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1、Simon雅思写作高分范例 在雅思写作备考的时候，我们肯定要多多参考别人的优秀范文，学习人家的观点，思路和表达。下面我给大家整理了Simon雅思写作高分范例，希望大家喜爱。 雅思Simon考官大作文范文：孩子教化方法 题目： Some parentsbuy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parent

2、ing have for children as they get older? 范文： It is true that some parents are overly permissive and tend to spoil their children. In my opinion, this is not a good parenting style, and it can have a range of negative long-term consequences. If parents want to raise respectful and well-behaved childr

3、en, I believe that a certain amount of discipline is necessary. Having worked with children myself, I have learnt that clear expectations and boundaries are necessary, and it is important to be able to say no to children when they misbehave or try to push against these boundaries. This is the only w

4、ay to help young people to regulate their desires and develop self-control. In my view, parents who do the opposite and constantly give in to their childrens demands, are actually doing more harm than good. They are failing their children rather than being kind to them. The children of indulgent or

5、lenient parents are likely to grow up with several negative personality traits. The first and most obvious danger is that these children will become self-centred adults who show little consideration for the feelings or needs of others. One consequence of such an attitude could be that these adults a

6、re unable to work successfully in teams with other colleagues. A second negative trait in such people could be impulsiveness. A person who has never lived with any boundaries is likely to lack the patience to carefully consider options before making decisions. This may lead, for example, to compulsi

7、ve shopping, unwise financial decisions, or even criminal activity. In conclusion, parents should help their children to develop self-control and respect for others, and I do not believe that the permissive parenting style supports this objective. 雅思Simon考官大作文范文：罪犯用亲身经验告知青少年不要犯罪 题目： Some people who

8、have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 有些人进了号子之后放出来就变乖了，一些人觉得他们这伙人是最适合去给懵懂少年现身说法的。多大程度上同意还是不同意? 考官范文： 1.开头段：完全同意题目的观点 It is true that

9、ex-prisoners can become normal, productive members of society. I completely agree with the idea that allowing such people to speak to teenagers about their experiences is the best way to discourage them from breaking the law. 讲真有犯罪前科的前科的人是可以变成有益于社会的。我完全同意让他们去给懵懂少年现身说法的办法，这是一种警示他们不要触犯法律的好方法。 2.主体段：(第

10、一个理由)：犯人可以告知青少年他们真实的犯罪经验。年轻人会信任并被这些真实的故事所震慑，然后举例子 In my opinion, teenagers are more likely to accept advice from someone who can speak from experience. Reformed offenders can tell young people about how they became involved in crime, the dangers of a criminal lifestyle, and what life in prison is re

11、ally like. They can also dispel any ideas that teenagers may have about criminals leading glamorous lives. While adolescents are often indifferent to the guidance given by older people, I imagine that most of them would be extremely keen to hear the stories of an ex-offender. The vivid and perhaps s

12、hocking nature of these stories is likely to have a powerful impact. 在我看来，骚年们更喜爱接受有实践经验的人来讲道理。劳改犯可以告知年轻人他们是如何参加到犯罪中去的，如何体验危急的犯罪生活，和号子里面的真实状况。他们也可以打消一些年轻人觉得犯罪可以走向人生巅峰的无知念头。一些年轻人对老人言其实还蛮冷漠的。我可以想象他们大部分还是超级想听有犯罪前科人所讲的故事。生动和可能恐怖的故事会更有劝服力。 3.主体段：(其次个理由)：让老师或警察来教化年轻人，不过这几个效果不肯定很好 The alternatives to using

13、reformed criminals to educate teenagers about crime would be much less effective. One option would be for police officers to visit schools and talk to young people. This could be useful in terms of informing teens about what happens to lawbreakers when they are caught, but young people are often rel

14、uctant to take advice from figures of authority. A second option would be for school teachers to speak to their students about crime, but I doubt that students would see teachers as credible sources of information about this topic. Finally, educational films might be informative, but there would be

