备战新高考高中英语写作读后续写教案六.pdf

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1、读后续写(Conti.ontinuation writing)读后续写。阅读下面的短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Exercise 6 A lived in a small narrow house.making a living by painting portraits.One day,a rkh.!:llim came by and found the painter painting so vividly that he liked it very much and asked the painter to draw a Q.Qlli1ili for him.The

2、y agreed on 1,000 dollars.After a week,the pornait was done.The rich man came to take the painting-At this moment,the rich man hit on an evil idea of bullying the unknown young artist,so he refused to pay 1,000 dollars.He thought,The man in the painting is me.If I dont buy this painting,no one will

3、buy it.Why should I pay so much money for it?So the rich man said,I will only pay 300 dollars.The young painter was stunned,for he had never come across such things.He strongly stood his ground,expecting the rich man to keep the agreement and to be a man.I can 01廿ypay 300 dollars to buy the painting

4、.Speak no more.The rich man thought he would win for sure,I ask you at last,will you sell it 300 dollars or not?The young painter knew the rich man deliberately went back on his word,so he felt indignant（愤怒的）Hesaid in a firm tone,I have never seen such mean behavior.You are nothing else than a 荨Iwou

5、ld definitely never sell the painting to you.Today you break your皿andsomeday you must pay 20 times for it.You will never be!What a joke!20 times will be 20,000!I wont be stupid to pay to buy the painting!,o Well,wed better wait and see,the young artist left angrily with tears in his eyes.After recei

6、ving such stimulation（剌激），thepainter moved out of this sad place,vowing to stand out in the circle of art and make the rich man bend his head.However,the rich man soon forgot the the next day.注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2应使用5个以上短文标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，诸用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。Paragraph 1:Years late

7、r,the painter finally became famous and decided to hold an exhibition at the very place.Paragraph 2:However,much to his amazement,the artist rt;fused his request.一试题详解l.核心内容文本主要内容为：一个有钱人让一个年轻的画家画一幅他的肖像画，等画完成后，富人耍无赖不愿意按原来谈定的价钱付款，年轻画家发誓，若干年后定要富人以20倍的价钱买回这幅画。2.写作思路(l)明确故事人物关系(characters)：故事中主要人物只有两个：年轻

8、的画家和不诚信的富人。(2)理清故事主要事件(events)：富人让当时还名不见经传的年轻画家画一幅肖像，约定付1000美元，但是完成后，卑鄙的富人却只想付300美元。年轻画家不愿受这个屈辱，摆下话说将来让富人以20倍价钱赎回这幅画，之后就离开了这个伤心地，发愤图强，而那个富人则把这件事抛至九霄云外。(3)根据已知人物、事件及续写段落首句预测故事发展(development)：故事总体的发展可能是成名后的画家回到故地开画展，展品中必有那幅画，原文中的下划线词thief是事先埋下的伏笔，因此展开丰富的想象后，就弛这幅画命名为Thief。富人定后悔莫及（第一段的写作要点）。然而事情来了个急转弯，画

9、家无偿赠与这幅画，并解释说正是当初受的侮辱才激励他努力，造就现在功成名就的自己（第二段的要点）。(4)结合下划线词罗列写作要点(points)：结合下划线词和文本内容，展开尽可能合乎逻辑的想象。原文中“Ihave never seen such mean behavior.You are nothing else than a thief.”或许能提供一点灵感。如果第一段能展开联想一一画家把富人的肖像画取名为Thief，那在富人得知消息后，必会重金赎回。但是如果画家就这么同意了，最多就是教训了那个富人，第二段就能峰回路转画家的这一做法不但让富人羞愧，还让我们看到了他的高贵品质。参考范文Year

10、s later,the painter finally became famous and decided to hold an exhibition at the very place.Hearing the news,many people were attracted to the exhibition,in which one item was marked 20 and the man in the picture looked exactly the same as the-More ridiculously.the title of it was Thief The news s

11、oon reached the rich mans ears.He was so shocked that he immediately thought of what had happened to him and the years before.He went to visit the painter the same night right away.As expected,it was the very painter whom he had broken his三withbefore.He quickly apologized and was willing to buy back

12、 his.QQ.!1止However,much to his amazement,the artist refused his request.On the contrary,he gave the picture to hin1 for free hoping that he would be a man in good faith.After all,it was that stimulated him to work hard and finally made what he was today.范文解析范文围绕给定文本内容进行合理的想象。第一段把那幅当初富人不愿意按商定价钱购买的画命名

13、为Thief，这消息自然会传到富人那里。富人知道消息后肯定会把画买下。第二段升华内容，使之具有人情味。这种不趁机报复反而无偿赠画的高风亮节恰恰反衬了富人的卑鄙和小心眼。四、提炼归纳l合理拓展情节其实这个故事原来的结局是富人以20倍的价钱买下了这幅画，而这个年轻的画家正是毕加索。文本的标题是“NoOne but Yourself Can Defeat You“。为了挖掘文本的意蕴和人文精神，所以在第二段予以了提升。2有效运用连接手段续写的写作要求中有这么一条一有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。范文中的hearingthe news“承上启下，参观者们肯定会把他们看到的告诉富人，而“asexpected正验证了他的猜测，那么之后富人所要做的就没有任何悬念了。然而事情恰恰不会那么水到渠成“however,on the conttary两个词给全文结局来了个逆转，范文中赠画只是其中一种推断，或者还有别的更合乎情理的结局，但是这些词语的使用无疑使得续写的故事过渡自然。