anyway,Dandelions hair would grow back soon and Doodlebug could buy Forkbeard back once he saved enough money.谢谢 谢谢 观观 看看