15、no opportunity for young people to interact and ask questions. 另外一种让劳改犯教化骚年的方法可能就没那么用了。一个选择是让警察去学校开讲座教育骚年们。这个对于让少年们知道关于触犯法律被逮着之后会发生什么还是有点用的，不过年轻人对于权威的数据还是有那么点叛逆的。其次个选择是学校老师告知孩子们犯罪是什么，不过我并不觉得孩子们会把老师讲的当做犯罪话题的重点信息来源。最终，教化类电影可能有丢丢用，不过这种让孩子没有了互动和提问的机会。 4.总结段：总结观点 In conclusion, I fully support the view t

16、hat people who have turned their lives around after serving a prison sentence could help to deter teenagers from committing crimes. 总之，我完全支持回来社会的劳改犯们帮助削减青少年们犯罪。 (287 words, band 9) 必记改写： 1.I completely agree with the idea that=I fully support the view that 2.become normal, productive members of soci

17、ety= turned their lives around 3.ex-prisoners=after serving a prison sentence 4.discourage them=deter teenagers 5.breaking the law=committing crimes 雅思Simon考官9分大作文Video games范文 题目： Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that vid

18、eos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits? 范文： Many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. While I accept that these games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I b

19、elieve that they are more likely to have a harmful impact. On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Users, or gamers,are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and engaging than real-life pastimes. From an educational perspective, these games enco

20、urage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration, logical thinking and problem solving, all of which are useful skills outside the gaming context. Furthermore, it has been shown that computer simulation games can improve users motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks, suc

21、h as flying a plane. However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. Gaming can be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing. Many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the leve

22、ls of a game or to get a higher score than their friends. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the computer or console. The rise in obesity in recent years has also been linked in part to the sed

23、entary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany gaming addiction. In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more significant than the possible benefits. (258 words, band 9) 雅思Simon考官大作文范文：城市生活的利弊 More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a

24、 better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone? 范文： Cities are often seen as places of opportunity, but there are also some major drawbacks of living in a large metropolis. In my op

25、inion, governments could do much more to improve city life for the average inhabitant. The main problem for anyone who hopes to migrate to a large city is that the cost of living is likely to be much higher than it is in a small town or village. Inhabitants of cities have to pay higher prices for ho

26、using, transport, and even food. Another issue is that urban areas tend to suffer from social problems such as high crime and poverty rates in comparison with rural areas. Furthermore, the air quality in cities is often poor, due to pollution from traffic, and the streets and public transport system

27、s are usually overcrowded. As a result, city life can be unhealthy and stressful. However, there are various steps that governments could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, they could invest money in the building of affordable or social housing to reduce the cost of living. Secondly, politician

28、s have the power to ban vehicles from city centres and promote the use of cleaner public transport, which would help to reduce both air pollution and traffic congestion. In London, for example, the introduction of a congestion charge for drivers has helped to curb the traffic problem. A third option

29、 would be to develop provincial towns and rural areas, by moving industry and jobs to those regions, in order to reduce the pressure on major cities. In conclusion, governments could certainly implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of life for all city residents. 雅思Simon考官9分大作文范文：Salar

30、y 题目： When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 范文： Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered. Personally, I disagree with the idea that money is the key consideration when deciding on a career, because I

31、 believe that other factors are equally important. On the one hand, I agree that money is necessary in order for people to meet their basic needs. For example, we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education. Most people consider it a priority to at least earn a salary

32、that allows them to cover these needs and have a reasonable quality of life. If people chose their jobs based on enjoyment or other non-financial factors, they might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for choosing a career path that they love, but

33、 that does not always provide them with enough money to live comfortably and raise a family. Nevertheless, I believe that other considerations are just as important as what we earn in our jobs. Firstly, personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace are extremely important when choosing a

34、job. Having a good manager or friendly colleagues, for example, can make a huge difference to workers levels of happiness and general quality of life. Secondly, many peoples feelings of job satisfaction come from their professional achievements, the skills they learn, and the position they reach, ra

35、ther than the money they earn. Finally, some people choose a career because they want to help others and contribute something positive to society. In conclusion, while salaries certainly affect peoples choice of profession, I do not believe that money outweighs all other motivators. Simon雅思写作高分范例本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第14页 共14页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页