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1、练习1：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A couple of months before I started high school, my parents gave me the greatest gift any teenage boy could ask for: a cellphone. I lived on that phone all summer with my face buried in its screen. I ignored my family and my surroundings (周围事物). Being connect

2、ed was more important than being present.So, you can imagine my displeasure when I learned what my dad had planned for our family vacation that year. “This year,” my dad said, “well be doing something special. Were going camping!” His excitement was met with a disappointed sigh (叹气). It wasnt my dre

3、am vacation because mind was on my phone. I was so buried in the screen, in fact, that the first time I can remember truly looking up was when we drove across a bridge on the way to our campsite.I stared out the window and saw redwoods towering above us, their branches threatening to pierce (刺破) the

4、 blue sky. I saw a roaring river, with slivers of silky black water appearing between crashing white rapids. The air blowing into the car from the open windows was hot. But none of that mattered to me. The reason I had looked up was for something far more serious: my phone no longer had service.The

5、last hour of the drive was increasingly tense. My dad announced that he had chosen a campsite that had no cell service, and that my phone would be useless until we returned home. I would be trapped in the forest for four days with no way to contact the outside world! I went through the full cycle of

6、 teenage emotions during the first day of the trip. I raged (发怒). I bargained. I begged. I flip-flopped (转变) from a depressive state to anger and back.I went to bed angrily that night. But when I awoke in the morning, something had changed.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Para 1:Inste

7、ad of burying myself in my phone, I focused on something else: my surroundings.I let the noise of the wilderness wash over me, animals and bugs creating a ruckus that was both loud and serene at the same time. My anger turned to peace, then little interest and, finally, excitement. Standing on the h

8、igh campsite, I felt the weight of stress melt from my shoulders as I viewed the vast expanse that unfolded below me. The sight that met my startled eyes nearly took my breath away. For the first time, I thought camping in a place that had no cell service might not be so bad.Para 2:The next four day

9、s passed in a flash with many fun activities.I hiked. I swam. I fished. My dad and I learned how to start a fire together after several false starts. We cooked together and I ate the sweetest marshmallows I had ever tasted. Dad told me stories of his life, stories I had never heard or perhaps I hadn

10、t been listening. When the weekend came to an end, I realized I hadnt thought of my phone once. I hadnt felt the need to be connected to anywhere else. It dawned on me that what mattered most were the moments I was sharing with just my father and nature.【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在上高中前的几个月，作者的父母给了作者一个所有青少年

11、都能想得到的最好的礼物:一部手机，于是作者沉溺于手机，忽略了家人和周围的环境。作者的父亲计划了一次家庭旅行计，作者很是不高兴。父亲选择了一个没有手机信号的营地，作者经历了整个青少年时期的最坏情绪循环，那天晚上作者生气地上床睡觉。但当作者早上醒来时，有些事情发生了变化。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我没有把自己埋没在手机里，而是专注于其他事情:我的周围环境”可知，第一段可描写对周围环境的描写以及作者情绪的变化。由第二段首句内容“接下来的四天很快就过去了，有很多有趣的活动。我徒步”可知，第二段可描写与父亲所从事的活动以及作者的感悟。2.续写线索：看到周围的环境作者心情的变化与父亲做的活动

12、感悟3.词汇激活行为类思考：think/consider看看：see/view结束：come to an end /put an end to情绪类巨大的：vast/enormous糟糕的：bad/poor【点睛】高分句型1 Standing on the high campsite, I felt the weight of stress melt from my shoulders as I viewed the vast expanse that unfolded below me.（现在分词作状语和that引导的定语从句）高分句型2When the weekend came to an

13、 end, I realized I hadnt thought of my phone once.（when引导的时间状语从句）练习2：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。His father said, “All set, boy?” and Jeremy nodded, picking up his gun with awkward gloved hands. His father pushed open the door and they went out into the freezing dawn together. Ordinarily Je

14、remy would take out his camera to record the scenery, but not this morning. This was the morning, particularly sacred, when 14-year-old Jeremy would go duck hunting for the first time.However, he hated it, and had hated the whole idea since his father bought him a gun. But he was determined to go th

15、rough with it. He loved his father, and wanted his approval more than anything in the world.They came to a narrow and hidden place facing the bay. Jeremy sat down nervously and waited. To reduce fear, he took a picture of his father against the clean water. Then he put the camera hurriedly on the gr

