读后续写语篇练习（勇气）课件-高三英语二轮复习.pptx

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1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习1勇气题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文Twenty years ago,I was at a party,talking to a man whose name I have long since forgotten.Sometimes I think this man came into my life for the unique purpose of telling me this story,one about how brave,creative and trusting his brother was,which ha

2、s delighted and inspired me ever since.For the purpose of this story,lets call the little brother Little Brother.Little Brother,a young painter,went to France to surround himself with beauty and inspiration.He lived on the cheap,painted every day,visited museums,traveled to picturesque places,bravel

3、y spoke to everyone he met,and showed his work to anyone who would look at it.One afternoon,he struck up a conversation at a cafe with a group of charming young people who turned out to be some fancy nobles.They took a liking to Little Brother and invited him to a party that weekend in a castle in t

4、he Loire Valley.They said this was going to be the party of the year.It would be attended by the rich and famous and by several crowned heads of Europe.Best of all it was a masquerade ball（化妆舞会）where nobody would hesitate in their spending on the costumes.“Dress up,”they said,“and join us!”4续写原文Exci

5、ted,Little Brother worked all week on a costume that he was certain would be highly impressive.He held back on neither the details nor the imagination of this creation.Then he rented a car and drove three hours to the castle.He changed into his costume in the car and went up the castle steps.Little

6、Brother entered the ballroom,head held high.Upon arrival,he immediately realized his mistake.This was indeed a costume partyhis new friends had not misled him therebut he had missed one detail in translation:This was a themed costume party.The theme was“a medieval（中世纪的）court”.And Little Brother was

7、dressed as a lobster（龙虾）.5续写段首语Paragraph 1All around him,the wealthy and beautiful were dressed in fancy clothes,wearing sparkling jewels.Paragraph 2He took a deep breath and walked onto the dance floor.6Part 2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结

8、尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写建议在他周围，有钱人和美丽的人都穿着华丽的衣服，戴着闪闪发光的珠宝。另一方面，小哥哥穿着红色外套，红色紧身衣，红色芭蕾舞拖鞋和巨大的红色爪子。而且，他的脸被涂成红色。他站在台阶顶端，漫长而可怕的时刻。羞愧地逃跑似乎是最简单的反应。但他没有跑。不知怎的，他找到了自己的决心。毕竟，他已经走到了这一步。他非常努力地制作这套服装，他为此感到自豪。9续写建议他深吸一口气，走进舞池。当他走进人群时，一片寂静。我是宫廷龙虾，“小哥深深鞠了一躬，宣布道。然后：笑声。不是嘲笑只是喜悦。他们爱他。他们喜欢他的甜美，他的怪诞，他巨大的红色爪子，以及他穿着明

9、亮紧身衣的瘦腿。他做了派对。有时就是这样。你绝对不能做的是走出去;否则你会错过聚会。10Part 3范文呈现11范文呈现All around him,the wealthy and beautiful were dressed in fancy clothes,wearingsparklingjewels.LittleBrother,ontheotherhand,waswearingaredcoat,redtights,redballetslippers,andgiantredclaws.Also,hisfacewaspaintedred.Hestoodatthetopofthesteps f

10、or one long,frightful moment.Running away in shame seemed like the easiestresponse.Buthedidntrun.Somehow,hefoundhisdetermination.Hedcomethisfar,afterall.Hedworkedreallyhardtomakethiscostume,andhewasproudofit.12范文呈现Hetookadeepbreathandwalkedontothedancefloor.Ashemovedintothecrowd,asilencefell.“I am t

11、he court lobster,Little Brother bowed deeply and announced.Then:laughter.Notridicule-justjoy.Theylovedhim.Theylovedhissweetness,hisweirdness(怪怪诞诞)，hisgiantredclaws,andhisskinnylegsinhisbrighttights.Hemadetheparty.Sometimesitslikethat.Whatyouabsolutelymustnotdoiswalkout;otherwiseyouwillmisstheparty.13Part 4努力方向14高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语15定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）16低头是题海，抬头是前途。终将上岸，阳光万里!祝大家前程似锦!