16、ass and picked up his gun.Jeremy got his gun ready. “Ill let you shoot first,” his father said, loading his own gun. “You know, Ive been waiting for a long time for this day. Just the two of us.He broke off, bending forward, eyes narrowed. “Theres a small flight heading this way now. Keep your head

17、down. Ill give you the word.”The sun came out. Jeremy could see everything clearly: his fathers face, tense and eager; the white frost on the gun. His heart was beating wildly. He prayed, “Dont let them come, please!”But they kept coming. Four black,” his father said. “One mallard.” High above, Jere

18、my heard the pulsing whistle of wings as the flight began to circle. The mallard was leading, his feet dropping down, reaching for the silver-colored water. Closer, closer. “Get set,” his father whispered.“Now!” cried Jeremys father. “Take them!”Jeremy felt his body obey. He stood up, holding the gu

19、n. In the same instant, the wild ducks saw the gunners and flew. “Shoot!” said something sharply in Jeremys brain. But up went the mallard higher still, until suddenly he caught the full force of the wind and flew away, out of range.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:His father

20、asked in a controlled voice, “Why didnt you shoot?”Judging from his expression , it was evident that he was about to explode . Jeremy dropped his head down, tense and speechless. At the thought of losing his fathers approval, a sense of failure overcome him and surged through him , tears falling ont

21、o the silent ground. “ Son , tell me whats the matter?” murmured the father , gathering Jeremy into his arms “You like duck hunting, dont you?” . Jeremy explained that he didnt like hunting at all and how exciting it was to stroll with him and take photos as usual, then up went the boys head ,throug

22、h his misty eyes , he witnessed his father turning and leaving.Paragraph 2:To Jeremys surprise, his father was handing the camera to him.“Sorry, I thought you were fond of hunting just like me.” apologized the father, putting the camera on the boys palms. Eyes glinting and lips curving into a big sm

23、ile, the boy was jumping with joy, taking a picture of his father and the charming scenery. Having taking away the gun , the father bathed in the warm glow of radiant sunshine. He could hear the chirps of the birds and laughter from his son. It suddenly dawned on him that he was full of himself in s

24、howing his love to his son.【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了14岁的Jeremy第一次去猎鸭，但是Jeremy讨厌打猎，喜欢摄影。为了不让父亲失望，Jeremy还是去了，但是不忍心开枪。最终Jeremy向父亲坦白自己喜欢摄影，父亲也理解了Jeremy。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“他的父亲控制着声音问道：你为什么不开枪？”可知，第一段可描写面对父亲的责备，Jeremy的反应，Jeremy选择向父亲坦白自己喜欢摄影。由第二段首句内容“令Jeremy吃惊的是，他的父亲正把相机递给他。”可知，第二段可描写父亲理解了Jeremy，支持他摄影。2.续写线索：父亲责

25、备Jeremy坦白父亲理解Jeremy高兴地摄影父亲感悟3.词汇激活行为类淹没：overcome / overwhelm看见：witness/ see充满：be full of / be filled with情绪类显然：evident /obvious以为骄傲：be fond of / take pride in【点睛】高分句型1 Judging from his expression, it was evident that he was about to explode. (运用了it作形式主语)高分句型2 Jeremy explained that he didnt like hunt

26、ing at all and how exciting it was to stroll with him and take photos as usual, then up went the boys head, through his misty eyes, he witnessed his father turning and leaving. (运用了that引导宾语从句)练习3：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he

27、 didnt understand my world of school activities. From age 14. he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.I didnt really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass anything he had accomplished by the

28、 time I walked across the stage at high school graduation. Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone. The summer be

29、fore my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed whic

30、h we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lambs-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasnt sure how much it woul

31、d amount to.At home, my dad said, “A jobs a big step to growing up. Im glad you will be contributing to the household.” My dads words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasnt

32、interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1：The pay day arrived at last.Although the job was very tiring, I was very happy in my heart for I got something from my work. The toil of labor was forgotten for the time being.

33、I thought I should have my own money and planned how to spend it. “How much money have you earned?” Dad asked. I was surprised, reluctant to say my income. The next morning, my dads livestock truck started running. I saw my fathers hard-working figure and thought of his words “A jobs a big step to g

34、rowing up”.Paragraph 2：I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.They were worried that I was too selfish to give. I realized that my labor was very hard, but my growth and our whole family had been depending on the hard work of my parents! Dad never complained about unfairness! He

35、 even seemed to think that was fair. I thought, “Ive only worked for two weeks, but how many years my father has worked!” In the evening, Dad came back. I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad.【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者高中毕业后，参加农场工作，辛辛苦苦挣到的钱，不情愿贡献给家庭，后来在看到父亲的辛劳之后，理解了父母担心的是自己太过自私而不知奉献，终于想通，并自豪地

36、将自己劳动所得交给父亲的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“工资终于到了。”可知，第一段可描写作者的工资到手后，高兴地计划自己用这笔钱，不愿意交给父亲，然后看到父亲的辛劳。由第二段首句内容“我立刻明白了父母的担心。”可知，第二段可描写作者明白了父母担心自己不懂得奉献，想通了，然后自豪地把钱交给了父亲。2. 续写线索：高兴计划不情愿发现奉献自豪3.词汇激活行为类.计划：programme/plan.奉献：give/devote认为：think/figure情绪类.不情愿的：unwilling/reluctant.自豪地：proudly/with pride【点睛】高分句型1. I th

37、ought I should have my own money and planned how to spend it. (运用了疑问词加动词不定式作宾语)高分句型2. I realized that my labor was very hard, but my growth and our whole family had (运用了that引导宾语从句)练习4：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was on a Christmas Eve when I was five years old that my dad upon arriving h

38、ome from work, informed my mom and me that he would be working the next day, Christmas Day.My dad, who was the manager of his work station, calmly explained that although he was not scheduled to work, he volunteered to do so.My mom was visibly upset. “Ren, you work on Christmas day every year. Man,

39、you are not making any Christmas memories with these kids. ”The rest of the evening we were discouraged. My mom and I were both very upset with Daddy.I awoke on Christmas morning to the sounds of Christmas songs on our huge radio that was stationed in the living room. Mom and Dad were joking about s

40、omething or the other there. She had apparently forgiven him sometime over the course of the night.It was Christmas Day! I ran straight for the living room to wish my mom, dad and brother the merriest Christmas ever! After we all greeted each other, we began our usual Christmas morning ritual (仪式):

41、Dad read the Christmas story. After the Christmas story, it was time to dig into the presents under the tree. It was the pink kitchen set, complete with tiny plastic pots, pans, plates, cups and a whole stove in it. It was exactly what I wanted and I was thrilled.After breakfast, my dad departed.My

42、mom started on Christmas Dinner. I wanted to help her but I was too distracted (注意力分散的) cooking my own imaginary meal on my new kitchen set. But soon I was bored with that and I joined my mother in the kitchen. “Mom, why does Daddy never get a turn to get a holiday on Christmas?” I asked. However, m

43、y mom did not give me a satisfactory answer.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1：The rest of the day flew slowly without Dad.During lunch when we carved the turkey, Dad wasnt here; at night when my aunts and cousins stopped by, he wasnt here; when we were enjoying the laughter, he comp

44、letely missed it. Christmas Day came and gone and I felt pitiful for my dad. For me, volunteering to work on Christmas every year equalled that I preferred to go to school rather than take Christmas vacation. I was puzzled about Dads choice.Paragraph 2：I decided to ask Dad why he chose not to celebr

45、ate with us every year.Hardly had my dad arrived home the next day when I couldnt wait to ask. Daddys response impressed me a lot. Christmas is a happy time with great memories filled with love and family. The other employees all wanted the day off. It was he, the manager of the station that should

46、bear the responsibility. Only if he led the role could more people spend a happier Christmas. Dads selflessness quality has a lasting effect on me.【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者父亲每次圣诞节也要自愿去加班而不去享受家人团聚的美好时光，文章最后讲述了父亲是电视台的经理责任重大的无私奉献精神的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：.由第一段首句内容“这一天剩下的时间没有爸爸在身边，过得很慢。”可知，第一段可描写作者不理解父亲去上班这一做法。由第二段首句

47、内容“我决定问爸爸为什么不每年都和我们一起庆祝。”可知，第二段可描写父亲去上班的原因。2.续写线索：不理解可怜解答无私感悟3.词汇激活行为类.拜访：stop by/visit/call on.回家：go back home/return home/arrive home情绪类.感到可怜：feel pitiful for /take pity on/pity for.感到困惑：be puzzled about/at fault/be lost【点睛】高分句型1 I decided to ask Dad why he chose not to celebrate with us every year.这句话运用了why引导的宾语从句。高分句型2 Hardly had my dad arrived home the next day when I couldnt wait to ask. Daddys response impressed me a lot.这句话运用了倒装句。学科网（北京）股份有限公司